SaiRtat: Mere pass hai tu part 1 on pg. 3

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Hello friends,

I am in love with Virat and sai jodi... here is my little attempt to write a story on them... all the characters will be same as show just slightly different situation and genre is crime, suspense, love story, and drama. let me know if you like it...


Mere pass hai tu

not just Maharastra state but entire india was talking about one thing... every news paper, news channel, debats were discussing about same thing... "find the killer of the girl and hang him"

"while entire world was fighting against Corona Virus... in Maharastra, near a small village Gharchirolli, a women's dead body was found... well it wasn't dead body but pieces of her body... the body was in such a bad condition that a forensic doctor from local police couldn't look at it... it was hard to tell whether the girl was raped or not... it's been 3 weeks since the body was found and police were not able to identify the victim... public in all over country was protesting against the government .... they are asking CBI investigation... "


Mumbai Police headquarter

all the seniors ranked police officers were gathered... the DIG was furious with local police's failure...

DIG: this is riddiculous ... public and media ke samne humara mazak ban chuka hai... why arent we able to solve this case?

one officer: sir... ye case hai hi aisa... yeh local police ke bas ki baat nahi hai... ek gharchirolli ka area uper se body pieces me mili thi... 1week to ye pata lagane me gaya ki body aurat ki thi ya mard ki.... sir we need special team to solve this case.... a special team with skilled officers with absolute power and technology...

other officers in the room agreed with him... after 4 hours of long meeting they agreed to form a special team to solve the crime... STF- special task force of Maharashtra...

another meeting regarding STF

they had set up office and equipments... now the question was who would be part of this team... who would lead this team...

DIG: gentleman... now we need an officer whose track record is 100% in solving crime... an honest, brave and fearless oficer...

One officer: sir waise to humare yaha bahut sare brave officers hai magar ise team ke liye... ise case ke liye... ek hi officer mere dimag me aaraha hai...

DIG: who is he?

Officer (hessitate): wo sir... wo darasal uski abhi thodi problem chal rahi hai... magar he was the best officer... usne top kiya tha apni betch me...

DIG: who is he officer?

Officer: DCP Virat Chavan...

another Officer: what!!!?? are you serious? how can you even suggest his name? sir its a bad idea...

third officer: I agree sir... Virat Chavan ek brilliant officer hai... magar ise team ki lead ke liye ise case ke liye he'll be bad choice.... gusse me kya kar bethe kuchh keh nahi shakte....

2nd officer: yes sir... after every case uspe koi na koi inquiry bethti hai... humesha kisi na kisi ko mar deta hai... wo ek bahut hi ziddi, sarfera, gussel officer hai... ye bahut hi sensitive case hai aur hume ek mature officer chahiye... naa ki koi impulsive and aggressive officer

1st officer: sir mana ki DCP Virat bahut hi impilsive officer hai... kafi violent bhi ho jate hai magar sir... agar aap uske solve kiye gaye cases dekhege to pata chalega... humesha usne aise cases solve kiye hai jo almost impossible the... jab hum har jate hai... tab humara last option Virat Chavan hota hai... wo bahut hi imandar aur apne farz se mohabbat karne wala officer hai... sir duty uske rago me hai... wo late officer Nagesh Chavan ka bhatija hai... aur fir sir wo humesha se aisa nahi tha... wo to uski biwi ke jane ke baad... wo sab jane dijiye sir... plz aap ise bare me ek baar zaroor soche...


the officer handed the file of DCP Virat Chavan to DIG...



Dekho chhod ke kis raste wo jaate hain

saare raste vapas mere dil ko aate hain

nahin saamne, nahin saamne ye alag baat hai

nahin saamne, nahin saamne ye alag baat hai

mere paas hai, mere paas hai tu mere paas hai


that's it for now guys... let me know.... should I continue or not?

thank you

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: aptl123

Hello friends,

I am in love with Virat and sai jodi... here is my little attempt to write a story on them... all the characters will be same as show just slightly different situation and genre is crime, suspense, love story, and drama. let me know if you like it...


Mere pass hai tu

not just Maharastra state but entire india was talking about one thing... every news paper, news channel, debats were discussing about same thing... "find the killer of the girl and hang him"

"while entire world was fighting against Corona Virus... in Maharastra, near a small village Gharchirolli, a women's dead body was found... well it wasn't dead body but pieces of her body... the body was in such a bad condition that a forensic doctor from local police couldn't look at it... it was hard to tell whether the girl was raped or not... it's been 3 weeks since the body was found and police were not able to identify the victim... public in all over country was protesting against the government .... they are asking CBI investigation... "


Mumbai Police headquarter

all the seniors ranked police officers were gathered... the DIG was furious with local police's failure...

DIG: this is riddiculous ... public and media ke samne humara mazak ban chuka hai... why arent we able to solve this case?

one officer: sir... ye case hai hi aisa... yeh local police ke bas ki baat nahi hai... ek gharchirolli ka area uper se body pieces me mili thi... 1week to ye pata lagane me gaya ki body aurat ki thi ya mard ki.... sir we need special team to solve this case.... a special team with skilled officers with absolute power and technology...

other officers in the room agreed with him... after 4 hours of long meeting they agreed to form a special team to solve the crime... STF- special task force of Maharashtra...

another meeting regarding STF

they had set up office and equipments... now the question was who would be part of this team... who would lead this team...

DIG: gentleman... now we need an officer whose track record is 100% in solving crime... an honest, brave and fearless oficer...

One officer: sir waise to humare yaha bahut sare brave officers hai magar ise team ke liye... ise case ke liye... ek hi officer mere dimag me aaraha hai...

DIG: who is he?

Officer (hessitate): wo sir... wo darasal uski abhi thodi problem chal rahi hai... magar he was the best officer... usne top kiya tha apni betch me...

DIG: who is he officer?

Officer: DCP Virat Chavan...

another Officer: what!!!?? are you serious? how can you even suggest his name? sir its a bad idea...

third officer: I agree sir... Virat Chavan ek brilliant officer hai... magar ise team ki lead ke liye ise case ke liye he'll be bad choice.... gusse me kya kar bethe kuchh keh nahi shakte....

2nd officer: yes sir... after every case uspe koi na koi inquiry bethti hai... humesha kisi na kisi ko mar deta hai... wo ek bahut hi ziddi, sarfera, gussel officer hai... ye bahut hi sensitive case hai aur hume ek mature officer chahiye... naa ki koi impulsive and aggressive officer

1st officer: sir mana ki DCP Virat bahut hi impilsive officer hai... kafi violent bhi ho jate hai magar sir... agar aap uske solve kiye gaye cases dekhege to pata chalega... humesha usne aise cases solve kiye hai jo almost impossible the... jab hum har jate hai... tab humara last option Virat Chavan hota hai... wo bahut hi imandar aur apne farz se mohabbat karne wala officer hai... sir duty uske rago me hai... wo late officer Nagesh Chavan ka bhatija hai... aur fir sir wo humesha se aisa nahi tha... wo to uski biwi ke jane ke baad... wo sab jane dijiye sir... plz aap ise bare me ek baar zaroor soche...


the officer handed the file of DCP Virat Chavan to DIG...



Dekho chhod ke kis raste wo jaate hain

saare raste vapas mere dil ko aate hain

nahin saamne, nahin saamne ye alag baat hai

nahin saamne, nahin saamne ye alag baat hai

mere paas hai, mere paas hai tu mere paas hai


that's it for now guys... let me know.... should I continue or not?

thank you


Wow it's interesting

Please continue


So sairat are not together

Different approach it is

Really interesting

Hope they meet soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Interesting 🧐

Please continue soon

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Its very interesting plz continue.

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Hey this was great

It's really very interesting

I am very eager to know what happens next...

Please continue soon 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: aptl123

Hello friends,

I am in love with Virat and sai jodi... here is my little attempt to write a story on them... all the characters will be same as show just slightly different situation and genre is crime, suspense, love story, and drama. let me know if you like it...


Mere pass hai tu

not just Maharastra state but entire india was talking about one thing... every news paper, news channel, debats were discussing about same thing... "find the killer of the girl and hang him"

"while entire world was fighting against Corona Virus... in Maharastra, near a small village Gharchirolli, a women's dead body was found... well it wasn't dead body but pieces of her body... the body was in such a bad condition that a forensic doctor from local police couldn't look at it... it was hard to tell whether the girl was raped or not... it's been 3 weeks since the body was found and police were not able to identify the victim... public in all over country was protesting against the government .... they are asking CBI investigation... "


Mumbai Police headquarter

all the seniors ranked police officers were gathered... the DIG was furious with local police's failure...

DIG: this is riddiculous ... public and media ke samne humara mazak ban chuka hai... why arent we able to solve this case?

one officer: sir... ye case hai hi aisa... yeh local police ke bas ki baat nahi hai... ek gharchirolli ka area uper se body pieces me mili thi... 1week to ye pata lagane me gaya ki body aurat ki thi ya mard ki.... sir we need special team to solve this case.... a special team with skilled officers with absolute power and technology...

other officers in the room agreed with him... after 4 hours of long meeting they agreed to form a special team to solve the crime... STF- special task force of Maharashtra...

another meeting regarding STF

they had set up office and equipments... now the question was who would be part of this team... who would lead this team...

DIG: gentleman... now we need an officer whose track record is 100% in solving crime... an honest, brave and fearless oficer...

One officer: sir waise to humare yaha bahut sare brave officers hai magar ise team ke liye... ise case ke liye... ek hi officer mere dimag me aaraha hai...

DIG: who is he?

Officer (hessitate): wo sir... wo darasal uski abhi thodi problem chal rahi hai... magar he was the best officer... usne top kiya tha apni betch me...

DIG: who is he officer?

Officer: DCP Virat Chavan...

another Officer: what!!!?? are you serious? how can you even suggest his name? sir its a bad idea...

third officer: I agree sir... Virat Chavan ek brilliant officer hai... magar ise team ki lead ke liye ise case ke liye he'll be bad choice.... gusse me kya kar bethe kuchh keh nahi shakte....

2nd officer: yes sir... after every case uspe koi na koi inquiry bethti hai... humesha kisi na kisi ko mar deta hai... wo ek bahut hi ziddi, sarfera, gussel officer hai... ye bahut hi sensitive case hai aur hume ek mature officer chahiye... naa ki koi impulsive and aggressive officer

1st officer: sir mana ki DCP Virat bahut hi impilsive officer hai... kafi violent bhi ho jate hai magar sir... agar aap uske solve kiye gaye cases dekhege to pata chalega... humesha usne aise cases solve kiye hai jo almost impossible the... jab hum har jate hai... tab humara last option Virat Chavan hota hai... wo bahut hi imandar aur apne farz se mohabbat karne wala officer hai... sir duty uske rago me hai... wo late officer Nagesh Chavan ka bhatija hai... aur fir sir wo humesha se aisa nahi tha... wo to uski biwi ke jane ke baad... wo sab jane dijiye sir... plz aap ise bare me ek baar zaroor soche...


the officer handed the file of DCP Virat Chavan to DIG...



Dekho chhod ke kis raste wo jaate hain

saare raste vapas mere dil ko aate hain

nahin saamne, nahin saamne ye alag baat hai

nahin saamne, nahin saamne ye alag baat hai

mere paas hai, mere paas hai tu mere paas hai


that's it for now guys... let me know.... should I continue or not?

thank you

If I am right this is a Tamil movie story I have seen it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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So interesting...

If I am not wrong can it be that, his wife was someone else and Sai will come after....


Interested.. Do update soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Reminds me of Arjun Rawte.

Do continue.

Really interesting.

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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Reminds me of Arjun Rawte.

Do continue.

Really interesting.

Hey,

You too are an Arjun fan!? 😃

I also love Arjun... And I wish there is a season 2

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Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Hey,

You too are an Arjun fan!? 😃

I also love Arjun... And I wish there is a season 2


Hehe!!!

I just wished they completed the first season well. So many plotlines left unsolved 🙄

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