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Posted: 3 years ago

Will update or not dear?

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: shinybeauty

Will update or not dear?

Will update this weekend

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey dear💕

I really loved the storyline.It's really awesome.❤

The bonding between Rosh and saki is really heart touching.The believe Roshni have on Sakshi is out of world.🥰🥰

Arjun care and support for sakshi clearly shows that he loves his miss.Publisist dearly.And shows that she is really special for him.😍😊❤

I really really loved the way Arjun kissed sakshi's forehead in starting update.And the way he beat the boss for misbehaving with saki is too good.❤❤❤

I'm really happy for reunion of samjun.And I liked the drama played by Ayesa and Sakshi.They should get awards for their acting.They are really impressive.Isliye hamara dono Acp's undone ke piche pad Gaye.

I am really shocked 😱to know Roshni was a member of SIF.My heart pricked to see Arjun in that condition when he had known about death mystery.😥.

The way Sakshi took care of Arjun is Fabulous.The way Arjun hugged her,the gesture he made her to stay with him by holding her hand,The way he asked her to sit beside him on bed,the way he slept on her lap,is just mindblowing.😀😀

Uske baad Sakshi uske liye cutting chai banana aur pakode banana,aur note likhna kafi cute hai.😊

I loved the convo between Samjun.Sam wanted to tease😂 Arjun and viceversa that's cute .The way he thought that pakoda are from "sakshi's restaurant" is so funny.🤣

Arjun ki changed behavior dekhkar sab ki Josh udaya😱😱.That to very small change greeting his team members by "Good morning everyone".Uska reactions dekhna laayak bangaya."Arjun Rock😎 everyone shock😱"

The way he talk to Sakshi and greet her by "Good morning ms.publisist" is super cool.Her reaction is too good.😳

Vaise hamari Acp saahab ne sirf sakshi ki baat sunthe hain na yeh baat bahut accha laga.🥰

Shocking!!!! Arjun did Aarti and that to by holding sakshi hand.Arjun singing and praying Gannu bappa with whole heart is mind blowing.😃

Loved the bond shared between all of them.❤❤

Loved Randeep and team.Liked the way they shared bond with sakshi.💕

Minnie and Mickey is super cool and good.😎

Both SIF and ETF form a great team.🧡

Mujhe aisa kyun laga ki Riya kuch jalthi hain sakshi ki leakar arjun ki baton pe.

Jaldi arakshi ko milvaav.waiting for this.🥺

Waise mein pura story ek hi Kafka mein padliya isliye har update pe comment nahi mara.maaf karde isliye.

I loved the story very much.

Update it soon honey.

Waiting to read the next update.

Plz,plz,plz,pretty plz update it soon.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Are u going to cont this story?

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97

Are u going to cont this story?

yes dear

work is in progess

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Butterfly09

yes dear

work is in progess

 plz update soon

eagerly waiting for the update 

Edited by sweetpari4u97 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi Friends. 

I know you all are very upset with me as I am giving this update so late. 

Extremely sorry friends. 😒

Here each and everyone is my friend so I am sharing this with you all. 

Actually when I gave last update almost one and half month ago I guess.... I am suffering from headache.

with each passing day its increased and finally doctor said I have "Migraine" so rest karna zaroori ho gaya tha.

Me bas theek ho hi rahi thi aur likhne hi wali thi ki mere grandfather ki health bigad gayi and we admit him in hospital. Doctor tried their best but...😭

Aaj 27 din hue hai mere Dadaji ki death hue... I lost the most precious bond of my life. Papa Mummy ki job ki wajah se bachpan se Dadaji aur Dadiji ke paas hi rahi hoon...

Aaj mein likh paa rahi hoon because dadaji ne hath pakad ke likhna sikhya tha... mujhe pehle se hi late night studies ki adat hai and yeh saari stories bhi mein night time hi likhti hoon... jab der ho jaati hai raat ko toh Dadaji hi the jo daant lagate the ki sehat ki parwah nahi hai... so jaa ab! 

But jab aaj mein yeh likh rahi hoon toh mujhe daant ke sone ko kehnewale dadaji nahi hai😭😭

I am sorry guys but I am saying what I am feeling right now. 

Stories mein aasan hota hai naa kuch bhi likh dena but jab sach mein koi special chod ke jaata hai toh kya feel hota hai vo mein abhi mehsoos kar rahi hoon... 

Maine post daala tha ki story ka work progress mein hai, bohat baar try bhi kiya likhne ka but...

Anyways I know aap sab ne bohat wait kiya hai so aaj yeh chota sa update hi de rahi hoon

hope you all don't mind!😒



REVENGE FOR LOVE

CHAPTER 4: WAR BEGINS

PART::: 1


           After visarjan they all headed to their house and starts packing.

 

Night

In One Room

 

                   Sakshi and Randeep enter in the room. Nurse saw them and with smile greet them.

RANDEEP: yeh lijiye medicines…

NURSE: Thank you sir… accha hua aap le aaye warna mujhe jaana padta...

RANDEEP: Me inki medicine kaise bhool sakta hoon!!! Agar maine dhayan nahi rakha toh jab yeh theek honge tab pakka pitai karenge meri…

                   Sakshi and nurse laughs on this.

NURSE: Sir aap ko naa yaha aate rehna chahiye ma’am ke saath… apke aane se iss room me hasi sunayi deti hai aur ma’am ke aankho me bhi aansu nahi hote

                   Randeep and Sakshi exchange smile.

SAKSHI: Waise me bas yeh batane aayi thi ki hum dono hi case ke silsile mein bahar jaa rahe hai and aap janti hai ki uncle bhi nahi hai so please thoda zyada careful rahiyega and kuch bhi chahiye toh aap mujhe hi call kijiyega… me kaise bhi kar ke aap tak vo cheez pohcha dungi

NURSE: Don’t worry ma’am… aap jaiiye me yaha dhyan rakhungi

                   Sakshi nods and then goes near her father.

SAKSHI: Apne mission me ek ahem kadam uthane jaa rahi hoon papa… uss tak pohchne ke bohat karib hoon… aap bilkul tension mat lijiyega… bohat jald sab theek ho jayega

                   Randeep goes near Sakshi with smile.

RANDEEP: Haan haan aap bas aram kijiye aur theek ho jaiiye… apki sherni yaha sab bohat acche se sambhal rahi hai and aage bhi sambhal legi…

                   Sakshi smile on this. Next moment Randeep said in worried tone but with teasing look,

RANDEEP: But…

                   Sakshi looked at him with narrowed eyes.

RANDEEP: Uncle apko pata hai apki sherni kabhi kabhi kitni dangerous ho jaati hai… meri toh darr ke maare jaan nikal jaatihai…

                   Sakshi’s mouth gets wide open hearing this and then hits him on shoulder.

RANDEEP: Dekhiye dekhiye kaise humla karti hai hum masoom pe…

SAKSHI: Masoom aur tum… papa yeh ekdam jooth bol raha hai… yeh khud ek number ka idiot hai… apko pata hai sab ke samne bol diya ki mission director me hoon… aap hi bataiiye ki kya zaroorat thi yeh kehne ki… sab mujhse sawal kar rahe hai ab and vo Arjun… vo toh aise ghur raha tha jaise mujhe chodega nahi aur yeh sab iss stupid ki wajah se… apna muh bandh nahi rakh sakta…

RANDEEP: Ab me kya karu… sab itna keh hi rahe the toh maine bata diya… unhe bhi sach janne ka haq hai naa

SAKSHI: Tum toh rehne hi do… sach jaane ka haq hai (said imitating him)

RANDEEP: Accha meri maa… shant ho jaa… dekha uncle kaha tha naa ki kitni dangerous ho jaati hai yeh…

                   Sakshi glared at him.

RANDEEP (check his watch): Ab hum nikalna chahiye… late ho jayenge

                   Sakshi nods and looked at her dad.

SAKSHI: Ok Papa… apna khayal rakhna… aate hi apse milne aaungi

RANDEEP: Bye uncle

                   They talk with nurse and then left for airport.

 

At Airport

 

                   Etf team and Rashmi are in waiting area. They have completed their all procedure. Arjun is checking his watch in every one minutes and scolding Sakshi in his mind for being late.

ARJUN (thought): hadd karti hai yeh ladki…abhi tak aayi kyun nahi… maine kaha tha ki me aata hoon pick karne lakin mana kar diya… bada keh rahi thi ki randeep ke saath aa jayegi… ab kya hua… kya zaroorat thi uss randeep ke saath aane ki… naa jaane kaha reh gaye hai…

AISHA: Rashmi tum try karo naa randeep ko…Yeh Sakshi ka phone toh nahi lag raha hai

                   Rashmi nods and about to call but stop seeing Sakshi and randeep.

RASHMI: Yeh lo aa gaye

SAMEER: Sakshi kaha reh gayi thi?

RANDEEP: Meri galti nahi hai… saari galti iss Sakshi ki hai… uski baatein hi khatam nahi hoti

ARJUN: yeh toh koi wajah nahi hui der hone ki… I mean Sakshi ki baatein aur yaha late aane me kya connection hai

RANDEEP: Hai… bohat bada connection hai

                   Arjun narrowed his eyes.

RANDEEP: Tum toh jante ho naa ki Sakshi baatein karte waqut kitni cute lagti hai… uske iss khoobsurat chehre se nazarein hatein toh me kuch kar paau…

SAKSHI (with shy smile): Randeep stop it…

                   Sameer smiles seeing Arjun’s irritate face while Aisha and rashmi nods in disbelief.  Same time announcement made.

RASHMI: Apki romeogiri ho gayi ho toh chale?

                   Randeep nods. Soon they board the plane. Arjun sits on left side at window. He looked at his team mates and his heart wants Sakshi beside him. Same time Aisha said,

AISHA: Sakshi come…

RANDEEP: Sakshi!

                   Sakshi looked at Aisha and then randeep.

SAKSHI: I am sorry Ayu… aaj tum Sammy ke saath beth jaauo… kya hai naa Randeep ko promise kiya tha ki uske saath hi bethungi so…

AISHA: Iss me sorry kya… you enjoy…

                   Aisha, Sameer and Shree take seat in middle row and rashmi take seat beside Arjun. Well Arjun is busy glaring at Sakshi. When Rashmi sit beside him, he avert his gaze and looked at Rashmi and Rashmi smile in return. Soon plane take off hota hai. Rashmi know that Arjun is not a talkative person so she starts reading magazine. Other side Aisha, Sameer and Shree are busy in talks. Randeep and Sakshi are having fun and seeing this Arjun become restless. He is not liking this at all. He try hard to not look at them but he can’t stop himself.

ARJUN: Relax yaar… kya ho gaya hai mujhe…unko aise dekhna bandh kar Arjun

                   He scold himself but its notworking. He looked at Rashmi and new thought come in his mind. He took a deep breath and asked,

ARJUN: Tum Roshni ko karib se janti hogi naa

                   Rashmi looked at him surprisingly on his sudden question and then reply him.

RASHMI: Haan… Roshni ne mere join karne ke baad SIF join kiya tha… uska nature toh aap jante hi hai… day one se hi acchi dosti ho gayi thi usse…

                   Arjun nods.

RASHMI: We used to share our problems, our happiness… kaafi baatein kiya karte the… bohat acchi dost thi… jab bhi kuch samj naa aa raha ho toh uske pass chali jaati thi… Roshni ka jaana hum sab keliye bhi utna hi painful hai jitna aap ke liye…

ARJUN: hmmm… Ab samj raha hoon

                   Rashmi looked at him with enquiring eyes.

ARJUN: Apne hi toh kaha tha uss din ki dard aur badla sirf mere akele ka nahi hai… pehle nahi samjta tha lakin ab yeh baat ab samj aa rahi hai

       saying this he looked at Sakshi. Rashmi too follow his gaze.

RASHMI: Uske liye yeh sab aur bhi ahem hai

                   Arjun took a sigh and looked at her.

ARJUN: Jiss tarah Roshni ko janti hai aap waise hi Sakshi ko bhi bohat acche se janti hogi naa

RASHMI: Haan matlab Roshni ke baad Sakshi ne humse contact kiya tha bas tab se hi janti hoon…

ARJUN: Apko nahi lagta ki iss case ko hath me leke usne bohat badi galti ki hai… I mean Sikandar ko toh hum sab jaan hi chuke hai… Sakshi ko aise iss case ko hath mein lene ki zaroorat nahi thi

RASHMI (Smirks): Lagta hai Aap abhi bhi Sakshi ko samj nahi paaye hai… Sakshi utni kamzor nahi hai jitna aap sab usse samjte hai… dekhiyega vo apni Jiji ko insaaf dilake hi rahegi

ARJUN: Haan mein manta hoon ki vo Roshni se bohat hi zyada attached hai lakin uski bhi toh family hogi… use apni family ke baare mein bhi toh sochna chahiye naa

                   Rashmi look down hearing this. Arjun notice this and asked enquiringly,

ARJUN: Janti hi hogi naa Aap uske family ko!

                   Rashmi become restless on this question but immediately compose herself and replied instantly,

RASHMI: N… Nahi… usne kabhi bataya nahi

                   Arjun noticed each and every reaction of her and find that something is fishy. Same time they heard Sakshi’s laugh and looked at Sakshi. Randeep is saying something and Sakshi is laughing. Randeep pulled her cheeks and Sakshi put her head on his shoulder which again seek Arjun’s attention and he again get irritate on this.

ARJUN: Yeh Randeep aur Sakshi kuch zyada hi acche dost nahi hai?

                   He spill out irritatingly which makes Rashmi stunned.

RASHMI: What!!!

                   Arjun realised and then said,

ARJUN: I mean jab se mila hoon notice kiya hai ki dono kaafi acche dost hai

                   But Rashmi is quick to notice that Arjun is not liking sakshi’s closeness with Randeep.

RASHMI (Thought): Accha toh aag zor ki lagi hai… Hmmm ab aayega maza

                   She smile and said,

RASHMI: Acche nahi bohat bohat bohat acche dost hai… In fact Randeep toh Sakshi se bohat pyaar karte hai… uski toh jaan basti hai Sakshi mein

                   This makes Arjun feel strange sadness. He looked at Sakshi and Randeep with fall face. Rashmi becomes happy seeing this.

RASHMI (Thought): I can’t explain Arjun ki apka yeh reaction dekh ke me kitni khush hoon… yeh dekh ke yakin ho gaya hai ki aap hi hai jo Sakshi ki zindagi mein khushi ki wajah banenge… shayad aap bhi abhi nahi jante lakin I am sure apko ek din zaroor realise hoga and bohat jaldi realise hoga… ab apko realise karwane ka mission mere hath mein hai so dekhte jaiiye ACP sahab…

                   She clear her throat which makes Arjun looked at her.

RASHMI: Bohat cute lagte hai naa dono?

                   Arjun nods slightly.

RASHMI: Poora SIF yahi kehta hai… SIF ke cartoon piece hai dono… ekdam pagal aur sab se zyada naughty… kabhi kabhi toh sochna padta hai ki vo chief and head of mission hai yaa chhote bacche

                   Arjun slightly nods and fixed his gaze outside the window. Soon they reached at Ahmedabad airport. After reaching at airport they took cab and reached at the hotel which shree already booked. They had dinner and now in Sameer’s room.

 

Sameer’s Hotel Room

 

                   They are discussing the plan for tomorrow.

SAMEER: Toh kal subah hi hum dholavira ke liye nikal jaayenge

RASHMI: By Road jaana hai toh we have to book cab or we are going to use Bus service?

AISHA: Rashmi hum sab car se jayenge… I have already booked the car so uski tension mat lo

SHREE: Waha jaake investigation kaise start karna hai?

ARJUN: Humara first target hai waha ke hotels se details nikalana…

RANDEEP: Exactly… ab toh aadhar card ke bina kisi bhi hotel mein registration possible nahi hai so kaam aasan ho jayega

SHREE: But agar vo hotel mein nahi reh ke kahi aur reh raha hoga toh?

 SAMEER: As you said area zyada bada nahi hai so population bhi kam hai agar hotel yaa lodge se kuch pata nahi chala toh we have to check each place… specially vo areas jaha se border pe contact banaye rakhna aasan hai

RASHMI: Hmm toh ek kaam karte hai… kyun naa hum bhi 2 team mein divide ho jaate hai… ek team lodge and hotel pe nazar rakhegi aur dusri team border area pe hone wali activity pe dhyan rakhegi

ARJUN: I agree with you...toh....

                   He looked at Sakshi and about to say but Rashmi said,

RASHMI: Randeep Sakshi aur mein Border area dekh lete hai and aap sab hotels dekh lijiye

              Arjun makes face on this. 

SAMEER: Theek hai

SHREE: Sir mein tourist department jaake database check kar lunga ki pichle waqut mein kitne new logon ko job assign hua hai… agar shiva kahi department ka admi banke bhi chhupa hoga toh hume information mil jayega

ARJUN: Good Shree…

                   Shree nods.

SAMEER: ab so jaate hai… kal subah nikalenge

AISHA: 9 baje ki baat hui hai car wale kesaath

SAMEER: Ok then 8:45 ko yahi milenge

                   Team nods. Rashmi, Aisha and Sakshi are in one room. Randeep and Shree are in other room while Arjun and Sameer are sharing the room. All are relaxed as they are sure that they will find shiva menon soon.

                   Next morning they all left for Dholavira. They reached at dholavira by evening. They stay in one hotel and then decided to starts investigation from tomorrow. 


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That's it

Sorry guys I know update is not so good

"Loved it" toh nahi but hope ki atleast "like it" kehne layak lage. 

I will try to update other stories as soon as possible. 

once again sorry!

take care

Bye



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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi dear 💕💕

Thanks for the PM and update

Nice update

I am happy, that you are back

Arjun is irritate, this is to good 

Randeep and Sakshi friendship, is awesome

Sakshi and Randeep such a  good's friends, it's fantastic 

Waiting for the next update

Continue soon, and

Welcome back, once again😊😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Welcome back dear 🤗🤗

I can understand what you have been though 😊

Please take care of yourself 😊

And about update its super update 🥳🥳🥳

Randeep and sakshi friendship is too good I love their bonding ❤️

Eagerly waiting to know what is going to happen between arakshi 🤪🤪

Its is getting very interesting 😎

Thank you for the update and pm 👍🏼

Will be  waiting for the  next update 

And once again take Care of yourself😉

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved it dear

Awesome part 🙂 

I am sorry to hear about your grand father 😓 but that's the truth of life

I hope & pray that you & your family stay strong & bear the loss 

Coming to Update it was beautiful😍❤

I loved how Arjun was getting jealous of their friend 😇 

Case seems to have a good start 

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂