RiHaan/RiAnsh OS- Darmiyaan - Page 5

Bahut hi pyaari OS ... loved reading it 💖

Originally posted by: .shivi396

Asfi isse tu dimaag ka Kachara kehti hai

This is perfect

All this Song and Set up is beautiful

This is how Vihaan should tell Riddhima in a subtle way that he infact is Vansh.

This is good do write more once you finish ur exams

Thank u so much shivi

I’m glad u liked it

Yaar study table pe suddenly aisa idea ayega to kachra nahi to aur kya kahu dimag ko bata mujhe🤪

I’ll write after xms, idea aate rehte dimag mei

Originally posted by: RishiGirl

This was so good Asfia :))))

There were words that just kept echoing in my ears as to how Vansh would say it, there were emotional moments which made me tear also.

The funny parts and how i could visualize Vihaan’a actions and his flirting through your words :)

Riddhima being lost in her world and how she feels and Vihaan loving the touch of Riddhima on his dimples - these little things made me visualize those along with how Riddhima’s mouth utters the word Vansh when she join the dots!!!


It’s a nice story Asfia 😃

Thank u so much dear Rishi for liking it🤗❤️

I’m glad to know that you could connect to this One shot😃

I Loved reading your beautiful review ⭐️

Originally posted by: AppleOfEye

Thank u so much dear Rishi for liking it🤗❤️

I’m glad to know that you could connect to this One shot😃

I Loved reading your beautiful review ⭐️

No worries Asfia ❤️

And thanks for loving my review 🤗

Originally posted by: ..NadiaZ..

Amaaing update Asfia🤗

Keep it up

Thank u so much Nadia❤️

Originally posted by: RishiGirl

No worries Asfia ❤️

And thanks for loving my review 🤗

Pleasure🤗❤️

Originally posted by: SoniRSippu21

Beautiful OS, nicely done👏

Thank u bhabi🤗

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

Firstly..tell me tum ko aisa kyun lagta hai people will throw rotten tomatoes at you?

Secondly,its amazing

Keep writing more👍🏼⭐️

Yaar ye OS ka idea bohot suddenly aya tha dimag mei while studying🤪

Aur maine uss flow mei jaldi type karke post kar diya so I actually don’t know how it came out😆

But thanks, I’m glad to know u liked it🤗❤️

Originally posted by: NadaanDil

This was so soothing & absolute delight to read❤️

The song perfectly matched with description👍🏼

Thank u so much dear🤗❤️

Originally posted by: HeytzMaaneet

Wow!!

Asfii 🤗

superbly penned down yaara👏👍🏼

I guess these moments r gonna come our way n Bacchi will have unearth the truth

Pati ka password crack karna hoga 😎

n then decode the secrets stored in them 😆

The dimple part was the best

Haaye hope aisa koi scene show mein bhi mil jaaye☺️😳

Very well written

😃

Thank u so much yaara🤗

I’m glad u liked it❤️

Even i wish to see bacchi joining dots in the show Maza ayega😎