Ruins rudhita :os *edited*

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi people.. Just a thought pondered on my mind.. And thought of writing on it. What if tulsipur people would have actually burnt Sumati. What will happen then. Wanna know.. Just read this one out.. 😆

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Song cue :Jag sunna sunna lage

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They say time heals everything but not for him with each day he had died a thousands of death, he lost his best friend, he lost his family, he lost his dreams and most importantly he lost his motivation his bondita.

He still regrets the day when 10 years back he asked her to never show her face again to him,little did he know she will take it way too seriously and he will pray every night for the day he can see her again.

Today is his court hearing he has started practicing, he wont say he is good barrister because she was his confidence the one he lost years back due to his foolishness only,but he still works just to keep him preoccupied otherwise surely he would have landed himself into mental asylum.

He remember the initial days of how vulnerable he was. He even went into drinking just to give his thoughts a break.. That time even his kaka asked him to shift to london and start a new life.. But he wanted to stay, her memories had done something on him, he wanted to stay away from them to maintain his sanity but at the same time he wanted to be near them too, they were his addiction,they were his oxygen.

It was his case but still he was lost in her thoughts.. It was not new to him.. Though she did left him, her thoughts never did.

He was busy in his thoughts when his thoughts were interrupted when a woman in her twenties came. She was new in tulsipur everyone says... But she was quite popular as everyone started talking amongst themselves as she entered. She was beautiful no doubt, but she hold an entirely unique persona, her attitude speak confidence, she is famous for her ice cold interior and ruthless personality, she has never lost any case.. Hearing all those from the crowd Anirudh should be afraid afrer all she was his opponent.. She is going to fight against him. But he cant the proceedings the case was out of his mind the moment he saw her entering the court. He saw her looking at him and he saw a pool of emotions in her eyes, that he wanted to decipher, there was so much in depth in her eyes like they wanted to tell him a lot of things and he wanted to listen.



He was completely lost in them only the moment the judge arrived and greated them he realised why he was here at the first place.

But seems like the woman there wasn't happy seeing him getting back his sanity because as she spoke he found himself lost again.

She had so much depth in her voice but still there was chirpiness.. Chirpiness that remind him of his Bondita..


And if cold water was splashed on him his face grew pale how can he even think about other woman, let alone compare her with his Bondita..

Only his Bondita has right on him.. He is her.. Though he couldn't save her 10 yeaes back when those villagers in name of customs decided to burn her and her mom alive in fire.. It was his mistake he didn't realise his mistake earlier and reached there on time to save both her mother and his life Bondita.. When her Mami told him that she died.. He lost himself.. He just had realised that he loves her and he just lost her.. How could fate be that cruel to him.. Sampoorna 's voice that bondita is his identity still rings in his ears.. So true she was.. He is living in ruins, his soul left the day she left and its only a humanoid version of him left spending the punishment he deserves.. Living a life without her.


He was lost in thought when he experienced a gentle tug on his court, and then he looked and realised it was the lady, she was close to him.. But why was heart beating fast as if telling him that she is special to his heart.

He saw her eyes flicker, they looked sad but instantly they changed and he felt as her eyes were emitting fire.. And he, he himself doesn't know why, he wanted to burn as if he was the wax ready to melt if she is the one burning him


Rest of the preceeding went further he forgot all the preparation he has done the only thing that he was thinking was of the lady.. Her way of putting forth her points, her smartness it was so reminding him of Bondita..

Though there was court proceeding going on and he was fighting with that lady but for him there was an entirely different fight going on.. Fight between his heart and brain.. Though his brain knew bondita died years ago and if she will be her, she would have talked to him, called him the two words he is dying to hear 'pati babu' but his heart, seems like it has already accepted her as his bondita and was refusing to let that thought go.


And obviously with him being so distant and with the smartness of the lady the case went to her side. Though that didn't came out a surprise to him.. He already knew and somewhere in his heart he wanted her to win too..


He didn't even had to hear the judge to know what his verdict is,honestly speaking he was so distracted by her that he even didn't hear the judge in the entire proceeding.


Only then the judge said something that caught his attention..

The judge gave the judgement and said he found prosecutor lawyer Bondita das's party not guilty and defence lawyer Anirudh roy chowdhary 'party has been given imprisonment of 10 years.


And with that he jerked his neck so fast in her direction that anyone can think his neck got springs.


He saw her, and he felt his heart beating, he thought as if he was alive again. She the lady whom he has grown to love, she the lady who just made him fall for her once again was standing in flash in front of him..

With great difficulty and as if his voice got stuck and he out of no where has suddenly forgotten how to speak mustered to speak only one word, that was

Bondita..

As soon as those words left his mouth he saw a tear forming in her eyes and then she just walked away, but he realised she too was in ruins just like him

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Posted: 5 years ago
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A/N

to make things more clear i don't know if i was before

The idea is inspired from today's epi, if Villagers would have really burt bon's mom..

So in my story Ani think Bon died with her mom.. But she survived but she didn't want to go back to him because she blames him for her mother's death.. I just don't know if i could pen this well..

But i always wanted to write something along the line of them fighting in court against each other. And this epi just gave me the perfect opportunity so dont want to miss the chance..

Wrote it in half sleepy state will edit it soon.

Kindly drop comment if you want to. They means a lot to me

Edited by wayback2 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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🤩 I have no words to say that I could image the characters in front of your eyes and feel the uneasy essence that both were facing each other for the first time in ten years but did not realise who was in front especially Anirudh, he thought he had lost the only person who would compete his life was his Bondita.

Well written, the words were flowing to make you understand the story.

What will happen next in the story because I am very interested.

Big Thank You for writing ✍️ this in English (my Hindi is still not very good)🤗

Please continue this because I would love to know how and who is going help the two people who have meant to be together.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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The story was so intriguing❤️

Perfectly penned👍🏼

Ani Boni ko end me mila dete naa😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Bas karo rashi rulaaogi kya 😭

I'm crying here 😭

BTW, you have written it beautifully and it's quite logical to happen in reality as well 😭

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Rashi 👏👏I don't have words to praise you for this ❤️❤️

It was amazing❤️ the depth, the pain, the guilt everything just perfect 👍🏼❤️

Do write more.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Edited...

Really sorry to those who have to go through the torture of reading unedited version..

I realised how many mistakes i made..

Learnt my lesson of not writing in half sleepy state😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: screen22

🤩 I have no words to say that I could image the characters in front of your eyes and feel the uneasy essence that both were facing each other for the first time in ten years but did not realise who was in front especially Anirudh, he thought he had lost the only person who would compete his life was his Bondita.

Well written, the words were flowing to make you understand the story.

What will happen next in the story because I am very interested.

Big Thank You for writing ✍️ this in English (my Hindi is still not very good)🤗

Please continue this because I would love to know how and who is going help the two people who have meant to be together.

I am so happy to read it.. I am really happy that you could make out what i wanted to convey..

Yup i wanted to explore something different.. Something which is not my usual style.. Honestly i wanted to seek some sadistic pleasure too.. Making Ani suffer 😆

I wasn't sure if people will prefer reading it.. But i am happy you guys liked it.. Thank you

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you so much for this lovely story .It's really nice.

Yes, Bonditha is Ani's life .Without her heis lifeless .

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Apsana14

The story was so intriguing❤️

Perfectly penned👍🏼

Ani Boni ko end me mila dete naa😆

Hey Apsana.. 🤗

Thank you so much.

I am glad you liked it..

If ff hota toh jrur mila deti.. But os mai.. I thought of trying a different route.. And i wanted to convey the pain and need they have for each other basically 😆

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