|SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 2| : CHAT CLUB (Note pg. 132 💌) - Page 99

I messaged my dialogues to you on time.

Your posted my dialogues on my behalf.

Thank you @Home786 for help.

Respecting my work and understanding my absence for a 10mins.

Sorry for the collapse I did with my dialogues today.

Double post.

Thank you@Home786.

Good Morning all.

How did I do my role yesterday?

How was my dialogues?

Feedback please.

Needed for improvement.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

I will be leaving now shaheen. I might come back after like an hour but I am not sure.

Abir singhania@AnonymouslyS

You were different Abir yesterday all together.

We saw different Abir in 10th episode.

Something is missed badly In Abirs role yesterday.

Am I allowed to share the feedback of 10th episode?

Can I say something about yesterday's epi?

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Hi.

Abir singhania@AnonymouslyS

You were different Abir yesterday all together.

We saw different Abir in 10th episode.

Something is missed badly In Abirs role yesterday.

I think it has to do with his love for Pooja. I mentioned it less than usual yesterday. And maybe it’s also because of him sidelining Anmol and puting his feelings for Pooja over him. Also, I wasn’t as actively participating in the serial writing like usual and I didn’t really try on his dialouges and inner thoughts as much as I should have so maybe that’s why you sensed that something was missing.

Thank you for this feedback though. It really helps me know what people expect from Abir.

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Am I allowed to share the feedback of 10th episode?

Can I say something about yesterday's epi?

Of course you are. I would love to hear your feedback. It would actually help us if you do share your feedbacks.

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Am I allowed to share the feedback of 10th episode?

Can I say something about yesterday's epi?

In fact, everyone has the right to share their opinions...

It will only help us to be better...

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Has kyu rahi hai re😈 😆

Okay Shaheen I'm done for tonight.

You're doing your role great.

Especially your dialogues coming out of frustation is love.

I wanna see how will you react when you come to know about Anmol's feeling.

I want to see emotional dejection of Anamika.

How your revengeful mode will made you to do inhumane acts.

Powerpack vamp role want see in coming episodes.

Originally posted by: MishtiNew

It's time for me to go Saheen... Good night!!!

Would like to see some happy and cute moments now in upcoming episodes.

How this friendship takes a different turn.

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

Hey you're the only consistent character of the story.

You're doing your role great.

Especially your dialogues coming out of frustation is love.

I wanna see how will you react when you come to know about Anmol's feeling.

I want to see emotional dejection of Anamika.

How your revengeful mode will made you to do inhumane acts.

Powerpack vamp role want see in coming episodes.

Thank you Nithya but being a vamp is too tough for me 😆

Yeah you'll get to see emotional dejection of Anamika.

Inhumane acts 😒Okay I'll try to be powerful vamp 😈😆

Thank you again dear