first of all thank you for updating, i can understand with KSG's version of RB gone how the inspiration must have dwindled.
now for the analysis. it was a good chapter. all that introspect was needed, Menaka's flashbacks provide us with a different version of RB. Prerna's introspect allow her to progress as a character & realise her growing feelings for RB & provide the reader with the growth she deserved but never got. it'll be interesting to see whether how she realises these feelings & whether she acts upon them.
loved the fact that you give each character their moment to add to the story & portray their emotions well.
the icu scene was written very well. Meneka's feelings are relatable, she loves RB soo much but has made a mistake that he can't seem to forgive. it must be heart-breaking to be soo close to someone you love but not be able to actually be close, the phrase 'so close yet so far' comes to mind. i know that the end game is PreRish & we have more affinity towards P just because we know her but still heart feels sorry for M. Prerna has also become more independent & strong, loved the conversation she had with her mum. this is the progression a character realistically goes through (shame KZK never allowed her to do this)
can't wait for the next update. want to hear more of Prerna's conversation with a sleeping RB & her attempts to become friends with him once he awakens.
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