My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 49

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved the miniel moment

and how everyone knows miniel love each other when they have not confessed

It would be fun to see miniel struglling to tell everyone about their relation, everyone being stern, even arya and then teasing the two of them. 

I specially want arya to tease miniel a lot. she was the first one to want miniel together 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

Another amazing update..

Finally things sorted out..

Embarrassed Minni😂

Loved it❤️

Continue soon


Thanks. Khushi.... 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Mineil moment in the kitchen❤️

Dadu maaf karenge ke nahi....bhav khayenge thoda toh😆

Mineil confession kab hoga


I wanted to see such scene of them. In restaurant isiliye likh dala...


Dadu thoda bhav to khayenge... Par maaf bhi kar denge... 😆


Hoga confession.... Patience.... 😆


Glad u liked it.... 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti_luvs_msk

Loved the miniel moment

and how everyone knows miniel love each other when they have not confessed

It would be fun to see miniel struglling to tell everyone about their relation, everyone being stern, even arya and then teasing the two of them. 

I specially want arya to tease miniel a lot. she was the first one to want miniel together 


Yeah you are right sabko pata hai but unhe lagta hai ki koi nahi jaanta... Pyaar me pagal hai dono....


Thanks yaar... Glad u liked it.... 

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Posted: 3 years ago

MiNeil moment  when will they confess ?. waiting 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Krithzz

MiNeil moment  when will they confess ?. waiting 


thanks krithzz..... 🤗



Hoga confession wait.... 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 30


Mini entered haveli and saw arya was playing around…..andwent to her….

 

M. oye chutanki…bada khel rahi hai…homework ho gaya kya….

A. Kya veer balika humesha homework homework karti rehti ho…chalona khelte hai….

M. Acha beta…khelna hai madam ko….no pehle hoework then khelna

A. pakka keholgi na agar mein homework finish kar lu to….

M. haa baba…now finish your homework.

 

Neil comes home just then and see the sisters havingchatting over the homework…

 

N. Kya chal raha hai…

A. Neil….come come…hum na khelenge ok…

N. Abhi

M. Nahi…madam ke homework khatam karne ke baad…

N. oh to thik hai…chalo then complete your homework….phirkhelenge….

 

 

Soon arya completed her homework and was eagerly waitingfor mini and neil to play….

 

A. Veer Balika……Neil….kaha ho….aao na….

M. haa baba….aa rahi hoon,,,,

N. yes choti madam…aa gay mein boliye kya khelna hai…..

A. haa like last time aankh micholi khelte hai na….

M. phir se wahi …chutanki …

A. please na….

N. acha chalo…..

A. eene, meene…minimo…..

M. yay…is baaar tum ho chor….

A. hato …mujhe laga tum chor banogi…

N. choti madam ab to aapko hi banna hai chor….

A. ok chalo patti bandho….

 

Mini ties the cloth on arya’s eyes and twirls her arya begansto walk….Neil had something in his mind….he held mini ‘s hand and dragged herto the corner where arya cant reach….

 

M. kya kar rahe ho neil…

N. wahi jo uss din adhoora reh gaya tha…

M. kab…

N. uss din jab khel rahe the aur arya ki wajah se beech mereh gaya…wohi…

 

Minni blushed thinking about the day…its true that ifarya wouldn’t have got scared neil would have done what he wanted….

 

M. to abhi karoge…pagal ho…arya ne dekha na humari classlegi pakka…

N. Nahi dekhegi…aur aise chori chupe karne me thrill hai….

M. You are mad neil oberoi…

N. yeah for you….

M. Neil..tum na….

N. aha…to mini madam ko sharmana bhi aata hai…

M. Neil…

N. bolo….

M. arya aa jayegi….

N. mujhe mera desert dedo aur phir normal khel khel lenge…

M. Please neil…

 

Neil leaned on her to claim her lips….mini denied firstbut later she gave in and closed her eyes….seing her permission he just tookher lips…first h tasted her lipstick soon mini responded back by giving him th wayin…. while kissing…his hands were wandering all over her body inside her top whileshe clutched his hair by pulling him more towards her…his touch made burnt herbody with passion and her more crave for him and his taste …….he bit her lowerlip making her moan his name which turned him more crazy…… he gave one morebite and licked the same place soothing her and make her crave more….she againmoaned his name and her clutch on his hair became stronger bcoz of passion……thenshe unbuttoned few of his shirt’s buttons and caressed his bare chest, his bareback……they were savouring the taste of their lips, tounge…. soon they broke thekiss in lack of oxygen….they were standing resting their heads on each othersand breathing heavily…….and were smiling at each other inmidst of taking theoxygen…….Arya got to know about them bcoz of their heavy breathing sound….

 

A. yay got you….

 

Mini and neil got scared as mini condition was not goodas her dress and her hair was all messed up neil’s condition was not less….bcoz of their passionate kiss….Neil turned to see arya was standing with blind onher eyes and dancing as she caught them….that was the time when they made theirhair properly set and mini made her dress also even…before arya took off thecloth on her eyes….

 

N. oho choti madam…aaj bhi aap hi jeet gayi……


To be continued....

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Posted: 3 years ago

Mazaaaaa aa gaya 

This was awesome

Miniel kahi bhi shuru ho jaate hai. 

One day Arya will catch them. 

Loved it. Absolutely amazing

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Posted: 3 years ago

Kar le mann marziyan☺️🤣

Yaad dila diya...uska extended version tha yaha toh☺️


Why I feel that you were not ready with update but since tumhe mineil fever chadha tha you wrote an update quickly to get it out of your brain🤣 am i right🤣


Mineilicious update it was....kahi bhi shuru ho jaye hain ye....becahri arya🤣 wo samajh rahi hai wo jeet gayi par khel to yaha mineil khel gaye🤣☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti_luvs_msk

Mazaaaaa aa gaya 

This was awesome

Miniel kahi bhi shuru ho jaate hai. 

One day Arya will catch them. 

Loved it. Absolutely amazing


Thanks shruthi.... 🤗


MiNeil hai hi aise they get started where ppl. Don't even imagine..... 🤣