Why the sudden downfall of story? - Page 2

Originally posted by: rbpll

What exactly is going on in this show? Does moving to web makes such a drastic change?

Story is not coherent

Scenes looks fillers

Dresses (especially shravan's) look too cheap, infact I don't like bunty's mooch, sophies's make up and attires are too wannabish.

Character takes 360 degree turn after leap especially kanchan's and sumo's

Unnecessary third and fourth angles and giving them almost a lead treatment

This show only has completed about 5 months ( started on feb, ran upto March, lockdown, started from July and moved in Sony LIV in Oct) matlab thang se 6 mahine bhi nahi hue aur abhi se ye haalat hai...to aage kya hoga...usually itv show's starts losing their charm after one year. Iski to 6 months me haalat kharab ho gayi.

The plot is so intense and tragic, but story is nowhere near what they have claimed. Where exactly suvan is moving? Only cvs know. Neither I saw anything of army nor of court case. Bas tiwari house, chai ki tapri, and Vikram ka office hi dikhta hai...and this unnecessary bhaichara of shravan-vikram is so irritating. I would rather watch the tashan scenes of Aneesh - shravan than this zor zabardasti ki friendship. In fact Devika is better as a third angle than Sophie. Devika is more hotter than sophie. Shravan and Suman were more mature in school days than now in adulthood.

Cvs did proceed the show so beautifully after lockdown despite of having so much hassles in the TV industry. What suddenly changed by moving to web? Writers ko pay nai karte kya jo vo kuch bhi likh rahe hai. If they are so interested in showing quadrangle love story, why don't they make it a mini web series instead of dragging it unnecessary.

They should have never go with the leap so quickly...instead tried to develop the suvan love story a little bit. Suman and shravan ko abhi thoda aur bada hona hai 😂

Currently writers have no story line to show hence they are just stretching the track. Like yesterday's episode was all about vikram dinner pe kyon nahi aya? Why so much importance to vikram yar? Is he a lead? I thought they messed up with Suman's characterization but ab toh shravan ke piche pad gaye hai. Sometimes he wants to teach lesson to suman and sometimes he can't help it to care for her. He doesn't want to interfere between vikram and suman and wants them to move on but suddenly he wants to know that " suman ko farak padta hai ya nahi?". I mean why so much complications with all characters? And story is not moving forward. It stucked at the same point after a month. We can overlook costumes and other stuff if the track is better but ab woh bhi kuch effective nahi hai. Kanikka's clothing is still decent but they need to work on mohit's dressing.

I am still watching the show because of mohit and Kannika. And I will watch it till the end. But I am really missing old charm of the show.They have given us an excuse of pandemic for this change in story. But as someone in the forum said that I am feeling betreyed as a viewer. Because they are not showing what they have promised.

Yes totally relate.

the parallel story can be about the family — you don’t need another botched up romantic track.

For me — I feel the story is deteriorating rapidly enough for it be over by December also.

it will be still possible to salvage this and I hope they don’t show any silly engagement track for Suman and VIk or something silly like that. It had so much potential pre Leap, so v disappointed with this CV.

I honestly feel if the PH would get a good writer or ask for an improved story line - this is still salvageable. In another 2-3 weeks at this rate — it may be too messed up!!