Vani ts : love me again completed

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi guys i wanted to write story on vani from so many days but i didnt get time after seeing Saturday episode i really want to write on this role reversal concept

And im famous for leaving ffs in middle becz of less response and also some personal problems

So i decided to write two shots instead of ffs

So here is intro

So guys tell me whether to continue or not

If you guys like it please press like n also comment it

Postive ya negative comments r welcomed

And sry for any mistakes im not so good writer

Will update part 1 tonight after seeing response ☺️



There will be small changes in story

Bani , jay n aakesh are humans no ichadhari nagin cheel here

But backdrop is same

Bani and jai love each other but jai is not that innocent guy as bani thinks

He just want to enjoy with her

And on other side veer who is actually a hero but people think him as villan ofcourse bani also has same thoughts, she started hating veer as he stopped her friend noor marriage, but our hero fell in love with bani in first sight he thought bani also loves him so to make her confess he planned to engage her sister he thought it will effect her yes its effected her in different way she want to save her sister life from veer so she married veer but still her love for jai didnt vanished veer got to know about jai real charcter he warned bani so many times but she didnt hear his words infact she hurts veer by saying she hates him

One day veer brother ponky daksh who knows how much their bro loves his bhabi want to unite them they want to remove the barrier between them

Yes they want to kill jai they kidnapped him and took him near cliff veer got to know about this he saved jai but at same time bani came there she thought veer tried to kill jai and even jai acted same n filled her ears against veer

Bani is now super angry on veer n worried about jai

Her concern over jai started hurting veer

He held her wrist n brought to their room

Veer tied mangal sutra n filled her line with sindhoor and claimed that only he has right on her

And he confessed she is his life but bani is no mood to listen him she stood on her point that she hates him

Veer laughed and said one day she will realise his love and come to him but at that time he will be in her place n wont accept her

Bani brushed off his words

Days going on

Veer with proofs exposed jai reality ( as its os i dont want to explore this area, juat want to give vani role reversal scene)

And now everything changed

Bani started realising how much veer loved her and she also realised she too loves him from start but her ego succeeded in hiding her love

But now she deeply fell in love with veer again n now she is ready to acknowledge it n want to confess her love

But our hero took u turn he is so upset as bani didnt trust him as she didnt understand him, he decided to avoid her ofcourse he know he cant but this time he decided to stay strong on his words

He started avoiding her

Bani unable to bear this, his ignorance hurting her now she understood how much she hurt him, but bani is not the one who accept failure she know how much her husband loves her, she decided to win his love, she want to make him love her again

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Posted: 5 years ago
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wohoooo so excited to read this

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Posted: 5 years ago
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A very interesting start of the story... Please continue soon...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Bani is trying so many ways to get his attention but no reaction from him

One day

Bani is in their room waiting for veer

Veer came

He even didnt look at her

He went and sat on couch

He was about to sleep

Bani: veer you sleep on bed we can share it

Veer looked at her

But didnt react

He is arranging pillows neatly and about to sleep

Bani: veer im talking to you, i said na you are going to sleep on bed

She said with stern voice

Veer: im ok here

Bani: but im not ok

Ok i know ur angry at me u dont want to share bed with me lets do one thing

She went to cupboard and took out transperent curtain

Veer looked at her with confusion

Bani tied curtain in middle of their bed as a separation

Bani : now r u ok

I know you are..because im super smart so is my idea

Bani went and occupied one side of bed

Veer is just looking at her

Bani: hey sweet heart i know im hot mujhe aise gandhi nazar se math dekho

Veer got shock with her statement and looked at her forming mouth o shape

When veer is about to go other side of bed

They heard knock

Veer went to open the door

Bani also came behind him

Veer: tapish bhai?

Tapesh: veer dad is arranging urs and bani reception tomorrow he told me to intimate you

Veer: what? No bhai im not interested tell him to cancel

Bani: what r u saying pathi dev? How can u say no. Sasur ji is arranging this with so much love, when anyone shows so much love u should not ignore

( She said in her pov but it backfired her)

Veer: wah you are saying about ignorance n love

He said in sarcastic tone and went to bed

Bani felt bad she remembered how she ignored his love

But she controlled herself

Bani: tapesh bhai ignore his words tell sasur ji that veer agreed

Tapesh left the place

Next day bani some how managed him to accept the party

All are enjoying party

Veer and bani stood beside each other

Mean while ponky came to them

Ponky : bhai come to the dance floor its too boring.. lets make it entertaining

Veer: ponky some other time not interested now dont irritate me

Ponky: uff bhai after marriage u became too boring

Ok leave it i have partner no problem

He looked at bani

Ponky: bani will u join with me

Bani : why not ponky? Any thing for u

Ponky asked for bani hand, before bani join her hand with ponky she found some one placing his hand in middle

Ofcourse she know whose hand it is

She got smile on her lips

Veer: ponky my wife has partner

thats me

You go n dance with your friend mayuri

Just leave

Ponky left from there with puppy face

But he turned back at same time bani too turned back

They both winked at each other and hified in air when no one is looking at them

( Yes thats plan of ponky n bani to make him dance)

Veer took her on dance floor

They started dancing grace fully

( Dil ibadat bgm )

Both lost in each other

They came out world with claps sounds

Ponky came

Ponky: bani mayuri is not there

now please come and dance with me na he asked with puppy face

Before she could react

She found herself in veer arms

She was shocked

Veer: ponky your BHABI ( he stressed bhabi word) leg got sprine she cant dance so you go n search mayuri n dance with her

By saying this he moved towards his room with bani in his arms

Bani was just looking at him with surprise for his lie

But soon she got smile on her face seeing his possessiveness

She moved her hands towards him and placed around his neck lovingly as support

Veer took her to their room

And placed her on bed

Bani smiled at him

Bani: why you said lie

Veer ignored her question and started arranging his bed

Bani: i know you are jealous

Veer: no im not

Bani: yes you are

Veer gritted his teath and said: i told know im not jealous

Bani: offo pathi dev already you are hot and in angry man avathar you r looking super hot

Before you burn with ur hotness let me go for bath

By saying this she left to washroom

Veer smiled

Veer ( himself) hey sweet heart u know what im loving this side of yours, do u really think im angry at u? No never in my dreams, im just acting like im upset with u i want to see what my jungli billi do if i ignore u yeah its difficult for me to avoid you but im loving your antics which you are doing for my attention

I know you love me i want to see how u will confess

He heard wash room door opening sound

He immediately went to couch opened laptop and started acting like he is doing serious work

Bani came in black gown which was gifted by veer after their marriage but she didnt wear it till now

She is looking damn sexy in that attire

Veer jaws dropped seeing her in his fav color dress that to gifted by him

But he acted like he didnt see her

Bani went to mirror to comb her hair

While combing her hair she started talking loud

Bani: uff bani see in what postion you are? You are looking so hot but your husband is not even looking at you

Poor bani, wish ur hubby married that laptop instead of u

Veer controlled his smile

She finished her combing

She took out bracelet but she cant wear it herself

Bani: see no one is there to help me in this

Arey bani why r u thinking so much, ponky is there na he will do it

She went towards door and about to open

Veer came to her and pulled bracelet from her

And made her wear bracelet

Bani smiled

Veer: no need to disturb ponky every time, im there

Bani : now u have to agree you are jealous

Before veer can react

He heard knock on door

Bani : uff first i should arrange marriages to these monkeys( veer brothers) then only they can realise wife n husband needs some privacy

She said with irritated voice

Veer controlled his laugh

He opened door

Next scene made bani shocked


She found mayuri hugging her husband tightly

Her blood boiled with anger

She rushed to them and pulled her from him

Started shouting at her

Bani: what r u doing? How dare you touch my husband

Veer is loving his possessive wife

Mayuri: woh woh chipkali(lizard) is there in my room

Bani: uff not only in ur room, there is chipkali in my room also that too standing infront of me

Mayuri: you are calling me as lizard?

Bani: do you have any doubt? In my village who ever comes between husband n wife they r termed as chipkali only

Before i can give any other worst names just get out from my room

Veer is enjoying this cat fight

Bani pushed her out and locked the door

Bani: dont know why ponky brought her here i should give him class tomorrow for bringing this chipkali

She murmured

Veer: jealous ha?

Bani: ya mr veeranshu singhania im jealous she held his coller and brought him towards her face

You are mine you are just mine if any one try to flirt with you i will break their legs

Veer surprised with her confession at same time he is in cloud nine he know she will confess her love but never expected in this way

Bani removed her ring and pulled his finger and placed ring to his finger

Bani: now you are totally mine only i have rights on you remember veeranshu singhania

By saying this she pulled him towards mirror

She is infront of mirror

He is behind her

She pulled his both hands and made him back hug her

Bani: look at the mirror, dont you find most hottest couple in the earth

She asked resting her head on his chest

Veer nodded his head : yes

Bani surprised

yes she confessed her feelings but she has fear that whether he forgive her or not today she blurted out her feelings because of mayuri

She dont like her as she always try to flirt with her husband

Bani tuned towards him n looked into his eyes

She saw love in his eyes

Bani: did u forgave me

She asked with puppy face

Veer nodded no

Her face turned upset

Veer smiled

Veer: if you do mistake then only i can forgive you ,when you didnt do any mistake ..there is no concept of forgiveness na sweet heart

Bani: but i hurt u know? I didnt trust you know? For that only you are upset na

Veer: arey my angry bird, u didnt hurt me, i know u used to hate me but some where i saw love in ur eyes i felt it, but it was hidden and now its out, and about trust, how could you trust a person who u dont even know, even if im in ur place i will do same thing

Bani: no you wont do like that, u will believe me blindly

Veer: yeah that is also right , i trust you because i love you

Bani smiled

And im not upset with u, im just acting i just want to see how you will react if i ignore u thats it

Bani: you👊 you are acting till now? Too much i wont leave you

By saying that she started hitting his chest

He stopped her with his two hands

Veer: by the way forgot to say something

Bani: what?

Veer: sweet heart you are looking sexy in this dress

Bani blushed

She hide her face inside his chest and hugged him tightly

And wishpered

Bani: thank you pati dev

Veer smiled

Veer: dont you think you forgot something

Bani: what,? She looked at him confused

Veer: think hard

I think u forgot to confess some thing

Bani understood him

Bani looked into his eyes

Bani: i love you my hero

Veer smiled and hugged her tightly

He wishpered in her ears

Veer: hero nahi villan hu mein

Bani smiled and tightened her grip on him

Bani: then first time in history heroine fell for villan

Veer inside her hug teased her

Veer: who said you are heroine?

Bani: if definition of villan is as good as you, im ok to be called as lady villan instead of heroine

Veer smiled

Veer: uff sweet heart u too became like me by staying with me

He said touching his forhead with hers

Bani: should reach my pati.dev expectations know

Veer: but u didnt reach my expectations

Bani looked at him

Veer: u can reach only after giving something to me

Bani understood she moved towards his lips

They both kissed each ither passionately

That night became best day in their life becz of their confession and curtain between them removed between them for ever

Edited by vardhinirosid - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Tomatoes n eggs r allowed😁😁 sorry guys if i didnt reach expectations and if u like it or not like it..plz dont forget to comment, its my humble request

Edited by vardhinirosid - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: nainaasharmaa

wohoooo so excited to read this

Tq ♥️ btw loved ur dp😍😍

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: sininhp

Beautifully written.

Tq so much♥️♥️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Please spare some time for this guys..i need feed back.

So that i can write some vani stories in future

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Posted: 5 years ago
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good that bani realized veer's value n started wooing him.ponky bani's plan worked n the jealous veer taking bani into his arms was interesting.veer telling not to disturb ponky everytime due to jealousy was cute.veer saying that he was only pretending to be angry with her n she was not wrong...there was hidden love in her eyes when she hated him also was lovely.mayuri bani scene was funny.the last conversation of veer n kiss were romantic

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Posted: 5 years ago
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dont say that you have a tendency to leave your ffs in middle.you had promised that you will finish dil to pagal hai n your rikara ff.keep your promise

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