Ariya TS Jeet jayenge hum part 3 updated 24/5

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GOOD MORNING ,

I am sorry i know i have a lot of pending stories . but what can i do its a long time i didn't write anything so i am just writing n erasing . I don't know but i am not satisfying what i m writing .. so for boosting myself i am writing this three shot story..may be i get motivation to continue all previous work.. and please i want your help also. I don't know how this three shot will turn out .please give me honest review and tips..thanks ..lots of love

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Posted: 5 years ago
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SHOT 1

hospital

sam - bas bahut hua arjun yad rakhna agar tumhare karan meri team ko kuch ho gaya hota to i swear mai tumhe chodta nahi. bhul jata ki hum kabhi dost bhi hua karte the..


sh - sir doctor ne kaha hai wo charon ab thik hai. or prachand baba ko bhi giraftar kar liya hai.


sam -thank god. or tum arjun i will make sure tumhara jald hi transfer ho. tumhare kaam karne k tarike k karan mai itni efficient team ko nahi kho sakta


ar - par rathod


sam - bas ek shabd nahi. tum bahut selfish or jiddi ho arjun .tumhe lagtaa hai jo tum sochte ho jo tum karte ho wahi sahi hai .pehle roshni ki jaan le li or ab apne junun mai etf ko daav par laga rahe ho.


ar - ye sahi nahi hai


sam -to kya ye bhi sahi nahi hai ki is case mai tumhe laga ki sik ki lead hai isiliye tumne bina mera wait kiye ye case le liya..


ar - sam


sam - mat kaho mujhe sam.. ab to lagta hai akele reh reh kar tum sach mai janwar ban gaye ho jise koi feeling nahi.go from here mai apni team par tumhara saya bhi nahi padne dena chahta.


arjun sadly leave the place.n go to his n rosh house n cry there alot .next day as show in the serial all newspaper and media accused arjun for trying to murder his team..n he leave his job..

mujhko ye jindgi lagti hai ajnabi chaon bhi....


3months later...


shantivan ashram kashi...


one small boy of 5 year run and collide with old sage


swamiji - kya baat hai dhruv aise q bhage ja rahe ho..


dh - unhe hosh aa gaya guruji...


swamiji get happy and take boy in his arm n rush toward hut ..a man is sitting in darkness


sw - ab kaise ho beta


man - pata nahi..sansien to chal rahi hai.. kaha hu mai..


sw - tum shantivan mai ho kashi..


man - mai yahan kaise aaya mai to sik ke piche gaya tha..


he said slowly but swamiji listen


sw - hum ek prawachan se laut rahe the to tum hume pune k pas ek purani factory mai jaha charon taraf aag lagi thi .uske bahar lagbhag mari hui avastha mai mile. or hum tumhe yaha le aaye..tumhara naam kya hai beta..


man - arjun


sw - bahut accha naam hai..ek yoddha ho tum bhi arjun ki tarah..


ar - nahi swamiji mai bas ek hara hua akela insan hu..


sw - tum jaha ho na beta yahan koi akela nahi hota .. or rahi baat harne ki to jeet or haar to jindgi ka hissa hai.. khair abhi tum aaram karo..mai kisi ko bhejta hu


dh - mai ruku yaha guruji..


guruji smile n nod..


dh - dr aunty kab ayengi..


one lady enter ...


dh - tumne bulaya or mai aa gayi...


a beautiful girl with dimple smile is standing infront of them wearing a kurta n pant...arjun get shocked to see her


ar -- riya.....


dh - are inka naam riya nahi dr aliya hai...



TBC....

Edited by manasvi.. - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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hi finally you come back

aapki sari story ke update ka hum kitna wait kar rhe h pls pls update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Arjun job chod diya woh kashi kaise pahuch gaya sik mar gaya ya zinda hai hope woh ladki riya hi ho fab start dear eagerly waiting for nxt

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wowww new one..

I love it too read..

Continue soon dear..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome start

Love it

Cont soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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well come back dear🤗

awesome chapter

poor arjun feeling bad for him🥺

sameer was really rude to arjun😡

oh god arjun got injured glad that swami saved him🤗

ooppa riya's look alike aliya enter arjun got shocked😲

continue plz

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aliya??? Hope she is our riya

Nice start

Cont soon

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Aliya hi Riya hai na

Thank god Arjun thik hai

Ye sam bhi na uska dimag itana kahli q hai

Awesome update dear

Update soon

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part 2


arjun is shocked to see riya's look alike dr Aaliya. but he remember riya died infront of him..he is confused ..aliya smile n come to him..


al - hi i am dr aaliya ..how are you..


ar - i am fine now..but aap...i mean aap


al - i can understand arjun sir aap mujhe dekh kar shocked or confused hai.. mai riya ki badi sister hu..


ar - sister .but tumhara face ,health height voice sab similar hai..no one can distinguished between both of you. agar mai police na hota or riya mere samne na mari hoti to mai kabhi believe nahi karta ki tum dono alag ho..


al - aap ise miracle keh sakte hai but ye sach hai hum dono alag hai ..ek jaise ho kar bhi ek dum alag..


ar - riya ki death par aap nahi aayi..


al - kuch majburi thi meri..khair let me check you first..or dhruv tum aaj kitni study ki..


dh - pure two hours ..ab meri chocolate


al - good.. chocolate gouri didi se le lo jab tak mai uncle ko check kar leti hu..


dhruv happily run from there.n aliya check arjun


al - ab aap almost thik hai arjun sir. but fit nahi keh sakti i insist kuch din yahi rehiye..


ar - aap mujhe arjun sir q keh rahi hai..i am not your boos


al - riya aapki bahut baat karti thi. uske sath mujhe bhi arjun sir bolne ki aadat pad gayi. ek baat puch sakti hu.


ar - hmm..


al - aap is tarah waha kaise..


ar - jab riya tumse sab share karti thi to tum janti hogi mera past bhi..


aliya nod and ar continue ..


ar - sab ye samahte hai mai bahut gusse wala ,bina soche samje kam karne wala hu..maine apne personal badle k liye apni team ko marne ki kosish ki ..or sab accusation se tang aakar maine job chod di..mai bas meri roshni k katil ko pakadne gaya tha waha ..par wo jyada log the or mai akela.. humari khub ladai hui. or achanak firing se waha bahut sara explosive tha usme aag lag gayi or fir blast. or sab khatam..


al - sikandar mar gaya..


ar - tumhe kaise pata


al - guruji ne bataya tha waha aapke alawa kuch nahi bacha..apka bachna miracle tha..


ar -hmm..


al - ab kya??


ar - pata nahi..


just than dhruv come n arjun look him but he hide behind aaliya..n look at arjun from there .


al - kya hua dhruv


dh - guruji bula rahe hai.


al - accha arjun sir mai chalti hu..you take care..come dhruv..


after they leave..arjun look at nothing n think about his life and sleep due to effect of medicine ..


after some hour he feel lil feather touch on his head...he open his eyes n look dhruv is sitting n touch his head with his little finger ..but when arjun wakeup n look at him he run from there...


to be continue ....

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