Akdha FF- **//Yeh Raaste Hain Pyaar Ke//** CHP 1 updated (3.11.2020) - Page 6

"Very interesting start,👏

Kuddus to you for the description, ways to write down the

what a chapter👏

at first I was like direct on war😛 perhaps chance of action but it went on negotiation 🥳

not disappointed at all seen this coming 😆

Lovely update conversation between King Bharmal and Jalal was on toe type impressive👏

Waiting for next you has written very well 👍🏼

Oh on sort note - Uday singh ah I wish you chosen other name for traitor 😆

Loved it Maahira

Awesome start

So uday made Aamer loose the war but things are not going good

Now what Jalal is upto after winning this war I am afraid it will not be good

Hope Bharmall takes a wise decision in all this to save his people

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😌

Originally posted by: James12

"Very interesting start,👏

Kuddus to you for the description, ways to write down the

what a chapter👏

at first I was like direct on war😛 perhaps chance of action but it went on negotiation 🥳

not disappointed at all seen this coming 😆

Lovely update conversation between King Bharmal and Jalal was on toe type impressive👏

Waiting for next you has written very well 👍🏼

Oh on sort note - Uday singh ah I wish you chosen other name for traitor 😆

thank u <3

why other name?

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it Maahira

Awesome start

So uday made Aamer loose the war but things are not going good

Now what Jalal is upto after winning this war I am afraid it will not be good

Hope Bharmall takes a wise decision in all this to save his people

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😌

thanks sweetheart! <3

BTW it's Mahira not Maahira😆

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

thank u <3

why other name?

Because Udai Singh was the father of The great maharana pratap.

Awesome update di💖

Loved it

First directly on war and amer had lost it because of its own traitor Uday Singh

Then I think so jalal had something in his mind that's why he gave Raja Bharmal a last chance

Now Raja Bharmal have to take a wise decision to save his kingdom and people present there

Precap is interesting

Will be waiting eagerly for it

Continue it soon

Thx for pm

I like you're writing on historical basis. You described the situation of the lost war and the betrayal of Uday Singh wonderfully

Also the scene in royal court. I could it imagine very well in my phantasy

And then the meeting of Jalal and Bharmal. Bharmal dare to place his sword at the emperors neck. jalal acts confidently and gives Bharmal a choice. He doesn't accept the interference of Peer Mohammed. I'm sure he has a plan in mind. Maybe there's a prehistory...

Keep on writing dear and thanks for pm 💖💖

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Awesome update di💖

Loved it

First directly on war and amer had lost it because of its own traitor Uday Singh

Then I think so jalal had something in his mind that's why he gave Raja Bharmal a last chance

Now Raja Bharmal have to take a wise decision to save his kingdom and people present there

Precap is interesting

Will be waiting eagerly for it

Continue it soon

Thx for pm

Thank u hun!

Originally posted by: Soso70

I like you're writing on historical basis. You described the situation of the lost war and the betrayal of Uday Singh wonderfully

Also the scene in royal court. I could it imagine very well in my phantasy

And then the meeting of Jalal and Bharmal. Bharmal dare to place his sword at the emperors neck. jalal acts confidently and gives Bharmal a choice. He doesn't accept the interference of Peer Mohammed. I'm sure he has a plan in mind. Maybe there's a prehistory...

Keep on writing dear and thanks for pm 💖💖

Thank u dear ❣️

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

Thank u hun!

Urs welcome di 🤗🤗