|SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 2| : CHAT CLUB (Note pg. 132 💌) - Page 114

Originally posted by: Home786

@ red it's a great scenes. We will add it up.

2, 4 , 6, 7 are really good... 👍🏼

But not first one please🤣

Why not the first one? It’s so funny 😂

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Why not the first one? It’s so funny 😂

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Why not the first one? It’s so funny 😂

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Even I was thinking that a few days ago.

Shaheen would have been the perfect person for Abir’s role.

I really wanna see her in stage performances. I am sure she is excellent.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

I mean... yeh story main kuch bhi ho sakta hain 😉

Actually, the title of the story is from R.K Narayan stories.

Note: Guys please move to chat club 2 once this page gets over.... 📍

Originally posted by: Home786

Agree with you Prit...👍🏼

Now suggest some scenes for the progression of the story. We should stick to our plot. Jaldi se kuch ideas suggest karo tum bhi...

Give me some time to think Shaheen

And I really want it to end soon as now I am really busy days and I can't participate wholeheartedly.

Aaj to I am completely tired. To ab story ko end ki taraf le chalte hai as I signed up so don't wanna quit in middle par mere liye ab time manage karna thoda mushkil hoga.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Exactly, I enjoy and appreciate the love ABir and JaBir gets but Pooja and Anmol’s story is so good and empowering. It’s just that they have not had good scenes until now.

And honestly, I don’t want Abir’s characer to be too bad either.

Agree Shrishti. The love these characters or this ship getting is appreciable but I want Abir and Pooja to be good friends only.

And yes I really don't want Abir to be this harsh. I want him to turn into a soft guy. I am also focussing on that point that Abir has a soft corner for Pooja but it should be not love.

Aur mujhe lagta hai Pooja can be a person who can change the personality of Abir.

Aur ek baat I don't want Anamika to end up like a pure vamp. Mujhe nahi pata tumlogo ko dikha payi ya nahi but maine Anamika ka v ek positive side dikhane ki koshish ki hai.

Anamika too has feelings for Anmol but only a good friend wali. Anmol sirf Anamika ki zid nahi. Par pata nahi sabko Anamika me Saudamini dikh rahi 😒

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Agree Shrishti. The love these characters or this ship getting is appreciable but I want Abir and Pooja to be good friends only.

And yes I really don't want Abir to be this harsh. I want him to turn into a soft guy. I am also focussing on that point that Abir has a soft corner for Pooja but it should be not love.

Aur mujhe lagta hai Pooja can be a person who can change the personality of Abir.

Aur ek baat I don't want Anamika to end up like a pure vamp. Mujhe nahi pata tumlogo ko dikha payi ya nahi but maine Anamika ka v ek positive side dikhane ki koshish ki hai.

Anamika too has feelings for Anmol but only a good friend wali. Anmol sirf Anamika ki zid nahi. Par pata nahi sabko Anamika me Saudamini dikh rahi 😒

No yaar, dont be disheartened, the only reason people see Mini in Anamika is because it’s similar to Bondi - Ani - Mini story. And also because how Mini also keeps reminding Ani of their relationship before, Anamika is doing the same.

I think you should be more clear about her feelings for Anmol, like maybe dedicate a whole paragraph towards her love for Anmol so people start to notice.

And also, about the story going towards the end, even I think it should. Because from next week, I will get busy too.