#2 bawri piya ki,pt 14 on pg 99 updt on 23/1 - Page 28

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Emotional update

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Raman denies that he loves ishu

Ishu was devastated

She pleads and cried but Raman didn't listen and left but break down as he love her also

To get out of her thoughts he agree to get married but on marriage day he got to know what has happened to Ishita he left alter and goes to Ishita leaving behind everything

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PART 6

Karthik got up and saw the watch.

Karthik-raat ke 2.30 baj rahen hai,iss waqt kaun aa gaya .he thought and went to check the door ,while it was ringing continuously since last ten minutes breaking his sound sleep.

Karthik opened the door only to see a worried and tensed Raman standing there full of sweat due to the weather.

Karthik look at him thourougly and said-raman,is this u??

Raman -haan Karthik ,it's me only.

Karthik-tum yahan itni raat ko,tumhari aaj shaadi thi naa??

Raman-can I come in first??

Karthik-yes ofcourse,get in.he said and Raman walked in.

Raman look around and Karthik get him a glass of water.he forwarded it to Raman and he had it in a go.

Karthik-now tell me,tum yahan kaise??

Raman took a deep breath and said-i came to meet ishita.

Karthik-ishita,but why.tum usse kyun milna chahte ho??

Raman-i heard she is not good .

Karthik-haan yaar,kuch hi mahino mein mera pura ghar barbaad ho gaya .pehle maa-papa chale gaye,phir Ishita ke saath aisa ho gaya .u know she was disturbed since long,but I thought it's because of maa-papa's untimely death,but achanak,ek hafte pehle behosh ho gayi,I took her hospital,he was saying when he realised what he is talking.

Karthik-tum apni shaadi chod kar ishita ke baare mein kyun puchne aaye ho,he asked getting angry.

Raman-listen Karthik,jaisa tum samajh rahen ho waisa kuch nahi hai.he was saying when Karthik said-tum ho naa,jiski wajah se ishita ki yeh haalat hui hai.

Raman look down not able to lie and said-main kabhi nahi chahta tha uske saath aisa ho.

Karthik got angry hearing this and punched Raman hard on face saying-tu hi hai naa,tu hai woh ,jiski wajah se ishita ki yeh haalat hui hai .tu hi hai naa.

Raman-please Karthik ,batao mujhe usse kya hua,kahan hai woh,kaisi hai woh ,let me see her once.

Karthik-kyun,ab kya dekhne aaya hai,ki mar gayi yaa zinda hai meri behan.usne khud ko barbaad kar liya teri wajah se aur tu khushiyan mana raha tha,kaise kar sakta hai tu uske saath aisa.bol tune usse jhoothe sapne kyun dikhaye ,jab pure nahi kar sakta tha.mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha woh kis dukh se guzar rahi hai.jab hospital le kar pahuncha,toh pata chala meri behan drugs lene lagi hai .woh ishita joh doctor banna chahti thi,woh drugs ke andhere mein apni zindagi barbaad kar chuki hai.khatam ho chuki hai woh,tune khatam kar diya meri behan ko ,raman.u finished her ,u simple finished her,naa bolti hai ,naa hilti hai,pichle ek hafte se sirf ek pathar ki tarah padi hui hai.i feel like killing u for doing this to ishita.he said crying while Raman felt bad ,very bad at his wrong decision of leaving ishita.

With lots of courage he said-let me see her once,bas ek baar yaar.ek baar dekh lene de.

Karthik-u r not allowed to meet her,u wahin jaayega jahan tere jaise culprit ko hona chahiye,jail mein.he said and start calling the cops.

Raman-karthik sunn naa,ek baar mujhe usse mil lene de,phir jahan bhejna ho bhej dena.please tell me ,woh kis hospital mein hai.mujhe usse milna hai, Karthik please,bol naa ishita kahan hai.

Karthik -stop ur drama,I will not allow u to meet her,even see her.tumne usse dhokha diya,tabhi uski aisi haalat ho gayi.mujhe pehle hi samajh jaana chahiye tha,jab woh teri shaadi ka card dekh kar upset hui thi,main toh itna bewakoof hoon,ki tab bhi nahi samjha when everyone told me that u left ur wedding in mid ,but ab sab samajh gaya .tujhe jab lagaa ki ishita ne agar kuch bol diya toh tujh par police case ban sakta hai,tu usse khamosh karne aa gaya,but I will not let it happen.tujhe abhi arrest karwata hoon,police aa rahi hai,don't worry .

Raman-jisse bulana hai,bula lena.but first let me meet her,woh ghar mein hai kya,yaa phir kisi hospital mein,kis hospital mein hai,please tell me.he said again but Karthik was not ready to hear anything.neither he was telling anything to Raman nor letting him go.

Seeing no other option,he pushed karthik and ran out.karthik ran behind him but he was fast enough.karthik couldn't catch him ,so start waiting for cops,but as it was really late, nobody came and he slept waiting.

On other hand,Raman was thinking where to find ishita and how.he settled on a bench and start thinking ways to reach ishita .he was getting restless thinking about her and finally decided to do the unthinkable.

He slowly walked behind Karthik's bungalow and peeped into his bedroom.seeing everyone sleeping ,he went inside the house through the window and start searching for any hospital file or prescription to find where is ishita now .

After searching for long,he finally got a file where the name of the hospital was written.

Raman-arya mental hospital.he said and read the address .

Soon he left the place and took a cab to reach the hospital.

Raman-i know I did very wrong but mere paas aur koi raasta nahi tha,I wanted to reach her asap.waise bhi meri wajah se bahut takleef mein hai woh,uski takleef toh shayad kam naa kar paaun,but usse mil kar usse dekh kar ek baar maafi toh maang hi lunga.he was thinking feeling helpless.

After an hour ,he reached the hospital and went to reception.

Raman-i wanna meet ishita iyer.

Reception look at him and said looking at the watch-its not visiting hour,moreover we don't allow strangers to meet the pateints.let the day start,u can take permission from her brother and then can meet her.

Raman-when her brother came here last??

Rec-four days ago.

Raman-tabse milne nahi aaya??

Rec-no,waise bhi she is just a dead body,no movement at all.bas dil ne dhadkana bandh nahi kiya hai,warna dimaag ne toh saath chod hi diya hai.

Raman-listen maam,I really wanna see her,please let me go.

Rec- it's not allowed sir.

Raman took out a two thousand ruppee note and said-ab.

Receptionist look at him for a while while he just pleaded.

Rec-but only for five minutes.

Raman-ten minutes.

Receptionist said ok and called the compounder.she told him to take Raman to ishita's room.

Raman-how is she??

Compounder-very bad,hosh hi nahi hai.doctor kehte hai drug overdose ki wajah se saare nerve cell damage ho gaye hai,but I think it's love overdose,not drug overdose.kisi se bahut pyaar karne ki saza mili hai usse.

Raman felt bad hearing him and said-aisa kyun lagta hai tumhe??

Compounder-uski aankhen kisi ka raasta dekhti hai,kabhi bandh hi nahi hoti.pathar ki tarah padi hai but nazaron mein hai kisi ka intezaar.aapko lag raha hoga,pagal kuch bhi bakk raha hai,but u too can feel it ,sahab.she is waiting for her special one.he said and open the door for Raman.

Compounder-sirf dus minute.

Raman nodded and walked inside with a heavy heart.his heartbeat was almost stop while he was feeling nervous in seeing her condition.though he wanted to see her but seeing her in such bad condition in real was very hard for him.

He walked inside and finally saw her.she was laying on the bed with lost of machines attached to her while her eyes were on the open like waiting for someone .the spark of her eyes were gone while her lips were dry without any water.her body was lean and pale from earlier and her face was filled with wrinkles and dark patches.

His eyes got moist seeing her condition and he went to her.he look at her face and without waiting for another second he hugged her tight.he rested his head on her front and burst into tears.

Raman-i am sorry,I am sorry,I am sorry ,ishita.maine tumhare saath bahut galat kiya,mujhe nahi pata tha mera inkaar tumhe iss kadar tod dega,warna main kabhi tumhare saath aisa nahi karta.sach kahun toh tumse alag ho kar main bhi khush nahi tha,but har baat yahin socha ki tum bhool chuki hogi mujhe,aur sahi bhi hai.i wasn't good for u.har baar yahin socha ki bahut bada hoon tumse,tumhare laayak nahi hoon,but yeh samajh hi nahi paaya,ki tumhe sirf main chahiye tha,jaisa hoon waisa hi.i am sorry Ishita,I destroyed u.barbaad kar diya maine tumhe,tumhare bhale ke baare mein sochta raha aur tumhari zindagi barbaad kar di,I am sorry,ishita.i am really sorry.he was saying and crying when he heard,raaa,raan,raaman.

Raman raised his head in shock and saw her looking at him.

Raman smiled fully and said-tumne mujhe bulaya,tumne mera naam liya,ishita bolo naa,tumne mera naam liya.

Ishita closed her eyes in affirmation making Raman shocked and pleasantly surprised also.

Raman got happy and kissed her forehead while she closed her eyes feeling his touch.

He got happy and called for a doctor.

After ten minutes,a doctor came and asked Raman,how he came inside.

Raman-i will tell u everything,u first check her.she took my name.

Doc-aise kaise,she was responding since last week.

Raman-but she just responded.she even closed her eyes to confirm that she took my name.

Doctor look at her and she said-raaman.

Doc-omg,she is actually responding.i gotta chech this,agar inke dimaag mein abhi bhi logon ko pehchaane ki ability hai,then she can be fine .agar inke dimaag ka koi bhi part undamaged hua toh inke thik hone ke chances hai .he said and soon compounders took ishita for further test while Raman smiled finally hearing about a chance of her getting well.

That's all for now,enjoy.

Finally, hopefully she gets better n tells kartik that Raman is not wrong!

Superb update

Nd emotional too

Ishita was waiting for Raman

Nd she respond

Hope she will get well soon

Eagerly waiting for next part

Plz plz continue soon

Worrisome Teaser

Karthik now wants to call the police

and get Raman arrested

Part 6

Emotional Update

I do not blame Karthik . he lost his parents

now he has only his sister left with his small family

and he feels guilty and afraid that he did not realize

what was happening with Ishita

but he had notice when Ishita found out Raman is getting

married she fainted and was rushed to hospital

and that's when Karthik found out that Ishita is using drugs

Raman though feeling helpless and guilty finds out where

Ishita is and comes to the hospital

he plead and tells Ishita why he denied her

and she responded to him by calling his name

Hawwww this is not fair

Raman tiba ahsani se ishu ko nehi paa sakte.😢

I thougt use this papad belna parega, kemon ishu ne tini ahsani se use pechhan liya, response kiya. This is not done.😒☹️