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They got off of the car that Kaka sent to the station to pick his son and daughter-in-law. The entire Roy Choudhury mansion was decorated like a bride. Hearing the arrival of the car, Kaka had run to the main door, with aarti ki thaali to welcome them. He saw Aniruddh standing near the car but Bondita was nowhere to be seen. Kaka came out and looked for Bondita. "Bahu kahan hai Aniruddh?" Kaka asked, albeit softly. He had waited for a really long time for the Lakshmi of the house to return, for the roshni of the house to return but today, she wasn't there opposite of what he had anticipated. "Kaka, woh, woh. Bondita nahi aayi saath." Aniruddh said, in a low voice, as if defeated. "Kya matlab hai tumhara Aniruddh? Tum Bahu ko toh lene gaye the toh kyun nahi aayi woh?" Kaka asked, worried and also seemingly upset. "Itni aasaani se aayegi kya woh?" Aniruddh said, tears brimming in his eyes. He was feeling weak and wanted to collapse but held himself with all the energy in his body. "Kyun nahi aayegi? Ye uska apna ghar hai. Yahan kyun nahi aayegi?" Kaka asked. "Apna ghar? Maine bhi yahi kaha tha. Ye uska apna ghar hai. Woh hasne lagi mujhpe. Kehne lagi uska apna ghar hota toh aise ek galti karne pe humnein usko nikaal nahi diya hota." Aniruddh said, tears finally making their way down his cheeks. "Humein thodi na pata tha Aniruddh ki usnein jaan kar kuch nahi kiya." Kaka said. "Main bhi Mini ke ghar reh gaya tha na? Maine bhi toh paap Kiya tha? Mujhe toh kisi mein nahi nikaala ghar se? Kyun? Kyunki ye mera apna ghar hai." Aniruddh said with a sarcastic laughter. He didn't bother to answer much and left to his room. He still had a longer time of repentance.






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I don't know why I wrote what I wrote but if you read, thanks!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Just beautiful Octo.. I am so thankful for you to write it, i so wanted to read something on this concept..

Even i was thinking the same, but then i dropped the idea and i am happy i did.. Because in no way i can even write with so much intensity like you did.

It is marvellous.

I loved the way you in so much less sentence are able to emote the inner conflict and emotions of the characters.

Take a bow.

Well done

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Apna ghar

Apanapan

Apne pati babu



Kuch b apna nahi tha 💔

Illusion it was 💔

Wil come to sense forever 💔

Everything wil back to Normal but a tinge of pain forever


Thank you octo smiley27


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Stunning!

It pushes hypocrisy in the light in so less words. I am glad I read this. Bondita's maturity and understanding is highlighted in bold without even her presence on the scene.

Short but precise description of the flaws of the characters in the most polite way possible.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: wayback2

Just beautiful Octo.. I am so thankful for you to write it, i so wanted to read something on this concept..

Even i was thinking the same, but then i dropped the idea and i am happy i did.. Because in no way i can even write with so much intensity like you did. You definitely should work on something like this. What I wrote was nothing and you can definitely build it up a lot better❤️

It is marvellous.

I loved the way you in so much less sentence are able to emote the inner conflict and emotions of the characters.

Take a bow.

Well done



Aww, thank you so much ya for your kind words. Means a lot🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Doe_gurl


Apna ghar

Apanapan

Apne pati babu



Kuch b apna nahi tha 💔

Illusion it was 💔

Wil come to sense forever 💔

Everything wil back to Normal but a tinge of pain forever


Thank you octo smiley27



True! Uska kuch apna nahi tha ab tak. 💔

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: AK_2010

Stunning!

It pushes hypocrisy in the light in so less words. I am glad I read this. Bondita's maturity and understanding is highlighted in bold without even her presence on the scene.

Short but precise description of the flaws of the characters in the most polite way possible.


Aww, thank you so much. Means so much to me🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful Drabble Octo❤️

Why are you not coming to EDT these days😒

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: bubblesort

Beautiful Drabble Octo❤️

Why are you not coming to EDT these days😒


Thank you 🤗


Err, I am kinda thinking what exactly to say there. 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Octothorpe


Thank you 🤗


Err, I am kinda thinking what exactly to say there. 😆

🤗

Aacha😆 say whatever you want to na , about epi, characters, spoilers , bloopers😆, or anything.

Missing you there❤️

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