Why the sudden downfall of story?

What exactly is going on in this show? Does moving to web makes such a drastic change?

Story is not coherent

Scenes looks fillers

Dresses (especially shravan's) look too cheap, infact I don't like bunty's mooch, sophies's make up and attires are too wannabish.

Character takes 360 degree turn after leap especially kanchan's and sumo's

Unnecessary third and fourth angles and giving them almost a lead treatment

This show only has completed about 5 months ( started on feb, ran upto March, lockdown, started from July and moved in Sony LIV in Oct) matlab thang se 6 mahine bhi nahi hue aur abhi se ye haalat hai...to aage kya hoga...usually itv show's starts losing their charm after one year. Iski to 6 months me haalat kharab ho gayi.

The plot is so intense and tragic, but story is nowhere near what they have claimed. Where exactly suvan is moving? Only cvs know. Neither I saw anything of army nor of court case. Bas tiwari house, chai ki tapri, and Vikram ka office hi dikhta hai...and this unnecessary bhaichara of shravan-vikram is so irritating. I would rather watch the tashan scenes of Aneesh - shravan than this zor zabardasti ki friendship. In fact Devika is better as a third angle than Sophie. Devika is more hotter than sophie. Shravan and Suman were more mature in school days than now in adulthood.

Cvs did proceed the show so beautifully after lockdown despite of having so much hassles in the TV industry. What suddenly changed by moving to web? Writers ko pay nai karte kya jo vo kuch bhi likh rahe hai. If they are so interested in showing quadrangle love story, why don't they make it a mini web series instead of dragging it unnecessary.

They should have never go with the leap so quickly...instead tried to develop the suvan love story a little bit. Suman and shravan ko abhi thoda aur bada hona hai 😂

Originally posted by: rbpll

What exactly is going on in this show? Does moving to web makes such a drastic change?

Story is not coherent

Scenes looks fillers

Dresses (especially shravan's) look too cheap, infact I don't like bunty's mooch, sophies's make up and attires are too wannabish.

Character takes 360 degree turn after leap especially kanchan's and sumo's

Unnecessary third and fourth angles and giving them almost a lead treatment

This show only has completed about 5 months ( started on feb, ran upto March, lockdown, started from July and moved in Sony LIV in Oct) matlab thang se 6 mahine bhi nahi hue aur abhi se ye haalat hai...to aage kya hoga...usually itv show's starts losing their charm after one year. Iski to 6 months me haalat kharab ho gayi.

The plot is so intense and tragic, but story is nowhere near what they have claimed. Where exactly suvan is moving? Only cvs know. Neither I saw anything of army nor of court case. Bas tiwari house, chai ki tapri, and Vikram ka office hi dikhta hai...and this unnecessary bhaichara of shravan-vikram is so irritating. I would rather watch the tashan scenes of Aneesh - shravan than this zor zabardasti ki friendship. In fact Devika is better as a third angle than Sophie. Devika is more hotter than sophie. Shravan and Suman were more mature in school days than now in adulthood.

Cvs did proceed the show so beautifully after lockdown despite of having so much hassles in the TV industry. What suddenly changed by moving to web? Writers ko pay nai karte kya jo vo kuch bhi likh rahe hai. If they are so interested in showing quadrangle love story, why don't they make it a mini web series instead of dragging it unnecessary.

They should have never go with the leap so quickly...instead tried to develop the suvan love story a little bit. Suman and shravan ko abhi thoda aur bada hona hai 😂

LOL, I literally feel like I'm watching Ek city kitne stories. LMAO, 🤣 bruh show ki bachi kuchi izaat tragedy mei maare doob gayi.

Abhi ethnic fashion parade hoga via shaadi track. Kuch toh bacha nhi toh shaadi ka drama karte h

@ meena_j ...Pata chala... Vikram start feeling for sophie again😈 ,...and Suman still will blame sharavan for it🤪

Originally posted by: rbpll

@ meena_j ...Pata chala... Vikram start feeling for sophie again😈 ,...and Suman still will blame sharavan for it🤪

Would likd to add about kanchan's dressing.. She used to have this cute pretty dressing pre leap.. I really miss dat😔

Originally posted by: falah5

Would likd to add about kanchan's dressing.. She used to have this cute pretty dressing pre leap.. I really miss dat😔

I agree

I think the main problem is the story. The audience is losing connect

Such a perfect analysis 👏👏👏 I love this post feel like sending it to the producer and writer of the show.....😡I already said a lot in my other posts so just like to add that instead of wasting time on vikram and giving this character so much imp why can’t they exploring kaancha and Bunty angle as it can be a good side track with comic relief the actor playing Bunty is extremely talented ....believe me preleap track is worth watching not only bc of shravan nd sumo but also bc of shravan nd Bunty scenes as well but no cvs love to show vikram Aik bahoot hi acha Insan hai🤔 it’s the fault of writers they r incompetent ......👎🏼on ott platform such a good shows with beautiful concepts r coming ......viewers r not stupid they r intelligent and want to see sensible stories not this crap story line ....as I said it many time and repeating it here as well they could have knit such a beautiful story with army background .....successful army base love stories r made in the world but what they r showing right now is so childish .....when u start working on a show u have a vision I wonder what sort of writers this ph is working with they need to be changed.....feel sad for Mohit nd Kanika wish them a good future ahead.

I have a feeling that the show will end this year itself.😭😡

Agreeed! Truly think if they move from this jealousy track and if they explore the past like:

1. Maybe Daddu knowing about faulty vests but thinking they wont pass inspection and then dying of the guilt that his hatred killed Col. Vijay. Then Sumo and Shravu can truly make amends and move on from the hatred!

2. Audience knows Ramesh took money from Devraj for his business expansion, so Sumo returns that money to Shravan.

3. Bonds between Bunty-Kancha and Bunty-Sumo too were gold. If the focus is on the Core 4, we'd be more likely to watch rather than this Vikram-Sophie square.

Just saying, they do have sensible tracks that they can explore too.