|SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 2| : CHAT CLUB (Note pg. 132 💌) - Page 100

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


I think it has to do with his love for Pooja. I mentioned it less than usual yesterday. And maybe itโ€™s also because of him sidelining Anmol and puting his feelings for Pooja over him. Also, I wasnโ€™t as actively participating in the serial writing like usual and I didnโ€™t really try on his dialouges and inner thoughts as much as I should have so maybe thatโ€™s why you sensed that something was missing.


Thank you for this feedback though. It really helps me know what people expect from Abir.

We want to see Abir in action mode than speaking to himself.

Why do I feel all the characters in the story are speaking to themselves rather than enactments.

The characters always speaks to themselves like typical Ekta vamps. Especially Pooja and Abir characters have the policy to speak to themselves.

They're so much similar.

Hence I ship Pooja and Abir.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Thank you Nithya but being a vamp is too tough for me ๐Ÿ˜†

Yeah you'll get to see emotional dejection of Anamika.

Inhumane acts ๐Ÿ˜’Okay I'll try to be powerful vamp ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜†

Thank you again dear

How was my dialogues from yesterday's episode?
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Of course Akka. Please feel free to share your opinions, reviews, suggestions, critics, Feedbacks etc.,.....


In fact, everyone has the right to share their opinions...


It will only help us to be better...

Why Pooja has to be so silent.

Want to see happy Pooja now.

Cute moments with Anmol.

Intense moments with Abir.

Tashn with Abir.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

How was my dialogues from yesterday's episode?

Yours dialogue were apt but you failed my plan ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Yours dialogue were apt but you failed my plan ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿ˜†

Bua aur Anamika ka tashn is fun to watch re Prit.

Bua's dialogue " Ye Chillam chilli Bahu"..๐Ÿคฃ

Waise Prit I have idea...

I will ask all the participants to suggest the scenes they wanna see in the upcoming weak. They can post their ideas from Monday to Wednesday here. We will shortlist the scenes on Thursday and add up in the precap with proper discussion. What say...?? You can post whatever scenes you wanna see from any character..

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Bua aur Anamika ka tashn is fun to watch re Prit.

Bua's dialogue " Ye Chillam chilli Bahu"..๐Ÿคฃ

Waise Prit I have idea...

I will ask all the participants to suggest the scenes they wanna see in the upcoming weak. They can post their ideas from Monday to Wednesday here. We will shortlist the scenes on Thursday and add up in the precap with proper discussion. What say...?? You can post whatever scenes you wanna see from any character..

It's a good idea Shaheen and our story will progress in a proper direction

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

It's a good idea Shaheen and our story will progress in a proper direction

Haina...

I will announce it then. Iss Shubhkariye ka aagman aap se hi shuru ho jaye...

Waise I can't get over the Vm re... It is really beautiful and soothing. My mom loved it yaar and conveyed her love for you..!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Haina...

I will announce it then. Iss Shubhkariye ka aagman aap se hi shuru ho jaye...

Waise I can't get over the Vm re... It is really beautiful and soothing. My mom loved it yaar and conveyed her love for you..!

OMG ๐Ÿ˜ณ Aunty loved my vm too ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Thank you for the love Shaheen ๐Ÿค—

I am really happy you liked the vm. Waise I was thinking of making two more vms one will be a funny vm and one I am thinking of making on Aaye ho meri zindagi me

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

OMG ๐Ÿ˜ณ Aunty loved my vm too ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Thank you for the love Shaheen ๐Ÿค—

I am really happy you liked the vm. Waise I was thinking of making two more vms one will be a funny vm and one I am thinking of making on Aaye ho meri zindagi me

Aye ho meri zindagi mein(female version) Please.
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Home786

Aye ho meri zindagi mein(female version) Please.

Yup female version especially that's line Meri maang yun hi bharna taare hazaar banke and Mujhe chodke na jaana waade hazaar karke

These lines would be apt for Rudhita nah ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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