Le jaa mujhe saath tere,pt 10 on pg 70,teaser on 74,27/1 - Page 14

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Posted: 3 years ago

Heartbreaking teaser di.. 

Poor ishu.. Kuch nahi kiya fir bhi saza mil rahi hai.. 

Plz plz update soon and thanks for pm di

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Posted: 3 years ago

PART 3

It was past nine,when ishita's car came and stopped in society campus.she came out all exhausted and start walking towards their building.

Ishita walked into the building and a lady said-suna tumne aaj kya hua court mein.

Lady 2-nahi toh,kya hua??

Lady 1-arey Mrs bhalla ki bahu ,arey woh shagun usne Raman ko characterless saabit kar diya aur sabko pata chal gaya ki uska chakker chal raha hai.

Lady 2-kya,kiske saath??

Lady 1-aur kaun wahin,jiske saath din bhar ladhta rehta tha.

Lady 2-ishita ke saath.

Lady 1-haan ,wahin.arey unn dono ka najayaz rishta hai.kaisi photo show ki shagun ne unn dono ki.

Lady 2-achcha,dekho kitni seedhi banti hai,aur kaisi nikli.

Lady 1-haan dekh lo.saamne se aa rahi hai,characterless ladki.sach much aaj kal ki ladkiyan kitni giri hui hai.paise ke liye aur ladko ko phasane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai.

Lady 2-haan,aisi ladkiyon se apne bachchon ko sambhal kar rakhna chahiye.pata nahi baahar aur kya kya gul khilati hogi.they said making Ishita's eyes moist but she didn't said anything and walk towards her house.

She came on their floor and toshiji said-aa gayi,main tera hi intezaar kar rahi thi.tu kitni ghatiya nikli ishita,meri ruhi ne tujh jaisi banjh ko kitna pyaar diya aur tune uske saath aisa kiya.matarani tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karengi.

Ishita cried and said-maine kuch nahi kiya aunty,sach mein.kuch nahi kiya,please believe me.

Toshiji-arey tujh par kaun bharosha karega ,tune hamare saath joh kiya hai,she was saying when Mr bhalla came out and said-chup kariye toshiji .

Toshiji-aap abhi bhi mujhe chup karayenge ,bhalla ji.isse kuch nahi bolenge.

Mr bhalla-usse bol kar kya faayda,woh hamari apni nahi hau.usse chodiye aur raman ke baare mein sochiye,woh ab tak aaya nahi.

Toshiji-haan iss ladki ki wajah se mera puttar abhi tak ghar nahi aaya .teri wajah se meri ruhi chali gayi,mera ghar tut gaya,but agar mere puttar ko kuch hua,toh jaan le ishita,main tujhe zinda nahi chodungi .tujhe maar daalungi ,mere bachchon ke saath aisa karne ke liye .she said crying making Ishita cry too.

Ishita-maine kuch nahi kiya,aunty ji.kuch bhi nahi kiya,shagun ne mujhe phasaya hai.aap toh usse mujhse achchi tarah jaanti hai.maine kuch nahi kiya.she cried.

Toshiji-bandh kar apni bakwaas,mujhe nahi sunni teri baat,bas itna yaad rakhna,agar mere puttar ko kuch hua,toh yeh maa tujhe maaf nahi karegi.she said and went inside with mr bhalla crying.

Ishita cried on listening the accusations .she slowly walked towards her house and ring the bell.

After five minutes,Amma opened the door .ishita was going inside when Amma stopped her.

She look at her mother and she said-mere ghar mein tum jaisi badchalan ladki ke liye koi jagah nahi.

Ishita's heart broke hearing this from her mother and her eyes got teary.

Ishita-aapko bhi lagta hai ki main aisi hoon,ki main kuch aisa kar sakti hoon.aapko bilkul bharosha nahi apni beti par,Amma.

Amma looked away and said-mujhe kuch nahi sochna,kuch nahi samjhna .tum mere ghar mein nahi aa sakti,jao ussi ke ghar jiske saath tumne hume bina bataye rishta bana liya.kya zarurat thi yeh karne ki,agar tum dono ke beech koi rishta tha toh hume bataya hota.hum khud tum dono ki shaadi karwa dete,but iss tarah apni maryada laangh kar tumne hamara sar sharam se jhuka diya.yeh baat aag ki tarah hamari puri community mein phail gayi hai,aur hum kisi ko muh dikhane ke kaabil nahi rahen.

Ishita-aur aapko lagta hai maine yeh sab kiya hai,maine Raman ke saath rishta bana liya hai .apni beti ko itna hi jaanti ho,amma.she cried.

Amma-mujhe kuch nahi sunna,bas itna kehna hai ki tum mere ghar ke ander kadam nahi rakh sakti.she said closing the door on ishita's face.

Ishita knock the door and said-amma,Amma,darwaza khola amma.main kahan jaaungi ,aap kaise mera saath chod sakti hai ,amma.main aapki beti hoon.please open the door,amma.she cried hugging the door but Amma didn't open the door for ishita.

After sometime,she sat on the stairs all exhausted crying on her fate while every passerby was looking at her with disgusting eyes .

Ishita closed her eyes feeling tired and she slept in no time.

At ten,appa open the door and walked to ishita.he was about to wake her when Amma came and took him inside.

Appa-kya kar rahin ho,madhu.woh hamari ishu hai.

Amma-u r still supporting her,tumne dekha nahi usne kya kiya.hamara naam,hamari izzat mitti mein mila di.

Appa-u trust those photos .

Amma-yes,I do aur tumko bhi vishwas karna hoga .uski wajah se itna sab kuch ho gaya,she will not enter my house warna main yeh ghar chod kar chali jaaungi.she said and went inside and appa too went feeling bad for ishita .

Ishita was sleeping on the stairs when she heard some choas .she open her eyes only to see Mr bhalla taking Raman to their house while Raman was heavily drunk and was crying for ruhi cursing ishita.

Ishita cried seeing his state and was just looking at them when Raman said-meri bachchi cheen li,usne meri bachchi cheen li ,papa.meri ruhi chali gayi ,papa.meri ruhi chali gayi.he was saying while Mr bhalla was trying hard to control him,but he was falling here and there.

Ishita saw this and ran to them.she held raman before he fall and Mr bhalla look at her.

Ishita-main Raman ko ander le chalti hoon.

Mr bhalla look at her and nodded.both took Raman inside and make him lay down on the bed.

Mr bhalla covered him properly and both walked out.

Ishita was going out when Mr bhalla hold her hand.

Ishita-aap maane chahe naa maane , uncle.but maine kuch nahi kiya.she said while her voice got heavy.

Mr bhalla-kuch khaaya hai tumne??he asked and ishita turn to him.

Mr bhalla-maine dekha tumhare saath kya kiya tumhare parent ne,I felt bad for u.he said and she started crying.

Ishita-maine kuch nahi kiya,uncle.shagun ne mujhe phasaya hai,aur ab kisi ko mujh par yakeen nahi.amma-appa ko bhi nahi,unhone mujhe ghar se nikaal diya.main kahan jaaungi ,Raman ko bhi lagta hai maine paise liye hai shagun ko woh pictures dene ke,but trust me uncle ,maine koi paise nahi liye,maine usse woh pics nahi diye the .she was saying and crying bitterly when Mr bhalla took her in side hug and said consoling her -i do trust u,puttar.tujhe aur Raman ko,dono ko uss shagun ne hi phasaya hai.toshiji aur Raman gussa hai tujhse,but mujhe yakeen hai ki tune koi galat kaam nahi kiya.mushkil waqt hai,nikal jaayega.he said consoling her while she cried for long pouring her heart.

She start feeling thirsty and got silent when Mr bhalla said-main paani laata hoon.saying so he went inside and after five minutes came with bread-jam and milk along with water.

Mr bhalla-kuch hai nahi,yeh kha lo.aur yahan so jao.

Ishita-nahi uncle ,kuch khaane ka mann nahi hai.aap mujh par bharosha karte hai,yahin bahut badi baat hai mere liye.main jaati hoon,aunty mujhe dekhengi toh gussa ho jayengi .

Mr bhalla-main unhe samjha dunga,tum kahin nahi jaa rahin.khana kha kar so jao,jahan jaana hai subah jaana .

Ishita-pata nahi kahan jaaungi,kabhi socha nahi tha ki aisa din bhi aayega,ki mere paas ghar hi nahi hoga.

Mr bhalla-sab thik ho jaayega,puttar.tu bhi kha kar aaram kar le,aaj ka din bahut hard tha tujh par bhi.he said and went to his room while ishita sat on the couch and start eating slowly crying on her helplessness.

That's all for now,enjoy.


Ps-response is really bad.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome chappy Di 

Poor ishitha 

Why they can't hear her pov

They'll regret very badly mainly her parents 

Update soon Di 

Thanks for Pm Di 

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Posted: 3 years ago

You have written it so beautifully di❣️❣️❣️

Loved it

Everyone’s emotions were portrayed so well👏👏


Emotional update di

Ishita’s condition was so vulnerable 😭😭😭😭😭

My eyes started to tear up reading the update 💔

Toshiji’s anger was natural as she is a stranger but amma was so unjust to ishita🥺🥺🥺🥺

She didn’t trust her own daughter 😢😢😢

Once amma will know the truth, she will start to regret it.....😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤

Don’t know how ishita will be able to forgive her for this💔💔💔💔

Thank god at least someone has sympathy and trust on her🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

Lets see what happens next 

Ty 4 d pm too di


Edited by cooldilkaur - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Interesting dear!!! Loving the start❤️❤️❤️Plz update soonish❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome fab fantastic chap 

Too good poor girl how can her mother do this to her

Please cont soon 

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Posted: 3 years ago

My eyes started to tear up reading this part sis 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Very very. ...emotional update 

Well written dr 🥺🥺🥺🥺

Poor  ishita🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

Amma is behave badly with her

She didn’t trust her own daughte😪😪😪😪😪r

Eagerly waiting for next update plzzzz soon 

Plzzz update soon 

 I like this story very much 😍

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Posted: 3 years ago

Emotional update 

Poor ishita

Cont soon 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Super awesome update 

Update next part soon 

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Thanks for the PM 









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Posted: 3 years ago

Such a heartbreaking moment hope Raman feels that ishita is not guilty and hope they work together and solve this problem