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Owner starts to chant hanuman chalisa.... When he again hear's some sound.. infact voices of megha and Shruti..



Owner- (in mind)yeh toh kuch aur hi awaaz aave hai..maareh ko dekhna hoga ki keh ho raha hai.yaha..


He carefully goes at a safe distance taking along with him bitu where a big stone was there enough for him to hide and keeps a watch on the house.....


It was evening..and the camel owner was now sure that there was 3 men's in house and 2 women who were probably kidnapped.....he decides to stay till night beacause if he tried to go back..at day the chances of getting caught are high they and it was more beneficial for him to go back at night and inform police..


While keeping watch he sees that two men's were frequently coming out of house to keep watch . He also got glimpse of Shruti and megha who were tied near the window...


Owner - (in mind) hey ...eklingji....yeh kya ho raha hai. ..lagta hai indono ko pakad kar rakha .hai..aur inki vesh bhusha, woh bandook aur bhasha se toh sarhad paar ke lagte hai. ..yeh toh police aur army ke bade sahaab ko jaan karna hoga..maareh ko...


Soon it was near midnight and as it was new moon ..it was advantage for him . Being familiar to desert ..he knew is way in and out..like back of his hand in desert...


Owner- hey bhagwan dono chorio ko sahi salamat rakhna...

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He mounts on bitu's back and leaves the place...making sure not to make any noise ..


Here the camel owner's wife is worried about him ..as he had not returned ...fit had been two days since he was missing ...she shares her worries with neighbours who tells her that they will go in search of him..and if he is not found by morning...


Next day morning...


@ Thursday


Owner has still not reached his home so his wife and neighbours lodges a missing person report.Police assures them that they will find out as soon as possible their was a sand storm last night it will be difficult for police to find her husband.


@ in ghotala house

It's been few days after colony people bring 1313 to their house thinking he is 2015..


They are worried about meshru kidnapping .Sweety singh had informed about as per last reports they were in jodhpur alongwith militants .he assures them that he will do everything bring them back ..


Here since many days 1313 was trying to fit in the colony ..he tried to find the machine but failed..

Apart from that his behaviour was a bit strange which was noticed by Jacky ..and bhadresh


@ in ghotala house


Bhadresh enters ghotala house . ..and call out to everyone..


Bhadresh- baa..oh baa ...kaha hai tu..baa..koi hai...baa mein tere liye ek acchi news laaya hoon khush


Bhavna aunty- areee bol baba ..kya hua..aur yeh mithai...kis khushi mein..


Bhadresh- areee baa tu mithai kha pehle tere liye ...sabke liye khush khabri laaya hoon khush khabri...


Bhairavi- Mujeh Patah hai kya hai woh khabar..aapke batane se pehle hi Mujeh Patah tha..


Bhadresh - tujhe kaise khabar ..mein ne abhi tak kisi ko bataya bhi nahi..


Bhairavi- ( feeling shy) ab iss mein kya batane waali baat hai Mitesh Pritesh ke papa...yeh yoh sabko patah chal jaata hai.. aur aaj nahi toh kal Patah lagne hi waala tha..


Liza- hein???toh kya Bhairavi pure colony mein patah chal gaya hai?


Bhairavi- (still sharmaoing) nai abhi tak toh patah nahi chala par Liza bhabhi thode din ya .mahino mein patah chal hi jaayega na ..


Liza- par humne toh colony mein kisi ko bataya bhi nahi...


Bhairavi- haan. Wohi toh..aur abhi batana bhi nahi kisi ko warna kisi ki buri nazar lag jaayegi.. baa aapto abhi ghar mein hi rahe abhi aap bahar mat jaayie ..abhise aapko full bed rest lena hoga...


Bhavna aunty- hein ??par yeh khus khabari mein mujeh kyu bed rest lena hoga bhairavi...


Bhairavi- kaisi baat kar rahi hai aap baa.abhi aap umeed se hain..toh bed rest toh lena hi hoga na..


At this words..all nearly chokes ..


Lajo- ke bol rahi Bhairavi soch ke bola kar bhavna bhabhi umeed se kaise ho sakte hai..


Bhavna aunty-(coughs) aree bhairav kya bol.rahi hai tu...mein umeed se hoon??


Bhairavi- mein soch ke hi bol rahi hoon..baa.. abhi dekho aap khud hi confused hai..kitna samjhaana padega aapko..ab kalse badaam bigo ke rakhna padega...


Lajo aunty - areee bawaari ke bole jaa rahi hai...bhavna bhabhi umeed se hai..??yeh je bol rahe rahi hai..


Varsha tries to say something but on seeing bhavna aunty glaring she stops .


Varsha- Liza bhabhi...mujeh kuch patah nahi chal raha hai..kya sach mein bhavna bhabhi...


Liza -areee nai nai..varsha ..yeh kuch ghotala hai..abhi thodi der ruko mast explanation aayega..


Bhadresh-.(laughs nervously)..bhairu ..bhairu meri bhairu. . Tujeh kyu lagaa ki baa umeed.se hai..


Bhairavi- areee baa parso hi toh chilla chilla ke bol rahi thi mitesh Pritesh ke papa..areee woh Jacky bhi tha na saamne ..ussne hi toh bichari baa ko pairo ki maalish karke di.


Bhadresh -kya sach mein..baa ..?


Jacky- haan sahi kaha bhairavi didi bhavna aunty uss din toh aapke pairo mein bada dard tha aur sar mein bhi haan aur aapke aise chakkar bhi aa rahe the .Hawwww!!!!iska matalb aao sachi mein ...


Before Jacky could complete bhavna aunty cuts in ..


Bhavna aunty- areee uss din mujehjo pair dard ai sar dard ho raha tha uss ka iss umeed waali baat se kya connection hai


Bhairavi- kyu baa hai na? Kyu jab mein umeed se thi toh mere pair bhari the aur chakkar bhi aaye the aur sar dard bhi hota tha na..


Bhavna aunty -areee par mein umeed se nahi hoon .woh parso ko mein ne zyada kaam kiya tha na uske wajah se mere pair reh gaye the aur sar dard aur chakkar aa rahe the par iska matalb yeh nahi ki mein umeed se hoon daffor..


Bhairavi- toh baa aapko specify karna chahiye na..aap aisa kyu bol rahe the ki 'areee Jacky mere pair bhaari lag rahe hai ..bahut dard hota hai ..chala nahi jata ' aapko aisa bolna tha ki 'areee Jacky mere pair bhaari lag rahe hai.par iska matalb yeh nahi ki mein umeed se hoon bas zyada kaam ke wajah se pair bhaari bhaari lag rahe ..suje hue lag rahe hai' ab aap aisa nahi bolenge toh bichara insaan aur alien kitna confuse hojaayega ..aapko clear karna chahiye na...


Bhavna aunty-hein!!le toh kya ab mein har line clear kar kar ke bolu bhairu?


Bhairavi- haastoh wadi


Bhavna aunty wants to say something but Liza cuts in...


Liza- ahh!!!ek min..ek min abhi yeh charcha baad mein karna ..aur bhairavi bhavna bhabhi umeed se nahi hai .unka sirf leg pain ho raha tha..okay?


Bhairavi- toh barobar..dekha baa Liza bhabhi kitne clear cut samjhaya ..


Bhavna aunty glares at her ..


Bhairavi-(sad) toh barobar...


Bhadresh cuts in the tension


Bhadresh - areee yeh sab baad mein aap dono suljha lena pehle meri baat sunniye


Varsha - haan bataye na kya hua bhadresh bhaiya

Bhadresh- mein police station se aa raha hoon sweety singh ne kaha hai ki woh pisadh gunj police station karke sweety singh ne gawaahi di hai aur ab kal woh log vasant bhai aur sabko rihaah kar denge kyuki woh log nirdosh hai. Aur toh aur sweety singh ne yeh bhi kaha mujeh ki army waalo ko patah chal gaya hai jodhpur mein kaha woh militants log ne megha aur shruti ko chilo ke rakha hai aur toh aur unko chudaane apna manav aur uski team jaa rahi hai..


Bhavna aunty- hein !! Sach baba tu sach keh raha hai


Bhadresh - haan baa.areee issliye toh mithayi laaya hoon ..ye le baa aur varsha bhabhi..Yeh lijiye mithai


Bhavna aunty- (eating sweets ) yeh toh bahut achi khabar hai.baba tu news channel on kar mein bhagwan ko prasad chadha ke aati hoon


Bhadresh - haan baa


..bhavna aunty leaves..meanwhile varsha is happy she and others do ding ding dance they ask 2015 to join them but he refuses...bhadresh finds it weird ..even varsha finds it weird...


Varsha is upset and it is noticed by bhadresh...


Bhadresh- mein samjhata hoon varsha bhabhi..shayad 2015 ko lagta hoga ki usko galti ki wajah se aap sab yaha aaye aur dukh sehna pada aur shayad issliye thoda sa rutha hua hai.


Varsha- thank you bhadresh bhaiya...


Varsha leaves while bhadresh follows 1313 who was in living room...searching something

1313- (in lower voice) yaha bhi nahi hai....


Bhadresh - kya dhoodh rahe ho?


1313 is surprised but he composes himself...


1313- h.mm..woooh...wooh kuch nahi mein bas kuch dhoondh raha tha mere kaam ka..aap..aap ko kuch kaam tha bhadresh uncle..?


1313 is irritated and replies rudely to bhadresh.....and leaves from their..


Bhadresh is taken aback with his behaviour but he decides not to tell anything to varsha..Or anyone..


@ in evening

In Jodhpur.......

In army compound...


Everyone has finished their reports..to lft.colonel... Mr. Patil.


Mr.Patil informs that as per orders two units will stop the militants and the other two will stop the link of militants in city ..and asks them to get ready meet him on parade ground


Manav and Captain Akram were asked to take their units towards loc and to stop the militants while Captain rodrigues and Captain sangram were asked to stop hidden sleeper cells from city...


After breifing ..all units gets busy for their mission and meets Mr.patil..


When he was giving some last min..instructions.he gets disturbed by voices from the camel owner ..who was despearately asking for help .He was dead beaten by sand storm and was out of breathe.....


Mr.. patil- yeh.kon hai ??..guards..guards stop him..


Guards try to stop him but he pleads with them to speak as it was urgent..


Owner-(coughing and breathing heavily) bade...(coughs) bade...sa. (coughs) sahab bahut..hi jaroori suchna deni se


Guards- sir.iski haalat bahut gambhir hai..hame isse hospital le jaana hoga..


Owner- na..(coughs) na..hi..bh..bhaya...bh..ahut..hi jaroori suchna ..d..deni se... ..aa..aap mujeh ba..bade ... Sa...sahab se milv..milvaa dijiye...


One of the guards inform mr.patil that the person wanted to speak to him..Mr.patil agrees and asks all unit leaders to follow him..


Mr. Patil-... Haan bolo ..mein hi yaha ka bada sahab hoon.yeh lo paani pilo pehle.

Owner-(takes few sip of water) sahab..maareh bitu ko bhi paani pila di waha bahaar khada hai..


Mr..patil- bitu??


Owner- maarah uth..sahabji..


Mr.patil..asks few guards to take care of camel...


Mr..patil- haan ab bolo kya baat hai kyu ghabraaye hue ho


Owner - sahabji kal bitu thoda beichan ho raha tha toh usse mein thoda ghuman legaya ( cough) par patah nahi ke hua ...bitu woh devi mata ke mandir ke paas pauchne par paschim ki aur registan ki aur bhaag gaya..aur phir mein bhi bhaaga usko pakdne ke liye... Aur bhaagte bhaagte ..mein ek khander ghar mein pauncha...pehle toh lagaa waha koi nahi hoga. Par sahabji waha kuch log 3 the unke kapdo aur boli se sarhad paar ke log lage aur haan sahab un logo ne 2 chorio ko agvaah rakha tha ....


Mr. Patil- kya??


Owner - haan sahabji...aur phir waha aur kya ho raha hai woh dekhne ke liye mein waha der raat tak ruka.. ..


Captain sangram- par unhe patah nahi chala ki unn par koi nazar rakh raha hai...


Owner - nahi sahab ...jaha woh ghar tha..usse bas thode hi door do bade se pathar the..jaha chup jaao toh patah bhi nahi chalta ki koi hoga waha aur waha se sab saaf dikhta hai sahab ki kya ho raha hai...


Mr. Patil- okay..good. kya ..tum bata sakte hai..ki kya woh log aise dikte hai?

Shows photo of 1313 look alike Azim , Ali, and rafiq pictures..


Owner looks carefully after sometime he gives his affirmation...


Mr. Patil - acha batao woh dono ladkiya ko dekhta tha?kuch yaad hai kaise dikhthe the woh dono?


Owner - zyada toh thik se dikha nahi par woh dono chorio ko thodi ke liye bahaar laaye the..aur unke haath bandhe the.....


Mr. Patil- good....unke sketch banva lo..and as per plan aap sab pane locations ke liye nikal jaaye ..and major manav and captain Akram..aap inse woh ghar ke location ke details lijiye aur raisena hills contact kar ke exact locations and map le lijiye ..... Aur inhe cantonment ke hospital mein bharti karvaaye aur inke parivaar ko suchna dijiye... .aapka bahut bahut shukriya..


Owner - areee sahabji..maareh ko paap laagavo so ke..mein toh pehle aap jaise sahabji ke liye khabari ka kaam karta tha toh yeh toh maaraha farz hua hua sahabji .

All leaves for their respective destination

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@ in army truck...

Manav was unusually quiet ...the moment owner told the description of two girls held as hostages

his guts told him that he knew who were these two girls he just didn't want to accept it but his fears were true when he saw sketches and news from police that two girls were kidnapped few days ago from Mumbai..He prayed for their safety and decided that he is not gonna leave those militants..


His thoughts were disturbed by Aman


Aman- sir....sir. are you okay?.woh..shruti mam and megha mam ..


Manav cuts him..


Manav- (smiles) yes I am okay Aman..aur mujeh tension nahi hai about shruti and megha ..woh dono bahut hi ache se apne aap ko defend kar sakte hai..and I m sure they both will be giving hard time to those militants..


Aman laughs..


Aman- sure..sir.. but don't worry sir .. hum un militants ko aisa jawab denge ki unhe bhi patah chal jaayega ki hamari desh ki aur aankh uthake dekhna unki sabse badi galti thi .

They reach the meeting point .where they get the information that some people were found going towards the kaali pahadi which lead to their main target i.e which towards the where the main militants were .and as per their plan..captain Akram goes towards kaali pahadi while manav with his unit will go towards loc to stop militants ..and join Akram after that ..


At the abondned house...


The shruti and megha are in other room ..as their were some other militants discussing something..

Shruti and megha tries to Eve's drop the conversation..


Shruti was peeking through window..


Megha- (whispers ) shru..shru... Kuch dikha ...


Shruti- dekh rahi ..hoon..ek toh yaha bahhut saare spiders ... Hai .god please bacha lo mujeh ..inn spiders..se...kya kya din aagaye hai...mere ....


Megha- shrutiii kya ghusur fusur kar rahi..hai...waha dekhna kya ho raha hai...


Shrutii- (whispers ) dekh rahi hoon megha..par yaha bahut saare spiders hai...toh mein kya karu..you know I hate spiders...


Megha-(whispers) okay..okay par jyada mat movement karna aur jaldi se please dekhna ..yaha tin chaar spiders hai..jo mujeh aise jhapa jhapa jaise dekh rahe...hai..jaldi kar woh log mere nazdik aane ki koshish kar rahe hai....mujeh yeh spiders pasand nahi hai..


Shruti- okay...okay.......


Shruti Eve's drop in conversation..but they are talking very low tone..she can only hear few words and sentences..


Megha- aaahhhh...


Megha and Shruti both loses her balance and falls down...


Shruti - ouch...kya hua kyu chillai....


Megha- areee woh spiders woh mere haath par chadne ki koshish kar rahe the ..toh kya karu mein .....


They hear few steps coming towards door and they immediately sits back to their chair and pretends their hands are still tied ...


Rafiq opens the door and asks them why did they shout ..they tell him that a spider was trying to near shruti ..and because of that they shouted...Rafiq..is frustated but he doesn't say anything as because of their heads order to use them as hostage in time of need ..so he just gives them a warning and leaves...


Shruti-phew thank god....


Megha-ab bata kya sunna ...


Shruti- zyada toh sunn nahi paayi..par thoda bahut jo sunna usse yeh patah laga ki loc paar karke kuch aur militants aaye hai..aur woh log do din mein kuch bahut bada dhamaka karne waale hai ...


Megha- oh god .. ab..(starts coughing) and feels dizzy...


Shruti - oh my god..megha...megha..tu thik hai na..?


Megha - no ..shruti...meri energy kam ho rahi hai..aur..mujeh .lag raha ki mein alien roop mein aane waali hoon..shruti..


Shruti- kya?? Par tune kuch din pehle toh woh formula 070 liya tha .


Megha- haan par woh bahut kam dose tha shruti. .woh mujeh .sirf do din ke liye insaani roop mein rakh sakta hai..aur ab toh mere paas. Woh dose sirf 3 din tak mujeh insaani roop mein rakh sakta hai...


Megha starts to come in her alien roop...


Shruti- megha ...tu alien roop mein aa rahi hai...tu woh formula pura le le ..kaha rakha hai woh formula ..


Megha - meri left pocket mein ....


Shruti finds the vile in her pocket ..and gives it to megha..


Soon megha comes back again to her Insaani roop..


Shruti makes her rest on chair....Megha sighs..

Shruti gives her side hug..


Megha- shruti..mujeh bahut darr lag raha..hum yaha se kaise niklenge aur agar inn sabke bich mein alien roop mein aagai toh bahut badi problem hojayegi.. ..mere paas itni energy nahi hai ki apne superpower se yaha se nikal se..


Shruti -tu tension kyu leti hai .mujeh vishwas hai hum yaha se bahar niklenge woh bhi sahi salamat


Shruti-(in mind) manav kaha ho tum...please jaldi aao..please god kisi ko yaha bhej do hamari help ke liye

........

it was night and suddenly their was commotion outside..shruti and megha woke up and peeks through the ventilator


Shruti- megha..kya dikh raha hai..?


Megha- shruti lag raha hai..kuch halla hua hai..woh main leader woh kuch keh raha hai ..aur sab log apne haath mein bandook aur bahut saare gole leke khade hai...


Megha gets down..and goes near window...


Shruti-kya hua megha?


Megha-;shruti mujhe lag raha hai ki koi bada hungama hone waala hai woh leader kuch aisa bol raha tha ki yaha ka pehra bada do aur waha se koi khabar aayi hai nahi......rukh ek min..


She tries her telepathy powers to catch any signals but their were no signals ..


Shruti- oh.!!megha kahi aisa toh nahi unke kuch log aane waale hai ya unhe yeh lag raha hai ki police ya army waale yaha aane waale hai toh issliye woh log ghabra gaye hai...


Megha- iska matalb hum jaldi yaha se free hone waale hai..shruti..mere paas ek idea hai..dekh jab army ya police waale yaha aayenge toh woh log ghabra jaayenge aur hume pakd kar woh army waalo ke saamne rakhenge taaki army waale goli na chala sake aur unhe bhaagne ka mauka mil jaayega .


Shruti- haan yeh toh sahi hai.. kya sahi baat Sochi hai tune..


Megha - hai na..!!mein ne ek insaani movie mein dekha tha..toh hum kya karte hai. Ki jaise aisa lage ki army aur police waale aayenge toh yaha se yeh jo puraane kuch furniture aur almaarih hai woh darwaaze ke paas rakh denge taaki woh log ander na aa sake....


Shruti -eeehhh wow megha kya superb idea hai..


As time passes the commotion Increases...and no one gives a thought about Shruti and megha..


Shruti and megha hears the commotion and starts their plan...their was another ventilator but it was too high for them..

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Part 48


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it was night and suddenly their was commotion outside..shruti and megha woke up and peeks through the ventilator


Shruti- megha..kya dikh raha hai..?


Megha- shruti lag raha hai..kuch halla hua hai..woh main leader woh kuch keh raha hai ..aur sab log apne haath mein bandook aur bahut saare gole leke khade hai...


Megha gets down..and goes near window...


Shruti-kya hua megha?


Megha-;shruti mujhe lag raha hai ki koi bada hungama hone waala hai woh leader kuch aisa bol raha tha ki yaha ka pehra bada do aur waha se koi khabar aayi hai nahi......rukh ek min..


She tries her telepathy powers to catch any signals but their were no signals ..


Shruti- oh.!!megha kahi aisa toh nahi unke kuch log aane waale hai ya unhe yeh lag raha hai ki police ya army waale yaha aane waale hai toh issliye woh log ghabra gaye hai...


Megha- iska matalb hum jaldi yaha se free hone waale hai..shruti..mere paas ek idea hai..dekh jab army ya police waale yaha aayenge toh woh log ghabra jaayenge aur hume pakd kar woh army waalo ke saamne rakhenge taaki army waale goli na chala sake aur unhe bhaagne ka mauka mil jaayega .


Shruti- haan yeh toh sahi hai.. kya sahi baat Sochi hai tune..


Megha - hai na..!!mein ne ek insaani movie mein dekha tha..toh hum kya karte hai. Ki jaise aisa lage ki army aur police waale aayenge toh yaha se yeh jo puraane kuch furniture aur almaarih hai woh darwaaze ke paas rakh denge taaki woh log ander na aa sake....


Shruti -eeehhh wow megha kya superb idea hai..


As time passes the commotion Increases...and no one gives a thought about Shruti and megha..


Shruti and megha hears the commotion and starts their plan...their was another ventilator but it was too high for them..


Megha and Shruti makes a militant uncousicious when he comes to check on them and ties him to the chair..they take his radio walkie talkie and tries to connect it with near by signals..


Megha- help..please help..hum log yaha fasse hue hai ...please help..koi hai...hello....


They wait for a few min..but no one responds


Shruti- lagta hai hamara signal nahi pauch raha hai....

They try again but no response..


After few min.. their hear a disturb signal coming..


They try to catch the signal but it gets lost..


Megha again uses her powers and this time she gets a few signals of army people and then they try to catch that signals on walkie talkie.


Megha- help...please help koi hai..hello.....koi sunn sakta hai hame...



In desert few meters far from the house..


Captain akram and manav were discussing their strategy..
When a member from their team informs them that a help call has come on their radio..


Manav -; hello..this is Major Manav .. speaking..who are you please mention your name!


Megha- hello!hello oh my god manav bhaiya mein megha bol rahi hoon mein aur shruti..meri saath hai...bhaiya .hum log yaha ..Jodhpur mein kahin registan ke bich kidnapped hogaye


Manav - okay..megha.. calm down...calm down.. hame khabar mil chuki aur hum rescue team ke saath waaha aarahe hai..aur tum dono thik ho na..


Megha - haan..haan. bhaiya hum dono thik hai shruti abhi .woh abhi woh militants par nazar rakh rahi hai .hum ghar ke piche wale kamra bandh hai aur waha bahut height par ek choti khidki hai ...bhaiya aur unlogo ne yaha bahut saara gola baarud jama karke rakha hai aur yaha bahut saare militants hai ..unhe shayad bhanak lag gayi hai ki army ya police ko yaha patah lag gaya hai..


Manav - okay..calm down megha..we are here tum dono ko chinta karne ki jaroorat nahi hai..we will save you both...aap log hame aur details de sakti hai? Abhi waha kya ho raha hai..


Megha - haan..haan..ek min..(whispers) shruti ..shruti .jaldi..aa unhe patah ki kya ho raha tab tak mein nazar rakhti hoon..


Manav gives a slight cue to captain Akram and he starts giving instruction to teams..



Manav-(controlling his emotions) shruti..tum thik ho?


Shruti- (controlling her emotions ) manav..!:haan.. !manav..mein thik hoon..woh log... woh log.. kuch militants ko abhi registan mein bahar unhe hone ne abhi abhi kuch militants ko bheja hai taaki woh army par hamla kar sake...


Manav - shruti..tum sarna mat mein aa raha hoon..bas tum dono apna khayal rakhna aur darna mat..vishwas rakhna chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye mein aa raha hoin .aur mere saath radio pe contact mein rehna..


Shruti -haan..okay..


Megha connects manav through her powers .


Megha- bhaiya ..mein..aapko kuch images bhej rahi hoon ghar ke ander se taaki aapko patah chale kaha kaha gola baarud hai...


Megha sends some images to manav..


Manav- thank you megha..tum darna mat mein aa raha hoon.. hoon


Megha - hooon..ishaaba


Manav- ishabaa.


After talking with shruti about information..

Captain akram suggests to asks for back ups as it will help..

Manav agrees ..and they decide their strategy on how to enter the house and everything ..and they execute their plan.


Here in house the militants are still some what clueless about the army attack ..they are inside the house


Captain Rodriques - sir, we can see the house... We are waiting for the signal sir. ..


Manav- okay Rodriques, good job. Captain Sangram can you hear me?

Captain Sangram- yes sir..


Manav gives some instructions to his commorades


Manav- okay..this it.. on the count of three 3...2..1.. now..


With manav's order everyone charges in the house ..


Here as soon as the army charges in the militant starts to attack back in all this commotion the main leader of militants comes towards the room where megha and Shruti were their ..


Ali and rafiq and azim opens the door and finds one militant bounded to chair while shruti and megha were no where seen.


They fires a gun shot in air to scare shruti and megha..

On hearing gun shorts both gets scared..


Rafiq- chalo hamare saath bahaar chalo..


Megha - nahi hum nahi jaayenge tumhare saath..


Ali- aeee chup..(pointing gun) chup chap chali..warna yahi maar denge...


Shruti- ek baar mein baat samjh nahi aati hum nahi jaayenge...aur yeh baar bandook kya dikha ke dara rahe ho...


Azim- tch tch.. maut saamne hai aur abhi khauf nahi hai maut ka...


Megha - maut ka khauf toh tumhe hona chahiye ....hamare desh par humla karna chahte ho yeh jaan kar ki tum abhi bhi haar jaaoge..aur tum nahi..tum sab kai baar haar chuke ho phir bhi aajate ho..aur kya milta hai tum sab ko aise dusre desh mein nuksaan paunchne mein...


azim- in dono ko bahaar laao..mein baaki intezaam kar raha hoon...

he leaves..



Rafiq- chalo..


Megha - nahi..


Ali-aee chup....ab sidhe sidhe hamare saath chalo..


Shruti- nahi..


Rafiq- lagta hai tum log aise nahi maanoge..(loads the gun)


Shruti and megha are scared as they don't have anywhere to go ..they close their eyes..


Megha-(through powers ) shruti mein inko electrode karne jaa rahi hoon..okay..on the count of three...


Shruti-(in mind) okay..1..2..3....now


But before she raises her hands for using power

.thap!! Thap!!!


Shruti and megha open their eyes and sees that Ali and rafiq has been shot on the shoulders and look towards the person who shot them ..


It was manav and other army men.


Manav immediately rushes towards them engulfes them both in hug ...and gives them a kiss on both of their heads..



He immediately orders other team members to capture the three militants


Manav- thank god tum dono safe ho...tum donno chalo mere.saath .mein tumhe yaha se safely bahar nikaal raha hoon.....


They escape the house while killing some militants on the way ..while escaping megha uses her powers to freeze the bombs and weapons used by militants in order to help the army...


@ coming outside the house...


Manav - shruti ,megha yaha se tumhe mere kuch team members yaha se tumhe direct hospital le jaayenge ....please be safe..


Shruti-haan..okay


Megha- okay


From their they leave with some other injured army men..shruti and megha both helps the other injured army men as fast as possible...


Here they reach hospital and Shruti and megha are taken to hospital for check up....


After check up procedures..and statements taken by police they are taken to army headquaters where they wait for news from mission..

After few hours ...it was morning by now


@friday...

Morning


Shruti and megha gets to know that mission was successful but many men's had got injured

Including manav and captain Rodrigues have got several injuries in a hand to hand fight with main militant lead and some other militants..


In hospital..

Shruti and megha reach army hospital alongwith some team members


@in room


After other members meet manav..Shruti and megha goes to meet him..


Manav was happy to see Shruti and megha..but when shruti see's manav injured state ..she began's to cry..


Manav - hi..

Before manav could say anything Shruti and megha both punches manav uninjured shoulder ..


Manav-(rubbing the shoulder) ouch!!??yeh kya tha..mere dusre haath ko bhi injured karna hai kya..phir mein nahi jaanta saari seva tumse hi karvaaunga Shruti...


Shruti - chup!!ek dum chup warna aur jor se maarungi...mein ne kaha tha na tumhe jyada hero giri mat karna ....phir yeh sab kya hai haan.


Manav-(wiping her tears)shss Shruti bas choti si chot hai thik hojaayega..and it's my profession Shruti..aise chote bade choty toh lagti hai..


Shruti- I know ...but you know na.. it's new for me..


Manav- I know...sorry..


Shruti - no I m sorry


Megha - okay..now lover birds...aap dono jhagda karo phir se iske pehle..hame....
(Ouch)


Megha immediately sits down on near by chair ..


Manav-megha!kya..hua..tum..thik toh ho...tum baitho yaha..


Shruti -kya hua..megha...?tum thik ho??kya..kya tumhare powers fluctuate ho rahe ...


Megha-aahh(in pain ) no..but meri energy kam ho rahi...powers use kiya tha iski wajah se meri energy kam hogayi hai.....


Manav-powers..??megha tumne powers kiye the kab aur kyu..? Aur Shruti( towards Shruti) tumhe..(looks here and there making sure no one was watching them) Patah hai.ki megha..and ghotala family...alien hai..


shruti- haan..Mujeh kuch din pehle hi infact Patah chala..aur infact hum yahi baat karne waale the abhi...infact Mujeh tumhe ek baat batani thi..in sab ke bich baat ho hi nahi paayi..


Manav-kaisi baat..?


Shruti- hmmm..yahi ki samar bhaiya bhi alien hai..woh..hi 2015 hai..aur yeh baat kabse


Manav- kya??samar hi 2015 hai toh phir usne hame dusri tasvir kyu bheji..


Shruti tells about the confusion of pictures...and vasant and others in jail in pisadhgunj and samar missing from Jaipur.


Manav- hey bhagwan ..hame niklna hoga..yaha se pisadhgunj zyada door nahi hai..we have to leave...


Manav tried to leave bed but Shruti and megha stops him...


Shruti- no..tum abhi kahi nahi jaa rahe ho..hum kal niklenge ..you need rest manav ..


Manav - no Shruti!!abhi yeh time rest ka nahi hai we have to leave ..they need us Shruti we have to leave


Megha- no bahiya...aap aaram kijiye hum kal subha nikal sakte hai..abhi aapko aaram ki jaroorat hai ..doctor ne bhi kaha hai ..


Manav doesn't listen and tries to get up...
But...but

Ouch !!!

Manav -(rubbing his palm) ouch megha yeh kya kiya..


Megha- (holding ears) sorry bhaiya !!aap sunn nahi rahe the issliye thoda electric shock dena pada..


Shruti- haan.aur abhi nahi maane toh mein..mein..megha se kahungi..ki jaisa shock woh sharad ko deti hai wohi shock tumhe de...


Manav- dekho tum dono baccho. ..jaise baate mat karo ..situation ki seriousness samjho .aur..ab iske aage mein koi. Arguments nahi sunna chahta . And that's my order..


Shruti- oh hello!!kya my order my order kya lagaa rakha...tum bhale hi major ho par mere saamne nahi sunna na ..ab chup chaap rest karo..

And
Before manav could reply further shruti kisses him on his cheeks.. followed by megha's closes her eyes


Manav- (blushing + surprised+ shocked ) shrutii yeh kya kar rahi ho?yeh mera work place hai.. aur megha


shruti- shut up megha nahi dekh rahi hai and work place ka yaha koi rule nahi hai. so (quickly gives another kiss on his cheeks and leaves with megha).



@ ghotala house..


@ in main hall


Jacky - I don't believe this (showing a photo of alien) (checking 1313 forehead) tum mazzak kar rahe ho hai na? Pakka tum mazzak kar rahe ho.. meri chaaro tang khich rahe ho..


1313 looks at Jacky from head to toe...


1313- kaha tumhari toh sirf do taange dikh rahi hai...dusri do taange kaha se khichu...


Jacky laughs...


Jacky-- bahut acha mazzak karte ho 2015...


1313- mein joke nahi sach keh raha hoon 1947 ...aur yeh mazzak kya hota..?


Jacky was now serious..


Jacky- 2015 tumhe sach mein sar par chott toh nahi aayi na ??


1313- kyu mujeh kyu aayegi koi chott ?


Jacky- kuch nahi . Woh bas tumhe ( showing the photo) yeh kon hai yaad nahi..aur tumhaare bataye hue jokes bhi tumhe yaad nahi..


1313-(inmind) 1947 ko Shaq nahi jaana chahiye...ki mein kon hoon..(to Jacky) woh . Woh... Woh .


Mujeh patah nahi kyu yaad nahi aa raha ..shayad energy kam honi wajah se aisa hi raha hai..mein..mein sone jaa raha hoon.thodi der .


Before Jacky could reply 1313 leaves...


Jacky- yeh 2015 ko kya hua..aur itna ajeeb behaviour kyu kar raha hai..hai woh ..


After dinner


1313 comes in hemant and shishir room


1313 -( in mind ) Mujeh ghulna milna hoga aur shayad Patah hoga ki woh machine kaha rakhi hai
...

.

They were playing ludo and he joins them...


Hemant- heeiiinn aaye aaye 2015 bhaiya hum yeh game khel rahe hai...aap bhi hamare saath kheliye na


1313- hmm mujeh khelna nahi aata..


Shishir- areee toh hum sikha denge bahut hi ppppp insaani game hai


Hemant- haan 2015 bhaiya yeh dekho yeh ludo ka board hai aur yeh chaar color ki kuki hai ...aur yeh dyes hai


Shishir- bhaiya woh dyes nahi dice hota hai


Hemant- nahi nahi .shishir mice hota hai dice nahi...

.

Shishir- nahi hemant bhaiya mice matalb chuha ( rat) aur dice matalb jisse hum yeh ludo phir snake and ladder khelte hai woh..aur dyes matalb jisse hum jo kapdo pehnte hai uss par jo rang lagate hai na usse dye khete hai..hoon?


Hemant- hooonnn


Shishir- (laughs) okay toh chalo phir khelte hai.. hum aapko sikhayenge kaise khelte hai.... Ludo.m


After sometime


1313- shishir tumhe Patah hai papa ne woh machine kaha chupaayi hai

Shishir- nahi Patah .woh toh papa ko Patah hai ..kyu kya hua bhaiya ..


1313- kuch nahi mein bas jaana chahtha woh safe hai ya nahi ..agar ya kahi hua aur woh1313 aagaya toh..?


Shishir- woh...safe hi hai bhaiya kyuki woh machine toh papa ke bag mein hai..


Hemant- haan papa woh machine ko toh apne paas hi rakhte hai....taaki le jaa na sake ..heeeiiinnn..


1313-(in mind) hmmm tab toh Mujeh yaha intezaar karna hoga ..jab tak 9211 nahi aajata .....


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Part 49



@ at pisadhgunj bus station..


@friday afternoon


Ohja uncle - re maarih kamar reh gayi. Bade joro se dard ho raha hai....yeh sharad aur samar kaha reh gaye ? Jaldi se kuch khaane ko laaye toh Mujeh taakat aayegi aur kamar dard kam hoga..


Ohja uncle sees a vendor selling samosa...


Ohja uncle calls him...


Ohja uncle- oh bhaya yeh samose kitne ke diye ?aur fresh hai na?


Vendor- haan sahab fresh hai.. 10₹ ka ek samosa hai


Ohja uncle- ke ke ke ke ke loot macha rakhi hai..10₹ ka ek?? 10₹ mein do milte hai..Mujeh bewakoof mat Bana


Vendor- areee sahab mein kaha zyada keh raha hoon..mehngaayi kitni hogayi hai..ab itna toh hoga hi sahab...


Ohja uncle looks at samosa and decides to have it..


Ohja uncle- thik thik hai . Lekin mein pehle chakhunga phir hi paise doonga..


Ohja uncle tastes the samosa and he likes it ...so he buys more..


Vasant was at inquiry counter..and sharad samar and Ronnie purchased some snacks and biscuits for journey..


Vasant- areeee yeh tino kaha gaye?


Ohja uncle- woh mein ne unko thoda nasta aur chai lene bheja hai.......


Vasant- kyu??abhi toh humne itna saara naasta kharida tha na...


Ohja uncle-woooohhhh..hi..hihihi... Hogaye


Vasant- iska kya matalb ki hi...hi..hi.hogaya


Ohja uncle- woh mein kha gaya ..bahut bhook lagi thi toh kha gaya..aur kamar dard Kare hai...tohhhhh..hun huh hun hoon!(does his classic hand style)


Vasant- kya hun huh hun hoon abhi toh aapne khaana khaya tha??


Ohja uncle - haan toh usko abhi 2 ghante hogaye na toh mujeh bhookh toh lagegi na..hi...hi..hi....

Vasant gives a unbelievable look too ohja uncle..


Ohja uncle - areee baitho yaha vasant ghotala maareh ko thaareh se ek baat kehni hai...

Vasant sits besides..him..


Ohja uncle then hugs him tightly...


Ohja uncle - mein bahut khush ghotala ...aakhir taareh ko taarah beta mil gaya...mein bata nahi sakta ghotala kitna khush hoon mein... Aisa lagta hai maano aaj phir mujeh mera dusra beta mil gaya ho.. bhale hi hum dono alag prajati ke ho..par hamara dukh toh ek hi jaisa.hai..maarah maarah rajasthani mann prafullit ho utha hai..


Vasant- (emotional) (laughs) ..haan ohja uncle aapne sahi kaha mujeh yakin hi nahi ho raha ..ki mera beta mere saamne hai..maano lagta hai mein abhi bhi sapna dekh raha hoon....


Ohja uncle pinches him...


Vasant- ahhhhh.. ohja uncle aapne mujeh chutti kyu kaati..


Ohja uncle - reh jhallar!!!!! Insaani movie dikhate hai na ki agar yeh patah karna ho ki yeh sach ya sapna toh chutti kaate hai?


Vasant- haan.haan..yaad aaya..waah ohja uncle..aapne toh pppppp example diya hai...


Ohja uncle- hai na!toh issi baat pe maareh ko 501₹ de...


Vasant- nai abhi nahi hai 501₹ ..woh sab ticket mein kharch hogaye..ghar jaake mein doonga aapko..


Ohja uncle- hat jhallar mein toh majaak kaate. Hoon..ulta mein doonga 501₹ ..samar ko...aakhir woh maareh bete jaisa hai..aur hum ab shaadi ki baat kar le ..


Vasant- areee par shaadi kaise kar sakte hai aap jarah sochiye varsha ka kya hoga? Lajo aunty ka kya hoga...?areee yeh sochiye manav kya sochega..?mere 4 bacche kya sochenge?aur sharad aur megha aur shruti aur samaj kya sochega??


Sharad- kiski shaadi?aur hum sab kya sochenge?


Samar- hawww papa aap dusri shaadi kar rahe hai...mein mummy ko sab bataunga..


Vasant- aee hemant bhai..mein kaha dusri shaadi kar raha hoon..yeh toh ohja uncle bol rahe hai..ki hum shaadi ki baat kar le .


Sharad- iska matalb aap dusri shaadi kar rahe hai ohja uncle toffee ya woh Svetlana ke saath?


Ohja uncle tries to speak but no one let's him speak...


Ronnie - ae ohja uncle man...mein bata raha hai..agar tum dusra shaadi kiya na toh aapko ek zordar (showing his fist)


Ohja uncle- re...reh..chi..chi...chi..jhallaro..chup hojaao thodi der...meri baat sunne bina hi apne rail gaadi bhagaa rahe ho..jhallaro..!!!aur khamkha mujeh toffee or sevtlana ki yaad di dlaadi yeh logical ghotale ne..areee jhallaro mein apni..shaadi ki nahi sharad aur megha aur manav aur shruti ki shaadi ki baat kar raha tha.. jhallaro!!


Sharad- kya!!yayayayayayay...ayayayaya yayayayayay..


All looks at sharad who was so happy that he didn't care of everyone on bus station were staring at him......and he carried on his yayayaya in different tone..


Sharad- bhaiya ...yayayayayay..ayayatat..yayayayaya...


Ronnie tries to calm down sharad but he doesn't listen to anyone


Ronnie- vasant .ghotala ..yeh sharad ka tape yayaya pe kyu chipka gaya hai??


Vasant- yeh..shaadi ki baat sunnke iska tape recorder chipak gaya hai .jo itne dino se shaant tha iska yayayaya woh uska quota pura nahi hoga tab tak rukega nahi..


Ronnie- oh !!!man..tab toh lamba chalega....sharad ka....par vasant ohja uncle ne bahut hi acha baat kaha..hai...dekho hame wapas 2015...bhi mil gaya..toh yeh toh double khushi ka mauka hai...


Vasant- haan...yeh toh sahi par manav aur Shruti kya raazi honge ..matalb hame toh Patah woh dono ek dusre pyaar karte hai..par . Agar humne acahanak se hi shaadi ki baat ki toh ...kahi woh dono pe pressure na aajaye..


Sharad stops doing yayayay...


Sharad- bhaiya.....bhaiya ..ki baat sahi hai..lekin jaha tak Mujeh Patah hai..manav aur Shruti maan jaayenge..mein manav ke mann ki baat janta hoon...


Samar- sahi kaha sharad chacha..aur jaha tak mein jaanta hoon Shruti ko bhi problem nahi hogi....


Vasant- hmmm...par abhi hame 1313 ko bhi toh pakdna hai..


Ronnie - haan man.woh mumbai mein kaha hoga kuch idea nahi hai...par hum yeh kaam kar skata haina ghotala ..ki abhi hum colony jaayega aur pehe samar ki aane ki khushi mein party rakhega aur phir ek do din ya 7 din ka..woh ba..woh ba..woh..ba


All- tch tch tch..tch..


Ohja uncle- atka jhallar..!!!!bol bhai bol..


Ronnie -areee ..woh ba..woh..ba woh..woh..haan haan..face aur hands ka hindi kya hota...


All glares at ronnie...


Ohja uncle- reh..reh..jhallar..ke karun iska usse muh aur haath kehte hai...jhallar!!aur ab yeh hi haatho se maareh ko tarah gala dabaana..hai..


Ohja uncle tries to grab ronnie but vasant stops him


Ronnie..- areee ohja uncle abhi tum kaiko intna bhadkta hai man..abhi mera baat sunno..Mein yeh keh raha tha hum koi ek dum mast badhia sa muhaath dekh ke engagement kar dete hai ofcourse pehle manav aur shruti ko puch lenge .


Ohja uncle - haan pakka..lekin ronnie kiska mu haath dekhenge ..Tera ,?mera? Ya phir ghotala nagari ka?


Ronnie- areee ohja uncle mein tum kaiko ghotala d ki tarah ghum ghum chakri Babu laao bakri kr jaise baat raha hai


Ohja uncle- re jhallar !!woh murahat hota hai aur naaki muhaath...


Ronnie-okay..okay tum samjha na man..lekin yeh batao idea kaisa hai...


Ohja uncle - idea toh ghanna chokha hai..kyu bhai ghotala ke kehve hai...


Vasant- idea toh acha hai..kyu haan sharad kya kehte ho.


Sharad- (blushing) kya bhaiya aap bhi ab mein kya bolu...yayayaa..


Ohja uncle- aree yayaya mat karna hum samjh gaye..


Vasant- areee ohja uncle iss mein bhi koi puchne waali baat hai..ofcourse ismein kya puchna infact mein toh chahta hoon sharad aur megha ki shaadi puri rajasthani style mein ho...


Ohja uncle- yeh toh ghanne chokhi baat ki hai..aur haan megha ka kanyadan toh mein hi karunga.


Vasant- aree sharad jaa apne sasurji ke aashirvaad le...


Sharad takes aashirvaad of ohja uncle...as it was still time for their bus they have some samosas and other snacks..and enjoy the time.



Samar and sharsd went to have some other snacks for journey...

It was time for their bus so they had to walk fast which leads them to board on wrong bus where as vasant and others board the right bus..They think that sharad and samar has followed them too so don't check back too..when everyone are settled and vasant decides to look at sharad and samar but they are no where to be found ..same goes with sharad and samar


Vasant- areee.yeh chacha bhatija ki jodi kaha gayi...hamare saath hi toh bus mein aaye the...


Ronnie- haan man..gaye kaha dono....aage baithe honge vasant chalo check karte hai...


They check but the duo are nowhere seen..that's when Ronnie's phone ring.


Ronnie- ae kaha ho tum dono..bus mein baitha nahi tum dono?


Sharad- baithe na ..ronnie bhaiya but hum galti se jaipur waali bus mein baith gaye..toh ab hum jaipur se bikaner se aapke saath baith jaayenge .humare paas paise hai aur khaana bhi hai..bhaiya ko bolna chinta mat kare...mobile ki battery bahut kam hai.. toh abhi hum jaipur paunch kar ..hello?hello?


Ronnie - kya..tum dono jaipur waali bus mein baith gaye...aur ab woh log direct jaipur se Bikaner aaoge aur waha se yeh bus mein baithoge? . hello..hello


Ronnie sees signal of no network


Vasant- kya??mein abhi woh driver ko bolta hoon thoda u turn le..


Ronnie- aree nai man sharad aur Samar bola ki woh log bikaner se yeh waali bus mein baithenge..unke paas paise hai aur khaana bhi hai...


Vasant- acha..acha thik hai par woh log dhyan se toh baith gaye hai na


Ronnie- haan ghotala tension mat lo ulta hum thoda surprise de denge varsha ko aur baaki sab ko


Ohja uncle- haan!!!ab shaanti se baith ja aur ab nikaalo woh naaste ka thela maareh ko bhookh lagi hai..


Vasant- haan...


In bhatt house..


After lunch is over kids were playing hide and seek with 1313


It was 1313 turn to find out every one..


1313 - (to himself) yeh 9211 kab aayega .ab yeh dhong aur mein kar sakta bas ek baar woh machine mil jaaye...


1313 leaves while mumbling to himself ..but unknown to him bhadresh was sleeping on swing and heard him..


Bhadresh- ( to himself) areee baapre yeh2015 aise kyu bol raha hai..yeh kuch gadbad hai..kahin yeh woh 1313 toh nahi . Par .varsha bhabhi bata rahe the ke 2015 ne koi terrorist ka roop liya hai..par woh terrorirst toh pakda gaya hai..toh phir..yeh aise kyu..kahi 1313 ne bhi toh woh terrorirst ka roop liya ho toh..hmmm bahut gadbad hai..mujeh nazar rakhni padegi ...chal wallah kam pe lag jaao...




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Part 50



@ next day..


It is friday


In bhatt house..


Bhavna aunty had prepared lunch and invited colonywalas..


After lunch is over ..while everyone were busy with helping in kitchen ..kids were playing hide and seek .


It was 1313 turn to find out every one..

1313 - (to himself) yeh 9211 kab aayega .ab yeh dhong aur mein kar sakta bas ek baar woh machine mil jaaye...


1313 leaves while mumbling to himself ..but unknown to him bhadresh was sleeping on swing and heard him..


Bhadresh- ( to himself) areee baapre yeh2015 aise kyu bol raha hai..yeh kuch gadbad hai..kahin yeh woh 1313 toh nahi . Par .varsha bhabhi bata rahe the ke 2015 ne koi terrorist ka roop liya hai..par woh terrorirst toh pakda gaya hai..toh phir..yeh aise kyu..kahi 1313 ne bhi toh woh terrorirst ka roop liya ho toh..hmmm bahut gadbad hai..mujeh nazar rakhni padegi ...chal wallah kam pe lag jaao...

After thinking he again goes back to sleep..


@ next day


A day before vasant arrival...


@in ohja house...


Everyone are happy


Varsha is happy...


Varsha- bhavna aunty...bhavna aunty ..


Varsha swirls bhavna aunty..


Bhavna aunty-aeee..aree Ben dhire ghuma..Mujeh chakkar aajayenge...


Varsha- sorry sorry..bhavna aunty abhi abhi vasant ka phone aaya tha woh kal aarahe aur unhone kaha hai ki woh mere liye bahut ppppp se bhi zyada ppppp surprise laa rahe hai.


Lajo- ke baat baat kar rahi hai varsha ? Ab aisa konsa surprise de rahe hai eoh


Varsha - haan lajo aunty yehi kaha unhone ne..


Lajo receives call from manav and she leaves..


Bhavna aunty- areeee waaah yeh toh kushi ke samachar hai....OOO chakudi...OOO chakudi areee beta khush khabar hai jaldi se mithaai la beta..


Bhairavi -ae laai baa


Bhavna aunty- varsha ..kyu na hum bhi unhe surprise de...kya bolti hai...


Varsha - haan...bhavna aunty yeh toh bahut acha idea..par kaise surprise denge..


Bhavna aunty - areee woh hum soch lenge..pehle. mein kya kehti hoon hum na kal mast ek dum khanna ka plan banate hai..woh log duphar mein aayenge


Liza agrees too and they start making list..


Lajo enters hall and she is very excited...


Lajo aunty- bhavna bhabhi..bhavna bhabhi.....suniye bhavna bhabhi...bahut hi achi khabar laai hoon...

Lajo aunty comes and hugs bhavna aunty

..

Bhavna aunty - areee kya hua lajo rani kya hua..tu Shatabdi express ki tarah dod ke kyu aa rahi hai... Dekh saans chadh gayi hai tujeh.. pehle baith aur paani pi..


She drinks water


After few min...


Lajo aunty- aree sab sunno..abhi maareh ko megha ka phone aaya tha aur woh ke rahi thi ki manav aur Shruti ne ek dusre ke saath durse shaadi karne ke liye haan kaha hai aur undono ki sagai bhi sharad aur megha ke saath hogi .manav shruti sharad samar aur ohjaji, vasant bhai aur baaki sab ek saath hi aa rahe hai mumbai woh log bikaner se saath aa rahe kal ya parso.



Bhairavi- aree waah yeh toh bahut achi news hai par kya Shruti ko alien ka raaz Patah hai lajo kaki,?


Lajo aunty- haan.. usse aur samar ko dono ko ghotala family alien hai Patah chala hai aur un dono ko koi problem nahi hai..


Liza- areee waah yeh toh bahut acha news hai..aur toh aur itne dino baad colony mein do- do shaadi wala ghar hoga man..bahut mazza aayega..mein toh abhi se hi apne saare saari aur jewellary set ko polish karne de dungi.


Bhairavi - mein..bhi..mein ne toh decide bhi kar liya mein konse function mein kya pehnugi..


Bhavna aunty- haan sab barabar par.. pehle chalo bhagwan ke saamne diya karte hai..yeh khushi unki wajah se aayi hai..


Bhairavi - haan baa..


They light diyas and offer mithai to lord..


After offering prayers they go to dosuza house where everyone has gathered


Bhadresh- baa yaha kyu bulaaya? Kya khaas baat bolni thi...


Bhavna aunty - areee batati hoon pehle yeh sab chalo mithai lo


After everyone takes mithai


Lajo aunty then tells everyone about the matter


Everyone are happy..and all start to discuss about who will do what about tomorrow party


Pritesh- ek min...ek min. Sab chup hojaao ..abhi ...kon kya krega usko leke khichan taani hogi...iss ke liye mein pehle bol raha hoon..dekho decorations ka saara kaam hum bacho ka aur Jacky bhaiya aur 2015 bhaiya ka hoga aur khaane ka aap sab sambhal lena...


.1313- (in mind) tum sab ko nahi patah ..kal party toh hogi par dhamaka bhi hoga... Kal toh tumhara. Sawagat mein khud karunga


He laughs...


Everyone are busy preparing for party


@in ghotala house..


1313 -(to himself)aaj woh din aagaya hai finally.aaj mein apne plan start karunga...kal 9211 tum aaoge aur machine aur yeh duniya meri muthi mein hogi...


1313 takes out some kind of gun


1313-(to himself)acha hua mein ne woh bair agency waalo ko behosh karke yeh chizz churaali.he uses the gun and his powers in ghotala house ..and in colony .


In colony garden


Bhadresh shares his concerns and doubts with Jacky


Bhadresh- aeee Jacky mein sach keh raha hoon aisa mein ne sunna hai woh 2015 bol raha tha..aur uska behaviour se bhi mujeh Shaq hai


Jacky- bhadresh uncle doubt toh mujeh bhi hai..kyuki uska behaviour bahut ajeeb hai aur toh aur usse toh yeh bhi yaad nahi ki jab hum yaha prithvi oe aaye the toh humne pehle naam kya the aur Insaani aadat uski abhi aisi hai ki maano usse yeh sab naya lag raha hai


@ ghotala house...


Jacky- bhadresh uncle aap piche hatt jaaye ..aapko choty lag sakti hai...1313 tumhari dushmani hum se hai insaano ko chod do...aur jab tak mein yaha hoon mein insaano ko chott nahi paunchame doonga..


1313- oh acha aisa hai...chalo phir ek muqabla hojaaye.. without giving warning 1313 use his stone powers ..


Jacky- and bhadresh dodgess the powers...


Jacky- tosses his mobile to bhadresh...


Jacky- bhadresh bhaiya aap jaldi se varsha aunty ko call kijiye . Aur jaldi chup jaaye ..


Bhadresh - aree haan


Bhadresh hides behind the sofa..


Here Jacky uses his super spin power to stop 1313 but 1313 uses his invisible wall powers


Suddenly Jacky feels weak ..and he stops using powers..


Jacky falls on ground , bhadresh gets worried and goes near Jacky..


Bhadresh-jacky??kya hua tumhe kya ho raha hai.???aeee 1313 kya kiya tumne iske saath..Jacky kamjor kaise hogaya..


1313 laughs a little..



1313-sach mein ek baat toh maani padegi tum insaan bahut emotional jo aur bahut hi lagaa rakhte ho dusro ke liye ..mein ne yaha ek aisa power use kiya hai jo aliens ke super powers ko absorb yaani yun kahe toh dhire dhire chinn lega ..jitna Tum istemaal karoge utna hi absorb karega yeh superpowers. Aur yeh dusri gun hai iss power ka tod ..jo mere paas hai...jo tumhe milna impossible .kyuki (breaks the gun) woh ab hai hi nahi...Toh karo jitna powers use karna hai karo Mujeh koi farak nahi padta ..


1313 laughs ...


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Part 51




Outside bhatt house


Pritesh and kids alongwith hemant are ready to go to ghotala house .. but as the decoration material was so much they decide to take help...


Hemant tried to use his powers but he was not able to do..so..he thought it might be power fluctation a so he didn't said anything...


Hemant- areee yeh 2015 bhaiya aur Jacky bhaiya kaha gaye...


Mitesh - areee gape maarne baith gaye honge..sab..yeh senior citizens ki aadat Na ab unlog par bhi hone lagi hai..


Shishir- haan.(saw gaffur bhai) . areee woh sabji waale uncle ko bolte hai ki help kare ..


Grishma- Mujeh toh nahi lagta woh uncle hamari help kar paayenge ..


Pritesh- mujeh bhi nahi lagta ki woh sabji bechne waale uncle hai.. aree aisa bina sabji ka thela leke kon aata hai ... par koi nahi hame kya karna hai.. sabji wala ho ya aur koi..abhi toh unse help lete hai..


Hemant - hoon...mein bulaata hoon..uncle ...uncle ...OOO sabji wala bhaiya jaise nahi dikhne waale uncle... Idhar ..idhar dekhiye...


Gaffur bhai looks at kids and is surpirsed why the tall boy was calling him that..he was first confused that may be they found out he was not a vegetable vendor ...


Gaffur bhai - kya...mujeh bulaa rahe ho chottu?


Gaffur bhai asked refering to Pritesh


Pritesh huffs in irritation...


Pritesh- uncle sabse pehli baat bhale meri height chotti but mujeh chottu nahi bulaaneka..


Gaffur bhai- areee babwa tum chottu ho toh tumhe chottu hi bulaaunga na chottu


Pritesh huffs...


Mitesh- uncle please aap jaraa help kardo na hamari..yeh thoda sa saaman woh saamne waale ghar mein jaana hai...


Gaffur bhai- haan kyu nahi... Acha yeh batao chottu ki woh tumhare samar bhaiya ya phir Shruti didi kaha hai..


All stops in their tracks..


Shishir- woh toh hame nahi patah par aap samar bhaiya aur Shruti didi ke baare mein kyu puch rahe hai..


Pritesh - haan..aur aapko kaise patah ki yahi aapko Shruti didi aur Samar bhaiya yaha milenge..


Mitesh - haan bataye bataye ..aise chup kyu hogaye uncle...aur aapko kaise patah woh yaha hai..


Grishma - (whispers ) hemant bhaiya mein apne powers use kar nahi paa rahi hoon..


Hemant- (whispers) mein bhi nahi kar paarah ..hum ghar mein jaake 2015 bhaiya se baat karenge


Gaffur bhai- (in mind) areee baapre yeh bacheog toh kuch zyada hi smart hai..ab kya bahana bannau....


Pritesh- konssa bahana soch rahe hai uncle?


Gaffur bhai - areee.. chottu beta aisa kuch nahi .woh..kya hai..na..woh log mere yaha se orphanage ke liye sabji kharidte hai na..issliye..aur 5-6 se din se sabji nahi kharidi unhone air thodi gossip nahi hui ..aur woh mujeh chutte paise dene baaki hai


Pritesh,- acha chalo woh samjh aaya aap bhi hamare senior citizens ki tarah gossip karna na mile toh utavle hojaate hai..toh yaha gossip sunne aur karne aajayenge woh toh tension nahi hai kyuki senior citizens ki gossip faltu hoti hai..


mitesh- sahi kaha par chutte paise wapas dene ke liye yahaa tak aana yeh baat kuch samjha nahi mein .aur woh bhi specially aana ...nai..nai abhi kaha sab itne imaandaar hote hai..


Shishir-(whispers) mitesh yeh sabji waale bhaiya ko toh ab 2015 bhaiya hi sambhalenege ...Mujeh toh doubt ho raha uncle pe


Mitesh-(whispers) hmmm mujeh bhi..


Gaffur bhai-..he.he..he..beta mein toh immandaar hoon.. ab chalo jaldi jaldi tumhaare ghar chalte hai haan..yeh saaman lejaana hai


Shishir- okay..aap hamare saath aaye ..aap hamare bade bhaiya aur Jacky bhaiya ke saath baaat kijiye unhe patah hai shruti didi aur Samar bhaiya kaha hai..


They again walk towards ghotala house..


Pritesh- chaliye ghotala house...


They try to open the door but it doesn't open...


Hemant- lagta hain wapas darwaaza jaam hogaya uncle jor se Dhaka maariye ..

Gaffur bhai tries to open the door. But it doesn't even budge..


Pritesh- kya uncle yeh kaise dhakka maarte ho . Jaara body ke hisaab se dhakka maaro..ya phir khali khali body banayai .hai


Gaffur bhai -aeee..chottu yeh body bahut mehnat se banayi hai ab dekho tin ki ginti pe yeh darwaaza aise dhadam se kholta hoon..


Finally gaffur bhai opens the door and they come inside and are shocked to see the war between jacky and 1313... Jacky sees them and before he could ask them to go out 1313 uses his powers and closes the door.


Bhadresh- aeee baccho waha mat khade raho yaha piche aajao ...aur powers bilkul bhi use mat karna..


Jacky- haan sahi kahha jaldi piche jojaao..


Shishir- yeh kya ho raha Jacky bhaiya kya hua aapko..aap bahut kamjor lag raho ..2015 bhaiya kya hua Jacky bhaiya ko..


Gaffur bhai- hein 2015 bhaiya....samar yaha kaise hi sakta hai ..


Gaffur bhai comes forward and that's when everyone realize that gaffur bhai was present...


Shishir- uncle..woh..woh..yeh sab toh mazzak hai...


Pritesh- he ..he...he..haan yeh sab toh aaj ke magic show ke liye..hai..


Hemant - haan..yaha koi bhi alien nahi haai..hum toh sirf insaan hai .aur yeh hamara bhaiya hai. ?


Hemant realises what he spoke ...


Gaffur bhai- areee beta yeh tumhara 2015 bhaiya nahi hai .yeh toh shayad woh villian hai 1313 ..


Shishir- kya??? 1313??aap ko jaise patah


While bhadresh informs them about the whole matter and powers 1313 used..


Gaffur bhai- toh iska matalb yeh sab 2015 ka parivaar.. hai??


Bhadresh- areee haan bhai. Lekin aapko kaise patah aur alien ka raaz tujeh kaise maalom?


Gaffur bhai tells him his side of story ..


Bhadresh- areee waah yeh Shruti aur samar ka connection toh acha hai..acha gaffur bhai ek chotta sa kaam hai woh piche waali colony hai na waha thoda lafda hogaya hai toh aapke bhai logo se bolke


Pritesh- offo ho papa abhi kya yeh sab baat leke baith gaye. Abhi yeh sochiye hum kya kare .shishir kuch idea aa raha hai?


Shishir - nahi.aur .mummy ko inform kare toh kare kaise mein powers use nahi kar sakta aur bahaar mere powers use nahi ho rahe the...yeh kaisa power use hua..hai..Mujeh kuch samjh nahi aa raha .


Pritesh- mere paas bhi iss situation ke liye koi idea nahi..kyuki iska mukabla toh varsha aunty ya phir vasant uncle kar sakte hai..aur vasant uncle ko aane mein abhi aur samay hai .unka wait karna hoga..kal aayenge woh..


Mitesh- haan..aur yeh power jo use hua uska tod bhi toh dhoondhna hoga na warna vasant uncle mukabla kaise karenge ..hum hc ko contact kaise kare?


Gaffur bhai- aeee mere paas ek idea hai mein na woh 1313 ke saath thodi baat karke maandavli karte hai taaki woh hum mein se kisiko nuksaan na paunchaaye.aur koi idea toh nahi hai..ab jab tak wou vasant bhai nahi aaye toh kuch toh karna hoga na..


Bhadresh- hmmm idea toh acha gaffur bhai..par woh baat karne jaayenga kon..bili ke gale mein ghanti kon bandhega?


Pritesh - woh toh yeh gaffur uncle bandhege na..papa ..


Gaffur bhai- aeee mein kyu chottu??


Mitesh-kyu aapne idea diya hai toh aap hi try karo..


Gaffurbhai-aeee aisi cheating nahi karne ki haan mein kyu jaaun..


Here 1313 and Jacky are still fighting with Jacky becoming weak . On seeing the right time gaffur bhai stops them..


Gaffur bhai- aeeee 1313 bhai aap jara waha baith ke tv dekhiye na mast mast hindi tv serials aur shows..tab tak mein Jacky ko samjhata hoon ...


Jacky protests but gaffur bhai convinces him to get back and think...


Gaffur bhai- hi hi hi hi..aeeee yeh toh chotta baccha hai..aap tv dekhiye tab tak aapke liye mein mast cutting chai aur nasta banake laata hoon kitchen mein se..woh kya hai abhi toh ghar mein bandh hai aur kisi ko hamari awaaz jaayegi nahi toh phir kaiko itna jhagda karna hai na...


1313- thik hai..par agar koi bhi gadbad ki toh yaad rakhna Mujeh se bura koi na hoga ..


Gaffur bhai drags back Jacky with him in kitchen


Jacky was weak so he sits down..


Jacky- yeh kya tha ..mein jitne hi wala tha..aapne Mujeh waha se kyu le aaye ...aap jaante nahi yeh kitna khatarnaak hai..


Bhadresh- areee Jacky woh hame Patah hai..lekin yeh soch agar jaan hai toh jahan hai..yeh soch zinda bachenge toh usse lad paayenge na..


Gaffur bhai and bhadresh gives some sense to jacky about the situation and why it's best to back out and wait for vasant..


Jacky- okay..but ab karna kya hai aage?


Bhadresh- aage ab vasant bhai ka wait karna hai..aur dekh jab bhi colony waalo ko hum log sab gayab milenge toh yaha aayenge ya phir hc ko contact karenge ya phir aisa hosakta hai sab humein dhoodhne aage aur yaha sab bandh hojaaye par hum mukaabla toh kar sakenge na..ek saath woh 1313 par samjhe mein kya ke raha hoon..hum mein vasant bhai ka intezaar karna hoga kyuki hum sab mein se 1313 ka saamna karne ki taakat sirf vasant bhai mein hai..ya varsha bhabhi mein..


They agree with plan..


Meanwhile 1313 calls everyone and asks them to give their mobiles..


They follow his order. Further 1313 orders them to do work ..like making different different food and asking gaffur bhai to dance..


Pritesh gets hold old mobile which some how hemant had kept long time back . and sends a help message to bhairavi..


@in bhatt house. ..


Bhavna aunty- yeh saare baccha party aur bhadresh gaye kaha kitni der hogayi abhi bhi ghotala house sajaa rahe hai?


Bhairavi- Patah nahi baa .. lagta hai kuch aur decoration ka saaman laane gaye honge ..


Bhavna aunty- haan aisa hi hoga..haal haal chakudi jaldi jaldi yeh dusri chizze banani hai aadhi chizze Liza bana rahi hai ..


Bhairavi- okay...baa .toh barobar..


Bhairavi gets a message and she stops to check it...


Bhavna aunty- areee chakudi khadi kyu hai chaal beta .chaal


Bhairavi- haan toh barobar..


Bhairavi without reading msg leaves with bhavna aunty .


Here Pritesh and Mitesh messages on bhairavi and bhavna aunty no. And others too..


Shishir- Mujeh lag raha hai yeh log unknown dekh ke msg ka reply nahi denge aajkal whatsapp ke alwa ka msg yeh log nahi padenge nahi..


Pritesh- haan sahi kaha yeh aajkal msg padne ka system chala gaya hai..but hume chupke se msg toh bhejte rehna padega....


In ghotala house Jacky bhadresh and gaffur bhai were serving 1313 alongwith making plans. With kids helping them..


Here in d Souza house all were now worried now as kids and bhadresh and Jacky were no where to be found..plus varsha's power was not working .so they are worried about it so they decide to go in ghotala house and contact hc about it..


Varsha- Mujeh yeh samjh nahi aa raha ki meri powers kyu kaam nahi kar rahi aur powers fluctate bhi nahi ho rahe hai..toh phir acahanak se kaise gayab hogaye mere powers?


Bhavna aunty- areee kahi teri powers chali toh nahi gayi na? Insaani roop mein reh reh ke?


Varsha-(looking at herself) hein?? Mein samjhi nahi, bhavna aunty .mein kaha alien roop mein thi jo ab wapas insaani roop mein aajaunga..


Bhavna aunty- areee mere kehnka matalb hai ki kahi aisa na ho ki constantly insaani roop reh ke insaan bangaye ho aur shakti bhi gayab hogayi ho??


Varsha-nai aisa toh nahi lagta Mujeh..kyuki agar aisa hota toh hum toh kabke insaan ban chuke hote bhavna aunty..


Liza-sahi bola varsha tumne .. lekin yeh bhi toh possible hai ki kuch bahaar ka khaane ki wajah se hua hoga


Varsha -nai Liza bhabhi woh new year waale haadse ke baad kuch bahaar ka nahi khaya


Lajo aunty- toh phir bimaar toh nahi hai na tu..matalb shayad alien mein bimaar hote toh shaktiya kaam nahi karti ..


Varsha- shayad possible hai ..par hum kabhi hamare grah mein bimaar nahi pade..lajo aunty..


Bhavna aunty- hmmm..aeee varsha hc se puch le unhe shayad Patah hoga..agar koi bimaari hui toh formula ya aisa kuch bhej denge woh..


Varsha -haan..yeh idea acha hai..mein abhi ghar jaati hoon..


Bhavna aunty- haan mein bhi aati hoon yeh sab khaana wahi rakh dete hai tyaar hogaya hai..haal chakudi dusre bartan tu utale..


Liza- aree kahaa ek saath sab ke rahe ho ..laaye Mujeh dijiye ..waise bhi hum bhi ghotala house jaana hai..aree dekhe toh sahi baccho ne kaisa mehnat kiya..


With this all colony ladies enters ghotala house.

And they are shocked to see Jacky and others are working in kitchen while 1313 was eating ..


Varsha- areee tum sab kya bana rahe ho..


Before varsha could finish ..hemant comes their and hugs varsha ..


Hemant-(crying ) mummy hamare saath dhokla hua hai..yeh 2015 bhaiya nahi 1313 hai mummy.inhone


Varsha - beta woh dhokha hua hai..aur yeh kya keh rahe ho ki 2015 2015 nahi 1313 hai ??


Bhadresh- areee varsha bhabhi dur hojaaye yeh hemant sach keh raha hai ..yeh 1313 hai..2015 nahi...


The colony ladies are shocked ...


Varsha immediately gets on defensive mode and is about to use her powers but shishir stops her.. she immediatly charges towards 1313.she uses her powers on 1313 but nothing affects him ..

Shishir- mummy zyada powers mat use karna ..warna 1313 mein powers absorb hojaayenge..aur hum weak hojaayenge


Varsha- kya??matalb ..


Shishir tells her everything..all are shocked when they hear it..


Varsha immediately checks Jacky..varsha hugs him


Varsha-jacky beta tu thik toh hai na..kya abhi bhi kamjori mehsoos ho rahi hai.kahi chot toh nahi aayi na?


Jacky- nahi..aunty mein thik hoon..aap please powers use mat karna...yeh 1313 hai..hamara 2015 nahi..


Varsha -haan..Patah hai Mujeh hemant ne sab bataya Mujeh.


Varsha feels sad on seeing Jacky..she gets angry and again she confronts 1313 for being coward and deceiving them .She is super angry and just a second away from hurting 1313 again but she knew it

won't be worth.


Soon they are locked in ghotala house and through gaffur bhai that samar is their real 2015 .further they try to make various plans on how to trick 1313 or some how contact HC


Varsha- mein ne kaha na 1313 Mujeh nahi Patah woh machine kaha hai..aur Patah hota tabhi nahi batati..


Bhavna aunty- (whispers) chalo acha hua vasant bhai woh machine unke saath le gaye hai..


Liza- haan par jab aayenge toh tab kya hoga..1313 toh blackmail karke vasant bhai se chinn lega ..


It's next day ..the day of vasant and others arrival.


1313 asks everyone to prepare for party and he informs that he will himself welcome vasant..


Everyone are worried but they are ready to face anything...


Soon vasant , ronnie and ohja uncle mashru,mesha and samar enters colony...


Ohja uncle- ke baat hai..hamara welcome karne koi naa aaya.


Ronnie - areee hamara welcome kyu karega koi ohja uncle hum thodi na india ka world cup jeet ke aaya hai..


Manav - haan..papa sab kaam mein busy honge .


Ohja uncle- haan phir bhi koi na koi toh honaa chahiye na darwaaze pe welcome kae liye areee mein rajasthani mashur super model hoon ..


Ronnie- aeee kya ohja uncle kya bolta hai tum bhi..


Vasant interrupts ronnie.


Vasant - nai nai..ronnie ohja uncle ne sahi kaha areee atleast sab milne toh aate ya phir welcome karne aaye Mujeh pakka yakin hai varsha jaroor aati..aur tumhe hamari colony ek dum se kuch zyada hi shaant nahi lag rahi hai?


Sharad- hmmm bhaiya kahi aisa toh nahi tv par woh puraani Ramanand Sagar waali ramayan ya phir b.r. chopra waali mahabharat aa rahi ho.?


Ohja uncle -par usse iss baat ka ke taaluk hai logical ghotala?


Sharad- ohja uncle Mujeh bhavna aunty bata rahe the ki jab woh do serial tv par aate the toh pure seher mein curfew lag jaata tha..toh logically agar abhi woh serial aa rahhi hai tv par toh sab dekh rahe honge aur iske wajah se colony ek dum shaant hai..ek dum curfew lag gaya hai


Megha- par Pluto, iss hisab se toh pure seher mein hona chahiye na curfew .hamari colony mein hi kyu?


Ronnie- sahi bolta hai megha..tum.. apni colony hi kyu shaant hai..


Sharad- haan yeh baat bhi sahi hai


Vasant- Mujeh kuch achi feeling nahi aa rahi hai . Hamari colony itni shaant toh kabhi nahi ho sakti..matalb kuch na kuch toh hota hi hai na hamari colony mein phir aaj yeh ek dum se sannata kyu hai...?





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Part 52- finale


Ohja uncle- haan sahi kaha tune vasant ghotala. Bhavna bhabhi ki awaaz toh colony ke bahaar tak sunnai deti hai...aur aaj sunnai nahi di..


Ronnie - aeee ohja uncle man kya faikta hai tum bhavna aunty ka awaaz itna bhi bada nahi hai ki colony ke bahaar tak sunnai de.


Ohja uncle-aree sunnai deta hai..tu behra hai issliye tujeh sunnai nahi deta ..mein toh clearly sunn sakta hoon unki awaaz ..


Vasant-aeee ek min.ek min yeh bhavna aunty ki awaaz kaha tak sunnai deti hai woh baad mein discuss karenge but hum pehle ghar chalte hai..Mujeh kuch ajeeb lag raha hai..aur toh aur mere powers bhi nahi chal rahe..hai..


Manav - areee aap log thoda shaant rahenge ..meri sixth sense ke rahi hai yaha kuch gadbad hai..papa mein sabke ghar check karne jaa raha hoon aap tab tak dusre ghar check kariye .


All checks the houses but to their surprise they find it empty except for ghotala house which was locked from outside.


Sharad tries to use his powers to contact varsha but his powers doesn't work..


Sharad -bhaiya mere powers kaam nahi rahe hai..
Mein ne bhabhi ko contact karne ki koshish ki par powers use hi nahi ho rahe hai..


Vasant- tune thik se try nahi kiya hoga phir se try kar woh ..woh dhoop. Mein jaake try kar


Sharad again tries his powers but nothing happens ..meanwhile Shruti and megha checks the club house and swimming pool area but no one is their...


Shruti-megha ,kahi apne colony wale police station toh nahi gaye na?


Megha- haan possible hai koi gayab hogaya hoga aur issliye sweety singhji ki help maangne gaye honge ..


Shruti -yes possible hai aur wahi hamare colonywaale baith gaye honge .


Megha- yes possible..


Meshru walks back to colony ..meanwhile samar and sharad and vasant try to use their powers but nothing happens ..


Manav-- koi bhi kisi ke ghar nahi hai aur vasant uncle ajeeb yeh hai ki ghotala house bahaar se lock hai ..aur baaki koi bhi ghar mein lock nahi hai.


Samar-yeh kaise ho sakta hai ki sab ghar mein locks nahi aur hamare hi ghar mein lock hai? Kahi hamare colony waale sab ek saath kidnap toh nahi hogaye .


Ronnie - ya phir woh bair agency wala toh nahi legaya na ?


Ohja uncle -areee haan yeh bhi toh hosakta hai ki sab log waha nair agency mein ho..?aur ke Patah unlogo ne much aisa gun ya koi laser istemaal kiya ho colony mein jisse koi power use nahi kar paa rahe tum tino?


Ronnie-haan ohja uncle yeh bair agency waalo ko


Vasant -haan ho sakta hai...


Meghshru comes their and informs them that no one is at club house and at swimming pool area ..


Vasant asks megha to try her powers but she is not able to use them..


Later then vasant manav and sharad visits bair agency but no one is their and to their surprise they are able to use powers outside colony .Sharad tries to contact varsha but he is unable to contact varsha.

Ronnie-kya??man? Tumhara powers nahi chal raha ?


Vasant-nahi Ronnie ..abhi colony aate waqt toh thik tarah se chal rahe the powers aur ab achanak colony ke ander aate hi powers ne kaam karna bandh kar diya hai..


Ohja uncle - ab sach mein Mujeh darr lag raha hai ronnie sab log achanak se gayab kaise ho gaye ...


Ronnie- haan ohja uncle..aur vasant ghotala ka powers bhi kaam nahi kar raha hai..dhoop liya phir bhi kaam nahi kar raha hai..


Ohja uncle- areee baapre yeh toh bahut badi samsya hai.


After searching the entire colony they decide to go to ghotala house.

But as soon as they try to open it, the door opens from inside enter and they see 1313 and other colony members .


Vasant immediately recognised him as 1313..


1313-welcome !!welcome my friends!!welcome..


Ohja uncle-hi hi hi hi khamma ghani...hii hihi..


That's when varsha comes and tells them the whole matter .vasant is glad that no one is hurt..


Vasant- 1313 yeh ladai meri aur tumhare bich hai ..inn insaano ne kuch nahi bigaada tumhara ..in sab ko tum jaane do ..mein tumhe woh machine de dunga..


1313-nai..vasant..aisa kaisa mein karu aree jab machine chaalu hogi toh experiment karna hoga na aur experiment ke liye toh insaan chahiye ..toh inhe kaise chod sakta hoon..


Vasant- kya yeh mein hone nabi doonga 1313 mein tumhe in insaano ko nuksaan nahi pauchane doonga...


1313-- yeh tum nahi mein decide karunga ..aur ab Mujeh woh machine dedo.


Vasant- nahi ..isake pehle tumhe mere saath ladna hoga


Their is huge fight between vasant and 1313..and vasant and samar manages to create a crack in the invisible wall which 1313 created but they both loose their energies..


On seeing them injured 1313 threatens vasant..


1313-vasant aakhir mauka de raha hoon woh machine Mujeh de do warna ..warna meim tumhare bete hemant ko hurt karunga..


He takes hemant as hostage..


Hemant- mummmy...


Hemant starts doing haffu haffu and cries..


Manav- dekho ..yeh tum galat kar rahe ho..yeh bado ki ladai baccho ko bich mein mat laao.hemant ko jaane do..


Sharad- 1313 aakhir mauka mein tumhe se raha hoon ..hemant ko jaane do Mujeh majboor mat karo..


1313- tum khamkha apna waqt zaya kar rahe ho..Mujeh woh machine de do mein kisko koi bhi harm nahi karunga..


Sharad- nahi woh machine tumhe nahi milegi..


Jacky-(whispers ) manav 1313 ka dhyan abhi hata hua hum uske nazdik jaakar pehle ahi hai turant hi hemant ko bacha lenge aur phir sharad 1313 par powers use karega..okay..


Manav- okay..


Stealthly Jacky and manav reach near to 1313


Jacky- 3..2..1.. manav now..


Manav and Jacky both push 1313..with sudden hit 1313 stumbles and hemant frees himself..manav and Jacky along with hemant gets down on floor


On seeing opportunity sharad uses his powers .at 1313.

1313 gets more angry and he hits back at sharad with double powers..


Sharad tries to hits him back..but due less energy he falls on ground ..


Vasant- sharad!!!


Megha- Pluto !!!


Megha sits besides sharad and supports him when he tries to get up..


1313 -9211 !!tumhe yeh chalaki bahut bhaari padegi..ab dekho kya hota hai..


Before 1313 uses his powers in sharad.vasant interrupts him


Vasant- nahi..mein tumhe woh machine de raha hoon....woh mere paas hai..


Vasant grabs the bag and takes out the machine..


Samar- papa yeh aap kya kar rahe hai..woh yeh Dharti ko barbaad kar dega ..papa


Sharad- haan bhaiya , 2015 sahi keh raha..


Vasant- nahi..mein yeh machine ke laalach mein apne parivaaf aur colony waalo ko nuksaan nahi pauncha sakta ..yeh lo 1313 machine ..


1313- tum bahut Intelligent ho 9211 meri baat maanli..naaki tumhare bewakoof bhai ki tarah jo powers use karta hai bina soche samjhe..ab chalo isse operate karo ..bina koi hoshyari ke


Vasant- machine ko koi bhi open kar sakta hai mein ne kuch din pehle hi uske settings change kiye hai..agar yakin na ho toh dekh lo..


Bhadresh-(whispers) baa yeh vasant bhai toh sach mein machine usko de rahe hai..


Bhavna aunty- (whispers) nahi..yeh vasant bhai ki koi tarkib hai..1313 ko patane ki.vasant bhai aise hi

1313 ko jeetne nahi denge...


While 1313 is admiring and laughing as he takes the machine..


Vasant coughs..


Vasant- (coughs) varsha paani laao..


Varsha - haan


Liza brings the glass of water ..


Vasant-(drinks water)(whispers) varsha 1313 ko kuch hi der mein Patah chal jaayega ki yeh ek chalava hai..mein ne machine ki settings aise change ki hai jisse agar koi usko open karne ki koshish karega toh machine open ho rahi aisa illusion create karegi aur phir apne aap khudko destroy mode pe lejaakar blast hojaayegi..


Varsha- kya??


Vasant- haan varsha, aur yeh blast bahut bada hoga..issliye jaise hi mein kahu baccho ko alwa hum apni poses use karke usse Bandra ke paas waale jungle tak toh yaha se phenke sakte hai toh ready

rehna hoon.?


Varsha -hooon..


Varsha shares her plan with others and they get ready for the impact..

1313 operates the machine and machine comes to life..

He gets happy and shouts....


1313- aakhir kaar mera sapna pura hua..ab yeh puri prithvi par mera kabzaa hoga.....


1313 has evil laugh...


Vasant- itni jaldi mein tumhara sapna pura nahi hone dunga..


Vasant quickly uses his powers alongwith other aliens..and they successfully throw the machine out of house with enough momentum that it lands near to bandra jungle.


In order to grab the machine he goes after the machine..


Vasant gets up ..and tells that he is following 1313 and asks no one to come behind him as it will be dangerous..


Varsha- nahi vasant mein aapke saath hum sab aa rahe hai..aap mana mat kijiye


Vasant- nahi varsha samjho yeh bahut risky hai...mein tum sab ki jaan khatre mein nahi daal sakta


Manav- vasant bhaiya varsha bhabhi thik keh rahi hai.abhi woh powers jo 1313 ne use kiye hai woh puri tarah se khatam nahi hue hai..aap akele nahi haraa paayenge 1313 ko ..


Vasant- thik hai .shishir woh bag laao


Shishir hand overs the bag to vasant..vasant takes out formula 007 and everyone takes the formula.


Vasant- yeh formula thode samay ke liye hame help karega..Shishir hamare jaane ke baad HC ko contact karna aur unhe yeh matter batana aur kehna ki woh ek spaceship bheje aur uske saath kuch jail ke adhikaari bheje taaki woh 1313 ko yaha se lejaaye. Hoon?


Shishir - hoon


Vasant- ishaaba..


All aliens-ishaaba


Vasant and varsha takes bhavna aunty's blessing..


Bhavna aunty- vijay bhav!!jeet ke aana..

Aliens leave .


Shishir contacts HC and informs about the current situation . HC says that he will send spaceship and he will provide some formula and special guns for it which will help them to revive the powers and energy as the power used by 1313 was dangerous and formula 007 won't help them long.further he informs that this formulas were needed to be activated through coding and give within one hour which will help them effectively . HC gives ready doses to shishir ,hemant and grishma.


Manav- HCji, aap Mujeh woh coding procedure bataye mein waha jaa raha hoon.


HC- kya??nai manav mein tumhe waha nahi bhej sakta waha bahut khatra hai..


Manav- nahi, HC hi mein jaa raha hoon waha meri jaroorat hai..dekhiye please aap samajhiye waqt chala jaa raha hai aap please Mujeh woh coding procedure bataye..please..


HC- okay...mein tumhe sab details de raha hoon..


HC gives all the instructions and procedure plus he configures the language into english so that it will easy for them..Shruti decides to accompany manav stating that she has learnt some coding programmes during college days which might help so she will come with him.


Fortunately now they are able to go outside the house .


After manav and Shruti leaves.


Ronnie- aeee mein unlogo ke piche jaa raha hoon.mein yaha tension mein nahi baith sakta..


Gaffur bhai- sahi kaha ronnie bhai mein bhi yaha shaanti se nahi baith sakta areee waha hamari help chahiye unlogo ko toh?


Bhadresh - ae haan..mein toh kehta hoon sab chalte hai...


Gaffur bhai- haan..sahi kaha mein apni jeep nikaalta hoon


Ronnie- aur mein apni


Every one leaves for bandra jungle.



Here a dangerous fight is engaged between aliens and 1313.


Manav and Shruti reaches their and he again contacts HC


Manav- HC ji aap jald se woh formula charts bhej diye aur woh codes bhi aur woh gun bhejiye ...hamare paas aur waqt nahi hai...


HC- haan..haan mein bhejta hoon. Par yeh sab tumhe trial and error karke use karna hoga .formula try nahi kiya gaya hai toh tumhe..try karna hoga aur in sabka formation tumhe ghotala family ko dena hoga..okay??


Manav - okay..


Manav- okay..aap bas jald se jald bhejiye ....


HC- haan aur yaad rakhna yeh trail and error sirf 3 baar ho sakta hai..uske baad woh gun aur formula lock hojaayega aur 1313 itna powerful hojaayega ki usse rokna impossible hoga ..


Manav- okay..aap Mujeh woh Mujeh woh sheet dijiye ....mein 1313 ko kamyab nahi hone doonga..


Shruti helps manav in guiding manav on one side and on other side aliens are trying their best to control 1313 while making sure that their powers are not fully exhausted..


Shruti- no..no.manav yeh step pehle aayega dekho yeh symbol blink kar raha hai..


Manav - okay..lekin yeh dekho yaha yeh symbol bhi blink kar raha hai..ek min Mujeh phir se sochne do..dekho jab humne yeh code type kiya yoh yeh symbol blink hua moon shape ka aur phir yeh horse jaise kuch shape ka aur iss map mein dekho yeh horse jaise shape wala blink pehle hona chahiye..


Shruti - haan..okay toh woh try ..ouch!!!?.


Shruti is scared when she sees one by one stones are hurdled at them...Shruti tries to save the bag and manav takes her in his arms so that she doesn't get hurt..


A big stone was hurling towards manav..


Shruti shouts his name


Shruti - manav!!!! Hato waha se..

BAM!!!


Shruti hugs manav ..due to sudden loud noise..after few seconds she opens her eyes to find that sharad was towering them and he was using his powers to stop the stones ..


Sharad- manav woh process jaldi se complete karo mein tumhe yaha se cover de raha hoon..


Manav- okay ...


Here vasant gives order to megha and Jacky to reach at the opposite sides stealthy and attack 1313


Vasant - megha , Jacky mein yaha cover de raha hoon tum dono woh chor par jaao aur attack karo aur haan dhyan rahe hum bahut zyada powers use nahi kar sakte..aur hamara maksad usse slow karna hai maarna ..nahi hoon?


All - hooon..


One by one all the alien family members encircles 1313 and uses their powers.


1313- tum sab milke bhi Mujeh nahi maar sakte ..jitni bhi koshish karlo tum sab haar jaaoge..


Vasant- woh toh waqt hi batayega kya hoga...


Here manav is trying to unlock the codes procedure..


Sharad- manav... Unlock hua..?


Manav- nahi hum try kar rahe hai....


Sharad- okay....jaldi karna manav..kyuki waqt nikalne ke saath saath hamare powers jaa rahe hai ...


Manav - mein kar raha hoon ..bas thoda aur control karlo ..


Meanwhile here other colonywala reach the location and hide behind trees...where manav and


Shruti where hiding..


Ronnie - ae ..manav ..woh HC ka message aaya tha woh 1313 ko pakdne ke liye spaceship bhej raha hai thode aur aliens ke saath..unhone kaha hai humko sirf ussk tab tak busy rakhna hai ....


Sharad- okay...ronnie bhaiya par aap yaha se jaaiye agar usne aapko dekh liya toh aap par attack karega ..


Manav- okay yeh last try hai , hum koi bhi gadbad nahi kar sakte ab..hum kahi na kahi koi mistake jaroor kar rahe hai..


Manav takes few deep breathes..


Manav - okay let's do it. ..


He again tries the procedure with the last combination...


And they wait for result which was positive, they successfully unlocked the gun and formula..


Shruti hugs manav..


Shruti- we did it manav!we did it..


Manav - yes..!!we did it..


They break the hug and as HC prescribed them..they give formula first to sharad.


Manav - vasant bhaiya catch!!!


Manav throws gun towards vasant and the latter catches it..


By seeing this 1313 gets more angry and he tries to use more powers but this time vasant uses the gun at 1313 which stops him and before he can hurt anyone vasant stops him on seeing the apt moment by using his powers..samar brings the alien handcuffs and uses it on 1313..


After making sure 1313 hands are tied .And the aliens from their grah has taken him back.all sighs in relief and joyfully hugs each other. The blast noise from machine was loud enough to grab attention. So sharad uses his powers and remove memory from everyone's mind except for colony people .


On the other hand Varsha and samar have a emotional reunion . Ghotala family have an emotional reunion ..Colonywala decide not to disturb them as it was their moment .


After few min..


They all come to Colonywala and hugs them and thanks them for their support .


Bhavna - areee na na ..aise haath thodi na jodte hai vasant bhai..areee ulta hame haath jodna chahiye aap sab ne apni jaan par khelkar yeh prithvi ko bachaya hai woh villian 1313 se..


Vasant - haan..par woh sab aap ke aashirvaad se hua ..agar aap sab ka itna saath na mila hota toh Patah nahi kya hota..


Ohja uncle- areee ke hota..taareh ko maareh ko 501₹ dene hote..laa de 501₹ ..


Vasant literally takes his words..


Vasant -acha.. aisa hai par humne 1313 ko toh haraaa diya par phir bhi hum aapko 501₹ de de te hai..ek min... (searches his wallet) varsha..varsha mera wallet kaha hai..


Varsha - aree Mujeh kya Patah aap bhul gaye honge ghar pe..


Vasant- kya??areee toh tumhe yaad dilaana na tha abhi mein kaise ohja uncle ko 501₹ doon..


Varsha - kya aap Mujeh kyu bol rahe hai..hum yaha 1313 ko pakdne aaye the toh tab kya mein aapka wallet dhoodhu ya 1313 lo pakdne jaau..


Vasant - kya??tum baat mat palto..(switches to alien language) isha ka jago gofi ga ku(nai nai.tum har baar baat ko palto mat )


Varsha- sha!!! De hako ila ha elleke jaso(kya !!aap jhut bol rahe hai.mein kabhi baat nahi palti )


Bhadresh-aeee Ronnie kya bol fahe yeh log..


Ronnie- areee mere ko kya Patah man..bina subtitles ka bahut mushkil hai..aeee ghotala putra vasant and varsha kya bol raha hai...


Hemant-(he blushes in his style) heeeinnn mummy papa pyar se ladai kar rahe hai..


Ohja uncle- hi hi hi hi... Yeh log toh ladne baith gaye..


Bhavna aunty- woh aapke vajah se lad rahe rajasthani express...(to vasant and varsha) oooh ghotala and ghotalo yeh ohja bhai toh majak kar rahe tum dono kya seriously le liya baat ko..abhi chalo jaldi jaldi ghar par party ka kaam pada hai ..phir sagai ki tyaari karni hai...haalo bhai haalo..


Lajo- haan..haan bahut kaam pada hai..chaalo sab..


Vasant- haan..haan..thik hai.par mein ne jo kaha sahi hai varsha hamesha sab bhul jaati hai phir palat jaati hai..


Varsha -hawww..


Vasant- hawww kya kar rahi hoon hemant jaise ..mein ne sahi kaha hai.. yeh sharad se pucho usko bhi Patah hai..


Sharad-aeee bhaiya Mujeh kyu bich mein daal rahe ho..aur waise bhi bhabhi sahi keh rahi hai..


Vasant- dekha dekha yeh bhi palta varsha ka chamcha ...ab aa tu...ab koi idea chahiye..na lena apni paltu bhabhi se..


Varsha- kya aapne Mujeh kya kaha.??aap ghar chaliye mein batati hoon aapko..huh!!!


Varsha walks away with colony ladies behind her..


Bhavna aunty - areee varsha jaane de yeh mard aise hi hote hai phir chahe woh alien ho ya insaan ho..


Megha - nai nai .mera sharad bilkul bhi aisa nahi hai..


Shruti- haan...mera manav bhi...


Bhairavi -sahi kaha mere Pritesh Mitesh ke papa bhi aise nahi hai..


Bhavna aunty- (laughs) OOO woh toh shaadi ke baad patah chalega kuch saalo baad...haalo haalo ab bahut kaam baaki hai..aur megha aur Shruti ghar jaakar woh dresses try karna..agar kuch fitting karvaani ho toh jaldi hojaaye. ..


Liza- areee shaant shaant bhavna bhabhi sab kaam hojaayega ..kyu tension leta hai tum..


Bhavna aunty- areee kya tension na loon aree colony mein do do shaadi wala ghar hai..upar se yeh ghotale family kuch ghotala na kare iske liye sab tyaari pehle se karna hai..


Ladies leave with colony men and kids following behind.


Pritesh - aeee nai nai shishir woh ganna toh bahut puraana hogaya hum naya song decide karte hai...


Hemant- heeeinn aur mein sab decoration karunga..


Ohja uncle- aeee nai nai woh wala cake bahut hi bakwaas tha ..


Manav- rehne dijiye papa aaphi woh cake gappa gap kha rahe the..


Ronnie- haan toh phir mein wohi order karta hoon...areee abhi usko phone karunga toh...woh ba woh ..ba woh..ba
...


All - tch tch tch...


Ronnie - areee chup man..mera sunno pehle...


And With fading of sunlight and beginning of dusk they return to colony with happiness and smiles on their face without any fear ,discussing
Who is gonna do what and who will do catering etc.etc..


thank you for reading... :)


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Thanks for the likes please dobreaf and leave comments

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i liked it well done krish

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The story was great from the fifteenth part and Shruti’s character was really nice. Well done sis. But I did not like Megha’s character because AnSh is my favorite couple.

sorry if u would have changed it at last but till where I read I got this.

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Originally posted by: gadbadghotlafan

The story was great from the fifteenth part and Shruti’s character was really nice. Well done sis. But I did not like Megha’s character because AnSh is my favorite couple.

sorry if u would have changed it at last but till where I read I got this.

Mana ki anna ne bahut baar ghotalas kiinsult ki hai per jab tak ke Manav nahi tha, har function ya festival ke pehleAnna hi Ghotalas ko kya karna hai kaise karna hai ye sab sikhane jaati thi. Nowu think agar aap ke saamne koi aayga aur vo ghtalas ke jaise behave karega auraapko yeh nahi pata hai ki vo alien hai aur use insaani taur tarikon ke baaremein kuch bhi nahi pata hai to aap ko bhi weird to lagega na.

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