Arshi FF - "The Captive Heart" part 3 on 3

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"A Fictional work, with no intention to offend anyone"! "Pardon me for grammatical spelling errors"!."Don't report the fiction, if you has issue kindly share a feedback, it's my work solely don't re-post or Copy this"!.

"First work on Arshi😊 - The Captive Heart ❤️

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Prologue 😈

"Let me Go!."

"I didn't hunt for you everywhere to let you go at the End!."

"Don't worry I won't hurt you!."

"Hat's of to your Audacity, You got me here against my will and have gall to say, you won't hurt me!." Only fool will believe you and I 'm not one defiantly!."

"You Believe or not "It's true I won't hurt you, no matter what may come!."

"What you want and don't you dare to think just cause i ask I would do as you say!." "I ain't your slave!."

"As Always you can't be my slave either!."You are Queen who Possess my Heart After all!."

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Synopsis

"Love pure yet deadly Emotion"!..

"either it's gotta make you weak as mere dust", "Or powerful unbeaten warrior",

Depend on how you take Love as"!...

"Nevertheless could be emotion as pure as love", "be forced upon anyone"

"can anyone own a person just by force"?...

to know the answer join the tale Captive of Heart!."

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"Character Sketch" 😎

Barun Sobti as Arnav Singh Raizada 5.90ft tall 36 year old. Well renowned Businessmen by Profession"! Owner of Extremely Charming looks. Shrewd, straightforward, introvert persona, Son of Ajit Singh Raizada and Natasha Singh Raizada"!

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Sanaya Irani as Khushi Gupta "! 5.41ft tall 37 year old. Epitome of Beauty, Ocean of Wisdom"! Classic example of Decency and kindness, headstrong Stubborn Women"! Daughter of Arun Gupta and Anamika Gupta.

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Index 🥳

Part - 1 "Glimpse of Past" on page 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/155258579

Part - 2 "I'm not Killer" on page 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/155271920

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 1 "Glimpse of Past"


"I might be a sinner by my Deed", "but it's me or the Almighty who made me"! "held the right to judge me"!..

(Leaning on Wall at side in grand Hall Room, Clad in black colour three piece exclusive branded suit. The person did give the impression of being fine financially, And the luxury of entire Room made it clear. That he isn't only financially fine but extremely rich To. And the whimper of men before him, who was pulled down on his knees brutally. By four people give out how dangerous and cold hear-ted the guy is in person).

"Then why"? On what basis you judged me"?... And rejected my proposal huh"!... who do you think you are"?...

"My home might be just mere land in your eye"!... but that's everything I ever got to build on my own"!... Please just don't snatch it away from me I will die"!...

"Does it's look Like I care a damn"!...I given you option but you"!...

"Please sir you can ask anything"!... but my home please sir"!...

"Fine Sign here and leave"!...Or bear the bullet and die”! Choice is your Life or Land"!...

(The men look at the guy for good few minutes. He could feel the most threatening cold gaze on himself. What he should do? sign the papers! And get on the street with his wife and two son. Or Bear the bullet and die right away, leaving his family to bear the Cruel world alone on street. Because As as soon he die Eventually, they will lose the home to. As the devil before him, Wouldn’t leave for what he made up his mind to get).

"Good to see you act wisely"!..."as I hate to do the Job of", "Lord of death” anyway"!...

(And with this he motion his men, to take the men out of his sight. Without an ounce of guilt that he snatch not only the home, from a men but shelter from many Abandoned Kid's who, by God grace got to come in the world to breath. But snatch by the right to live happily in the protective secure warmth of parents. But again why he would be guilty anyway, when he is known to be cold heartless Businessmen. People associated with him Call him Arnav Singh Raizada or Mr Raizada).

"Everything is Ready Mr Raizada "!..He and those kids would be shifted to Other place", provided with all facilities"!...

(Arnav spoke nothing he needn't to, as a curt nod, voice out everything, for his friends to understand. But again what are friends for, if they can't understand, your little small Action and the intention behind them).

"The night is yet to start we should", "head for some fun what's say"!

(Listening this he look at his friend. After glancing at his watch, then shook his head in dis belief continue looking out of Window at his garden. Took of his Coat and waist coat letting himself on fall over the couch, on his white shirt only).

"I was just suggesting for fun", "you needn't to think me as stupid"!..

"I needn't to think you as Stupid because I know you are”!. And you prove it every-time"!..

(Listening this Arnav Friend Brandon, Scoffed and about to say something ,when he got a call and he walked out of the hall room. Leaving Arnav alone all by himself ).

"How it's feel to be wanted"!.. "Loved, cared ,unconditionally"!.

(The thought do linger on his mind many times, But he can't answer it as he never feel this way. Having none to care and love him make him emotionless, in the eye of World but is that really true"? people take his appearance to be dominating and actions as life threatening. But did he ever did something as sin of killing”? Nevertheless he don't complain as far, he got his way with people and get what he wanted. Everyone do what he want, how he want Expect one. from whom he want everything. Recalling a task to do he made his way, back to his room and after freshening up come out all dressed up in white tee, grey coat black pant and shoe and then made his way out of Penthouse. And motion his guards to get a car for him and himself started walking a bit further, Out of his residence when sudden Halt of car before him stop him on his way , he glared at the driver who shifted nervously. But said nothing, he looked and saw his, moron friend who just jump out of car grinning foolishly at him).

"Chris what's up with you mate"!..

"I have news for you"!..."a very important one"!..

"Nothing is more important then life you moron", "how could you just act this recklessly what if"!..

(Arnav never like to break such ,a life saving rules no matter what. And it's increase his temper when his friends, do the same he couldn't control himself and voiced out his annoyance. But Chris was to excited to bear the lecture of his friend, so he cut him in mid and spoke)

"We found her"! it's matter of your life & heart"!... And I couldn't care about mine over your"!...


(Arnav looked at Chris stunned the news he waited to hear from so long he got to heard now but he was left to dumbfounded after hearing the news).

"what did you just say"?..

"we found her"!..

"You are jesting isn't it"?..

"No Arnav, we really found her”! According to our sources she is here"! And I already send my men to get her"!...

"Take me to her Chris”,” I can't wait for your men”!. “To get her before me"!..

(Chris Said nothing just nodded his head. And made his way to his car then together they drove towards his destination of heart. Entire ride was being unbearable for him, And why not it's been 3 year five month, four day's, two hour's, fifteen Minutes, 45 seconds After all since he first and last saw her. Admit he behave in despicable manner with her. But he was guilty a shell he seek for forgiveness, but nothing worked on her she ignore him in-fact. She was to Angry or scared to even face the mere sight of him, And run away to protect herself from him, after knowing how powerful he is she couldn't take risk. Arnav become loss of word's and action at the very mention of her. He recall the day he met her and did something which was so out of his character and Moral's. His eyes lowered up with remorse on own He lost his parents at very young age, yet he was raised better and knew how to treat other's, but that day he wasn't he ,he become someone he hates with every Breath he takes).

"I'm really sinner!.

(Sighing inwardly he thought and get lost in past moment when he first met her).

(After having hectic day which was busy, in checking project site, gauging the work progress and finalizing, the plan with engineers and planners. He desire to get a bit peace away from crowd, so as soon he got free he made his way . To his favourite place - Lake Mackenzie. laying on the bonnet of his BMW resting his head on the windscreen. he parked his car in front of lake, and let himself drown in the sacred beauty of nature to get relax. As everything was so soothing, so pure picturesque valleys with numerous shades of green and upright trees. With the toppings of colourful flowers. As if the creator picked up every colour very carefully to fill his canvass. And he love the sight of Nature beauty ,which always blessed him by peace. People might find peace at the sight of Moon. But Arnav was fond of sunrise and sunset as both give him Lesson of life. like - No matter how you failed today you will rise again).

"what the"!...Not again"!..

"Shit"!

"where the ball went now...

"There in Lake"!...

"Why looking at me? I'm not going!.

"Please get it for us”! It’s last time promise"!...

"Don't make these faces I am not...Ugh fine”! Last time I am doing this"!..." next time you have to do it on own"!..

(Said the girl in annoyed tone, Taking of her Pink colour Jacket she tied her hair in messy bun and made her way inside the lake to get the ball out for kid's).

"Next time we wouldn't", "even shot six so chill"!...

"Chill my foot"!.." now go, I’m coming in a while"

(Arnav was trying to get some relaxation, but chatter of people their noise disturb him. Annoyed at the disturbance he glance around, but find none at his eyesight, even far to. So he made his way towards the direction, He thought voice come from and after reaching the place. He saw A girl Tying her hair in messy bun, Clad in Creamy colour Sleeveless Top. Walking in lake while giving furious look to kids. Who were standing at side of lake and arguing with them as well, while they were giving her sorry look. He couldn't heard any word they spoke clearly. But he did figured out the reason, of her going inside Lake within second. He smile lightly and about to walk away. From the place not wishing to taint the beauty with innocence, by his evil gaze for long but soon he found himself numb And find himself, trapped at the sight of her again, but this time it had different Effect on him. As she moved out of Lake letting him view her entire soaked form, her white top was wet and made her every curve, prominent by sticking to her like second skin. While the Dripping water from her dress, made him gulp heavily he found his mouth going dry, at her wet form and strong urge started building in his heart. Which was taking turn on very wrong path, he could feel it ,but having no control on it .Even though it was bit cool still he felt sweat-bead forming on his forehead. And trickling down on their own accord and he felt himself growing hard).

"Mira Miraculum"!..

(He was just out of UNI, Over-seeing his ambition his passion to take care of his Father's Established business. When it's comes to emotion he had good control on himself he was Guy of Discipline and willpower. A trait which has him succeed in his life whether it's in school, UNI or handling the business at young age. He was Appreciate by all and made him trustworthy responsible citizen . No matter what's the circumstances are he never went wrong on his action he was strong believer of Supreme Power and Believed The Almighty won't make one suffer more than they can endure. The Hardships are his way to test your faith on him on right. No materialistic pleasure of World could be tempting enough to make him fall in trap of Satan. No Person can make him scum to Sin. But He didn't knew The little desire to get peace at lonely, beach at Lake Mackenzie gonna cost lifetime peace from him. Bonus part of him being Realizing, that there is one who can make even, “Arnav Singh Raizada "bow make him loose control ,on himself and act so out of his character. In such way which could push him to life time remorse. She took a little towel which she had kept, at side of lake and wiped her arms and face. Knowing well there is hardly she could do about her Top. She sigh annoyingly and took her jacket from ground. Dusted it and wore it so that it's could save her from further embarrassment, and protect her from evil eye's , if only she knew she was Already get on the sight of evil Desire of one pair intense brown eye Guy).

"I shouldn't have come here"!...

(With the regret of coming at the place, for picnic with orphanage kid's for one day. Just because of Her condition. getting bit satisfied with her appearance she was about to walkaway ,when she felt sudden hold on her wrist. And Before she could turn to face the offender, he gave her a pull. And she end up colliding with his broad chest. In spite of the shock of this sudden occurrence, The girl tried to move away. But she was little too late for these little effort. Arnav 's swiftly wrapped his arm around her waist, locking her in his arm. His other hand was still gripping her hand. The girl struggled to free herself from his strong hold. But failing in her attempts, she Glared at him fiercely and ordered him).

"Leave me you jerk"!..

(yelled the girl, Her eyes spitted fire on Arnav . But he didn't even bother to utter a single word in response. Rather he was answering her Fiery Gaze, with his piercing gaze. But all fierceness went in drain as soon his head started descending down towards her, He could sense the change of emotions from anger to surprise and now fear. He wanted to stop himself but he wasn't in control of him. He was conquered by his self-vile- desire to claim the shivering lips. which he did without wasting second of his time. It was unethical, unacceptable act yet he failed to stop. The warm soft lips were turn out an addiction even the more he kiss and she resisted the further he deepened the kiss. Minutes later feeling breathless he released her against the constant urge of letting the moment last longer. He glanced at her, but the face which was having cheerfully smile beforehand was mirroring as it's mourning over the loss of dear one. It's express sheer grief of pain, tears were pouring out of her eyes lips lost their colour as they convey the tale of assault).

"you are blessed with Sinfully Mesmerizing eyes"!..." don't let them turn ugly by crying"!...

(He spoke in husky voice which sounded to intimated for her, she look up at him as he raised his hands to pull her into hug she retreated and slapped him with all her might pour in gout her Anger and loath for him and his action. The slap was to power full that Arnav head felt dizzy, as his head turn on right side. Shocked his brain fail to comprehend what just happened for second. Then slowly he raised his head to look at her way but spotted her running away from the place).

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Woah! Is this going to be a dark FF?

I don't really enjoy reading stories where men force themselves on women in the name of love.


But since Arnav really seems to be regretting what he did, I hope this won't continue down that path.

Will give this story a try and wait for the plot to develop further with the coming chapters 😳.


Love,

Stuti


P.S. You don't need to worry about language. You write beautifully, so a few grammatical errors can be easily ignored 😳.

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Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

Woah! Is this going to be a dark FF?

"Yes it will be but only this much, no extreme level at all like in the context Teaser give! 😳 so don't worry on that!. 😊

I don't really enjoy reading stories where men force themselves on women in the name of love.

"I personally don't enjoy writting such stuff either 😆 but it's just come in mind and I decoded to penned it down 😳

But since Arnav really seems to be regretting what he did, I hope this won't continue down that path.

"yes be assure of that he won't continue on this, or else I would have made it for mature readers!.😳 but this one is more than that there's lot of conspiracy, Involvement of Opponent!.😊

Will give this story a try and wait for the plot to develop further with the coming chapters 😳.

"Thank you so much 🤗that you are giving try to this 🤗I will try not to disappoint you!.😳

Love,

Stuti

Thank you 🤗

Take care Stuti🤗

P.S. You don't need to worry about language. You write beautifully, so a few grammatical errors can be easily ignored 😳.

That mean lot😳, I just wanted to let it clear before in case peole are really into grammer spelling error stuff 😆 so I'm glad that's not going to be issue here 😳 thank you for assurance and Understanding your first review on my first work on Arshi 😳

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Interesting start hope Arnav twill truly makeup his mistakes

waiting ti read next part

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Originally posted by: bubulswt

Interesting start hope Arnav twill truly makeup his mistakes

waiting ti read next part

It will be Intresting to see he will regret or not 😊

Thank you 🤗 I'm glad you're looking forward to next one 😳

Will update soon ♥️

Thank you for your first feedback on my work here on Arshi 🤗

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Part 2 - "I'm not Killer"


"How much more?..the ride turning out endless journey!."

"15 minutes more Arnav!.."have paitence!."


(Even though there was still time for him to reach he couldn't stop himself from getting anxious of her reaction of the outcome of their meeting again, forget meeting wouldn't she freaked out?". That I again use my wealth to have her?." as if his friend Chris sense this he look up and spoke).


"Don't worry everything will be okay this time", after all it's not easy for girls to resist Arnav Singh Raizada’s charms"!...

"You have no Idea!.


(Arnav didn't said anything just thought inwardly. Knowing will not only she's immune to his charms, but hates him to. He held his locket by hand and kissed it. and continue looking out, how he wished it's been true what Christian Stone his friend had said but he know better).


"Stop!.

(Yelled Arnav scaring Chris, and Driver to the core of their heart as driver stop the car at once making all them bump into seat and Dashboard of car).


"Call our men, let her go!. I can't do this I can't meet her like this!..

"Have you lost it Arnav? We almost reach the place and you?.

"I know but when it's comes to me she has Worse Judgment!. I can't make matter more wrong!.

"Know what just meet her!. Then decide!.

"No Chris you don't understand once I meet her the urge to keep her with me will grow more strong!. Irrespective of her will or without!.


(Chris stared at Arnav and realized what's happening with him, when it's comes to her lose his sense of wisdom for sure. And it's true she makes him more selfish and possessive, with her in matter of her He has seen Arnav feeling Emotion which were dead for him, Fear, Rage, Love over power all of them. She was death of him and he didn't knew how to deal. But now he was little to late to back off so he try to reason out with him).


"Fine I will call them!. "To let her go! But what next? Weren't you the one kneen on knowing who was shielding her?.


(Arnav looked at Chris than at his driver leaning back on seat he sigh out loud not knowing what to do anymore. So he just raise his hand and gesture then to drive further, a sign for Chris to realize he's going to meet her first. five minute later their car stop in front of the entrance inner yard of their farmhouse as he stepped out of car and walked towards the entrance of his farmhouse, feeling numerous emotion joy fear Curiosity eagerness, he was ln two set ,one which couldn't wait to just step in and other which couldn't move forward to meet her. There come's a time in life, when you have no control on your action. Same was the case with Arnav Singh Raizada. He was speechless clueless and most importantly , Getting drown in sinful strong urge of desire. To touch her pull her close, Without a second thought he approach her. A flower he call her, Delicate flower indeed but with Thorn for him."you are blessed with Sinfully Mesmerizing eyes"!..." don't let them turn ugly by crying"!...He said this to her that day. When he pulled her close to him. But today even he wish then to he couldn't say this to her again. Her teary eyes, Messy Hair, her entire form was a pitiful sight for him. Dress which had lost it's luster month back. No make up as always conveying the simplicity of her. But what pierced his Soul was her tears. And irony he detest nothing in the world, either then her tears. But Unknowingly or knowingly he got to, become the sole reason of them to made their way out of her eyes . He has been the sole reason of her suffering. At least that's what her accusing gaze convey to him. And even being powerful he couldn't do anything to prevent the hurt she get by him. After seeing her he did and say nothing, just watch her silently .She was Struggling badly to get free,from the tight Grip of Women's. Her feeble physical protest were, strictly ignored by everyone. So she started protesting Verbally, ironically even then to none give any heed to her plea).


"let me go"!..."Leave me"!...

"I didn't hunt for you,everywhere"!... to let you go at the end"!..


(She froze on her step's her struggle stop at once. Listening his voice, Her head snapped at his way and She forget to breath. Their the worse nightmare of her life, was standing at the entrance Gracefully. The one who not only snatch her peace of mind, but snatch her love from her life to. taking step back instead of further she glance around. Hoping Desperately to get some way to get far away from the men before her. But finding none a defeated sigh escape from her).


"Don't worry", "I won't hurt you"!...

"Hat's off to your audacity"! "You brought me here forcefully", then you had gut's to say". you won't hurt me"!..only fool will, but I'm not going to believe you"!..

"you believe or not",it's true i won't hurt you no matter what may come"!...

"what you want"!...Don't you dare to think ", just because I I ask I would do as you say"... I ain't your slave"!...

"As always you can't be my Slave either ", you are Queen who possess my heart after all"!...


(He motion her to sit on Couch, but she didn't obey and stand still. Already the girls had stand one arm distance behind her. one try to escape she wont like the Consequence , Arnav look at her action and let out a deep sigh and spoke).


"Either we talk like two Civilian". "Have decent conversation", or I won't mind get on my style of talk"!..


(that's it these words were enough, to make her sat on Couch before him. Arnav Look at his men they understood his gesture. And walked out of mansion , leaving the girl completely at their boss Mercy. It's not like they could have been any help to her).


"How have you been Khushi"?...

"you didn't abducted me,just to ask about my well-being"!..

"Simple question can be answer simply"!..

"If you have nothing important to say, then I am leaving'!...

"you turn out to be very Sassy", "it would be lie if I say I didn't like it"!..


(Standing before every unfavorable situation, a person need gut and acting in such to make most unfavorable situation, in favor, a person need brain. But it's about turning unfavorable situation into favorable way. what about people and fate?life of human and their feeling. Is that easy to turn hatred of person into love"? Is that easy to rebuild the broken faith"?. Is that easy or even possible to get back lost life"? Arnav Singh had Gut and brain no doubt, but he lacked the heart Because he lost it to the girl . Sitting opposite to him on couch before him. It's still a wonder to Arnav how she without making any move, having any interest got to own his heart. Which he always thought didn't exit in his body. For him it was just pumping organ,which lacked emotion of love and humanity).


"If you have nothing to do", "other than ogling at me". Then I suggest let me go"!..

"we met thrice and each time", "it was unexpected and got to have worse outcome". "I hurt you by action you hurt me by words"!...

"That's matter of pride for me", "if i hurt you at least in someway". "But again why you are bringing this up now"? "Are you by chance expecting an Apology from me"?.. huh "It's none of my concern you are hurt or not". "In-face you live or die I hardly bother"!.. if you are done then let me go"!...

"If you are done with same rant of letting you go". "Then May I have chance to bare my soul to you"?..

"No"! I want nothing to do with a murderer like you"!...


(This was huge blow to Arnav, he couldn't take it coolly. she still blame him for her loss of love. yes he was enrage when he got to know she love him. Yes he drunk that night as hell but just to let his emotion out. He didn't mean to kill the person she loved, how can he do that when he know it will kill her to. How can he kill her then"?, when he love her so much. He hated ,still hate Daniel no hate is small word, he despise that guy who posses her heart. Even being dead to world he was nothing, yet he was and rich in his eye, Because he posses the heart of owner who had his heart. Arnav couldn't speak after her words. Though his soul was wepping heart wanted to shout and tell her. That I'm not Killer. But he didn't said or do anything to her What he could possibly say to make her understand. And Agree that he didn't kill him or order his men to kill him. she had him dragged to gate of Prisoner cell. Fortunately she couldn't shove him in. As he got to prove his innocence in court. But that to couldn't change her mind. she thought he buy the law as well, he brought the judgement in his favor. And again it left him speechless,but what had him turn insane. Was her disappearance after the court judgment.He was worried sick for her well being, As being businessmen he had many enemy. He feared some might have her , hell might be tormenting her. Or using her for their benefit against him. To make him come on his knees to beg).


"Nothing i say or do can change you view", I am tired of defending myself , tired of apologizing for my despicable actions. with the hope earning your forgiveness one day". Tired of explaining my emotion for you, with the hope one day you will appreciate them. In a way I want"!..


(Khushi wasn't heartless to ignore all his act and way. But she wasn't wrong on her part either. She loved Daniel still do. losing him had her lost everything. Arnav had her terrified the way he had her corner on park before tree. And then at club in isolated area had her petrified. But more then that, it was other silence and ignorant action of people , which had her helpless he make her believe and see the world in better light. At how cruel and unfair the world and people living in it can be. The law might be equal for everyone , but the law handler and Defender aren't. They are corrupt and unfair with people).


"I didn't ask you to defend yourself, apologize to me or explain your emotion to me. And wait for me to change my view about you, understand your emotion, appreciate your feeling or forgive you". "It was you all you from start to till now". And i want nothing to do with you"!...

"You are right it was me", from start to till now", it was always all about me"!..."But guess what you were the reason of it". Doesn't matter you intended or not", you had hell still have my heart". apart of me", unknowingly or knowingly become reason. Of my messed up life my action my decision my words everything"!...

"Again you are"!...

"I ain't finish yet Miss Khushi Gupta ".

"I don't want to listen Mr Arnav Singh Raizada", "I just want to leave from here"!...

"Well then feel free to give a try for escape", "As you aren't leaving from here", "I ain't letting you leave". "Now we will have conversation when you wish"!...

"what you mean"?...

"You aren't going out of my sight" or life, "I ain't letting you go now"!..

"You can't held me here against my will"!...

"I got you here with help of my men without your will", "so it's not hard for me to keep you here"!....

"You Ba****D I you know what", "I had enough of it I am leaving now"!...


(Arnav let out a light chuckle,but said nothing to stop her. He take out his cell and started checking his email. And message while Khushi made her way, towards the entrance of mansion.After reaching there, she was about to step out. But then Four bulky well armed bodyguard, step before her blocking her way. Making her take one step back).


"Get out of my way"!..


(They stood silently, and deaf to her order didn't step away, from her way making her clench her jaw. She rush back to Arnav and spoke angrily to him who was still didn't made effort to look up at her).


"What the hell is this tell them to let me go"!...

"you don't listen what i say", "then what make you think"? "I will listen and do as you ask for"?

"So you are taking revenge"!.. huh"!..


(before Arnav could Answer , his gaze fell on his brother. Aakash who step in Mansion with sour mood, but as soon he saw Arnav, his face lit up having smile on face. he made his way to Arnav and spoke in cheer full way with smile on face).


"when did you get back here", "I thought we will meet in next birth Brother"!..

"You really have wired,imagination then Aakash "!.. Nevertheless how have you been"?...

"Awesome as my look's","leave about me and let me introduce", "myself with your girlfriend"!..


(Before Aakash could say anything, Khushi walked upstairs in one room. And close the door with loud bang making Aakash jump on his place. He look at Arnav then spoke).


"Why all your girlfriend have to be so rude"!...

"Well I am creditable for their", "rudeness to all my dear ones and they're not my Girlfriend"!...

"Really what you did? that to with her"?, "I just don't get one thing ". "Why you have to be so complicated with girl's"?...


(Taking deep Breath Arnav sat back on couch, Aakash to sat opposite to him. Arnav stayed silent not knowing, how to tell Aakash about Khushi. Who isn't like other girl who try to approach him to gain his time his affection he push away to keep himself sober , she's One he want, with all his heart, she's one he wants to get corrupted by. In simple words He want her more then he ever, desire to have anything in his life. But he knew it's not some fairy tale or Movie where a hero can get his love by wanting her enough. It's real fu***g life where the mutual consent and emotion are Priorities and with him she feel Opposite of his. Might the World may bow before King, but the king can bow before his Queen. Seeing Arnav Awfully quit didn't set well Aakash , so he thought to change the topic).


"You ask about my well being", "but didn't ask about purpose of arrival here"!...

" I dooing now, so tell me what's bring", "you here at my Farmhouse"?...

"Ouch You wound my Heart Brother", "I thought it's our farmhouse"!...

"God you and your Drama", Come on Aakash grow up"!...

"Well I am, that's why wedding bells", "are on way within two week"!...

"What you are getting married", "sure you are jesting with me"!...


(Listening this Aakash made a face, while Arnav try to his best to ,prevent himself from chuckling. Of-course he knew Aakash is getting married, to his love Jenifer Stone but he still couldn't believe. How he made her agree to it, After all she was never interested in him from start. Sure his brother know ways to woo girls. It's might be his charming smile work, or maybe his flirtatious nature. Or perhaps his little cousin brother is skilled in matter of Girl's heart. Nevertheless it's still don't change the fact, that his brother gonna marry while he. Still have no idea how to, pacify his girl and woo her heart which is fill with hate no small word loath for him).

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Arshi Analyzers

Posted: 4 years ago
#8

Hello!

Sorry for reserving the comment quick and editing it late 😆. I came online to message someone and saw your PM at the same time. So I reserved the post but became busy with other things later on.


Read the chapter just now. Arnav is quite confused. He says he understands how mutual consent is important but is still keeping her captive against her will. His thoughts and actions don't really match up.

No wonder Khushi hates him. Even if he is not responsible for the murder of her lover, Arnav's actions from the very first day are despicable. It's going to be an uphill task for him to change her opinion.


Waiting to see how he does that in future chapters 😳.

Love,

Stuti

Edited by ssttuuttii - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#9

That's fast 😆 thanks 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#10

amazing update hope Arshi will talk to each other

and start with at lest with friendship

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