ArHi || Boundless; (Of poets and poetry) - Page 26

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Ek pal mein ho gayi aashiqui meri ateet ka hissa 

Aap kahein toh nahi  karungi main malaal

Behla lungi man ko ki tha woh sirf ek haseen kissa 

<3

Pyar ke laal rang se hoke malamaal ..

Adjust kerlo isko beech mein kahin 🤣

Pls edit the title n put page no of the recent update i.e Ch-3-a

Originally posted by: Savera84

Simply put it, Magical and Poetic.

We always assume, the characters know everything about everyone.  Payal doesn't know what is going on.  She rightly thought, Khushi made a noisy entry and distracted Arnav.  So, to keep the proceedings going or the magic she and others were transported to going, she took care of the distraction.  She has no idea what is going on in Arnav and Khushi's hearts or minds or both.  But, now that they are so close and the lights are on, is it heard to notice that Arnav and Khushi are more than distracted by each other?

Payal introduced Arnav as her friend.  Is there a boy hidden in those introductions?

The Payal, no not the human payal, the beautiful silver piece of jewellery, which is dropped and fell near Khushi's feet, is it going to become Arnav's prized possession for time being?

Lovely chapter.

Cheers.......

👏

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Payal and her unrequited love.. 

be-niyazi hadd se guzri banda-parvar kab talak 

ham kahenge haal-e-dil aur aap farmaenge, kya?!

Oh my gosh... WHAT IS AIR??? The description of Arnav’s recital was stunning 

“Ik zara chehra udhar kijiye

inayat hogi

aap ko dekh ke badi der se

meri saans ruki hai” ~ Gulzar

I NEED MOREEE!!! 

Payal might be a friend only..

Remember,Aakash n NK r there too 😛

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Don't stress yourself for Payal's unrequited love n focus on the budding romance between Arshi ..

Payal might be a friend only..

Remember,Aakash n NK r there too 😛

I think Payal’s unrequited love has been described so beautifully that I can’t help but feel for her. 

Sometimes it can be a thorn but for now, she’s harmless! 

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

I think Payal’s unrequited love has been described so beautifully that I can’t help but feel for her. 

Sometimes it can be a thorn but for now, she’s harmless! 

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Every color which Khushi wears becomes ASR's favorite..

So u should just send Khushi a beautiful maroon sari ❤️

BTW..

aap mere hi qafiley se aa milien..

We both r sizzlerz now !!!

I'm in august company then :) 

Originally posted by: pakpearl

It must be 2 lines or 4 ones..

Pyar ke laal rang se hoke malamaal ..

Adjust kerlo isko beech mein kahin 

I'll leave the decision to you ;) 

Originally posted by: Arshi67

I'm in august company then :) 

I'll leave the decision to you ;) 

Arre..

Who can decide for u..

U r a natural poet,Ruchi..

PS.

Watch the vm I posted..Watch on youtube..

Sorry for double post..

Hello! New Reader Alert! :) 

The epigraph lays such solid framework, its impact is hard to miss and is hard hitting. Heartbreakingly beautiful. 

Truly believe that resolutions made at a defining moment of one's life does stick with you, whether you are six or twenty six. And while your fluent writing makes it simple to imagine what is going through his mind, it is difficult to empathise with the child Arnav who had the misfortune of seeing the two most revered people of his life, so consumed in hate. Extremely saddening. His confusion and entire thought process that led him to decision is natural, and valid as would be to a six year old. 

The parents seem such good people, but sadly their union is the thorn of their life. Their background and history, I'm sure, would be interesting to read,  as well. Tbh, it feels so unfair for the child to have his whole life and mindset alerted for no fault of his, but what to say but it is what is; Its fate/destiny at play here.  😶

I have not read further yet, so my prediction to the present was that those words are spoken by Khushi who has confronted him on the grounds of his firm resolution of commitment and love, deeming the inability to trust as his weakness. 

It's is particularly great that I don't have to wait to judge my own prediction. 😛