RiAnsh TS: Betrayal [Last part - Pg 8/ 18.11.20] Completed - Page 9

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

oh god sad ending but somewhat ironical and justice

vansh made riddihima goes through same pain and guilt now she ended her life and gave him back

please do write more

bye sumi

Thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: MafiaQueen17

Wow payal 👍🏼

I read in one go love the chapter1 n chapter2 as well beautifully written ❤️

Ending is 😭but they don't deserve this

My poor babies 🥺

Thank you ❤️

Ab ending kya mein kya bolun😅

Originally posted by: uShooty

Really well written! A little heart breaking.. but really well written!!

I fear that this might actually happen when Riddhu becomes tired of all this... she wont die but can take such a drastic step.

This show really makes me overthink and fear everything 😂

Keep these updates rolling xx

Thank you ❤️

Dont let the show being a reason for overthinking 😆

Originally posted by: nimarious

Payal yeh kya kr dia....😭

Cvs aisehi rula rhe h ab tm bhi😭....

Very well written 👍🏼

Loved the way how ridhu disclosed everything....

Kaas epi m bhi aisa kuch dekhne ko mile kabhi😔

Plz continue if possible....

Loved it...❤️

Thank you ❤️

Maine CVs sey kam rulaya hai😆

Originally posted by: Manisha_IF

Payaliya...ye tune kya liya😭😭😭

Dono ko judaa kar diya...Mere RiAnsh bichad gaye😭😭😭

Amazing TS

Mujhe ye sab show me chahiye... ending ke alawa...

Vansh vihaan banke aaya

Ridhu sab janti thi pahele se hi ki vansh hi vihaan bana hai

Siya thik ho gai...wahhh...show me kab hogi yar...

AP aur kabbu ka sach samne aa gaya

Par aakhir me jaan de di ridhu ne usi jagah jaha sab kuch shuru hua😭

Sach me vansh ne aese hi maan liya ki ridhu ne dukhawa kiya pyaar ka...wo ye sab na kehta to aaj shayad ridhu zinda hoti aur dono sukhi sampan jivan bita rahe hote...

(Ab me chalti hu...meri bakbak khatam...aur Batana maine dhyan se padha hai ki nahi)

Okay you have written a whole poem😆 That's like a motivation for me🤗

Thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: Avneel07

So well written.

Thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Tu has raha hai payu...

Hum sabko rula diya...

Hehe😆

Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

No dear. I understand her POV. If possible, please continue dear :) At least an epilogue where we can see Ridhima as a strong girl. I mean rather than dying - she can leave her life on her own terms. If possible only :)

I will try, actually when I started writing I thought for sad ending only but still I will think😅😅

Originally posted by: the-havelgirl03

I will try, actually when I started writing I thought for sad ending only but still I will think😅😅

Dono ko alag kardo but Ridhima should alive. I'm being so despo of Ridhima 🤡🤡🤡

Thou was a sad ending😭 it was really nice❤️

I really loved the twist 😊❤️