Vani FF// The Phoenix (Thread 2 Link in Pg 1) - Page 5

Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

I know everyone is upset. If possible please update this :)

I'm also trying make up my mood with updates

Awesome... so good... thanks a lot...

waiting for veer reaction n veer bani talk.. pls update soonish...

its too good

Beautiful update and verr ki swag jaisa entry finally jealous veer enjoyed it fully

Hey Ally, nice FFs bro. I really love all of them. The way you write is definitely so good, but the way you explore the mythology and the depth of existing characters, their strengths, and weaknesses, and turn the usually "meah" Naagin story into a true "fantasy-esque" narrative is really great. Keep up the writing man. Truly good.👏👍🏼

Amazing amazing update...dil khush hogaya...continue soon

Hey

Your FF is seriously mind blowing. I always wait eagerly for reading your FF. And the way you give 2 parts on the same day is like a treat. 👏

Loved the way you described each and everyone’s nature and feelings. 👏😊

The bond of the trio was simply amazing. 👍🏼

Seems like you did a lot of research work in history and mythology. 🥱

The way you described the real Markaat and his hatred towards her killing Akesh and the way he said that Veeranshu is in danger. 👍🏼

The way the duo scared the large bird in the name of veer. 😆

The complicated family tree. 🤪

The way bani felt seeing veers pic. Her devotion towards temple. 🥳

The unity between the trio fighting against their danger using their instinct and skills. 😎

The emotional side of Sam and Vani’s effort to console and divert him. 🤗

Veers anger. 😡

The childish Ponky - beat them both they way they beat me. 🤣🤡

The family time between the Singhanias in the yatch 😎🤣🥳👏

Loved your FF. Can’t wait to read next. 😊

Keep doing your fantabulous work. 👍🏼

Amazingly written. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

Awesome... so good... thanks a lot...

waiting for veer reaction n veer bani talk.. pls update soonish...

its too good

I'll update by tonight

Glad you're liking it

Originally posted by: Shinika

Beautiful update and verr ki swag jaisa entry finally jealous veer enjoyed it fully

Glad that you're liking it.

Originally posted by: AliChase

I'll update by tonight

Glad you're liking it

I actually read multiple times. its sooo good..

The way everything you explained. it s mindblowing. Thank you for giving us this beautiful story

Originally posted by: libran90

Hey Ally, nice FFs bro. I really love all of them. The way you write is definitely so good, but the way you explore the mythology and the depth of existing characters, their strengths, and weaknesses, and turn the usually "meah" Naagin story into a true "fantasy-esque" narrative is really great. Keep up the writing man. Truly good.👏👍🏼

Thanks 😳

Tera comment dekh kar khushi ho gayi...

I actually wished they would add some more of mythology onscreen too.