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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Yupp...

Actually Anmol had already told her in last episode na. But she didn't questioned him regarding. But soon she will...

Hmmm 👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago
Britu....you're playing the role of Arushi.. Do you remember. The part of the story is not moving because of your absence. When are you going to rejoin us???
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Yeh kya ho raha hai re Shristi..!!

# JaBir what's this....??

I never thought this simple story will go to such extent.

I am confused now how to proceed?


No confusion Shaheen.


Anmol and Pooja are the endgame


#JaBir fans ke liye toh kuch intense scenes hi kafi hain.


And I am sure, when you and Anmol get cute scenes, I am sure you will have a loyal fanbase.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Just peeped in Shaheen and gone through pages 😆

And after reading all these things mere mind me ek hi gaana aa raha Ye kya hua Kaise hua Kab hua Kyu hua 🤣

Khatarnak discussion chal raha idhar 😆

First of all mujhpe ande na fekna I really don't like typical serials. After marriage wife husband ke bhai se shadi kar le. I really don't like that.

For me marriage is a big deal. I don't like isse sadi huyi aur bina kisi reason ke BIL se sadi kar li. It's big no from me baki tumlogo ki marzi.

And Anmol is really a nice guy and Pooja's character needs such a man in life I guess. So for me Anmol is good for Pooja.

And seriously I don't like typical serials. Abhi tak maine sirf 3 hi serials dekhe hai IPKKND, KTLK and BB 😆

And yes I too want Abir has a soft corner for Pooja but it should be friendship only. I want Abir to turn into a soft person with help of Pooja.


Exactly, I enjoy and appreciate the love ABir and JaBir gets but Pooja and Anmol’s story is so good and empowering. It’s just that they have not had good scenes until now.


And honestly, I don’t want Abir’s characer to be too bad either.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: MishtiNew

Aww, thanks for the compliment! ❤️

Well, Wattpad binge reading might help...

Here are some suggestions... I will update from time to time...

  • Pooja is busy in the own world, thinking about something when Anmol comes from back and Whispers her name and she jumps on place and the two have a cute Nok jhok moment. ( Don't kill me for this)


Awwwwwwwwww ❤️ That’s so cute

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


No confusion Shaheen.


Anmol and Pooja are the endgame


#JaBir fans ke liye toh kuch intense scenes hi kafi hain.


And I am sure, when you and Anmol get cute scenes, I am sure you will have a loyal fanbase.

Yess....

We shouldn't change the plot of the story anyways.

But we can give some good intense scenes to Abir and Pooja for their request.

We have to shortlist the scenes for this week.

Suggest some good scenes to Anmol and Pooja.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


Exactly, I enjoy and appreciate the love ABir and JaBir gets but Pooja and Anmol’s story is so good and empowering. It’s just that they have not had good scenes until now.


And honestly, I don’t want Abir’s characer to be too bad either.

Abir is not a bad character. He is good person but somewhat obsessive with his likes and dislikes... That's it.
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Yess....

We shouldn't change the plot of the story anyways.

But we can give some good intense scenes to Abir and Pooja for their request.

We have to shortlist the scenes for this week.

Suggest some good scenes to Anmol and Pooja.


1. Anmol takes Pooja to see horror movie. Pooja isn’t scared but Anmol is about to pee his pants. Pooja makes fun of him because of that 😂


2. Therapy sessions should be included where they have really emotional talks. Pooja should open up to Anmol during the sessions.


3. Towel scene, the typical ones where boy comes out in towel only and the girl is there. A little nokh- jokh regarding that.


4. We should definitely have a karwachaut special episode where both confess their feelings for each other.


5. Panipuri challenge. Anmol wins and boasts for hours to Pooja. Pooja gets irritated (not in a annoyed way but like good irritated. You know what I mean?”


6. Pooja sleeps on Anmol’s shoulder. Anmol takes some time to appreciate her beauty.


7. If Pooja does continue to study, Anmol should help her out.


I have only these for now. Will tell you when I think of more.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


1. Anmol takes Pooja to see horror movie. Pooja isn’t scared but Anmol is about to pee his pants. Pooja makes fun of him because of that 😂


2. Therapy sessions should be included where they have really emotional talks. Pooja should open up to Anmol during the sessions.


3. Towel scene, the typical ones where boy comes out in towel only and the girl is there. A little nokh- jokh regarding that.


4. We should definitely have a karwachaut special episode where both confess their feelings for each other.


5. Panipuri challenge. Anmol wins and boasts for hours to Pooja. Pooja gets irritated (not in a annoyed way but like good irritated. You know what I mean?”


6. Pooja sleeps on Anmol’s shoulder. Anmol takes some time to appreciate her beauty.


7. If Pooja does continue to study, Anmol should help her out.


I have only these for now. Will tell you when I think of more.

@ red it's a great scenes. We will add it up.

2, 4 , 6, 7 are really good... 👍🏼

But not first one please🤣

Edited by Home786 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

We will shortlist all the suggestions together tomorrow and finalise scene and sequence for this week...

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