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Posted: 4 years ago

Veev is too much fun.. indifference is the way to go..bet it is getting on his nerves

I do like her mom and pa quite chilled out

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nisha. Very nice one. Do I see RP softening a bit here. Oh my! He felt like helping her with the weight of books :-). Viveka does not even seem to notice him at all. Poor RP was all worried about his looks. Interesting. He definitely got a hard task at hand when he realises his affection ( if he can accept it to himself first).

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Posted: 4 years ago

It is going to be a hard task getting her attention left alone winning her heart....so much there to do for poor Raanav

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Posted: 4 years ago

These two can argue till the cows come home. Its nice to see Viveka being all light and flirty with Abhishek. Hard to imagine her doing that with Raanav.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Waiting waiting waiting...............

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ereader

Waiting waiting waiting...............


Good to have you posting 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Kids !!!! They just make you do things they way they want you to! Back home after a short trip

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Posted: 4 years ago

Light & Heat & Noise

“What do you feel?” Naina whispered as the two girlshuddled under a blanket with a flashlight under each chin.

The AC was on full blast the fan was on full speed

“I am excited” Viveka whispered and giggled

“Does he turn you on?”

“Umm.. yeah” Viveka was sure

“You HESITATED DUDE” she screeched

It was past midnight

The house was quiet

“Shhhhh” Viveka warned

“OK seriously?”

“You tell me AAJ kaha thi tum shaam ko?” “U were not homefor dinner”

“Oh… u know work”

“No I don’t know work…. Marogi kisi din”

“OK fine I met Inder”

“WHERE?” Viveka was confused

“USKE ghar par”

“OMG… how do u escape his family”

“His cousin.. bro I mean Rakshit is in Aurangabad something…the aunt was visiting some ailing grandma”

“OMG… U keep going to his house”

“HAVE U BEEN to his house? “I mean even if Inder and Ibreak up I WANT To be adopted…. They have a sick fountain in the middle oftheir courtyard… everything is either in white or white marble”

Viveka nodded worried… distracted

“Does his family know he is bringing u over?”

“I TOLD U” Naina tapped Viveka’s temple mockingly to payattention

“How come nobody knows or cares?” “Papa will KILL U”

“I AM 28 I cant believe I am not allow to hook up” Nainawas all upset now

“NOT at someone’s house… who himself is visiting” Vivekacould not believe her sister could be so foolish

“BTW his brother saw us and didn’t say a word”

“That doesn’t mean anything!!!” viveka was distressed

“HE IS SOOOO CUTE… YOU should date him…. Then we couldDOUBLE DATE”

Naina slipped out of the bedsheet to jump up and down onher bed

“Pagal ho tum?” Viveka pulled her down

“I mean it Veev”

“Where do u come up with such ideas?” the girls giggledbreathlessly under the sheets

“I am telling you… the quickie was sooooo good”

“TMI…. Lalalalalalala” Viveka plugged her ears

“I hope u have it with Abhishek… I mean… HOW sad would beVeev you go through life with not feeling that… umm… heat”

“THAT would be bad” Viveka agreed

“I don’t want us to be 60 or 70 and wonder how it couldhave been”

“Tum itna aage soch rahi ho” Viveka was truly amused

“I mean… seriously dude”

“I will tell u when I kiss him”

“There HAS to be that spark Veev… u know like you want itall the time… you want to be with the person every minute… especially at night…I miss Jaipur SO much… we were such a couple” Naina looked sad

“You do love him!”

“You think I am just hooking up?”

“I cudnt tell” Viveka laughed uncontrollably

“I am so dead… I miss hooking up so much”

“Didn’t u do it at his place… I mean”

“For reals dude… but if I didn’t have to come back home… hewas going to fix me dinner and then he told me I dont

“KAL? KAL? KAL?” Naina demanded

“U ARE MAD… with Ma Papa outside?”

“I can distract them”

“OK…” Viveka was curious

“OMG…. I cant believe it”

Viveka smiled conspiratorially “Mujhe bhi mental karogi tum”

“Just think about it Veev… a good make out RIGHT HERE”

Akash knocked on the door

“Papa” they both chorused ina whisper

He opened the door

“Kya chal raha hai bhai?”

“Umm kuch nahi”

“Neeche Mehtaji ka text aaya hai, bed move kar rahi ho dono”

Viveka punched Naina under the sheet

“Sorry Pa”

“Hmm” he scratched his head and left the door open

“Kal raat ko 9 baje haan?” Naina extracted a promise

“U are crazy if u think I can time it”

“I CAN” Naina smiled

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Posted: 4 years ago

Light & Heat & Noise & TROUBLE.


Naina is careless but I'm thinking she's also bordering on being callous completely insensitive to her parents concerns of being humiliated . It's a very thin line .

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Posted: 4 years ago

She is beyond stupid

I agree. This could blow up ANY second

She has been very lucky that every time he has brought her to the Parashar mansion the parents have not been around. She is brazen and uncaring... like an animal in heat

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