SaiRtat: Mere pass hai tu part 1 on pg. 3 - Page 2

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Hehe!!!

I just wished they completed the first season well. So many plotlines left unsolved 🙄

I completely agree...

But thats all the more reason for a season 2 right 😁

Interesting... Is it inspired from "Arjun"?

Originally posted by: Babygirl728

Interesting... Is it inspired from "Arjun"?

Some of it.... like cases and team members not the main characters

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Reminds me of Arjun Rawte.

Do continue.

Really interesting.

Yea the passion is similar but here his character is not going to be like Arjun..., virat’s story is way different than Arjun’s...

Something is similar some is totally different

Originally posted by: Angel_Diya

So interesting...

If I am not wrong can it be that, his wife was someone else and Sai will come after....

Interested.. Do update soon.

Hmmm..,, you have to wait to see that

Originally posted by: Past1

If I am right this is a Tamil movie story I have seen it.

Really... which movie...I don’t know about it.... if there is any similarities than it may be in case... but virat sai life I think it will be different....

Awesome 👏👏👏👏

Can't wait for more ❤❤❤❤

Mere pass hai tu

Part 1

Flashback

She slapped him… there were tremendous pain in her eyes… even though, she slapped him, she felt the pain… tears were rolling down from her eyes… she couldn’t believe on her ear that he had said something she couldn’t even imagine in her worst dream… Today he had crossed all the limits… it wasn’t that he didn’t use harsh words before but today was the limit, and she couldn’t control herself and slapped him in front of his family… that one action had broken her apart… shaken her to the core…

It wasn’t that he didn’t feel her pain… he did… he was dying a thousand death, seeing her like that… but he couldn’t help it… he was also crying…

“rishte me pyar na ho to chalega…magar izzat na ho to mujhe bardast nahi

Ye Rishta aapke liye majboori hai,ye mein bardast kar shakti hun… magar kisi pe boz banana mujhe mazoor nahi… bas ab aur nahi… mein jaa rahi hun humesha ke liye… aapke ghar se aur aap ki zindagi se”

He was standing there… he froze… couldn’t move or react… he wanted to stop her, hold her in his arms and told her that she wasn’t going anywhere… he couldn’t let her go… he would die… but he didn’t react…she packed her luggage and before leaving his house looked at him for last time… there was a hope in her eyes that he would stop her… but he didn’t say anything… with heavy heart she left his house…

He was seeing her walking toward the door… the distance between them were increasing… his heart was not able to bear these much pain… he knew he would not able to live without her… she disappeared from his eyes… and he fell on the couch… tears were rolling down from his eyes…

Somebody put hand on his shoulder and tried to console him, “virat..”

Fleshback ends…

Presen time…

“Virat sir… virat sir”… the police sub inspector Maane, who was sitting next to him in the car called him… “wo aagaya sir”, Maane said… pointing to some man who was entering into abandon factory…virat saw him and before left the car he said, “mein anadr jaa raha hun… jaisehi back up aaye unko leke andar aajana… tab tak mein unhe handle karta hun”… saying this he followed that man inside the factory…

Maane was waiting for backup and he heard lots of gun firing inside the factory…. As soon as back up reached, he informed on duty ACP Agnihotri about Virat being inside the factory…

The Police force rushed inside the factory and saw virat had shot most of the goons and held the most wanted drug peddler “Khaare” on the gun point… he handed him to agnihotri…

“thank you Virat sir… aap ki wajahse ye pakda gaya… magar sir… aapko itna risk nahi lena chahiye tha… aap ki jaanbhi jaa shakti thi”…

Virat looked at him and smirk, “meri jaan to kabki jaa chuki hai”… saying this he left…

*********

Virat entered in his house while wiping blood from his forehead and nose…

“Virat… tum theek to ho… ye kya hogaya?” Pakhi rushed to him… she got worried… and tried to lift his elbow… she saw wound on his elbow… “kitni chot lagi hai tumhe… chalo mein first-aid kar detihun”….

Virat released his hand with jerk... And stopped her…

“no thanks… I am okay” said with rude and cold tone…

and was about to leave when Kaku stopped him…“Virat… kaise baat kar rahe ho tum… patralekha ko tumhari fikar hai isiliye bol rahi hai…”

Virat was leaving without replying to her… Paakhi again stopped him…”Virat… dekho tumhara bahut khoon beh raha hai…mujhe first aid karne do… warna septic ho jayega”…

“tum Doctor ho kya… tumhe kaise pata…mera ghaav hai… iske sath kya karna hai wo mein tay karuga… leave me alone” virat rudely replied to her…

“Virat… din par din tumhari battamiziya badhti jati hai… tumhari fikar ho rahi hai isiliye sab tumhe keh rahe hai… aur wasie bhi samaj mein nahi aata ki suspended hone ke baad bhi ye kaunsi duty karne jate ho… har roz koi naya zakhm leke aate ho… hosh me aajo… aur sincerely duty karo… ise tarah ki gundadardi band karo warna apni IPS ki wardee kho doge…” His Baba (Ninad Chavan) said…

“meine nahi kaha tha kisi ko apni fikar karne ke liye… aur rahi baat duty ki to duty karne ke liye wardee kizaroorat nahi hai… mein bina wardee ke bhi duty karta hun…”

Sonali kaku and Karishma were watching drama from other side and laughing at them…

“wo kya hai na Virat… bechari Patralekhako tumhari Chinta, worried, fikar ho rahi thi… abhi uska husband hai nahi yaha aur tumhari biwi bhi…..” she couldn’t complete her sentence and virat roared…

“Sonali kaku… bas… ek aur shabd nahi” there was so much anger in his eyes, his breathing became faster… and was staring at her like he was killing her with his gaze… Sonali got scared… Virat left in anger….

“mast ha mast… Sonali… jo thodi sharm bachi thi wo bhi bech aayi ho… apni bahu ke sath rehte rehte tum bhi iski tarah ho gayi ho” kaku scolded her…

“aur waise bhi hum yaha kuchh bhi kare ise aapko kya lena dena sonali mami… aap apne hisse me khush rahiye… aur hum yaha humare hisse me kya kar rahe hai isme aap bich me mat padiye”… Pakhi said with rudely…

“waise bhi Ghar ka batwara karke chen nahi mila tumhe… ab humare pariwar me taakzakh karna band karo” kaku said…

Karishma was observing everyone and realized how virat was affecting by his wife’s name… she was holding a magazine in her hand… to drawn everyone’s attention toward her she said, “aayi… aap chhodiye unhe... ye dekhiye, ise magazine me kiski tasweer chhapi hai”… she showed the picture the way everyone could see it… “likha hai ki ye duniya ki top forensic experts hai…inki expertise ki wajah se naa jane kitne unsolved mysteries solve ho gayi hai…duniya bhar ke colleges inhe guest lecturer ke taur pe bulate hai… duniya bharke crime investigating agencies bhi unhe apne sabse mushkil cases ko solve karne bulati hai… aur to aur wo delhi me unke liye ek bahut hi zabardast interview program karne wale hai… aur wo bhi aaj aanewala hai… aayi (looking atPakhi, kaku and Ninad) hum zaroor dekhe ge”….

“haa… bilkul… waise kab shuru honewala hai” sonali asked…

“kuchh hi der me… live hoga…bahut maza aayega aayi… kafi kuchh janane ko bhi milega” Karishma said….

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Whoahhh!!! Fiery and interesting start..

Loved it...

Isn't Virat an ACP anymore??? Wardi ke bina bhi duty??? Confused here.

Haeh!!!! Ghar ka batwara hogaya??? Wtf???? 😳😳

I m sure that forensic expert is surely Sai...

Loved how Viraat showed PP her real place.. she gets on my nerves everytime.

The flashback scene was tooo good. Sai couldnt take the pain and slapped him. Thank God she is out of the Chavan jungle.

Continue soooooonish.

Originally posted by: Anika_PreRish

Whoahhh!!! Fiery and interesting start..

Loved it...

Isn't Virat an ACP anymore??? Wardi ke bina bhi duty??? Confused here.

Haeh!!!! Ghar ka batwara hogaya??? Wtf???? 😳😳

I m sure that forensic expert is surely Sai...

Loved how Viraat showed PP her real place.. she gets on my nerves everytime.

The flashback scene was tooo good. Sai couldnt take the pain and slapped him. Thank God she is out of the Chavan jungle.

Continue soooooonish.

@bold well in very beginning, when I had introduced the story, I have showed that he is DCP and became very rude, impulsive... and because of that he kept suspended from work... not permanently but for short amount of time. there's a case that needed to be solved and he was the officer, somebody had suggested...