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Posted: 4 years ago
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Madi... Shall I ask you a favor😃


You shouldn't get angry with me


Conditions applied😆


I seriously wanted everyone to read this drabble.. you post it on Twitter during tomorrow trending or we wanna post it as many tweets and show this world about it's beauty...


This post stuck in my mind and now I became greedy and wanting everyone to read now 🙈


It depends on your answer though..I want world to read


I'm ok with anything... But hoping an yes from you😛

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: jey3ram

Madi... Shall I ask you a favor😃


You shouldn't get angry with me


Conditions applied😆


I seriously wanted everyone to read this drabble.. you post it on Twitter during tomorrow trending or we wanna post it as many tweets and show this world about it's beauty...


This post stuck in my mind and now I became greedy and wanting everyone to read now 🙈


It depends on your answer though..I want world to read


I'm ok with anything... But hoping an yes from you😛

Jey❤️ if I post a poem/ a write-up/ OS or a siggy, anything, in any IF forum, it belongs to each and every member of that forum, 🤗 you are free to put it on good use. Please do as you wish, because now, it is yours also! 😃

I used to post in twitter long back, now I forgot my password😳. So please you can proceed.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Jey❤️ if I post a poem/ a write-up/ OS or a siggy, anything, in any IF forum, it belongs to each and every member of that forum, 🤗 you are free to put it on good use. Please do as you wish, because now, it is yours also! 😃

I used to post in twitter long back, now I forgot my password😳. So please you can proceed.


Thanks Madi smiley31smiley31Your Words deserves to be read by everyone.....

Try creating new accounts.....would love to have you with us in the trend tomorrowsmiley31smiley31

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Jey❤️ if I post a poem/ a write-up/ OS or a siggy, anything, in any IF forum, it belongs to each and every member of that forum, 🤗 you are free to put it on good use. Please do as you wish, because now, it is yours also! 😃

I used to post in twitter long back, now I forgot my password😳. So please you can proceed.


Thank you so much Madi🥳🥳🥳


I lost words to describe my happiness... This trending is not like posting namesake tweets.. we really wanted this world to see the real beauty of it's creation.... And your posts are like that..


Each and every word of yours are deep and intense and thought provoking.. I wish anyone or atleast the makers read them Madi.. After we get back the show, they'll have more responsibility to show good story like they promised initially...


Thank you madi🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: jey3ram


Thank you so much Madi🥳🥳🥳


I lost words to describe my happiness... This trending is not like posting namesake tweets.. we really wanted this world to see the real beauty of it's creation.... And your posts are like that..


Each and every word of yours are deep and intense and thought provoking.. I wish anyone or atleast the makers read them Madi.. After we get back the show, they'll have more responsibility to show good story like they promised initially...


Thank you madi🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗


I second that....once back they will have more responsibility on their shoulders......but pretty sure they will be able to deliver if they get support from the channel....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Madi, yes it is like a spell, that is the power of your words.

Wonderful, wonderful OS.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

The Tied Kid’s Tirades--- A wild And Fragrant Innocence


"I know... I know..the feelings of those birthed and abandoned!" -- Pranati realized that little girl's yearning for love, to get that laddu as if it is her life's sole aim! Pranati saw her, wondered why this stir in her soul, started thinking ...".I heard your wish because you matter, your sorrows and cries, your pale smiles at the rebellious moments, I know your longing for a mother's cuddle in that wintry night's pricking cold, I wish to write on every passing cloud to show your hurt to the world, to be heard, because you matter, you matter to me, to this world as well ... because I care! I will be your voice, I'll reach out to the world for you Jugnu!" She has decided to search...to reach her.

Stood in front of Pranati, hating realities, fate or destiny with uncertainties... the desire for affection, hunting daily for recognition, deadly and scary the world she is in, she knows that, left on her own, trying to live, to grow, to survive and thrive, Jugnu pleaded for safety, pain is hard but so is life, because she is an orphan without any fault of her. The passing breeze sighed, the halted time started to move again!

Jugnu... my dear little girl, you were wronged by mother earth, it's written all over your innocent face, the marks of sadness are there on your tightened lips, Pranati was well aware, she is feeling alone!

As an orphan, Jugnu faced many risky situations, where she suffered significant physical, emotional and mental harm, no psychosocial care for her anywhere.

How do you console such a loving daughter Pranati? She was deeply moved to know why a small girl could not sleep without cuddling a pillow. Yes... she missed her protective shield, her mother!

Will she ever get the warmth and security of her parents? The world of an orphan is miserable; like any normal children, they also have wants, needs, likes, expectations, dreams, ambitions, and longings for which there is hardly any probability of fulfillment!

They need love, affection, and care but instead, they are often neglected, oppressed, and denied. They are being traumatized by being alone, without the association of their parents and they grow up with resentment. Pranati's inherent compassionate nature pushed her forward to rescue that little girl.

Any injustice done towards the orphans is doing against God’s precept, which can invite God’s wrath to an individual and generations to come Maa... Pranati warned her mother! She recollected a moral story which imbibed in her mind long back ---

God told his people with utmost compassion to provide food for the orphans, “When you are harvesting in your field and you overlook a sheaf, do not go back and get it. Leave it for the orphans! When you harvest grapes in your vineyard, do not go over the vines again. Leave what remains for …the lonely waif---- She closed her eyes to think twice before taking a decision!

No matter how a child must have become an orphan, the child needs someone to bring a smile to her face. If not you, who will? If not today, when will you…? Her conscience questioned her... her compassion pushed her forward to search for Jugnu.

If you want your life to be meaningful, give life to someone who needs you today with whatever resources God has blessed you. In so doing, you will find the meaning of your life, the morals taught her long back.

It is better to hide such matters, her mother warned! Pranati said " she was my daughter. She might not be alive for you but my daughter will always remain alive in my memories and my life." a mother's emotional declaration!

The rebellious Jugnu was ready to jump from the window ... the window of the adjacent room, Reyansh was ready to jump, to escape from his lover's husband's wrath!

They both are mentally coaxing themselves to jump. Jugnu has shown him the way. Reyansh looked at her in shock. She is like a monkey! Jugnu signaled Reyansh to jump. Reyansh followed suit. Jugnu told him to grow up with a childish glee!!

Yes... accepting responsibility is considered as growing up in life to anyone!

Pranati was trying to burn the box of past memories, on the other side of that big tree, Reyansh was recollecting his past association with Pranati!.... thinking of Pranati. He notices the smoke and looks around the tree. Pranati stood there like a burning memory!!

To be continued....

Edited by Viswasruti - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Madhu : it was a perfect reading.

Jagnu is my 2nd favorite character after Rey.

As I said before, I like tortured characters, except that this one is a child who didn't grow up in a normal home and that makes you feel compassionate.

Jagnu,

She must have been strong as soon as she had enough consciousness.

She quickly understood that the world around her is not as pretty as people like to say.

Where she was supposed to be protected, she was constantly reminded that she had been abandoned.

Yet Jagnu is still a child, she can be tough, but she is like her father, she breaks his wounds. She's a fierce cat.

She scratches, but with words.

This child is a lesson for society!

She didn't ask to be brought into the world!

She didn't ask to be abandoned (she doesn't know yet that it wasn't Pranati's choice).

She asks for love, but she also finds it hard to accept it, why?

Perhaps for fear that it is only a dream.


"Yes... accepting responsibility isconsidered as growing up in life to anyone!

Pranati was trying to burn the box of past memories, onthe other side of that big tree, Reyansh was recollecting his past associationwith Pranati!.... thinking of Pranati.He notices the smoke and looks around the tree. Pranati stood there like aburning memory!! "


That's what Pranati was for Rey, a burning memory, a painful memory, a memory you never risk forgetting... Pranati burned only the material, but the immaterial still remains...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Her Quest, His Dissent

A beautiful woman feels beautiful within, from the love she gives to her ideas and the creative ways she expresses her soul. She is one who wraps her arms around the soul of the world, of all who love her and those who need to love. That's the real beauty of a new generation progressive thinking woman!

A mother wants her daughter to forget about the past to settle in life with a bright future.

But another kid's mother gets emotional at the sight and sound of any kid in the near vicinity!!

Both are mothers with tender hearts, one is a loser and the other is not to lose any chance to give a good life to her own kid! Sometimes you have to make those decisions because the situation demands it!

Pranati's pregnancy resulted from a feeling of deep emotional involvement with the putative father Reyansh. With the onset of her pregnancy, she confided this to the alleged father and her parents. Then all the hell broke loose, no one supported her in the hardest hour of her life!

Early dating, lack of proper sex education, and lack of parental supervision are the main points in the causation of this unwed pregnancy, but she realized that very late!

He loved her curves of softness! He thought that she was the most astonishing girl he ever met... easy to talk to and fun to wrap her in his arms whenever he wants!!

She loved his muscles and those sweet nothings! There's beauty in being a good listener, someone who seeks to make connections and joy and see things from new perspectives! Her age craved for excitement, his body demanded for a banned fulfillment! Where is the love that is eternal as many described? Is the attraction which we call love? Or the commitment of a girl's soul to a reckless boy's lustful deeds? Where's the love trapped itself in all these societal questions?

Her emotions were not easily hidden on her innocent face. Her pain was evident in the crease of her lovely brow and the down-curve of her full lips. But her eyes, her eyes showed her soul. They were a deep pool of restless gold, an ocean of hopeless grief now!

What a helpless girl can do in such a situation? She would not let the world break her! Sure she could cry, but she would never let them take her true self, her pregnancy from her. She clung to it with passion. A passion that made her more beautiful.

Unwed mothers remain a challenge in Indian society, due to a complex interplay of social and psychological complications associated with the issue!

While unwed mothers are a fairly common occurrence in the western countries, they remain a relatively rare entity in India due to the social taboo associated with them. The generic social issue in illegitimacy is that illicit births are regarded as a threat to the family as a social institute!

Again her mother did that misdeed... to save her daughter's future, she nipped the comfort of an infant from being in her mother's safest hug, she sent her to an orphanage!

A mother deceived another budding mother from having the motherly bliss, which is her right! Who is right in this age-old situation? An innocent mother who wants to keep her infant in her lap as her prized possession, or that not so kind mother who wants to give a good life to her grown-up daughter?

Many years later, in a changed scenario .....

Pranati wanted to confess this in front of Archit, but her mother prevented her to do so! She wanted her daughter to forget her past and move on in life. The daughter wanted to start her life on an honest confession!

Another clash between ideologies! Is it selfishness of her mother or her decision to safeguard her pride?

There ... there at that place where no mercy prevails, no love sustains, no flowers bloom ... there Jugnu started her life as a rebellious unsettled kid!

Fate played a role here, Jugnu met her parents on different occasions, while Pranati finds a strange connect with Jugnu, Reyansh is shocked to see the kid’s energetic attitude.

There are certain instances that reveal the bond between Pranati, Jugnu, and Reyansh. Pranati thinks that her kid is dead and Reyansh doesn’t even know that a kid exists!

The story has to move forward, how? --- To be continued.....


Viswasruti, simply LOVED the last para...


What a beautiful connect you have brought out between our 3 leads....in a sense, summarises the essence of Prani and Rey, and the emptiness of their lives, before Jugnu enters it...


Super! :)


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wowww Madi...no words....its so beautiful....looking forward to read more.....the spell you cast leaves me always wanting for more....

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