Mishbir SS// Ghar kaha hai?// Pt 3 pdated pg4 (20/6) - Page 3

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Hello! So finally after what feels like eternity...part 3 is here! Hope I haven't lost you all in this long wait.

Without further adieu....enjoy😊

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PART 3:

Bg music playing—

Dono ne yeh tay kiya tha

Rehna humko sang hi tha

Duriya aayi darmiyaan kaise

Dardishome hain sitare

Huye alag raste hamare

Duriya aayi darmiyaan kaise

On her walk back home, Mishti softly cries as Abir’s words in the market continue to echo in her head. “It’s like my nightmare has come alive,” she sobbed. I thought if I told you the truth on KC night, you wouldn’t believe me aur tum mujhe chod dhoge. And aaj, wahi hua. I didn’t realise that by hiding the truth, I was risking the same nightmare. Mishti suddenly stopped in her track as she reached the gates of Mah house, she spotted a vendor walking past with those red balloons.

Saathiya mere main toh tere deewana tha

Saare Jahan se bagana tha

Teri dhuno ka tarana tha

Meanwhile Abir sat alone on his terrace, flipping through some photographs. The first photo, was a family picture of chotu Abir with his maa and baba.

https://imgur.com/QfXCcgC

Abir reminisced those times when his life felt perfect. Those times when his family felt complete. They were happy. At least that was what he believed. Glancing at his mother, his heart sank thinking of the betrayal she received from the man sitting next to them – Mehul Kapadia. I’m sorry maa. I’m so sorry for hurting you all these years. No matter how many times you and naanu kept telling me, that baba left us voluntarily, I was just not ready to accept it. Instead of trusting the family that was always with me, I constantly went out searching for the man who had never bothered to come back for me. But then when I found out that he really had returned, I was so overwhelmed I couldn’t pull myself together to see the truth. Par aap? Aap tho strong haina ma? You raised two young boys on your own. If only you had taken the time and effort to simply sit me down and explained the truth to me from your heart, we wouldn’t have drifted so far apart that we can’t even sense each other’s emotions. I love you maa, I really do, but I wish it was that simple. I wonder when you’ll understand that har rishta karida nahi ja sakti. Agar app mujhe sache dil se pyaar karti thi hai, tho aap mujhe sach pehle bataya hota.

As Abir’s eyes continued to well up with tears, he flipped to the next photograph. He ran his fingers gently across the glossy print, pretending he was caressing those soft cheeks. A small grin appeared on his face, as he observed the endearing smile in the picture, which reflected in those sparkling beady round eyes.

https://imgur.com/yHm5Zim

“Mishtee,” he softly sighed. I’m sorry yaar. You were simply being my best friend who understood me, who shared my pain and tried to console me. But tumne, mera best friend ne mujhe jhoot kaha. Kya woh sahi tha? You of all people should know better Mishti. I thought we both understood the value of truth and honesty. Why?.. kyu Mishti? Why did you feel the need to hide the truth and lie to me? Looking up at the moon peeping out from the shadow of the clouds, Abir asked "then how could you think I would accept your lies?”

Standing out on her balcony, Mishti softly cries as she gazes up at the vast darkness in the night sky. Unable to fall asleep and lost in deep thought, she silently speaks her heart out to the emerging moon. I know I made a huge mistake Abir. I shouldn’t have lied to you, but I did what I thought was right in that situation. It was so stressful not listening to my heart, that constantly screamed at me to tell you the truth, whilst my mind yelled at me to keep my mouth shut. It felt like hell. But I was just worried about you. I was worried about us. I was scared you wouldn’t believe me. I know it sounds crazy, but it’s true, I was just scared.

Still staring up at the moon, Abir said “I’ve always told you how much I trust you and believe you because that’s how much you mean to me.” I need you Mishti. I really need you right now. As he looked down towards the front entrance gate, he caught sight of those familiar red balloons. He walked down the terrace stairs, as Jugnu quietly signalled to him.

“Yeh lijiye bhaiyaa. Aap ke liye,” Jugnu handed over the bunch of balloons to him with small comforting smile and went inside.

As he peered at the balloons, he began to notice little scribbles on each of them. After looking a little more closely, he read the words 'I’m sorry' ☹. Abir held the balloons close to his chest sighing heavily “Mishtiii.”

Meanwhile Meenu who has been silently observing all this, begins to ponder as she stands at her balcony.

Mishti leaned against her bed, clenching her phone close to her heart, “Abir I know you’re already in a lot pain, and now I’ve I hurt you even more.”

https://imgur.com/w1oZp0q

She ruefully looked at the picture of him on the screen, and pleaded “I’m sorry Abir, I never wanted to hurt you. Just hear me out once. Give me one chance.”

Abir immediately starts searching for his phone. He checks his pockets and all around the garden and terrace, but can’t find it anywhere. Where is my phone? How am I supposed to contact her now? I need her. He stops to think and tries to recall calmly, he soon remembers reciting and sending Mishti his shayari in the morning. Abir rushes inside and up the stairs to his room, and shuffles anything and everything. Yet again in vain, his phone is nowhere to be found. The rest of the family wakes up to the hurried sounds from Abir’s room. Kunal, Parul, Nanu and Ketu come out to see Abir frantically dashing around his room and the house. They helplessly answer in denial when he asks them “Have any of you seen my phone?” They try to calm him down and comfort him,

“Kya hua Abir, kya dhund rahe ho itni raat ko?” Parul asked.

“Haan bhai, just sit down and take a few deep breaths” Kunal and Ketu added.

As Abir sits down with his head in his hands, the silence is broken by an unexpected ring. Jugnu picks up the landline phone and promptly joins the rest of the family. He gently taps Abir on his shoulder and hands over the incoming call.

“Mr Abir Rajvansh. Hum Inspector Kumar bol rahe hai. Kya aap police station aah sakte hai? Now?”

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Hopefully I've gained your interest back with that cliffhanger😉😆

Please comment and share your thoughts and any feedback (would really appreciate it) - those monologues of Abir and Mishti honestly took numerous weeks of trial and error and I hope I made some justice to their emotions.

Do stay tuned xx

Read all 3 parts Nandu. Really nice. Now please don't keep us hanging and update soon!

Nanduu....this is so heartwarming yaaar...u updated finally....😳😳

This is wonderful .....I so so love this story🤗🤗

wow nandu...

amazing twist...

mishbir self talks are awesome...

excited for next...

Heyyaaaa nandu. ....finally you updated this one , read the last two parts 😳

First of all take a bow 👏👏 For keeping the emotions so real and believable on both the sides abir and mishti and thanks a ton for giving those perfect moments to abir to bear the shock , pain all packaged in one incident...I so wish the makers could see your write up and realise how badly they messed up by not giving these heart warming scenes ❤️ and the little mishbirish touch ❤️☺️❤️

And twist in the tale .ab jaldi update kar na 😛😆🤗