MG FF : A Torn relation| Part 46,47 page 6,8| May 20th, 2020 - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Maan knows he has done a mistake in the of Ayesha due to which Arohi has lost her child but even then Arohi was more concerned for Geet in her condition now as doctor has given good news regarding Herts health he should go and meet her .Arjun being is friend knows everything about these which both Maan and Arohi were hiding.Maan has come clean with Arjun and Arjun has also also forgiven him now Maan should get his forgiveness from Arohi.

Richard thinking making Maan his son in law interesting.Radhika got one more clue .I want you to punish Herts friend who made her go in Maans hotel room.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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A torn relation


Part 46


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2020/05/19/a-torn-relation-part-46/


Those who wanted to read from start

I have posted part 1-15 today on blog.

I will be correcting the rest tomorrow.

Make sure to leave your reviews if you are reading it for the first time. I would love to read what you think about this Fiction of mine.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

Part 46
Dynamic update. greatly written!

Hate this Ayesha... feeling for Arohi.

at least Maan was upset with Ayesha's behavior.

liked that Maan went to speak to Arjun.


present

glad seeing Geet smiling.

nice that Maan took Geet out... she was happy.

sad that Geet still has nightmares.

she is in so much pain.

Thank God Maan came home and consoled Geet.

great that Maan diverted her mind

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Suhaana the many stories which u left inbetween .

It will definitely a great thing if u complete all those ..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: tabby999

Suhaana the many stories which u left inbetween .

It will definitely a great thing if u complete all those ..

I have given summaries to most of all and the ones I haven't given were not properly started.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Part 46
Dynamic update. greatly written!

Hate this Ayesha... feeling for Arohi.

at least Maan was upset with Ayesha's behavior.

liked that Maan went to speak to Arjun.


present

glad seeing Geet smiling.

nice that Maan took Geet out... she was happy.

sad that Geet still has nightmares.

she is in so much pain.

Thank God Maan came home and consoled Geet.

great that Maan diverted her mind

update soon


Thanks Chetna

It's unfortunately only maan who could make peace in her disturbed mind.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: SGAYATRI

Maan knows he has done a mistake in the of Ayesha due to which Arohi has lost her child but even then Arohi was more concerned for Geet in her condition now as doctor has given good news regarding Herts health he should go and meet her .Arjun being is friend knows everything about these which both Maan and Arohi were hiding.Maan has come clean with Arjun and Arjun has also also forgiven him now Maan should get his forgiveness from Arohi.

Richard thinking making Maan his son in law interesting.Radhika got one more clue .I want you to punish Herts friend who made her go in Maans hotel room.


All the culprits will be punished

You don't have to worry.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: drishti.k

Read the summary of the story..

It is an interesting one....

Want to read more...


I am posting the complete parts too.

Feel free to read them.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Alamelu

44-45

Interesting story. Slowly starting to remember.

Glad that both have started accepting each other and the baby. Maan is indeed lucky that geet has given maan a chance bavk into her life fully. Hope he takes care of her now


oh no that guy wants maan for his daughter. Really. Maan you better tell him that you are married happily glad he hit the project


Maan now knows that Arjun knee the truth before itself but kept it to himself. He is happy for Arohi and maan now. Hope they get things resolved


wish maan figures about Ayesha before itself no one would have been hurt then


waiting eagerly for story up continue


I am so glad to see you here.

I hope you wil continue reading.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: micky11

I came across the post today

Yes I am interested to read this ff

Glad you came back


You can read

I have posted four parts so far.

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