I still love you- until the last breath

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I am a big fan of serial Dharti ka Veer Yodha Prithviraj Chauhan .According to the serial Prithviraj and Sanyogita were first met in the Koteshwar yatra.At the end of the journey both of them became very good friends.They found each other in love.They shared an eternal bond. According to history or Prithviraj raso ,Princess Sanyogita had fallen in love with Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan . Sanyogita was the daughter of Maharaja Jaichnadra of Kannauj who was the biggest enemy of Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan.Despite of so many difficulties they got married but Maharaj Prithviraj chauhan was abducted to Afghanistan after the end of tarain second war in 1192 .Prithviraj Chauhan was So brave He killed Mohammad Ghori with the help of his close friend Chandra Bardai and Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan and Chandra Bardai stabbed each other.After the hearing the news of Prithviraj captivation His beloved wife Maharani Sanyogita committed Jauhar.

I was highly fascinated by their love saga.I have always wanted to write Fanfiction on Prithviraj and Sanyogita.It’s my second fiction of all time fav couple PrithviSanyo.









So here below is the summary and prologue of the story



I still love you-until the last breath

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Before sharing the post I would like to inform you one thing

It's a fiction and all characters, plot,events are the imagination of the author if any kinds of similarity with another story seemed then it's merely a coincidence or may be I am inspired from it 🙂.

As it's a fiction may be some parts will be Bollywood movie like or blah blah blah..and sometimes realistics but most of the things here are imaginary and irrelevant to reality.


I still love you - until the last breath


It's not necessary every love story would have a happy ending,some lovers are hardly able to cherish their life with their beloved one . Sometimes they have to spend their whole life without them...did they really live life??This is the story of two different strangers when they met and fell for each other when love was just a word of four alphabets for them.


Prologue:

Did you destroy yourself for someone?Did it happen with you that you always wanted to get over of your past ,you have tried your best and at some point you have thought you have overcome the journey but it is still haunted in your nightmare,engulfing you gradually day by day ,in each and every moment.The past which kept darkest secrets of your life,it pushed you towards the valley of death,you wanted to come back in your original life but you can’t,you are stuck in the middle of inferno and paradise.You are alone in this game nobody can help you.The game may be started by you or someone else but how it will be played and whom will loss and who will win it has only decided by the time.

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Chapter-1

It was the time when the whole city was immersed under a deep sleep,everything in the surrounding was so quiet that anybody could clearly hear the sound of a pin dropped on the floor ,there was only the rattling sounds of windows collapsing against a gust of rain . It was difficult to recognize which place it was due to pitch darkness. Suddenly there was a glimpse of light lightened up ,it was light of the screen of a mobile phone which was dancing above the table kept beside a bed.After several ringing of the latest bollywood music ringtone a hand took the phone ,on the blue screen shows the name Niharika,after receiving the call


“Other side of the call

“Hello! Dr.Agarwal ,this is Niharika .I hope I didn't disturb you


Dr.Agarwal switched on the table lamp and glanced at the alarm clock kept atop of the table “,it is 2:30 at night ….what is this ? You are disturbing me now... ! “She spoke up aloud .Nowadays she is hardly able to complete her sleep as she was busy at an emergency case at the hospital . Today she was sleeping two hours ago .


“Sorry,Dr. Agarwal but ! I am hopeless ,the patient at room no. 202 ,his condition is gradually deteriorating “

Dr. Agarwal sat up on the bed,”But he was doing well in the morning right? What happened to him now?”Her voice now clear

“I don't clearly know anything Doctor but he has difficulty in breathing suddenly ,I know you have no night duty today but Dr.Atul is now out off station ,can't reach to him”


“Okay ..Miss Niharika ..I ..I will come”she assured her

“Thank you doctor”

After the end of the call Dr.Agarwal breath out a sigh ,she immediately got up from the bed .She entered into the bathroom ,open the tap of the sink threw cold water on her face ,on the mirror she saw some dark circles under her eyes.She came out from the washroom and wept her face in a towel .She took out a white shirt and a black jeans from the brown wooden almirah which was kept at the corner of the room adjacent to it there was a bookshelf with so many books of medicines ,Post graduate books and so on.Beside the bed there was a wooden study above which a table lamp and a Alarm Clock.The window was kept closed .The whole room though have very little furnitures but it was still looked very clean and hygienic .In the ceiling there was fan and She immediately wore the shirt and jeans ,she didn't have the time to bind or comb her hair so she took a clutcher and tug it behind her hair.She took her stethoscope and the white Apron and her black bag.She was looking for her Scooty’s key which was kept beside a book which she was reading just before sleep .She took her Raincoat which was kept at the drawing room.


She came out from her house and took out the scooty and finally came out from the gate of the house.On the street there were only big ,tall lamp posts which were doing their duty of enlightening the road at night .Everything in the surrounding was seemed lit creepy with the whimpering of street dogs .

Dr. Agarwal climbed on the scooty and started the engine.She was wearing her red color helmet .


It was the month of July, rainy reason ,though the city got lit bit relief from the tandava of rain but not that much,while the driving chill wind touched her face ,she shivered.She came at a dark lonely street ,the shops along the street had their shutters rolled down forming dark ,silent walls on either side,whole the environment was seemed creepy., she didn't stop ,finally she took the main road .There were hardly few cars were going on the road.


On the road at a little distance there was a car in which there was a suspicious man who was sitting on the driving seat .He kept his hands on the steering ,keeping his attention on her .He followed her scooty until the hospital. He followed her everywhere ,day and night .He had known everything about her but she didn't.


Finally She reached the hospital ,kept the scooty in the empty parking slot and entered the hospital.


The car was also stopped there.The man's face was hidden under the darkness and it was very difficult to recognize his face as he switched off the light inside the car.


Seeing dr.Agarwal a lady had come towards her ,she was wearing a simple sari ,her hair was braided behind her head simply and she had a wrist watch in her hand .She was at her 5.3’’ and had a healthy figure at her 35“Thank you,Dr.Agarwal”the lady said with a sigh of relief


Dr.Agarwal said “Okay,but please complain against doctor Atul how can he show negligence towards his patients?”

“Okay,Dr.Agarwal,I will definitely do that.Now please come with me”


Dr.Agarwal Visited the room no.202 ,she checked his BP and heart beats While examining his chest.”Immediately ready the injection”She ordered Niharika


When the nurse was preparing the injection ,Dr.Agarwal was going through the report chart of the patient

“Dr. Agarwal,Injection is ready”said the nurse

She took that and gave it to him.After several times the patient became normal.


“Thank you Once again,Dr.Agarwal”Said Niharika

“It’s alright “ reliped Dr.Agarwal

“Will you again return back to home Dr.Agarwal ”asked Niharika

“No ,I will stay here ”She answered her when she was going towards the restroom

Niharika always allured by the aura of Dr.Sanyogita Agarwal .In the hospital among all the doctors she respected most Dr. Agarwal .Everybody had known she was a hardworking doctor and very dedicated to her job.She had an oval shaped face with a sharp nose ,brown big beautiful eyes under her full rim black Cat eye spectacle . She is at her 5.6 feet with a fit and fine figure.Niharika always saw her in shirt and jeanes she hardly wore traditional stuff.Although she was looking fantastic with her daily simple attire.


She was sleeping in the restroom and sitting on the chair and by bending her head down on the table adjacent to it.

Her peace of sleep disturbed once again by the ring of her mobile .She rubbed her eyes and took out the phone from her bag ,she was going to received the call but abruptly the call disconnected .She glanced at her Samsung galaxy F41 ,it was 4:30 at the dawn.There was 10 missed calls, her phone again buzzed ,She was little confused ,the screen showed it was a private no.

She swept the green button on the screen and spoke”Hello”


Other side of the call


A unrecognizable husky voice ”Hello Dr.Agarwal,You don't know me but I know you ,I am the darkest past of your life,You can do anything but cant run away from me,I will destroy you ,I will destroy you in each and every minutes,you will scream but nobody can hear you ,You are alone in this game“

She could not understand anything , “hello!....Hellloo….who the hell is this? Who are you?...W..H...Y..WHY are you prank.???? Before she could utter further the call disconnected suddenly .Sanyogita was totally in a puzzle.

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Did she do something to hurt the guy in the past? Why is he out to destroy her?

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Originally posted by: coderlady

Did she do something to hurt the guy in the past? Why is he out to destroy her?


At first thank you for your valuable likes .. I hope you liked it.☺️❤️... ..Yeh there was a past ...you will get to know everything gradually...Agar abhi bata diya toh Suspense khatam ho jayega..😊

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chapter 2

Meghna and Dharam are old friends and meet unexpectedly. How are they connected to Sanyukta?

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chapter 3

Was Prithvi looking for Sanyukta? Did they get separated and are not in contact any more? why?

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Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 3

Was Prithvi looking for Sanyukta? Did they get separated and are not in contact any more? why?


You will get to know about everything in the upcoming next chapters..🥺🥺....From now I will post only in the Fan fiction corner...🙏🙏🙏... You can comment only there🥺

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