RiAnsh SS: Tum Hi Aana (ch4-pg10)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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My take on the upcoming Teej track..


This is totally my imagination and has nothing to do with the upcoming Teej track. I hope no one will feel offended.


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Ch 1.


She holds her neck in pain,struggling to breath. Her eyes almost popping out of the sockets. She stumbles and falls on her knees. Foamy like substance spewing out from her mouth. Finally,loosing out the last inch of her remaining energy,she collapses and her head hits the rock solid ground.


Tears trickled down her cheeks from her doe shaped eyes. Her face had a sad smile and,subconsciously,her trembling hand touched his feet,symbolising a new bride to touch her husband's feet,as she broke her fast.


Sia's loud scream was enough to break the reverie. Vansh turned around and the sight infront was enough to give him the biggest shock of his life.


Words were long lost as he couldn't utter a single word. He went into a denial. His wife,Riddhima,laid down in the ground,blood spilling out from her mouth and nose. Her pink lips has turned blue due to the poison. He saw Sia and Angre,taking turns to rub the palms and feet of Riddhima. Angre immediately informed the hospital authorities.


Daadi was shaking Vansh to come out from the shock. Vansh still didnt speak a word. He is not able to come to terms with the sight infront of him. He held the rails of the balcony for support.


"Thud!!"


Daadi turned Vansh around and slapped him really hard.


"Vanshh!!!! Riddhima ko hospital leke jana hoga!!!" She screamed in pain,not being able to see her grand daughter-in-law like a lifeless body. She knew whatever she did was really wrong and Riddhima already accepted her mistake and agreed to accept any punishment. But now,all she was concerned for Riddhima..


Vansh bent down and carried Riddhima in his strong arms. He kept on muttering sweet nothings and pleaded to open her eyes.


He sat inside with Riddhima's head on his lap,while Sia sat,continuously rubbing Riddhima's already cold feet. She was also checking her pulse,from time to time. She didnt want to lose her. Though she had committed a grave mistake,but she also inspired her to walk again.. She helped her to get rid of that wheelchair she was confined with.


"Bhabhi,uth jaiye please!!! Dekho,hum aapko hospital le jarahe hai... Hum sab hai yahaan pe.. Uth jaao,Bhabhi.." Sia pleaded and started to cry.


Angre saw this from the front rearview mirror. It brought tears in his eyes. He couldn't see his Boss and his wife like this. He silently sent a prayer to Bhagwan to cure his Bhabhi.


Angre knew everything from the beginning. He saw his Boss suffer from the gravest heartbreak and now,he couldnt see him die.. He needs to tell the whole truth behind this incident to Vansh,but not now.. Only when the right time comes.


Precap: The Final Call.


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Index:


Ch 1 : Pg 1

Ch 2 : Pg 5

Ch 3 : Pg 8

Ch 4 :Pg 10

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Posted: 5 years ago
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resssssssssssssss


Great start. The moment i got interested it ended lol. I can't wait!

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Short but intriguing 😀

sounds promising too 🤗 ... can't wait to read more ☺️


PS : Daadi ne thapad kyu maara ... bechara Vansh 🥺 jk :P

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Amazing start😊. Can't wait to read the next part👏

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OMG!


Please upload the next part quickly. It is so amazing...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This one is intriguing .....really wanna know kya hua Ridhu ke saath ....plzzz udpt soon

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What an amazing start can't wait for next

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Wow. Wonderful reading. Please update soon

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Originally posted by: rachufan

What an amazing start can't wait for next


Thank you so much,Rachu ji ❤️

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Originally posted by: Anysia

Short but intriguing 😀

sounds promising too 🤗 ... can't wait to read more ☺️


PS : Daadi ne thapad kyu maara ... bechara Vansh 🥺 jk :P


Upcoming chapters will be long.. thank you so much.. Daadi slapped Vansh to bring him out of the shock.

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