My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 50

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Kar le mann marziyan☺️🤣

Yaad dila diya...uska extended version tha yaha toh☺️

Why I feel that you were not ready with update but since tumhe mineil fever chadha tha you wrote an update quickly to get it out of your brain🤣 am i right🤣

Mineilicious update it was....kahi bhi shuru ho jaye hain ye....becahri arya🤣 wo samajh rahi hai wo jeet gayi par khel to yaha mineil khel gaye🤣☺️

You are so. Right anjali... Actually I wanted to write something on mineil like their discussion.... But as.my head was full. Of. Mineil moment I just wrote it down here..... 🤣🤣🤣

Khiladi khel khel gaya aur behno ko pata bhi nahi chala.... 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Part 30

Mini entered haveli and saw arya was playing around…..andwent to her….

 

M. oye chutanki…bada khel rahi hai…homework ho gaya kya….

A. Kya veer balika humesha homework homework karti rehti ho…chalona khelte hai….

M. Acha beta…khelna hai madam ko….no pehle hoework then khelna

A. pakka keholgi na agar mein homework finish kar lu to….

M. haa baba…now finish your homework.

 

Neil comes home just then and see the sisters havingchatting over the homework…

 

N. Kya chal raha hai…

A. Neil….come come…hum na khelenge ok…

N. Abhi

M. Nahi…madam ke homework khatam karne ke baad…

N. oh to thik hai…chalo then complete your homework….phirkhelenge….

 

 

Soon arya completed her homework and was eagerly waitingfor mini and neil to play….

 

A. Veer Balika……Neil….kaha ho….aao na….

M. haa baba….aa rahi hoon,,,,

N. yes choti madam…aa gay mein boliye kya khelna hai…..

A. haa like last time aankh micholi khelte hai na….

M. phir se wahi …chutanki …

A. please na….

N. acha chalo…..

A. eene, meene…minimo…..

M. yay…is baaar tum ho chor….

A. hato …mujhe laga tum chor banogi…

N. choti madam ab to aapko hi banna hai chor….

A. ok chalo patti bandho….

 

Mini ties the cloth on arya’s eyes and twirls her arya begansto walk….Neil had something in his mind….he held mini ‘s hand and dragged herto the corner where arya cant reach….

 

M. kya kar rahe ho neil…

N. wahi jo uss din adhoora reh gaya tha…

M. kab…

N. uss din jab khel rahe the aur arya ki wajah se beech mereh gaya…wohi…

 

Minni blushed thinking about the day…its true that ifarya wouldn’t have got scared neil would have done what he wanted….

 

M. to abhi karoge…pagal ho…arya ne dekha na humari classlegi pakka…

N. Nahi dekhegi…aur aise chori chupe karne me thrill hai….

M. You are mad neil oberoi…

N. yeah for you….

M. Neil..tum na….

N. aha…to mini madam ko sharmana bhi aata hai…

M. Neil…

N. bolo….

M. arya aa jayegi….

N. mujhe mera desert dedo aur phir normal khel khel lenge…

M. Please neil…

 

Neil leaned on her to claim her lips….mini denied firstbut later she gave in and closed her eyes….seing her permission he just tookher lips…first h tasted her lipstick soon mini responded back by giving him th wayin…. while kissing…his hands were wandering all over her body inside her top whileshe clutched his hair by pulling him more towards her…his touch made burnt herbody with passion and her more crave for him and his taste …….he bit her lowerlip making her moan his name which turned him more crazy…… he gave one morebite and licked the same place soothing her and make her crave more….she againmoaned his name and her clutch on his hair became stronger bcoz of passion……thenshe unbuttoned few of his shirt’s buttons and caressed his bare chest, his bareback……they were savouring the taste of their lips, tounge…. soon they broke thekiss in lack of oxygen….they were standing resting their heads on each othersand breathing heavily…….and were smiling at each other inmidst of taking theoxygen…….Arya got to know about them bcoz of their heavy breathing sound….

 

A. yay got you….

 

Mini and neil got scared as mini condition was not goodas her dress and her hair was all messed up neil’s condition was not less….bcoz of their passionate kiss….Neil turned to see arya was standing with blind onher eyes and dancing as she caught them….that was the time when they made theirhair properly set and mini made her dress also even…before arya took off thecloth on her eyes….

 

N. oho choti madam…aaj bhi aap hi jeet gayi……

To be continued....

Tharki update

Loved it

Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

Tharki update

Loved it

Thanks madam.... 🤗

Ye dil mange more

Update🤣

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Ye dil mange more

Update🤣

I know 😆

But thought of writing yesterday kal I was not well so update ready nahi hai.... But promise kal karungi.... Please bear with me

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

I know 😆

But thought of writing yesterday kal I was not well so update ready nahi hai.... But promise kal karungi.... Please bear with me

Will be waiting for the update. 

Take care

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

I know 😆

But thought of writing yesterday kal I was not well so update ready nahi hai.... But promise kal karungi.... Please bear with me

Dont take stress and take care of yourself

Will wait for update

Part 31

After  playing fora while the trio had dinner and minni made arya sleep and when she came up neilwas standing at the balcony waiting for her…

M. Arey tum soye nahi…

N. nahi…tumhara wait kar raha tha…

M. mera…why…

N. don’t you know why…

M. Neil….no wild ideas okk….

N. oh come on…I am not horny all the time…

M. ah thank god…warna …..

N. Mini…

M. ok….bolo kuch bolna tha tumhe….

N. haa…wo…are you happy…

M. don’t I look happy….

N. yaar batao na…

M. I am happy neil…infact very happy….aakhir I am free frommy past….kya hua tumhe….

N. no nothing…I jut wanted to listen from you…..

M. ab khush…

N. haa….ok then I will go…

Neil was leaving but he was stopped by minni by entwiningher baby finger with his….

N. Kya hua….

M. thodi der aur ruk jao…

N. Kyun….kal subah is chef ko restaurant me report karna haimadam….

M. koi nai…leave le lena…tumhari boss ko message kar dena….

N. Oho…meri boss Hitler hai kya pata naukri se hi na nikalde…

M. usko to mein dekh lungi….

They burst out into laughter  on their banter……

N. u know what…tum ek dum biwi jaise behave kar rahi ho…..

Mini’s smile went away slowly when she heard what neil said…seeingher like this ….neil got tensed and

N. Okay okay…I take my words back….i think I should takeyour leave….

Saying neil turns back and starts leaving again…..butagin he was stopped as minni called him from behind…..he turned to see and was confusedwith the view he got….Minni was on her knees….

N. Minni…kya hua….

M. I hate you Neil oberoi…..

Neil had a broad smile on his face when he heard minni…..

M. I hate you neill oberoi for being so nice to me and arya….ihate you neil oberoi for being a support system for me….I hate you neil oberoifor loving me unconditionally that you took all my responsobilities…

N. I hate you too mini madam and I will always hate you….

Minni extended her left hand asking…

M. Will you marry me Neil oberoi…

Neil was spell bound….he couldn’t believe where  he was just waiting for her to accept his lovebut here she proposed him for marriage……he couldn’t believe his luck thatfinally she accepted him….he was just looking at her…..

M. Neil….Neil….arey jaldi bolo….mera per dard ho raha hai…

N. Don’t you know my answer mini madam….

M. oh come on neil oberoi…now don’t angry me ok….

N. Really mini madam…agar mera jawab no hua to….

M. to mein tumse zabardasti shaadi kar lungi…..

N. Oh my god….i a scared now…

M. Neil you are testing my patience….

N. tum mera jawab jaanti ho minni….i want you…I want you bymy side life long….you are my soulmate….

Saying he gave his hand on her and pulled her to him…….minniwas shocked by the jerk…..

To be continued......

AWESOMEEEEE

MINI PROPOSED 

Loved it. Absolutely loved it. 

I always wanted mini to.propose to Neil. 

I can't wait for when Miniel will tell Arya. 

Pl have Arya tease Miniel, specially mini. 

 I want them back .I want this scene