Vani SS - Piya Saanware - Part Two - Karwachauth Special- Updated Pg 4 - Page 2

Very beautiful and VAnilicious story....❤️

U r a fantastic writer... well done dear... write more stories...👍🏼🤗

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Oh my God.

 🤗

It was a very light very beautiful story. Sach mein.

Thank you so much ❤️

But choti thi😭 i wanted to read more as I was waiting for it😔

I am so sorry. Originally I had planned it to be an OS with six Vani moments - this convo, sargi, their presents for each other and the Karwachauth pooja but jaise hi likhna start kiya aur ideas aane lage... Will try to update it as soon as possible.

A little sneak peak for you- next update mein Bani ki sargi hai.

Chalo next update bada dena and jaldi bhi❤️

Ji zarur 😉

So, I just loved the update. There few cute moments. He pecking her forehead. Oh my God.

And I could actually feel every emotion from she staring him to she getting a kissi😃

Knowing Veer he will never hesitate when it comes to proffesing his love and so I need such a moment on the show soooo bad. Writer didiiiiii sunti ho

I really love these light yet heathy yet romantic moments.

I love them a lot too!

Honestly I love Veer ka soft side jo zada dikhta nahi hai and dikhta hai toh Bani appreciate nahi karti. So yahi ek platform hai jaha sab thik sa dikhta hai. Apne man ka.

It is my absolute pleasure to pen down such moments for the readers. It has three of my most favorite things - Vani, romance and writing

Agar tumhe iss karwa chauth celebration mein kuch special chahiye toh batana zarur.

Rahi baat Bani ke appreciation ki... She needs some more time... Karna do usse screen pe maaro mujhe maaro... Forum pe main hoon na!

Please bro jaldi jaldi update karo pretty pleez

Will do. Ek draft likha hua hai... Dialogues likhne baaki hai ❤️

Originally posted by: nainaasharmaa

Nainaaaaa 🤗 Tum aa gayi

i can’t believe you dedicated this to meee omg i feel extra special and you know i already love it

I wanted to because iska idea aur inspiration tumhaari post se hi mila thha ❤️

bani admiring veer is such a need and i can’t wait for scenes like this where she admires him and gets lost in the thought of him.

Bani needs to acknowledge, appreciate and admire Veer. Period. Don't even get me started on my rant about how badly I need that on screen.

i feel like bani when she was a child, my karva chauth obsession is that much 😂

i didn’t know about it when i was that young but obsession same to same hai

Really wanted to give some vibrancy to Vani's personality. Thought about want kind of a person can she be if we keep aside the Jay jaap and maaro mujhe maaro chant.

the part where she explained it was beautiful, because truly it might not make sense but it’s about the riwaaz, vishwaas and pyaar. veer being like ??? pyaar 🥺 was so cute haye

That is my most favorite dialogue.

& then his happiness when she said she’d keep it but also the surprise oh myyy i need this in the show desperately 😭

I want Bani to make the effort for Veer. To choose him not because she has to but because she wants to.

i was just gonna write a scene similar where bani talks about her family/adoption in the next chapter but i loved how u added stuff we don’t know from the show like her leaving college, working etc. it gave her more of a backstory and it was touching to see veer’s reaction. i really want this sort of a moment in the show where bani talks about her past and veer listens, giving her silent support and consoling her. it was so beautifully written.

Yes! Bani needs characterization and a back story on the show. I was planning to write it in one OS or the other.

i absolutely loved this & i’m so happy u wrote this i cant wait for the next chapter, show pe karva chauth ho ya na ho at least yahaan pe milgayi ❤️❤️ thank you for writing thissss ✨

Your most welcome Naina 🤗

Upcoming - Rituals presents and romance.

Originally posted by: nainaasharmaa

naina bahut zyada khush hai desperately want this track but uff this fulfilled most of my needs hehe

That makes me so happy. But trust me when I say there is a lot to unveil. I am so giddy and excited to know your reaction when you read those scenes!

Originally posted by: amlavs

Very beautiful and VAnilicious story....❤️

U r a fantastic writer... well done dear... write more stories...👍🏼🤗

Thank you so much 🤗

Planning to do three more parts

Isime do aur scenes add karti lekin this update crossed 1500 words

Will do three scenes in the next

Let me know if you want to read anything specific in this story. Koi bhi moment.

Update coming ASAP.

Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Nice...

Thank you so much

Its beautiful Poorva!❤️ You have written a very subtle but beautiful scene! This is what Veer-Bani's relationship lack! Silence and depth! There's just so much noise inside their heads and outside! They really need to start atleast observing each other, like your veer-bani here! Waiting for that day!

This OS was so much feelings than words!☺️❤️ I hope aisa evolution dekhne mile dono characters mei!

Very nicely written.👍🏼 That “Ek lauta pati” 😆

As much as I am fond of writing FFs in my leisure time on whattpad, it’s nice to read how others tell a story. I think writers might get a good idea of this karvachauth sequence if ever it happens on VaNi. Veer having minimum knowledge of the festival and Bani providing explanations was so cute. Ahhh! This Bani seems love then the current one in our show. I would love to see this one soon in the future episodes.

Originally posted by: J2lover

Its beautiful Poorva!❤️

Thank you so much 🤗

You have written a very subtle but beautiful scene!

When you say this to me, it means I did my job well. Because subtle is my style.

This is what Veer-Bani's relationship lack! Silence and depth! There's just so much noise inside their heads and outside! They really need to start atleast observing each other, like your veer-bani here!

Exactly! I am so eager to watch their aankhon ki gustaakhiyaan ❤️. Nuances like Veer listening to the tinkling of Bani's anklets and recognising her or Bani running her fingers through his hair while he is asleep is something I am waiting for.

Waiting for that day!

Me as well

This OS was so much feelings than words!☺️❤️ I hope aisa evolution dekhne mile dono characters mei!

Trying to show feelings rather than writing words is what I was trying. Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Manoshono

Very nicely written.👍🏼 That “Ek lauta pati” 😆

Upcoming update mein Veer bhi bolne waala hai "Sweet heart tum bhi toh meri Ek lauti patni ho" 😉😆

As much as I am fond of writing FFs in my leisure time on whattpad, it’s nice to read how others tell a story. I think writers might get a good idea of this karvachauth sequence if ever it happens on VaNi.

Vani have inspired me to write fanfiction. I love to read and write FF's.

Even I hope to watch a Karwachauth sequence on Vani.

Veer having minimum knowledge of the festival and Bani providing explanations was so cute. Ahhh! This Bani seems love then the current one in our show. I would love to see this one soon in the future episodes.

Even I want Bani to leave her Jay jaap and maaro mujhe maaro rant

Thank you so much