AKDHA FF/SS- REJECTION (werewolf story) Part 7 updated on page 18 - Page 7

Originally posted by: James12

Chapter 1

"I like the beginning, it's start from narrators side but keep reader feel like the narrator is having conversation with the rest"!

Yup. Keeping reader feel like this, makes them intrigued with the story😊

The sibling Duo of Jo and Ya is it's very humourous just likd typical sibling I love such a bond

Even I do😊

when I read prince princess I was lost like how it's possible when in CS everything introduce it as warwolves 🐺🦊 fiction"?

There are Alphas, luna as explained in Cs but royals are those, whose orders will be followed by even Alphas. All will be explained further😊

Jo Yash are excited for their 18 birthday but they acted more like kids the way Rano speak of them being kid and the way mohindar chided her

Yup we all are kids for our parents. We even behave differently with our parents because we can be ourselves😊

Remind me of my own parents no matter how grown up we are we're always going to be their little kids who seek their attention guidence who needs them in every new step

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Alas I can only dream of that now nevermind the start is very lovely

You are not staying with your parents???

Jo isn't only excited about birthday but the perspective of finding her mate to she's hopeful hm let's see what fate stored for her and her bro Yash

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Very intriguing start and light one which is truly cool and appreciable

Thank you😊

Thanks for giving amazing reviews. Glad you liked it😊

Originally posted by: James12

Chapter 2

"Yash Jo can never change good their answer to each other teasing but my favourite dilouge of update was

Jo words to Yash - ("that sorry I cannot stop myself from pulling your leg"! Even after being officially announced as prince princess you was you are you will be my Bro till my last breath) nothing can change this no matter what happens and that's the most beautiful confession one could ever make for his her dear ome"! I hope you don't let their bond spoil keep it this way I want them happy

No. They are the icing of the cake. I love their bond ❤️

"Honestly This dilouge of jo touch my oh what I would have done to just get back to my life and get some curtains part back nevermind it was very beautifully Penn down"!

Thank you😊

their eagerness to finally able to shift in wolf form their refreshing adventurous trip wow wow and just wow and the way their parents were part of their important moment of life

Our parents should be part of our all parts of life as they have done so much for us😊

it was awesome but wait did I missed something"? Yes I missed writing about our sweet wolves image you had posted so beautiful pic of them that I cannot stop myself but stared at it for long time"!

Thank you😊

Awesome loved it

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Originally posted by: James12

Chapter 3

"What a start

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if you will be awake than I will say something

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"remind me of my dad who will always be like if you paid attention then I will speak further"!

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However I just wanna say you're making me miss my parents very kuch through the way you write their part specially father one

Awww.thank you😊

His line everyone wants to be Alpha so that they can have power had deep meaning

Its common in our lives too, many people want position not to help people but for the power it has😊

and then his words not power but purpose matter which is to serve other was cherry on cake loved it the wisdom the way meaningful words

Thank you😊

The conversation between Jo and her parents were awesome I re-read them cause how meaningful it was

Awww. Glad you liked it😊

And at end you end it on light note which make the update more light and enjoyable

Wanted to give them a little sight of what held in their future😊

Very good job Tania sis

Thank you😊🤗

Originally posted by: James12

Chapter 4

well as I begin reading the story 😊my anger for not knowing about story started cooling down 😆

Glad to know you are not angry anymore🤗

because of this update to as the begining was very nice the instant fear of giving presentation comes to everyone😊

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Yup it is always there till youbare giving it. When it is done, I used to feel so relieved

Same😆

And I am glad you write abiyt this in update to most of time author doesn't write about instant nervousness and the hold on confidence all go through 😊

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It was very impressive and appreciable👏

Thank you James😊

But as I reach chapter four imy anger seem to regain back on it's high form 😡

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first why with each passing update chapter length is being shortened"? 🤓

The length will be increased in next few chapters😃

Second who the hell this Dev think he's to reject a person at first sight"? 😡

Exactly these are the people who feel power is more important their heart😒

How could he judge someone at first without even conducting a conversation with them"?

I think it was for best. If he got to know her power he qould have used her for his selfish reasons😡

Felt bad for Jo she had to face rejection but this provide relief to me in most story in warwolves the author make Make war-wolf reject their mate but at end they make they end up together 🤣

No I think your self-respect is way important. I will let her die single rather than making her request Dev to get her back😊

So now this won't happen in this one cause we already know who the mate will be for her 😉

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But the intriguing part is he hadn't taken entry yet, and as much I wants their meeting I don't want him to be working on broken rejected soul but confident firm jolly princess 😎

😃 Exactly she has to deal with all her problems solely than making him deal with her problems

Let's see how you proceed the story I am very eager to read further 😊

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You are doing remarkable job 👏in writting war-wolf story 😎it's very humourous 😆meaningful and truly worth appreciating👍🏼

Thank you🤗glad you liked it😃

Oh jo is sad and crying alot, i like the bond btwn yash and jodha

jalal's MATE is died ohh poor him
waiting for jo-ja meeting
if possible update soon.

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Awesom...

Finally Entry of Jalal is here...

He is a Jolly boy but the loss of his father n mate change him completely😒... Now he is sad n lonely...

Who was his Mate? & how she died?

Dadi wants him to move on as she is concerned about him n can't see him in pain but still he is not ready😳...

Hope soon he will meet Jodha😃 and the suffering souls will be at peace...

That will happen soon if he attend the party of Handa's

How easily Yash got to know that she is lying, such a caring brother n she letout her pain infront of him...

Yash also met his Mate...

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Nice update n jodha is sad n crying bcoz of rejection n Yash got his mate that's one is pari n jodha happy for them n jodha told him about her mate n he reject her n jalal mate die n thnxx for pm me

Chapter 4

Tania sis🤗 this chapter was ❤️ touchy subject 😒

I didn't expected Ja to be suffering as well

Well it's takes one to know one I will say I can so relate and understand his pain😒

losing the strongest pillar of your life as well your ❤️ can change everyone break them part

None can truly get over with such grave loss no matter how much they smile or say to other yeah I am fine with smile 🥱

Oh I got carried away perhaps cause of how your chapter was 👍🏼all the chapters from beginning to till now were light hearted so this one end up shaking me from core of ❤️

When a person change he effect everyone around him with his change same is Ja case all who know him are upset to to see him so much change 😒 but he can't help it"!

Liked the concern of his dadi his relation is very warm with her which is good at least he have someone 😊

"Who was his mate how she died"? Was she murdered and case was framed like sucide"?

Poor Jo trying to cope up with rejection by her mate 😒 Yash like true sibling got whip of her pain and little bit push get the truth out of her to let's see s

"How he help her to gain her confidence back how Jo Ja first meeting will be like will he really come"? And will they meet in party"? I am very eager and excited for the upcoming update 😃

Thank you 🤗 Tania sis for PM 😳

Stay safe 🙏 stay bless 🌹 take care 🤗

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Oh jo is sad and crying alot, i like the bond btwn yash and jodha

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jalal's MATE is died ohh poor him
waiting for jo-ja meeting
if possible update soon.

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Thank you and will try to update soon🤗