MiNeil story-"One-Night-Stand"(Do Read Ch-14 on pg-72) - Page 34

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by anjali0111


Damn🤣🤣🤣

Too good


Add the tagline also


Mineil chakki aata-

Aurat aur mard dono ke liye


🤣🤣🤣

hard🤣🤣

Haa aur rate per/kg aur energy k kilowatt aur momentum ka velocity bhi daal dena🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣



Jaago grahak jaago🤣

Edited by Khushi1311 - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Loved it Khushi dear

Bold & intruding ff dear

I really loved the chemistry of Mini & Neil awesome & it was not just psychical but a psychological bond & need as well

Even if we overlook it deep down we are hurt about it as we all are humans

So now when Neil has realized his feelings & his state of mind I want mini to realize it soon🙂 

I am sorry as I couldn't comment on chapters individually but from now on I will be waiting for the updates

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing✍️

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by golden_aura


Loved it Khushi dear

Bold & intruding ff dear

Thanks....glad u liked it❣


I really loved the chemistry of Mini & Neil awesome & it was not just psychical but a psychological bond & need as well

Even if we overlook it deep down we are hurt about it as we all are humans

Well said....totally agree🙂


So now when Neil has realized his feelings & his state of mind I want mini to realize it soon🙂 

Very soon🤩


I am sorry as I couldn't comment on chapters individually but from now on I will be waiting for the updates

It's all okay!🙂thanks for sparing your precious time on it...❣

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing✍️

😊😊

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Khushi1311


..mera naam hi cv specialist h.

CV nai BB specialist 🤣🤣

Baaki song mast h🤣

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Sushdvj


CV nai BB specialist 🤣🤣

Ohh hn😅 weak memory...cant help😆


Baaki song mast h🤣

Shukriyaaa😆

Posted: 3 years ago

CHAPTER-7


Last night Mini and Neil had amazing workout sessions like usual.

The chirping of the birds and the fresh, cool breeze woke Neil up . He opened my eyes and a smile come to his face unintentionally to see that someone was cuddled into him... 

She was sleeping like a child.... totally oblivious of the world around her... Her head was resting on his chest, her face was buried in the crook of his neck and her leg was touching his. One of her hand was resting on his chest right above his heart he was loving every single second of it. He wish to start his morning just like that for the rest of his life. “oh gosh!! What the hell I am thinking", he chided himself.

He knew he had no right to be with her like this...But couldn't deprive himself of this pleasure. He could wish that atleast till they are together.

He placed on of his hands on hers which was lying on his heart and snaked his arm around her waist and cuddled her.

The fresh fruity fragrance of her hair was filling his nostrils. And her warm breath was caressing his neck... He just closed his eyes to savour each and every second of it.

 She wake up in his bed and he rolls over and wraps his arm around her waist, kissing the back of her neck. "Good morning precious," he whispers in her ear.

"Good morning supposed-to-be-one-night-stand."

"When are you gonna stop calling me that?" he asks nipping her ear.

She shrugs and he kisses her temple. “Why is he always so sweet? “, she wondered. 

"Don't forget  mom has a check up today at 1"

"I know," she reply

 "How did I live before without my'supposed-to-be-one-night-stand'?", she wondered.

"I know you know my name you were screaming it last night."

 

 

 

 

She smile and turn around to find a smirk on his face.

"I know your name," she say as she climb on top of him. She kissed his neck. "How could I forget it when you make me .... so hard I have to scream it?" she lick up his neck and moan his name in his ear. "Neil."

“You are seducing me....I need you Precious”, he growled.


He falls back onto the bed and lets out an exasperated breath. "Minni, you're killing me here"

"Shut up. "I'll see you later."

"Alright."he had to say but not before giving his try to stop her and making that puppy face.

“Ohh...goshh...why she had to wake up so early...”, he complaint. And soon his own thoughts dawned him. He was surprised to realise that it is not physical intimacy he is craving for now but just her presence.

She left his house and go home do her usual - shower, brush teeth, wash face, get dressed, eat breakfast.

At 1pm she go with her dad to take her mom to her check up. Neil comes into the check up room and his eyes instantly fall on her.

“Could he be anymore obvious?”,she wondered.

He walks up to Babita , examines the stitches on her head and checks her vitals. He says a bunch of stuff but she was not paying attention to any of it. She was too focused on his beautiful brown eyes, and his lips that she wanted on hers so badly.

“Oh, my gosh what is he doing to me.”,she wondered. 

When he gets done she don't even speak to him. She won't see him tonight because he is working late. 

Later that evening Hanuman Singh and Babita left for Patiala. When Minni gets home after seeing them off to the airport she do some chores around the house, cook some dinner and watch movies while getting ahead on some office work.

Later around 7pm someone knocked the door. Minni was bit shocked to hear it right then because her mom and dad had already left for Patiala and Neil never comes before atleast leaving a message.

She opened the door and to her very surprise it was Neil standing at her. She let him in. She was about argue to lit the conversation that what if her parents had been her and seen him but his face told her some other story. He didn’t seemed in any mood to fight which she loves to do alot with him.

Minni was surprised at her own thought process. It only happens with a very few close ones that she could tell what’s going on just by their face. And Neil has become one.

He went directly to the kitchen.

Minni followed him and hugged from behind placing kisses on his cheeks and neck.

“Minni", he said as he put her hands down from him...”not today. Please. I'm tired."

“What happened Supposed-to-be-one-night-stand?”

Neil didn’t answer and continued his search for plates, spoon and food.

“What happened my cupid? Why your mood is so pensive?”,Asked Minni again as came in front of him and cupped his face like a kid.

The term ‘cupid' quickly grabbed Neil’s attention and he looked up. Though all his life he had found these couple codes utterly foolish and chessy but today , he loved that sound ....that voice of hers claiming enormous promises. He wanted to hear it again . He was liking it all.

“What you just said?”

“Why are sad cupid?”, she asked again as she pouted her face.

Neil smiled.

“Cupid?”

“Cheesy ...isn’t it.. I thought the same. It suits sweet little kid more not devil like you..  but then can’t help it..”

“Whenever you come closer and the moment you smile ...thousands of bows pierces my heart making breathless.”

Neil couldn’t help smiling.

“AWWUUCHHH ...again", Minni said dramatically putting her hand over her heart.

“And you are my precious . “

Minni smiled.

“So we are no longer supposed to be one night stand?,he asked remembering Minni’s words. 

“Well...we supposed it to be a night stand but then now I realise we have come a bit far"

“So accept ...that I affect you..isn’it?”

Minni tried her best to hide her smile and finally spoke.

“Hey! Don’t try to brush off the topic ....tell me what happened?”

“Nothing much. Just a surgery didn’t  go well. It was Dr. Shah's case and I was assisting him in the surgery  and despite our attempts the internal bleeding didn’t stop. Maybe we’ll have to operate again tomorrow if the patient’s didn’t attain some stability”

“these doctors how beautifully carry such responsibilities always with a smile.”,Minni wondered.

“It’s okay cupid. He is alive and would be fine. I know the magic of your fingers", Minni winked as she kissed his eyes. Next cheeks and soon consumed his lips.

“Accha listen....Preet has invited me to spend some time with Arya ...consider it a party of her new life", Minni informed.

“Yeah...you go ahead", Neil asked.

Minni glared at him.

“I'm not asking you. Get ready soon “

“Precious....”, he tried to protest.

“I hate to wait Cupid", she said as she left the kitchen leaving Neil behind smiling. He was liking the way Minni  was becoming outgoing with him. To his surprise he was enjoying the ways she was claiming her orders at him as her rights.

Mineil reached the orphanage and picked up Arya and Preet who took the back seat whereas Mineil took the front ones. They kept stealing moments to hold each other’s hand in the car. They took a ride of metro. And explored every nook and corner of the famous Parathe wali gali not leaving a single chance to come close but all the while trying to escape Preet and Arya’s hawk eyes though they don’t know how much they succeeded in it. Neil took special care of Do's and don’ts of Arya....specially her food.Finally they crashed in  a water park on being insisted by Arya. They played with her. Made her go through those swings and see saws.

After decades Neil and Arya felt something called family though it’s other thing that they failed to realize the very word.

Suddenly his smile fainted when he received a text. He quickly deleted it not before emailing the same to some one.

Minnie’s eyes suddenly landed on a pool nearby and she couldn’t help rushing to it like a kid. Neil followed her leaving Preet playing with Arya behind. Minni was scanning the pool when Neil stood by her.

He licked his lips and moves closer. She took a step back and her foot touches the water and she fall in.

Uggghhhh. When she come up, Neil was  laughing at her and there are people surrounding the pool. She let out a breath. Neil squats down by the pool and holds his hand out. She grabbed it and as he starts to pull her up, she yanked him in and he falls in the pool with her. She laughed at him and everyone was looking at them. He climbs out and pulls her up out of the pool. She was dripping wet and so was Neil he pulls his shoes and socks off and Minni pull off her sandals. Preet hands them some towels which even they where she managed to get from and then shen lead everyone away from the pool.

Neil picks up one of the towels and wraps it around Minni. "Thank you," she say as she push back a piece of fallen hair from his face.

Arya was giggling all this while with her hands over her mouth. Preet soon took her away seeing the embarrassment on Mineil’s face. Minni smiled and looked down at the puddle of water surrounding her feet.

Neil pulls off his shirt and Minni swear she will never get tired of seeing his body.

He wraps a towel around him. 'You wanna sit by the pool?"

"No," she laughed.

He smiles and takes her hand and sits at the edge of the pool. She sit down next to him and put her feet in the water and he pulls his pant legs up and does the same.

"Pta nhi kyu....but it feels like home to be with you."she confessed honestly.


Neil smiled as he placed a soft kiss on her cheeks in agreement. 

"Everyone is staring at us."

"So feed their eyes."he said as he took her lips in his.

Minni smiled and put her head on his shoulder and soon he put his head over hers with their fingers entwined.

....................................................................................

“Thanks",said Neil as he turned the knob and they entered Minni’s home again.

“For what?”

“For all these effort to lighten up my mood"

“Don’t flatter yourself cupid. I did it for me not you”

“REALLY!  I matter so much to you",smirked Neil.

“I didn’t say that"

“But you meant that Precious.  Isn’t it?” he said as he pulled her closer.

“No.”

“Let’s play a game then", he said as he moved to the room to find something.

Minni kept waiting figuring out what he meant untill he arrived with a black blindfold in his hand and put it around her eyes softly. Minni gasped as she knew he is not gonna go easy on her.



To be continued...


Part 8 at page-

Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/154250556

Edited by A_Cosmic_Dust - 1 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by golden_aura



Will be waiting for the updates dear 💕🤗

done🤗

Posted: 3 years ago

Very sweet and beautiful part Khushi

Loved it 

Good that Mini to realize the depth of their relationship 🙂 which was necessary for her mind frame

I loved how she lifted his mood & how they enjoyed specially pool bit  🙂 

Neil is now quite vocal & depending emotionally on her  🙂 

So let's see where this game takes them to😂 that would be interesting

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by golden_aura


Very sweet and beautiful part Khushi

Loved it 

Thanks ....glad u liked it❣


Good that Mini to realize the depth of their relationship 🙂 which was necessary for her mind frame

I loved how she lifted his mood & how they enjoyed specially pool bit  🙂 

Neil is now quite vocal & depending emotionally on her  🙂 

So let's see where this game takes them to😂 that would be interesting

Yeah😆


Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

Hopefully...will update day after tomorrow 😊



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