A small scene written by me...Take a look

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Heyaa guys...yest i was just watching show....n i saw a veryy cute scene...n i was just thinking if Ridhima was going to have a baby.....hw would the scene be....so me wrote dwn a small scene....of AR's first baby....here it goes😉

Armaan:papa sab theek toh hoga na
Shashank:armaan dont worry beta...itz a normal delvery everything will be fine....tum tension mat lo
Armaan:par papa ridhima...ridhima ko toh kuch nahi hoga na...aur mera baby..woh
Paddy laughs:armaan....sir ne kaha na normal delivery hai...na ridhima ko kuch hoga aur na tumhare baby ko...don worry...
Anjie comes laughing:haan haan jeejs don worry waise bhi ridz se zayda dare hue toh tum ho...dekho ridhima ko dekho iss halat mein bhi muskura rahi hai nu...ure sweating
Every1 laughs...
Armaan goes towards ridhima in her room....she takes his hand in hers....n presses it...n blinks her eye...in a "dont worry...il be fine " look...
He puts his hand on her face...n then kisses her forehead...n then puts his hand on her stomach...n says
Armaan:chotu master...don worry...papa hai na...tum ek dum theek se aa jayoge....par dekho tum mumma ko zyada tang mat karna...[ridz smiles lookin at his concern]...aur haan...he goes closer to her stomach...[as if talkin secret to the baby]
mumma ko zyada nakhre mat dikhana...tum jaldi se nikal jaana....aur phir tumhare aane ke baad hum dono milke tumhari mumma ko tang karenge...ohk[ridz hears this and holds his ears]
Ridz:kya kaha tumne...
Armaan:main...meri itni majaal...ke main kuch keh sakoon...main toh....bas apne junior se keh raha tha...ke mumma ko tang mat karna...
He tries hard to look cool...n calm/...but he's too tensed...more tensed than ridhima...
Ridhima takes his hand again:armaan dont worry...tum itni tension kyun le rahe ho...ek delivery hai...sab theek hoga....
Armaan:par ridhima..agar tumhe aur junior ko kuch ho gaya toh...
Ridhima smiles:tumhare hote hue hume kuch ho sakta hai....
Armaan smiles:kabhi nahi...
Ridzy gives a scream suddenly...Armaan gets all tensed...He goes on "kyz hua ridhima??"....n then he says"tum ruko...main abhi papa ko bula kar aata hoon...bas 2 min"...Ridz is screaming n screaming n screaming...armi runs out...n calls shashank...he immdiately comes...ridz is taken to ICU...
whr her operation starts...the operation is goin on inside...but the tesnion is all outside...armaan is sweating...to the core..n anjie is trying to control himm
Anjie:chill jeejs...everything will be fine...[she gets a glas of water...but he refused to drink...hes too worried...she keeps it aside n puts her hand on his shoulder] armaan dont worry....ek din mein hazaro bacche paida hote hai....tum hara bhi ho jayega...
Armaan:par ridhima toh theek rahegi na
Anjie:offooo ek sawaal hazaar baar pooch chuke ho...tumhe dad pe bharosa nahi hai
Armaan:hai par...
Anjie:...ridhima theek hogi armaan...bas ab chup ho jao...
Armaan is constantly moving...he's soo tensed...itna tensed toh woh apne life mein kabhi nahi tha shayad...he then goes to the temple in sanjeevani n starts praying there..praying for his love...his life...his family...aftera while anjie comes running
Anjie:jeejs...itz a girl....apko beti hui hai
Armaan:what...girl...mujhe beti hui hai[his smile gets wider n wider...he hugs anjie first...n then runs to ridhima..]
Shashank comes out of the OT...he comes to armaan n hugs him
Shasank:congratz beta...tum papa ban gaye...aur main nana
Anjie:aur main maasi...wow...
Armaan:papa kya main ridhima se mil sakta hoon
Shashank:haan beta...jao...ridhima se mil lo..aur apni beti se bhii
Armaan goes inside...he sees ridhima..sleeping...he goes n kisses her on the forehead n says" thanks ridhima...tumne mujhe aaj meri zinadagi ka sabse pyar gist diya hia"...he then goes towards her lil baby girl..and takes her in his hand..hes soooooo sooo hapy to see her...there's a spark in his eyes...a spark which his dad ha when he held him for thr first time...a spark...which he had when he first came to knw ridhima is pregnant...he kisses his baby girl on the forehead....n then says"hello...main tumhara papa hoon....aur papa tumhe bahut bahut bahut pyaar karte hai....i love my dear angel...tumne meri duniya ko aaj poora kar diya hai....thanku ...thanku soo much
for coming to me my angel...papa loves u very very very much"
Ridhima who s awake hears all this this n says: haan haan ab toh tumhara saara pyaar tumhar is baby ka...aur mere liye"
Armaan laughs n comes towards her n says:arre wifey...don worry...mera pyaar tumhare liye kabhi kam nahi hoga..tum dono mere life ke best gifts ho...aaj main is duniya ka sabse khush insaan hoon...aj meri family complete hogayi hai"[he holds her baby in one arm n keeps the other hand on ridzy shoulder]
Ridhima:humari family...completely ho gayi hai[ she says this n rests on his shoulder n both stare at their wondeful angel]

😉

hope u lyk it...do comment😳

Luv,

kimmy

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww....an awesum mindblowing scene...
plzz keep writing scenes..
luv it.!!

👏

sonal 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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excellent loved it thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😳 wow..tht was awesum yaar komal..i cud actually imagine the whole scene..how i wish aisa kuch really ho after they get married 😳
brilliant 👏 👏 👏
natasha
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Posted: 18 years ago
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@natasha...hey natasha...thanks yaar...so good to see u after soo long... 😉 😉
@sonal...thanks/./yea sure il be writin them
@hot_diva...thanks 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwww yaar really cutee cute and cute 😆
nice keep it upppp 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woooooow...it was so cute n lovey-dovey.i could actually feel the happiness too......lol.seriously....
ishiqa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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@friendly girl...thanks im glad u liked it
@me_coolgul69....awww dats reali sweet..thx 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: komalsirwani

@natasha...hey natasha...thanks yaar...so good to see u after soo long... 😉 😉
@sonal...thanks/./yea sure il be writin them
@hot_diva...thanks 😉

hehe ya missed u all..my exams were on thts y wasnt there😊b ut im glad 2 b bak too...😳 n lovely scene...😳imagine armu with his anjel n ridz..he wil luk double happy..n hot😆😳

natasha

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