Vignettes - 13. Magnets- Page 6

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h-arshi89

@h-arshi89

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

so magnets...hmmm what to say, every work of urs is simply extraordinary.

magnets does not has a story line, and continuation of scenes. it is very small, short, simple but it has so much potential, like after reading it I realized the power of such a small word "magnets", it simply defined the relations in shantivan. only losers and unlucky people like shyam will lose such loving people and beautiful family.

hey! did u plan the come back of shyam? if so eagerly waiting...

if not, then also I am waiting...waiting...waiting...😉

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@addicted25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

I love that you bring the whole family in, Akaash and Payals love story was a huge part in this story, and the fact that after marriage Akaash gets to whisk his eife away for a private moment is just as endearing as the bond that he has with his introverted brother. The boys have definitely found their other halves, just as fate brought two brothers together it brought these two girls together. Really awesome story.