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Posted: 5 years ago
#61

Too wonderful dear

Every parts all well written

Feeling sad for geet

Maan behavior towards geet are not good

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

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Posted: 5 years ago
#62

Hi Priya... do update.....

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Posted: 5 years ago
#63

Hi Priya... update when you can

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Posted: 5 years ago
#64

Shot 4


From where to start , not getting anything to.write

How can I convey my feelings like this

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Today am just standing in kitchen while working thinking about love marriage or arrange marriage

All have two sides

Love marriage

Two people meet and fall in love and end marriage happen

But after marriage family and that man whom you love plays different role.

First family already is angry on you, you snatched his son and make own

Now main part of MAN come how he take this

He going pressurize her you have to only adjust

Ek.toh maine tujhse shaadi.ki

Now u showing attitude

Ya he going understand everything peacefully and become the path which connect his family with her...this is same happen into arrange marriage too

But most husband only fails to protect or understand the wife

Tears going fall from.geet eyes before its fall she realise where she standing and stopped the thoughts for sometime...

In arrange marriage mother give own son to girl hand only for VANSH , if it's not going happen so soon... more problem start coming in your life.

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I dont get when u not able to leave husband wife alone for sometime except the bedroom time how she going live happily here,

U both gone around 6 now coming

1.5 hour lag gya

Jaroor kuch khane lage honge

Ya khi aur leke gyi hongi mere bete ko ye

Now am thinking my husband driving on road or we going by air

Can't you leave us alone for sometime

I want his attention

I.want some quality time alone outside from this 4 wall ..


Here this part ended ....

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Posted: 5 years ago
#65

hi Priya

thanks for updating


Shot 4

marvelous update.... greatly written

Indeed Love or arrange marriage have two sides.

Geet's thoughts are reasonable.

liked how the differences between love and arranged marriages were portrayed.

she wants to spend time with her husband.

feeling for Geet

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Posted: 5 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi Priya

thanks for updating


Shot 4

marvelous update.... greatly written

Indeed Love or arrange marriage have two sides.

Geet's thoughts are reasonable.

liked how the differences between love and arranged marriages were portrayed.

she wants to spend time with her husband.

feeling for Geet


Thanks dear for always being here

I know it's just so sort

But its random scenes which I write not like proper story

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Harr shadi khi yehi things hothey hai yaar We can’t expect anything from men they can’t take a stand can’t make everyone happy
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya_21


Thanks dear for always being here

I know it's just so sort

But its random scenes which I write not like proper story

no need to say thanks

well happy reading what you write

hope you will update your other stories as well

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Posted: 5 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: IMA9167

Harr shadi khi yehi things hothey hai yaarWe can’t expect anything from men they can’t take a stand can’t make everyone happy


Par aurat se toh yhi umeed hoti h na

She make everyone happy

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Posted: 5 years ago
#70

Nice parts

Feels like someone experienced this..

Waiting for more

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