#2 chahun naa phir kyun naa tujhe,pt 17 on pg 144 updt on 13/8 - Page 27

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome teaser

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Can't wait for next part

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Interesting teaser

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Raman and kids taking is so emotional

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Nice teaser di...

I hope after this ishra will mend their relationship...

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Interesting teaser di

Waiting for ishita conversation with him

Continue soon di

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PART 5

Raman was feeding adiru happily while adiru were also feeding him in between making him smile ear to ear ,while ishita was stealing glimpses of them.she was smiling seeing him getting involved with the kids ,but everytime he look at her,she just look away.

Appa was looking at ishra and was smiling when his phone rang.he saw it and said-main abhi aata hoon,urgent phone hai.saying so he was going when adiru hold his hand and said-mat jao,mumma kehti hai ki khana khate chamay phone nahi uche kalte.

Raman smiled and said-i know bachcha,but it's really urgent.he said and went out while ishita's face fell.

Appa-kya hua??

Ishita-adiru bhi important nahi hai.

Appa-u r overthinking ,jarur kuch urgent hoga.he will come,tum khao.

Ishita nodded and start eating when adiru asked for more curry.she nodded and went to take it from kitchen when she heard him saying-mujhe kuch nahi pata,mujhe custody chahiye.chahe jitne paise lage,lagao ,but I want the custody.

Ishita got shocked hearing this while her eyes got teary.she went back taking the curry and served it to the kids,she settle down on the chair and all she could hear was his words.

She tried to stop the tears but it start flowing.

Appa look at her and asked holding her hand-kya hua ,kanna??

Ishita look at him and said-raman custody case kar rahe hai.

Appa-huh??

Ishita-i heard him talking to someone,jitne bhi paise kharch ho ,but he want the custody.woh mere bachchon ko cheen lenge ,appa.she said and hugged appa tight.

Appa-nahi bachche,rote nahi.bachchon ke saamne toh bilkul nahi.he said and ishita nodded her head wiping her tears,just then Raman entered the room and said-sorry,mujhe late ho gaya.

Adiru-hamala khana bhi ho gaya,they said and both went to the kitchen.

Raman settled to have dinner when his eyes went to ishita and he asked-anything wrong??

Appa-tum custody case kar rahe ho,I told u to talk and u decided this.

Raman-custody case,main,nahi toh??he said and ishita went to kitchen not wanting to hear anything.

Appa-jhooth mat bolo,Raman.ishu ne khud suna,u were talking about the custody.

Raman-uff Ishita,uski aadat hai aadhi baat sunn kar kuch bhi assume karne ki.

Appa-she was crying ,Raman.

Raman-i am sorry ,appa,but main bhi usse rulana nahi chahta,kabhi bhi.i know she will not trust me,but main bhi usse kabhi hurt nahi karna chahta.i was talking about an office,uski custudy chahiye mujhe and I am fighting for it.bachchon ki custody ki toh kahin baat hi nahi hai.main khud kabhi nahi chahunga ki ishita aur bachche alag ho.he said making appa smile along with ishita,who was listening everything hiding behind the wall.

Appa-mujhe tumse yahin umeed thi.ishita meri bachchi hai aur adiru uske bachche.main maanta hoon tumhara haq hai bachchon par,par uska bhi hai.usne unhe janam diya hai ,aaj tak paala hai aur bahut pyaar kiya hai .usse uske bachche cheenna uski zindagi chinne ke barabar hoga.

Raman-main samajhta hoon ,appa.bhale hi ishita ne mujhse yeh baat chupayi,but phir bhi main usse itna bada dukh nahi dunga.bura tha toh kya hua,pati tha uska.mere bachchon ki maa hai,usse rota hua nahi dekh sakta.issi wajah se maine maa-papa ko bhi ab tak kuch nahi bataya.

Appa-kya matlab??

Raman-u know maa,she is angry on ishita .aur agar unhe ab adiru ke baare mein achanak pata chalega,toh woh gussa ho jayengi.shayad sach much custody case kar de,that's why I want to talk to ishita before telling anything to them.

Appa-bhabhi ji kyun gussa hai??

Raman-hamara divorce,unhe lagta hai Ishita galat hai,main toh galat ho nahi sakta,after all beta hoon.toh bahu ko galat kehna is more convenient.

Appa smiled and said-kabhi kabhi tum kaafi mature baatein karte ho.

Raman-main mature hoon.

Appa-really,I never think so that way u signed those divorce papers.

Raman-har mature insaan kabhi naa kabhi galti karta hai,woh meri galti thi.yaa shayad pehle nahi tha, akelepan ne mature bana diya.

Appa-i really want u to talk.baat karne se kai baar problem solve ho jaate hai,jaise hum dono ne abhi baat ki ,man to man.

Raman-i can't talk to her so freely,woh thodi jhagralu hai,he was saying smiling when adiru came to Raman and said-papa chalo,aaj hamale chaath cho.

Raman-kya??

Adiru-hamale chaath cho,both said with action.

Raman-oh ,u want me to please with u two.

Adiru nodded and he said-ok,aap jao.papa is coming .he said and took his plate to take it to the kitchen when Ishita came and said-mujhe de dijiye,aapko aadat nahi hai.

Raman gave her plate and went to adiru's room after washing his hand .

Ishita was washing dishes when appa came and said-tumne usse phir galat samjha,ishu.

Ishita-mummy ji mujhse gussa hai,woh mere bachchon ko cheen lengi.

Appa-aisa nahi hoga,Raman aisa hone nahi dega.

Ishita-but woh mummy ji ko kitna mana karenge,what if he too angry to it.

Appa-issliye toh keh raha hoon,baat karke problem sort out kar lo.

Ishita-but bachche chote hai,under five,court unhe apni maa se nahi alag karegi.

Appa-aur jab woh bade ho jayenge tab,tab kya karoge.ishu,aankh bandh karne se andhera nahi hota,ek baar koshish karo.shayad sab sahi ho jaaye.aakhir kahin naa kahin tum bhi toh yahin chahti hogi.he said and walked out while ishita was just thinking his words.

On other hand,both the kids were cuddling to Raman from either side and was busy in talking to each other.

Ruhi-papa ke chaath mazaa aa laha hai naa,bhiya.

Adi-haan,papa ke chaath kitna mazaa aa laha hai.papa bhi kitne choft choft hai.

Ruhi-haan,pal inki daali(beard) chubhti hai.papa,aap kal daali bana lena .

Raman nodded and said ok.

Ruhi-hamale papa kitne achche hai,hamali chab baat chunte hai.

Adi-rahul ke papa ne ucche thapal maala tha,aap toh humko nahi maarenge naa ,papa.

Raman-kabhi nahi bachcha,tum dono itne cute ho,papa kyun maarenge.chalo now,sleep.its really late.aap dono ko kal school bhi jaana hai naa.

Adiru's face fell hearing this and they said-aap bhi chale jaoge ,papa .aap hamale chaath kyun nahi lehte.hume bahut chala paicha nahi chahiye,toych bhi nahi chahiye,bach papa chahiye.

Raman kissed their temples and said-papa ko bhi sirf aap dono chahiye.bahut ghoom liya,thak liya,ab aaram chahiye.he said and start patting them while his mind were on ishrudi only,how their presence around him changed his life in a day only.he was feeling more loved and special having his two little munchkin around him.

Soon both slept hugging Raman and he pecked their temple softly.slowly he got off the bed and walked out thinking to have a talk with ishita.

He looked around but she was nowhere,so he walked out and saw her sitting on the bench in the garden.

Ishita was sitting silently looking at nowhere when someone tapped her shoulder.she turned and said-raman aap,soye nahi??

Raman-main bhi yahin puchna chahta hoon,tum soyi nahi??

Ishita-akele neend nahi aati,bachche aaj aapke paas so gaye,main akeli ho gayi.aur waise bhi jiska sab kuch chinne wala ho usse neend kaise aayengi.she said and Raman look at her with confused eyes.

Ishita-maine suni aapki aur appa ko baat,aapne mummy ji ko kuch nahi bataya,kyunki unhe pata chala toh woh custody case karke mere bachchon ko mujhse dur kar dengi.haan,aap log paise wale hai,meri kya aukaat aapke saamne.aap phir se mujhse mera sab kuch cheen lenge,mere bachchon ko dur kar denge.aur dekhiye,bachche bhi kitne khush hai aapke saath,meri toh kisi ko zarurat hi nahi,hamesha se useless hoon.she said while her eyes got teary which she wiped looking away.

Raman-tumhe kyun lagta hai main tumse bachchon ko alag kar dunga,yes they r my kids,but tumhare bhi hai.main unhe tumse dur karke ,tumhe takleef nahi dunga.

Ishita-denge,aap mujhe takleef denge.hamesha diya hai aur aage bhi denge .she said while tears start flowing freely from her eyes.

Raman-bahut shikayat hai naa tumhe mujhse??

Ishita just look away without answering anything.

Raman-main yahin hoon,jitni bhi shikayat hai aaj saari bol do.jitni bhi takleef di hai maine tumhe,saari bol do.i promise, main jhagda nahi karunga,chup chap sununga,just tell me.he said and she look at him.

Ishita look at him and he closed his eyes assuring her.

Ishita-aap aaj itne achche se kyun behave kar rahen hai??

Raman-tumhe bura lag raha hai??

Ishita-nahi odd,I am used to it.

Raman-toh aadat daal lo.he said and she look at him.

Raman-ab bolo,kya shikayatein hai.

Ishita-jaane dijiye,aapko important nahi lagengi.

Raman-yahin hai,tum bolti nahi jab mai puchta hoon,phir shikayat karti ho.

Ishita-rehne dijiye,shayad galti meri hi thi.

Raman-tumhe baat karne se pehle hi apni galti maan li,wow,I am already liking this convo.he said getting excited and she glared him.

Raman-ghooro mat,pata hai tumhari aankhen sundar hai.so stop pretending aur bolo.

Ishita look at him trying to find the appropriate words when he said-kitna bhaav khaogi,jaldi bolo.raman kumar bhalla hamesha free nahi rehta,baatein sunne ke liye.

Ishita-yeh toh pata hi hai mujhe,ki aap khaali nahi rehte.aur shayad yahin problem thi.u know Raman,maine apni zindagi mein kabhi kisi se pyaar nahi kiya,infact uss feeling ke aas paas bhi nahi gayi thi,before I met u.she said and he look at her .

Ishita-kitni umar thi meri, just 22.bahut saare sapne the ,career ko le kar,pyaar ko le kar,shaadi ko le kar.career toh apna bana liya tha,but usse aage ke kuch bhi sapne dekh paati usse pehle aapse rishta jud gaya.itne handsome the aap,ki ek nazar mein pasand aa gaye the mujhe,she said smiling while he too smiled and said-thank u,aise compliments dete rehna beech beech mein.

Ishita-aapne compliments dene laayak koi khaas kaam nahi kiya hai.

Raman-achcha baba,no fighting.bolo,I am listening.

Ishita-bahut saari umeedein and sapne le kar pahunchi thi aapke ghar,apna ghar ,apne parent,apne sab kuch chod kar,yeh soch kar ki main bhi aapke liye utni hi important hongi ,jitne aap mere liye hai,but waisa kuch hua nahi.aap mujhe hamari shaadi ki pehli raat hi akele chod kar chale gaye.she said looking down while he felt bad hearing her words.

Ishita-main nahi kehti ki maine kuch alag kiya tha,shaadi ke baad apna ghar chod kar yaa aapke ghar aa kar,har ladki yeh karti hai,but har ladki yeh umeed karti hai ki jis insaan ke liye usne apna pura sansaar ,literally sab kuch chod diya,woh usse thodi value de.aap mujhe akela chod kar chale gaye the ,raman.uss 50 rooms ke bade se mansion mein jisme sirf teen log the ,aur aap joh sabse important the ,mujhe akele chod kar chale gaye .u know,mujhe rona aa raha tha,utna bada kamra aur main akeli .I wasn't use to it, chota saa pyara saa room tha mera,bagal ke kamre mein amma-appa,itna akelapan kabhi nahi lagaa tha.socha baahar nikloon,but himmat nahi hui.socha,pata nahi iss kamre ko wapas dhoondh bhi paaungi yaa nahi.that was the first day ,I felt so alone.but phir dil ko tasalli di ,shayad aapko kuch kaam hoga,joh mujhse bhi jaruri hoga,aur dusre din se hamari nayi shuruwat hogi,but trust me Raman,uske baad ke din ,sab kuch aur tutta gaya,mere sapne bhi,meri umeedein bhi.she said looking at him with teary eyes while he look down feeling guilty.

That's all for now,enjoy.

Edited by cutieruhi - 5 years ago
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One thing I felt strange - 500 rooms ke bade se mansion mein

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But beautiful written..one of my favourite....please update next part soon.asap...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update

Hope Ishra ckear their differences

Continue soon

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Originally posted by: sreeu12345

One thing I felt strange - 500 rooms ke bade se mansion mein

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But beautiful written..one of my favourite....please update next part soon.asap...


Typo error

Its 50

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