SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 2: CC# 2 [FINAL UPDATE ON PG. 130] - Page 56

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Posted: 4 years ago
The story is progressing without any connection. There is no correct sequence in scenes? Why do I feel we have collapsed everything since beginning. ??
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

The story is progressing without any connection. There is no correct sequence in scenes? Why do I feel we have collapsed everything since beginning. ??


It went down hill after a lot of the members left. There’s no correct sequence because the members aren’t there. I am really confused now. What do we do. Should we just continue or stop till tomorrow?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


It went down hill after a lot of the members left. There’s no correct sequence because the members aren’t there. I am really confused now. What do we do. Should we just continue or stop till tomorrow?

let's continue tomorrow and give a better ending even with minimum people. We can't give an abrupt ending atleast to this story when we are at finale episode..
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Posted: 4 years ago

@Home786 Today's episode is messed up completely.

There is no sequence in scenes.

There is no highlight point in today's epi.

No connection between dialogues.

Jo 10 pages per epi main mazaa hota tha woh 35 pages main nahi aaya. Sorry Shaheen.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

let's continue tomorrow and give a better ending even with minimum people. We can't give an abrupt ending atleast to this story when we are at finale episode..

@Home786 Today's episode is messed up completely.

There is no sequence in scenes.

There is no highlight point in today's epi.

No connection between dialogues.

Jo 10 pages per epi main mazaa hota tha woh 35 pages main nahi aaya. Sorry Shaheen.


Agree na? So, what's next?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


It went down hill after a lot of the members left. There’s no correct sequence because the members aren’t there. I am really confused now. What do we do. Should we just continue or stop till tomorrow?

Shristi are you here?

Kya kare aaj batao?

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Posted: 4 years ago
Prit...Are you here? Kya kare batao? Kaise complete kare hamaari last part of the story???
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MishtiNew

It's time for me to go, Saheen.

Sleep time.

Hello Mishtu..!!

Kya kare behen? Have you seen last night thread? Kya kare kuch idea do, how to complete our story? Shall we continue today? 15 mins earlier???

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Posted: 4 years ago
What's next?

Is there any continuation of epi today?

Again is it an abrupt ending?

What's your plan friends?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

What's next?

Is there any continuation of epi today?

Again is it an abrupt ending?

What's your plan friends?

Akka...Happy BirthdayšŸŽ‚...!! Once again wish you a very successful year ahead.


I have decided to play both Anmol and Pooja till Mishti comes and gives his concern.

Akka we can enact some scenes between 3 to 5pm today. we can complete all emotional scenes so that when people wish to join they have a happy environment there....!! Okay.

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