Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum|Prayansh ss - Page 11

This was soo beautiful ❤️ Loved it! Waiting to know their next step!

Totally lost it at the ADHM dialogue callback from the show 😆

Like Vasu said, we're PB nerds, koi reference ki zaroorat nahi hai humko. We remember, scenes, voice tone and actions and all, We're weird like that 🤣

Your other readers might need it though!

Happy reading!

Episode 24

Rey: I love you Prani..

Pranati: I love you too Rey...

They relaxed in each other's embrace cause in that moment all of their fear, anxiety and tension were gone. After all that drama, they were finally together. A sense of belongingness encircled them. Rey slightly pulled out of the hug

Rey:Agar agli baar mujhe chhodke jana ka socha bhi na toh main tujhe khambe se baadh doonga.

She giggled and shook her head side to side like a five year old kid. He laughed too seeing her cuteness and hugged her again.

Rey: Chal ghar chalein.

He pulled out of the hug again and held her hand. He started moving towards car when Pranati stopped him.

Pranati: Reyansh ruko, main tumhare ghar nhi jaa sakti.

Rey: Kyun?

Pranati: Ab hummare paas joint custody nhi hai. Toh tumhari dadi humme saath mein kyun rehne dengi?

Rey: Dadi se main baat kr loonga, per main tujhe Jugnu aur mujhse dur nhi jaane doonga. Zada se zada kya hoga? Laddne ki zaroorat padi toh ladleinge yar. Pyaar mein toh yeh sab krna hi padta hai na

Pranati: Tumse kisne keh diya ki pyaar mein ladna zaroori hota hai?

Rey: Bhabhi aur Maan ne

Pranati: Maan ka case bohot alag tha Reyansh, aur saari love stories mein ladai krna zaroori nhi hota. Hum koi aur rasta dhoond leinge.

Rey: Toh abhi kya?

Pranati: Abhi main apne ghar jaati hoon aur tum apne ghar jao. Aram se baithhke solution sochte hai

Rey: Achha kamse kam drop toh kr sakta hoon na?

Pranati: Okay.

Reyansh placed his one hand in hers and used other to wheel down her bag towards his car. He opened the hoot and kept her bag in it. They both sat in the car and he started driving.

Next scene

Maan was roaming in the hall, eagerly waiting for his brother to come back when he bumped into someone.

Riya: Sorry..

Maan: it's fine bhabhi....Bhabhi aap thhik toh hain?

He saw tears in Riya's eyes and got worried. She quickly wiped them up and pretended to smile.

Riya: Kuchh nhi Maan, bas woh chhik aa gai thi toh aansu nikal gaye

Maan: Bhabhi aap jhoot bol rhi hain na? Btao kya hua? Kisine aapse kuchh kaha?

"Riya suno toh meri baat"

Maan saw Armaan running towards them and he understood what happened. He was partially blaming himself for making his sister in law cry.

Maan: I am so sorry bhabhi

Riya: Arre tum kyun sorry bol rahe ho? Tumne toh bohot achha kaam kiya hai. Tum toh kabse uss galti ko sudharne ki koshish kr rahe ho jo tumhari thi bhi nhi.

Maan still felt guilty so he looked down. Riya smiled and made him looked up.

Riya: Jab tumne bina galti ki saza bhugat hi li hai toh tumhe prize bhi toh milna chahiye na. Jao jaake Navya ko apne dil ki baat bta do.

Maan: Nhi bhabhi main aapko hurt krke apni khushiyan nhi mnana chahta.

Riya: Main hurt zaroor hoon Maan per tumhari wajah se nhi. Jo hua, Armaan ki wajah se hua, toh uski wajah se tum aur Navya kyun suffer kro? Iss ghar ke logon ki wajah se already Navya ek baar hurt ho chuki, dusri baar nhi honi chahiye. Main aur Armaan apne differences khud solve kr leinge. Main apni hone wali devrani aur mere rishte mein usse kabhi nhi laungi.

Maan blushed listening to the words 'hone wali devrani'.

Riya: Ab sharmatge hi rahoge ya usse btaoge bhi?

Maan: Ek chhoti si problem hai...maine pehle kabhi kisi ko propose nhi kiya

Riya: Hmm, yeh toh bohot badi problem, kuchh achha sa plan kro, tyaari shayari kro, jao.

Maan: Thanks bhabhi,

He gave her a quick hug and ran upstairs in excitement. Armaan again tried to talk with Riya but she ignored and walked away.

Scene shifts to Reyansh stopping his car in front of Pranati's house. She removed her seat belt and got out followed by him. He helped her take out the bag.

Pranati: Thank you.

She started to go inside but he held her wrist and pulled her towards him to give a tight hug. Pranati sensed something was wrong so she decided to voice her thoughts.

Pranati: Kya hua Reyansh?

Rey: Pta nhi bas darr lag raha hai. Agar main aaj nhi ata toh tu hamesha ke liye chali jaati.

Pranati(confusedly pulling out of hug): Main kahan hamesha ke liye jaane wale thi? Main toh bas ek hafte ke liye jaa rhi thi.

Rey: Kya?

Pranati: Haan, meri friend ki shaadi attend krni thi aur bas ek investor ke saath meeting thi, phir main vahan rukke kya krti?

Rey: Navya ko yeh baat pta thi?

Pranati: Haan, Archit ne hi toh yeh meeting fix krvayi thi

Rey: Maan toh gaya

Pranati: iss sabke beech mein Maan kahan se aa gaya?

Rey: Usne aake btaya mujhe ki tu hamesha ke liye jaa rhi aur ek badi si emotional speech di. Usse toh main chhodoonga nhi.

Pranati looked still at him for a moment and then started laughing loudly. Reyansh looked at her confusedly

Rey: ab tu kyun hass rhi hai?

Pranati: Koi 'the prankster Reyansh Khurrana' ko bhi bevakoof bna sakta hai, aaj pta chala.

Rey: Oye usne mujhe bevakoof nhi bnaya, usne bas mere darr ka fayda uthhaya.

Pranati laughed again and pulled both of his cheeks.

Pranati: aww, Reyansh Khurrana ko darr bhi lagta hai. (Cupping his face). Ab tumhe darne ki koi zaroorat nhi h, main kahin nhi ja rhi.

Rey: Main bhi..( he removed her hands on his face and held it in front of him)..main ab tujhe kabhi, KABHI chhodke nhi jaunga. Tere har khushi, dukh, pareshani, teri har koshish, jeet aur har mein tera saath doonga. Aajke baad tu kabhi mujhse disappoint nhi hogi.

They looked in each other's eyes for a moment saying all the things that they couldn't put in words.

Rey: Chal ab tu ja, main Maan ki khabar leke aata hoon.

Pranati let out a cute laugh and waved him bye before getting inside her house.

Originally posted by: vswarup

Its so beautiful Sana....loved it.....Jugs pain...to rey's pain.....to prani's reason to move away.....we truly got a beautiful family....Thanks Sana...best thing for my PB Hangover ❤️

Please do continue soon....

PS: We are craazzzzyyy PB Girls.....dialog, awaaz and action ke saath remember karte hai 😉

Thanks for such a beautiful response, now I feel that I didn't completely mess up the episode.

Originally posted by: Natashapaul

This was soo beautiful ❤️ Loved it! Waiting to know their next step!

Totally lost it at the ADHM dialogue callback from the show 😆

Like Vasu said, we're PB nerds, koi reference ki zaroorat nahi hai humko. We remember, scenes, voice tone and actions and all, We're weird like that 🤣

Your other readers might need it though!

I wanted to do that ADHM thing for so long I can't even tell you.

BTW, I am PB nerd too :P

Thankyou so much

Happy reading!

Episode 25

Reyansh entered Khurrana house shouting Maan's name loudly.

Rey: Maan! Maan! Kesar ji Maan kahan hai?

Kesar: beta ji woh aapke kamre mein hai.

He ran to his room and saw Maan using his laptop. Due to his sudden entrance Maan jumped at his spot and suddenly closed the laptop.

Maan: Kya hua bhai?

Rey: Hamesha ke liye jaa rahi hai woh? Huh?

He grabbed a pillow from his bed and threw at him.

Rey: Bhago bhai varna woh hamesha ke liye chali jayegi?

He threw another pillow.

Maan: Bhai yeh aap kya kr rahe ho?

Rey: saale Itna bada ho gaya hai ki tu mujhe ullu bnayega?

He kept throwing pillows at her and Maan kept dodging them jumping to every corner of the room.

Maan: Achha bhai sorry.

Rey: Sorry ke bache jaan nikal gayi thi meri.

He finally threw himself in the bed and covered his face with one of the pillows.

Maan: Bhai Prabhi kahan hai?

Rey(muffled voice due to pillow): Woh mere saath nhi aayi

Maan: Toh woh Jaipur chali gayi? Bhai aapne unhe roka nhi?

Reyansh gave him a look and threw the only pillow he had on him that hit right on his face.

Rey: Itna bhi bada gadha nhi hoon. Woh apne ghar gayi hai, yahan aati toh dadi uspe baras padti.

Maan looked at Reyansh in confusion. He was not able to understand as to what happened. So he decided to ask the same.

Maan: Bhai exactly hua kya?

Rey sat up and smiled remembering what happened. His cheeks acquired a pink pallor as he looked away to hide his blush. But Maan knew him too well to ignore that.

Maan: Bhai sachi?

He was so surprised that his plan actually worked. More surprised that his brother actually expressed his feelings. Not even in a million years he thought that this day would come but he still tried his best. And finally all his efforts payed off. Reyansh slightly nodded to confirm his achievement

Maan: Congratulations bhai.

He moved towards him and hugged him tightly

Maan(pulling out): Mujhe starting se btao kya hua, mujhe saari details chahiye.

Rey: Kya ladkiyon jaisi baaten kr raha hai? Aur tu yeh mere laptop per kya dekh raha tha?

Maan(grabbing the laptop and putting it behind him): K-k-kuchh nhi

Rey: pakka kuchh hai, dikha mujhe.

Maan: n-nai

He ran around with the laptop while Reyansh followed him around. He finally got a hold of him and took his laptop. He opened and read what was in the search bar.

Rey: Ways to propose a girl.....Riya ne permission de di?

It was now his time to blush.

Maan: Haan

Rey(hugging): Congrats chhote

Maan: Thanks bhai

Rey: Thanks wanks chhodd, yeh bta kaisa khurrana hai tu? Internet se dekhke propose karega? Arre kuchh original soch

Maan: Bohot nervous hoon bhai.

Rey: Nervous hone ki koi baat nhi hai. Bas jo dil mein aaye bol de. Dil se bolega na, toh woh pakka haan karegi.

Maan(smirking): haan aapko toh experience hai na.

Rey(pulling his ear): tu chahta hai main tera experience kharab karoon?

Maan: Nai Nai bhai, sorry.

Rey: Jugnu kahan hai?

Jugs: yahan hoon bandar papa.

He turned towards the door to see Jugnu rubbing her eyes which still had a little bit sleep in them. Rey walked towards her and sat on his knees in front of her

Rey: Arrey Jugnu meri jaan, tere papa ne teri wish poori kr di. Teri maa vapus aa gayi

Jugs: sachmein? kahan hai voh?

Rey: abhi kuchh din aur lageinge but I promise, tu, main aur teri nai maa phirse saath mein rahenge. Abhi ke liye bta, kal school ke baad usse milne chalegi?

Jugs: haan, main na voh ladkiyon wale kapde pehnke jaungi unhe surprise dene ke liye.

Rey: Oye aise kaise? itna tang kra hai ussne tujhe, thode mazze lene toh bnte hai na

Jugs(widening her eyes in excitement): plan kya hai

Rey: idhar aa.

He started whispering something in her ear, with each word her excitement raised.

Jugs: kya sahi plan hai bandar papa..

Reyansh gave her a hug too. Maan got a call and his happy expressions suddenly turned into a worried ones.

Maan: Bhai Navya ki tabyat kharab ho gai hai. Mujhe jana padega.

Rey: Ruk main bhi chalta hoon tere saath. (To Jugnu) Jugnu tu jaake apna homework khatam kr aur time se jogging start kr dio. Main aake teri training aage badhata hoon. Chal Maan

They both ran towards Reyansh's car and drove to Navya's house. Maan quickly ran inside and saw that Navya was shouting holding her stomach.

Maan: Navya, Navya its okay, main aa gaya hoon.

He gave her the emergeency medicine with water and started rubbing her back while Reyansh was stunned looking at how much Maan cared for Navya and her baby.

Pranati: Navya!

Reyansh heared Pranati shouting and quickly ran to her and covered her mouth.

Rey(whispering): Shhh...mere saath chal.

He took her hand slowly brought her near the door of Navya's room where Navya was finally calmed down while holding Maan's hand.

Rey: Dekh

He pointed towards his brother and his potential wife.

Maan: Tum na apna bilkul dhyan nhi rakhti. Jab Archit kaam se bahar tha toh tumhe mujhe btana chahiye tha na, main tumhara dhyaan rakhne ke liye aa jata. Aur toh aur main kal se dekh raha hoon ki tum apna diet chart bilkul follow nhi kr rhi ho.

Navya: Maan tum mujhe itni chhoti si baat per itna kyun suna rahe ho?

Maan: Tumhe tumhari health chhoti si baat lag rhi hogi per mujhe nhi lagti.

Both of them continued fighting while Reyansh and Pranati admired them from afar.

Pranati: kitne cute hai na dono? Maan ko Navya ki kitni chinta hai

Rey: haan

He said it in a rather sad tone. He quietly moved away from the door and sat on the sofa. Pranati saw him going away and followed him.

Sorry for the boring episode but you know, sometimes boring things can lead up to something interesting. Stay tuned!

Originally posted by: sanakhan240201

Happy reading!

Episode 25

Reyansh entered Khurrana house shouting Maan's name loudly.

Rey: Maan! Maan! Kesar ji Maan kahan hai?

Kesar: beta ji woh aapke kamre mein hai.

He ran to his room and saw Maan using his laptop. Due to his sudden entrance Maan jumped at his spot and suddenly closed the laptop.

Maan: Kya hua bhai?

Rey: Hamesha ke liye jaa rahi hai woh? Huh?

He grabbed a pillow from his bed and threw at him.

Rey: Bhago bhai varna woh hamesha ke liye chali jayegi?

He threw another pillow.

Maan: Bhai yeh aap kya kr rahe ho?

Rey: saale Itna bada ho gaya hai ki tu mujhe ullu bnayega?

He kept throwing pillows at her and Maan kept dodging them jumping to every corner of the room.

Maan: Achha bhai sorry.

Rey: Sorry ke bache jaan nikal gayi thi meri.

He finally threw himself in the bed and covered his face with one of the pillows.

Maan: Bhai Prabhi kahan hai?

Rey(muffled voice due to pillow): Woh mere saath nhi aayi

Maan: Toh woh Jaipur chali gayi? Bhai aapne unhe roka nhi?

Reyansh gave him a look and threw the only pillow he had on him that hit right on his face.

Rey: Itna bhi bada gadha nhi hoon. Woh apne ghar gayi hai, yahan aati toh dadi uspe baras padti.

Maan looked at Reyansh in confusion. He was not able to understand as to what happened. So he decided to ask the same.

Maan: Bhai exactly hua kya?

Rey sat up and smiled remembering what happened. His cheeks acquired a pink pallor as he looked away to hide his blush. But Maan knew him too well to ignore that.

Maan: Bhai sachi?

He was so surprised that his plan actually worked. More surprised that his brother actually expressed his feelings. Not even in a million years he thought that this day would come but he still tried his best. And finally all his efforts payed off. Reyansh slightly nodded to confirm his achievement

Maan: Congratulations bhai.

He moved towards him and hugged him tightly

Maan(pulling out): Mujhe starting se btao kya hua, mujhe saari details chahiye.

Rey: Kya ladkiyon jaisi baaten kr raha hai? Aur tu yeh mere laptop per kya dekh raha tha?

Maan(grabbing the laptop and putting it behind him): K-k-kuchh nhi

Rey: pakka kuchh hai, dikha mujhe.

Maan: n-nai

He ran around with the laptop while Reyansh followed him around. He finally got a hold of him and took his laptop. He opened and read what was in the search bar.

Rey: Ways to propose a girl.....Riya ne permission de di?

It was now his time to blush.

Maan: Haan

Rey(hugging): Congrats chhote

Maan: Thanks bhai

Rey: Thanks wanks chhodd, yeh bta kaisa khurrana hai tu? Internet se dekhke propose karega? Arre kuchh original soch

Maan: Bohot nervous hoon bhai.

Rey: Nervous hone ki koi baat nhi hai. Bas jo dil mein aaye bol de. Dil se bolega na, toh woh pakka haan karegi.

Maan(smirking): haan aapko toh experience hai na.

Rey(pulling his ear): tu chahta hai main tera experience kharab karoon?

Maan: Nai Nai bhai, sorry.

Rey: Jugnu kahan hai?

Jugs: yahan hoon bandar papa.

He turned towards the door to see Jugnu rubbing her eyes which still had a little bit sleep in them. Rey walked towards her and sat on his knees in front of her

Rey: Arrey Jugnu meri jaan, tere papa ne teri wish poori kr di. Teri maa vapus aa gayi

Jugs: sachmein? kahan hai voh?

Rey: abhi kuchh din aur lageinge but I promise, tu, main aur teri nai maa phirse saath mein rahenge. Abhi ke liye bta, kal school ke baad usse milne chalegi?

Jugs: haan, main na voh ladkiyon wale kapde pehnke jaungi unhe surprise dene ke liye.

Rey: Oye aise kaise? itna tang kra hai ussne tujhe, thode mazze lene toh bnte hai na

Jugs(widening her eyes in excitement): plan kya hai

Rey: idhar aa.

He started whispering something in her ear, with each word her excitement raised.

Jugs: kya sahi plan hai bandar papa..

Reyansh gave her a hug too. Maan got a call and his happy expressions suddenly turned into a worried ones.

Maan: Bhai Navya ki tabyat kharab ho gai hai. Mujhe jana padega.

Rey: Ruk main bhi chalta hoon tere saath. (To Jugnu) Jugnu tu jaake apna homework khatam kr aur time se jogging start kr dio. Main aake teri training aage badhata hoon. Chal Maan

They both ran towards Reyansh's car and drove to Navya's house. Maan quickly ran inside and saw that Navya was shouting holding her stomach.

Maan: Navya, Navya its okay, main aa gaya hoon.

He gave her the emergeency medicine with water and started rubbing her back while Reyansh was stunned looking at how much Maan cared for Navya and her baby.

Pranati: Navya!

Reyansh heared Pranati shouting and quickly ran to her and covered her mouth.

Rey(whispering): Shhh...mere saath chal.

He took her hand slowly brought her near the door of Navya's room where Navya was finally calmed down while holding Maan's hand.

Rey: Dekh

He pointed towards his brother and his potential wife.

Maan: Tum na apna bilkul dhyan nhi rakhti. Jab Archit kaam se bahar tha toh tumhe mujhe btana chahiye tha na, main tumhara dhyaan rakhne ke liye aa jata. Aur toh aur main kal se dekh raha hoon ki tum apna diet chart bilkul follow nhi kr rhi ho.

Navya: Maan tum mujhe itni chhoti si baat per itna kyun suna rahe ho?

Maan: Tumhe tumhari health chhoti si baat lag rhi hogi per mujhe nhi lagti.

Both of them continued fighting while Reyansh and Pranati admired them from afar.

Pranati: kitne cute hai na dono? Maan ko Navya ki kitni chinta hai

Rey: haan

He said it in a rather sad tone. He quietly moved away from the door and sat on the sofa. Pranati saw him going away and followed him.

Sorry for the boring episode but you know, sometimes boring things can lead up to something interesting. Stay tuned!

Huh? Boring? Kya? Aur yeh? ...I loved it sana....this was so sweet navya and maan ki story...I was waiting for it to be shown in the show...I know prayanshu main hai..but....for a good story side characters need to be strong and detailed...and developed properly....I am loving it 😍😍😍

Sana, This is beautiful!!

You write magic !

Special thanks for the hug sequence!!

Something that i have been waiting for a very long time but offcourse - we never got it😭

Originally posted by: DiscoDhokla

Sana, This is beautiful!!

You write magic !

Special thanks for the hug sequence!!

Something that i have been waiting for a very long time but offcourse - we never got it😭

Blood oozing out of my 👂 listening your screaming 😂

DD wants hug ...hug...hug .

Thank you Sana . For fulfilling her wish

And Sana ..I'm a slow reader . Completed 10 chapters...

Will take a week or so to catch up this chapter...

Vardhan track is really painful to watch or read from pranati's eyes😭

And Sana. I want you to express something on PB to support the trending tomorrow...

You write so well like it feels like we're watching the soap and not reading a FF..

Please I want this world to read your words so that it makes them to feel Pavitra Bhagya..

Could you write something and post it on Twitter

Or here... We're okk with anything.. just your words are important and we will make sure to tweet them if you don't have Twitter account and not interested in trending...

We do created accounts only out of love for PB.. so we feel proud to act like Messengers😃

Waiting to hear from you🤗