PreRish AT/EriRan |Thread #5 - Page 88

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

The idea is actually brilliant.

I've posted the drabble. Check it out and tell me what you thought 👉🏼👈🏼

Originally posted by: MR21

Why blame the Police officer, she didn't behave like Prerna Bajaj.

Bajaj in his love for her doesn't realize this.

Someone, please bring the indifference track soon😒

Just because bajaj Is in love with prerna and thinks she is some great business woman, does not mean the world( first nivi ,now policeman, the harvard assistant is nit yet convinced, as he keeps shaking his head in exasperation) has to agree with him.

Pre is the torch bearer of nepotism in kzk 😜😂

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

She follows odd-even scheme. 😆

I have a problem with the execution of the scene.

Instead of accusing him, she should have asked him the reason.

But no, this lady was busy in assuming things, crying, shouting, stating about her past love & his right on her.

Kya bakwaas hai, u lived with him for 8 years & still believe he would do something like this intentionally

Originally posted by: aryapdane

Drabble

I'm getting carried away but since inspiration has struck, it'll be a waste to not use it. I'm blatantly stealing from Shiva's idea so apologies for that.

The original idea proposed by Kia was brilliant. But, I must admit your execution elevated it and gave us one of the finest drabbles to read.

The drabble is the perfect depiction of Prerna's psyche. I'm in awe of the emotional complexities and the subtle sensuality this piece oozes. ☺️

I guess the inspiration behind a specific portion of the balcony scene was the OG show. Loved how you incorporated it here and added your own twists and turns. 😁

This deserves a separate thread.

Originally posted by: aryapdane

Drabble

I'm getting carried away but since inspiration has struck, it'll be a waste to not use it. I'm blatantly stealing from Forbidden's idea so apologies for that.

I've nothing to say to you, Prerna. I don't want anything to do with you. All I ever wanted from you was to be with you in all your happiness and sorrow. But I can't bear this anymore. For eight years, I've been with you, supporting you and you treated me like I didn't exist for you. And now you don't exist for me.

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This is so damn brilliant.

Absolutely loved it❤️

Originally posted by: aryapdane

I've posted the drabble. Check it out and tell me what you thought 👉🏼👈🏼

You have left me speechless.

This is terrific.

I am out of words.

❤️

Originally posted by: MR21

I have a problem with the execution of the scene.

Instead of accusing him, she should have asked him the reason.

But no, this lady was busy in assuming things, crying, shouting, stating about her past love & his right on her.

Kya bakwaas hai, u lived with him for 8 years & still believe he would do something like this intentionally

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

How do you manage to render me speechless every damn time? ☺️

The original idea proposed by Kia was brilliant. But, I must admit your execution elevated it and gave us one of the finest drabbles to read.

The drabble is the perfect depiction of Prerna's psyche. I'm in awe of the emotional complexities and the subtle sensuality this piece oozes. ☺️

I guess the inspiration behind a specific portion of the balcony scene was the OG show. Loved how you incorporated it here and added your own twists and turns. 😁

This deserves a separate thread.

I am so glad you liked it and you are too kind 😁

You are absolutely right about the balcony scene.. I love that scene so much and give it a twist of my own was especially enjoyable.

I have very high hopes from the indifference track and bhagwaan kare kisi ki nazar na lag jaaye. Jab shuroo hoga, TV mein nimboo mirchi laga k dekhungi 😂😂

Originally posted by: .SNOWWHITE.

The scene was supposed to be Bajaj holding her waist. An awkward reaction was needed. But Pres reaction came as someone pinching her 😆 .it happened with questioning too. Its the overacting that make us hate her more

@bold --Damn right

She was squirming aise ki I just face palmed. Itna OTT reaction ka kya zaroorat tha?

Originally posted by: aryapdane

Drabble

I'm getting carried away but since inspiration has struck, it'll be a waste to not use it. I'm blatantly stealing from Shiva's idea so apologies for that.

I've nothing to say to you, Prerna. I don't want anything to do with you. All I ever wanted from you was to be with you in all your happiness and sorrow. But I can't bear this anymore. For eight years, I've been with you, supporting you and you treated me like I didn't exist for you. And now you don't exist for me.

Ohhh Goddd...This is fantastic..Absolutely FAB.. It gave me all PreRish feels, Rishabh's hurt, Prerna's desperation everything everything hit the right chord.. And every emotion was felt right across...The closing shot was a sixer, Bajaj walked away, left Prerna stranded..Awesome....And this is how I want the situation to unfold in the show too..Brilliant drabble!!