AKDHA FF/SS- REJECTION (werewolf story) Part 7 updated on page 18 - Page 6

Dii, when will you give next update?

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

Dii, when will you give next update?

Tomorrow😊

Originally posted by: Tatianabhardwaj

Tomorrow😊

Oh Wow...

Will be waiting...

TANIA Sis 😳 why you didn't let me know you're writing story"! 🤓

This happen when you wrote two shot to 😒

Now I get it why you were so shocked when I call you by name cause you yourself forgotten me 😔

And wait you already reach four chapter 😲

Now I am going to read it then I will fire you with my complain 😎 just wait for the devil me 😈 you're gone Tania sis

Originally posted by: James12

TANIA Sis 😳 why you didn't let me know you're writing story"! 🤓

I dint tell anyone as I dint knew if anyone was interested in werewolf story😊

This happen when you wrote two shot to 😒

I am sorry but I only sent pms to those who asked me but from now onwards I will send you one😊

Now I get it why you were so shocked when I call you by name cause you yourself forgotten me 😔

No😆. I was shocked as I was not regular in this forum so thought many would have forgotten me but you proved me wrong that you are one of the fews who remembered me🤗

And wait you already reach four chapter 😲

They are short, I think you will be able to finish them soon👍🏼. Will be updating fifth one tomorrow😊

Now I am going to read it then I will fire you with my complain 😎 just wait for the devil me 😈 you're gone Tania sis

Waiting eagerly for your complains and your reviews😊

Chapter 1

"I like the beginning, it's start from narrators side but keep reader feel like the narrator is having conversation with the rest"!

The sibling Duo of Jo and Ya is it's very humourous just likd typical sibling I love such a bond when I read prince princess I was lost like how it's possible when in CS everything introduce it as warwolves 🐺🦊 fiction"?

Jo Yash are excited for their 18 birthday but they acted more like kids the way Rano speak of them being kid and the way mohindar chided her

Remind me of my own parents no matter how grown up we are we're always going to be their little kids who seek their attention guidence who needs them in every new step

Alas I can only dream of that now nevermind the start is very lovely

Jo isn't only excited about birthday but the perspective of finding her mate to she's hopeful hm let's see what fate stored for her and her bro Yash

Very intriguing start and light one which is truly cool and appreciable

Chapter 2

"Yash Jo can never change good their answer to each other teasing but my favourite dilouge of update was

Jo words to Yash - ("that sorry I cannot stop myself from pulling your leg"! Even after being officially announced as prince princess you was you are you will be my Bro till my last breath) nothing can change this no matter what happens and that's the most beautiful confession one could ever make for his her dear ome"! I hope you don't let their bond spoil keep it this way I want them happy

"Honestly This dilouge of jo touch my oh what I would have done to just get back to my life and get some curtains part back nevermind it was very beautifully Penn down"!

their eagerness to finally able to shift in wolf form their refreshing adventurous trip wow wow and just wow and the way their parents were part of their important moment of life it was awesome but wait did I missed something"? Yes I missed writing about our sweet wolves image you had posted so beautiful pic of them that I cannot stop myself but stared at it for long time"!

Awesome loved it

Chapter 3

"What a start

if you will be awake than I will say something

"remind me of my dad who will always be like if you paid attention then I will speak further"!

However I just wanna say you're making me miss my parents very kuch through the way you write their part specially father one

His line everyone wants to be Alpha so that they can have power had deep meaning and then his words not power but purpose matter which is to serve other was cherry on cake loved it the wisdom the way meaningful words

The conversation between Jo and her parents were awesome I re-read them cause how meaningful it was

And at end you end it on light note which make the update more light and enjoyable

Very good job Tania sis

Chapter 4

well as I begin reading the story 😊my anger for not knowing about story started cooling down 😆

because of this update to as the begining was very nice the instant fear of giving presentation comes to everyone😊

And I am glad you write abiyt this in update to most of time author doesn't write about instant nervousness and the hold on confidence all go through 😊

It was very impressive and appreciable👏

But as I reach chapter four imy anger seem to regain back on it's high form 😡

first why with each passing update chapter length is being shortened"? 🤓

Second who the hell this Dev think he's to reject a person at first sight"? 😡

How could he judge someone at first without even conducting a conversation with them"?

Felt bad for Jo she had to face rejection but this provide relief to me in most story in warwolves the author make Make war-wolf reject their mate but at end they make they end up together 🤣

So now this won't happen in this one cause we already know who the mate will be for her 😉

But the intriguing part is he hadn't taken entry yet, and as much I wants their meeting I don't want him to be working on broken rejected soul but confident firm jolly princess 😎

Let's see how you proceed the story I am very eager to read further 😊

You are doing remarkable job 👏in writting war-wolf story 😎it's very humourous 😆meaningful and truly worth appreciating👍🏼

Originally posted by: Tatianabhardwaj

I dint tell anyone as I dint knew if anyone was interested in werewolf story

Hm understandable 😊 that's alright then"! H😊bu the way have you watch vampire diaries

I am sorry but I only sent pms to those who asked me but from now onwards I will send you one

"Better🤓 will wait for PM from now on hope you don't forget me 😆

No. I was shocked as I was not regular in this forum so thought many would have forgotten me but you proved me wrong that you are one of the fews who remembered me

That's what you said on my reply in my story😎 and i thought exactly as you mention😊 but reading your work here I end up misunderstanding 😆 nevermind it's clear now 😳

They are short, I think you will be able to finish them soon. Will be updating fifth one tomorrow

Yeah they're indeed very short that it's anger me to 😡 why they weren't big it was like it's ended as soon I begin 😒 I wanted more but the information you will update tomorrow 😃 I am back to my

Waiting eagerly for your complains and your reviews

"No need the lovely story you wrote kill my anger in snap 😆 now I am no longer angry however I did share my review over your story 😳

Keep it up 👍🏼 all the best stay safe 🙏🏼 stay bless 💐 take care 🤗i have to leave for my day now 😳