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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hello guys, writing for the very first time, pls let me know how it was 😳

(Thanks Ziva for encouraging me to post this onešŸ¤—)



Vansh left the house in a haste after shouting on Riddhima for touching his phone. Riddhima understood that he was worried about something but this ignorance and sudden rude behavior of his again and again hurt her deeply.

In the late hours, Vansh returned to his room and found Riddhima sitting on the bed along with the dinner kept beside her. The second their eyes met and before he could look away and pretend to be busy again, Riddhima got up and stormed out of the room without saying a word and left him wondering about what just happened.

She didn’t return for quite sometime so he went around the house looking for her. He even asked Dadi for her whereabouts.

Dadi – Beta use apne room mein jaate huye dekha tha maine

Vansh- Dadi main humare room se hi aa raha hoon, Riddhima wahan nahi hai

Dadi- Beta wo apne shadi ke pehle wale room mein hai, ab ja aur jaake mana use, din mein bhi faltu mein daant diya tha bechari ko

Vansh was confused as Riddhima didn’t go to that room even once after their marriage. He realized he probably was way too rude to her this time so he went to her room. He found her there reading a magazine or lets say pretending to do so.

Vansh – Riddhima

Vansh – Riddhima, kuch bolna hai tumse

She ignored him and kept turning the pages.

Vansh – Riddhima, tumse hi baat kar raha hoon with growing anger in his voice

He could bear everything except her ignorance which made him restless. Riddhima was about to leave this room too when he stopped her and held her arms by both his hands.

Vansh – Atleast listen to me dammit

Riddhima – Why? Why should I listen to you when you don’t listen to me? Aaj bhi bina sune itna sab chillake ke chale gaye, ignore kar rahe ho, socha mujhe kaisa feel hua hoga? Firstly, Tumhe kya lagta hai tumse Ragini ke baare mein puchne ke liye mujhe ek letter ki zarurat hai, really?Hamesha tumse directly pucha hai jo bhi mann mein aya. And secondly, galti hogayi tumhara phone bacha kar, jalne diya hota isse toh, I don’t have any interest in your damn phone! Duniya ko samajhne wala VRS apni hi biwi ko samajhnahi paya.

For the first time Vansh was at a loss of words. He realized how badly he treated his wife for no fault of hers but then it was someone else and he had to find out. He gently took her hands in his.

Vansh – I’m sorry Riddhima, mujhe…mujhe aise react nahi karna chahiye tha. I made a blunder in the heat of the moment. Mujhe saza do, I deserve it. VRS nashe wali Riddhima ko phir bhi sambhal le ek baar but ye shant Riddhima ko nahi sambhal sakta. I promise, ab aisa kabhi nahi hoga.

His words calmed her down and he took her into his arms fora tight hug which was soothing for both of them after a stressful day.

Riddhima – Ab chalein , anyways mujhe yahan neend nahi aati

Vansh – Of course sweetheart, mujhe dekhe bina neend kaise aati tumhe. Waise dinner mein kya hai

Riddhima – Tumhare haq ki meethi bhaat and chuckled.

The day ended with the long overdue meethi bhaat and meethi baat following it.


Edited by -Ayushi- - 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it ā¤ā¤ā¤

Why can't riddhima for once just shout at Vansh in the show too ...ki enough is enough ......pehle puri baat suno......


Damn...why can't they just talk....so frustrating....

Either way....loved it .....do write more ā¤ā¤ā¤ā¤ā¤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ayushi-

Hello guys, writing for the very first time, pls let me know how it was 😳

(Thanks Ziva for encouraging me to post this onešŸ¤—)



Vansh left the house in a haste after shouting on Riddhima for touching his phone. Riddhima understood that he was worried about something but this ignorance and sudden rude behavior of his again and again hurt her deeply.

In the late hours, Vansh returned to his room and found Riddhima sitting on the bed along with the dinner kept beside her. The second their eyes met and before he could look away and pretend to be busy again, Riddhima got up and stormed out of the room without saying a word and left him wondering about what just happened.

She didn’t return for quite sometime so he went around the house looking for her. He even asked Dadi for her whereabouts.

Dadi – Beta use apne room mein jaate huye dekha tha maine

Vansh- Dadi main humare room se hi aa raha hoon, Riddhima wahan nahi hai

Dadi- Beta wo apne shadi ke pehle wale room mein hai, ab ja aur jaake mana use, din mein bhi faltu mein daant diya tha bechari ko

Vansh was confused as Riddhima didn’t go to that room even once after their marriage. He realized he probably was way too rude to her this time so he went to her room. He found her there reading a magazine or lets say pretending to do so.

Vansh – Riddhima

Vansh – Riddhima, kuch bolna hai tumse

She ignored him and kept turning the pages.

Vansh – Riddhima, tumse hi baat kar raha hoon with growing anger in his voice

He could bear everything except her ignorance which made him restless. Riddhima was about to leave this room too when he stopped her and held her arms by both his hands.

Vansh – Atleast listen to me dammit

Riddhima – Why? Why should I listen to you when you don’t listen to me? Aaj bhi bina sune itna sab chillake ke chale gaye, ignore kar rahe ho, socha mujhe kaisa feel hua hoga? Firstly, Tumhe kya lagta hai tumse Ragini ke baare mein puchne ke liye mujhe ek letter ki zarurat hai, really?Hamesha tumse directly pucha hai jo bhi mann mein aya. And secondly, galti hogayi tumhara phone bacha kar, jalne diya hota isse toh, I don’t have any interest in your damn phone! Duniya ko samajhne wala VRS apni hi biwi ko samajhnahi paya.

For the first time Vansh was at a loss of words. He realized how badly he treated his wife for no fault of hers but then it was someone else and he had to find out. He gently took her hands in his.

Vansh – I’m sorry Riddhima, mujhe…mujhe aise react nahi karna chahiye tha. I made a blunder in the heat of the moment. Mujhe saza do, I deserve it. VRS nashe wali Riddhima ko phir bhi sambhal le ek baar but ye shant Riddhima ko nahi sambhal sakta. I promise, ab aisa kabhi nahi hoga.

His words calmed her down and he took her into his arms fora tight hug which was soothing for both of them after a stressful day.

Riddhima – Ab chalein , anyways mujhe yahan neend nahi aati

Vansh – Of course sweetheart, mujhe dekhe bina neend kaise aati tumhe. Waise dinner mein kya hai

Riddhima – Tumhare haq ki meethi bhaat and chuckled.

The day ended with the long overdue meethi bhaat and meethi baat following it.

Wow so sweet šŸ˜
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ayushi šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—


Finally you posted it ...am so happy for you ...it's a beautiful first attempt šŸ‘ā¤ļø.....lovely OS ....just love it ā¤ļøā¤ļø....it's great that in ur OS we got to see that Riddhu made Vansh realised his mistakes and rude behaviour ....in the show don't know when it ll come ...thks u for that šŸ¤—


It was all my pleasure Ayushi ā¤ļøšŸ¤—


Do write more dear ....keep entertaining us šŸ‘šŸ¼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very cute OS! Riddhu bursted out on Vansh!šŸ˜†

Really needed! 🤣

and last mein problem ko solve kardiya dono ne! šŸ‘

And the Hug!

I enjoyed reading it!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#6

Ayushi šŸ¤— after so long I get to read something written by you...😳
This is so sweet and cute OS.

Ruthi Riddhu ko mana rahe Vansh babu..šŸ˜†

Loved it..ā¤ļø

Keep writing..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aweee boss mana rahe he biwi ko

Cute one šŸ‘šŸ¼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Waah this is so goodšŸ‘

Riddhima ko aise hi ek baar chillana chahiye vansh pe show mei bhi 😵

Enjoyed this a lot..

Keep writing more Ayushi 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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i so wish riddihima shout on vansh to listen her opinions once

and riddihima its high time you tell all truth to vansh if really trust as you preach everyday

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: lifesucks28

Loved it ā¤ā¤ā¤

Why can't riddhima for once just shout at Vansh in the show too ...ki enough is enough ......pehle puri baat suno......


Damn...why can't they just talk....so frustrating....

Either way....loved it .....do write more ā¤ā¤ā¤ā¤ā¤


Thanks alot!šŸ˜Šā¤ļø

Indeed we need their real conversation now, long timešŸ¤”

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