Ariya FF : Perfectly Neutral #2 Chapter 9, Pg 8 - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Amazing update

Love it

Continue soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Shree is perhaps the person I connect with a lot since he does remind me if someone very imp in my life.

Feel for ri she is second guessing herself ..unable to guess who has him so she looks like she is gonna go to the dark side and make a deal with the pawn of the devil to find Arjun

Even Sam seems so worried ...

Saakshi seems bitter ...she must learn empathy

Wow by the way y did u feel it's boring

I love how u have layers for every character

Update soonish

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Posted: 5 years ago
#33

Superb. Continue soon. Thanks for pm

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Posted: 5 years ago
#34

superb

loved it

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#35

Wow...this story is so engaging....love it...but again it was short.... Really worried for arjun...don't know what will happen to him....

Hope riya find him soon....

Will be waiting for the next chapter eagerly....

Plz do update soon....

Ab firse ek mahina wait maat karwana plzzzzz....

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Posted: 5 years ago
#36

superb chapter

poor riya is hell worried for arjun🥺

it's been 5 days & they didn't get any clue abt arjun

1 part of riya still love arjun after all what happened in past😭

she even feel guilty for not having friendly conversation with arjun💔

thank god at least riya mind work in right direction👍🏼

on the other hand ETF also hell worried for arjun

sameer believe riya will bring arjun back😊

glad sameer send aisha to help riya😊

finally some clue abt arjun

so he was being followed

at last they found the guy who followed arjun👏

hopefully aisha will get info from that guy

uff what is that sakshi problem with riya?😡

without knowing riya she is judge riya😡

hope riya will find arjun soon he is in worst state😭

continue plz

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Posted: 5 years ago
#37

An update with lots of feelings, suspense, thrill... Enjoyed it a lot...

Plzz riya ko arjun jaldi mil jaye...

Nice percap ...Wondering who is the traitor in the precap...

Continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#38

Omg who kidnapped arjun n why??? Who is that lady???

Hope arjun won't become a drug addict

They are still clueless about the case

Omg riya is going to take help from underworld

Who is that man???

Awesome update

Cont soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: shail_j15

Amazing update again..... getting more interesting.. please continue soon

Thanks for commenting dear. Glad you liked it.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Shree is perhaps the person I connect with a lot since he does remind me if someone very imp in my life.

Feel for ri she is second guessing herself ..unable to guess who has him so she looks like she is gonna go to the dark side and make a deal with the pawn of the devil to find Arjun

Even Sam seems so worried ...

Saakshi seems bitter ...she must learn empathy

Wow by the way y did u feel it's boring

I love how u have layers for every character

Update soonish

Shree has reasons to he worried and I am glad you could relate to him.

For Ri, she wont keep calm until she finds him. She just want to bring him back. She can keep her regrets for later but first she will want to bring him back and by any means.

Well I thought it's boring cause I feel I am losing some bits and feel I have left something amiss but unable to figure out. And I felt the story is going way too monotonous nowadays.

I am really glad you find these characters demarcation. Thanks for your review dii🤗

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