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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kendrix

Nandu❤️


that was just MISHBIRILICIOUS

(Meera still trying hard to come back from MISHBIR haven☺️ to earth so that i cud thank my pyaari bandhu for sending me there😛)


first things first...Abir ne Mishti ki pyaari cheez churakar chupaliye😲😆so Mishti's traits have started rubbing off on him😆..seems like he s forgetting his own seek chori karna bhoori baath hai😉...par woh toh humaari neend mei bhi hoshiyaar AIBER hai😎..who came up with an adorable idea to solve her problem....


he doesnt leave any chance to tease her😆..does he?...

..my poor Mishtu😳...i can see glimpses of Abir's 'A' game in ur write up yaara..(dis s wat he originally meant tosmiley36...i guess)...humaara naughty Awbir☺️..


ofcourse..he s #hubby goals❤️..immediately apologising as he realises ussne kuch zyada thang kara dhiya uski pyaari biwi kho😳..


shukar hai aapki write up mei abir ki kiss-mat bahuthi accha hai☺️


lovvvveed..just loveeed it Nandu❤️😳..thank u for such a treat as soon as I get up🤗..eagerly looking forward to ur nxt piece⭐️


ps--- waise..meine bhi kuch likh daali 😛..thanks to d multiple adorable MISHBIR as parents posts on SNS😆..

aapke write up ke thara amazing to bilkul nahi..par phir bhi humaari bennaas kho pasand aaya...humaari aasha hai aapko bhi pasand aaye..

so if u vud like to check it out,here it s,

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153225583...

in AT 88 pg 95

🤗😳

*nandu sending you thankyou balloons to help you land safely from mishbir heaven*😆


haha yes Abir has also become a furniture chor😉😎 #sangat ka asar but he is a cheeky smart cookie with his 'A' game in full swing😎👍🏼

Okaay, that gives the idea for the next OS to be Mishti's 'M' game thanks yaar👍🏼

don't worry mishbir's kiss-mat in our imagination will always be better than the show😆


arre haan yaar, I had read it in the AT. It was awesome!👍🏼👏 Well done, maybe a small tip would be to break up the paragraphs a little more to clearly distinguish between the dialogues and narrative

Besides that, I loved the cute romantic moments you described so well👏 #bring some more

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Posted: 5 years ago
#22

Nandu this was soooo cute 🤗

Loved it totally

Stool searching 😆zaroorat to hai 🤣

Mazaa Aa gaya padhke

Thanks for writing this ,it was beautiful 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi Nandu,

Have enjoyed this os thoroughly.

Love the MishBir Romance n nok jhok.

If u have written any other MishBir FF pls let me know...thanks

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Posted: 5 years ago
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So sorry this update took me sooo long😒. Writing many different pieces for MISHBIR (simultaneously) whilst on breaks from studying for exams, so thoda slow hai process😉. But it's finally here and I hope it was worth the wait👍🏼.


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Mishti's surprise


Walking down an unusually empty and quiet road, Mr and Mrs Rajvansh admired the dark night sky twinkling with stars. With her head rested against his shoulder and their arms linked together, they peacefully strolled their way back home after a big night out.

“accha hua, transport ki strike hui haina? At least we got an excuse to spend more time together,” Abir said.

“haan Abir, it’s been so long since we spent a night like this. Just you, me and your favourite companion.” Mishti replied

Tilting his head away, Abir asked, “Tumhara alawa, mera kaun favourite companion?”

Mishti instantly replied, “Taarein (stars) ofcourse. Tum hi tho kehthe ho.

Abir just smiled back and couldn’t help shaking his head watching Mishti giggle. He squeezed her hand tightly with his and gave a quick peck on her palm. A little while later, they began to walk up a steep hill, and soon Abir looked back to find her trailing a few steps behind. He looked down to notice her feet were becoming red from standing and walking in those big heels for hours.

“Abiiir, I can’t go anymore. My feet are killing me,”Mishti sighed. She slumped on to the nearest bench, and began removing her heels.

“Arre yaar, why do you do this to yourself? I told you not to wear heels. Ab dekho?” Abir kindly scolded her. “You just don’t appreciate our accha khasa height difference at all” moaned Abir teasingly.

Mishti pursed her lips and rolled her eyes, at her ajeeb husband and his ajeeb baatein. “haan haan ok. But how could I not dress up for tonight? Mera hubby “entrepreneur of the year” ka award jo mil raha tha, I wanted it to be special.” Mishti replied.

Abir raised his eyebrow and stared back at his wife asking, ‘seriously?’

“Oh come on yaar, the feet pain is nothing! Anything for my hubby” and gave him a big child-like smile. Suddenly it transformed into a pout, Mishti wiggled her index finger and said, “No no no. I’m sorry” pointing at the tall man standing in front of her, she corrected “not my husband…THE entrepreneur of the year,” Mishti winked.

Abir rolled his eyes ‘whatever’ but couldn’t help smiling sheepishly at his wife’s childish nautanki. Before reaching for her hand, Abir took a step back and asked hesitantly, “hang on a sec, did you have something to drink at the party?”

Mishti’s eyes immediately popped out like a deer caught in front of headlights. She started to dart her eyes from left to right and turned away to avoid his gaze. From the corner of her eyes, she could still feel his glare waiting for her answer. She softly confessed, “hmm…I may have had a shot or two,” slightly biting her lip. She then cautiously turned around and tried to read his face for any reaction. Not before long, they both burst into laughter together, breaking the moment of silence. Abir forwarded his hand signalling ‘chalo get up’. Mishti grabbed her heels in one hand, and held her husband’s palm in another. But before she could lay her bare foot on the cool concrete ground, Abir interrupted,

“Arre kya kar rahi ho? I’m not letting you walk in those sore feet all the way home.”

“It’s okay Abir, I feel better walking without them anyway.”

“Yeah I know. But I’ve got a better idea,” as he replied Abir swiftly lifted her by her waist and placed her up on the bench and turned his back to her. Before Mishti could respond, her arms were securely wrapped around her his neck.

“A-abir! Wait!” Mishti squealed. “As much as I would love to have this piggy-back ride now, I can’t.”

Abir turned around to see her pointing at her outfit. He had already noticed earlier this evening; how beautiful she was in that gorgeous dress. Although he had won a prestigious award, he just couldn’t take his eyes off the ‘prize’ (not trying objectify women here) standing in front of him in the shining moonlight. So, he took this chance, to just have an extra good look at his wife. Of course, her natural beauty meant she could pull of any look. But there was just something these flowery dresses that he always liked and misses them after their marriage. It reminds him of the Mishti he fell in love with- simple, seedha saadha lekin bohut khubsoorat

-click here to see pyaari Mishti's dress-

Meanwhile, Mishti snapped her fingers in front of her husband’s lost face and said, “Hellooo, Mr Ajeeb rajvansh, kaha koh gaye ho?” Abir immediately shook his head out of his trance and without saying a word, he simply removed his coat and placed it around Mishti’s shoulder. She just smiled coyly and watched Abir return to his position. She quickly secured her arms back around his shoulders and in one swift motion jumped on to his back, whilst his strong arms supported her legs around his hips.

Ensuring she felt comfortable, Abir gently tossed her up and asked, “Chalein wifey?”

Mishti squeezed her arms around his neck and gave him a quick tight hug before cutely squealing “Yes! Chalo hubby.”

And they continued their journey home together under the sparkling night sky.


-end of part 1-

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ha I know it was anti-climactic😆 So stay tuned for part two for the actual surprise (don't worry you won't have to wait this long for the next update😊)

Part 2 shall be out very soon. I'll post a teaser perhaps tonight or tomorrow.




Edited by yrhpk_aus - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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~~ Res for Part 2 ~~

TEASER:

Mishti slowly cat-walked down the stairs, and playfully questioned

“main kya Shahrukh Khan hu?

“Aishwariya rai hu?

“Katrina kaif hu?”

Abir on the other hand, was too mesmerised to even blink let alone respond to her questions. So, she leaned in continuing her routine game and whispered, “tho itni hairan (shocked) kyu ho?” and teasingly closed her husband’s dropped jaw.

Edited by yrhpk_aus - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_love

Hi Nandu,

Have enjoyed this os thoroughly.

Love the MishBir Romance n nok jhok.

If u have written any other MishBir FF pls let me know...thanks

Originally posted by: Nikki_love

The link is not working

Hi Nikki😊

Firstly extremely sorry for my horribly late reply.

Thankyou and glad you liked my writing (check out the newest one above)😊


which link were you trying?

I've only written a couple of other mishbir OS/FF

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/yeh-rishtey-hai-pyaar-ke/5142509/mishbir-ss-ghar-kaha-hai-pt-3-pdated-pg4-20-6 (part 3 will be out very soon)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/yeh-rishtey-hai-pyaar-ke/5144729/mishbir-os-inner-voices

Both threads have been locked due to my terribly slow update😛

So if you prefer wattpad then you can check them out here

https://www.wattpad.com/story/211432329-mishbir-ss-ghar-kaha-hai

https://www.wattpad.com/story/211620117-mishbir-os-inner-voices


Hope you like them; and I will be coming with many more mishbir FF/OS stories soon

xx

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: yrhpk_aus


THE END


Thankyou thankyou very much for reading, I really hope you liked this little random one-shot.

Do like and comment below your thoughts and maybe an appropriate title for this one👍🏼

Let me know if you have any suggestions for topics I should write on.

And stay tuned for hopefully some more mishbir snippets in the near future😃🤗

Love you all❤️

Stay safe and take care❤️

xxx


Omg omg omg nandu ☺️☺️☺️ I had no idea , you are writing a snippet series...vo bhi itni dhaasu...this is totally misbbir, can imagine everything playing in front of me , the details that you have added ...wooohoooo...serial mein pata nahi ayega bhi ya nahi ab , but you made them kiss finally ☺️ this was totally mishbirish!!🥳🥳 It's super se bhi uparrrrr guruji


Jab they met , I mean ajeeb rajvansh, uski angry chroni and stool ka substitute....mishti should often use stool ka substitute and not stool 😉😆


Heading to read the next one now .....

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Waiting for the next part 😊

Edited by angelfire78 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Onyourface


Omg omg omg nandu ☺️☺️☺️ I had no idea , you are writing a snippet series...vo bhi itni dhaasu...this is totally misbbir, can imagine everything playing in front of me , the details that you have added ...wooohoooo...serial mein pata nahi ayega bhi ya nahi ab , but you made them kiss finally ☺️ this was totally mishbirish!!🥳🥳 It's super se bhi uparrrrr guruji


Jab they met , I mean ajeeb rajvansh, uski angry chroni and stool ka substitute....mishti should often use stool ka substitute and not stool 😉😆


Heading to read the next one now .....

guruji🤗

late aaye lekin durust aaye haha although you were late to the first edition, you're the first one here for the second update👍🏼😊


aww thankyou yaar. Glad you liked it😊😳

hehe the substitute should definitely become a regular routine☺️


Yes, waiting for your review - part 2 shall be out soon😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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nandu...

mishti's 3 questions are awesome...

waiting for update...

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