KYUN? HO GAYA NA...Kumud-Ks UPDATED 2/2!!

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Hi guys!

I will start a new fan-fic: Kumud and Kshitij's Love story. I think you will find it quite different besides the character. Please read the chhharcters intro and comment. I need to know if I should Continue!
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Oh that's briliant...I'm a die heart fan of both of them...PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ cont. soon>>>...........I'm waiting...
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Characters

Agent Kshitij Oberoi: He is the son of Aryaman and Saakshi Oberoi. He is 20, lives in USA with his best friend. Best of all--He is the best CIA Agent!

Agent Raj Malhotra: He lives with Kshitj, also works for the CIA. He is 20 too!

Agent Garv Sachdev: Kshitij's other best bud! Also 20 and works for CIA too!

Kumud Kapoor: She is from a rich family. She has a bratty litle sister. Kumud is 19-goes to college.

Kali Kapoor: Kumuds 18 year old sister.

Simran: Kumud's best friend. Goes to college.

All the Kapoors live in India. The story takes place in the USA!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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sounds good...plz start it soon
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nice intro please continue soon
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Morning in U.S.A:

Kshitij wakes up and is shocked to see it is 6:00 A.M. already. He gets out from bed.

Kshitj: Raj, Garv, wake up, it is 6:00 A.M.

Raj: Dude, Kshitij, can't you wait?

Garv: Ya, can't you?

Kshitij: Oh sure! I can but you know unless you want to be fired, you better wake up, cuz you know boss!

Raj+Garv: BOSS???

They both get up. According to the rules of the CIA, you have to be at work at 7:00 A.M.

Kshitij is the best CIA Agent.

They all shower and get dressed to go to work.

Raj: You know what I hate about this job?

Garv: What?

Raj: There are no gals.

Garv: True, what do you hate most about the job Kshitj? Or wait—what do you most love about the job?

Kshitij: Garv, you know that I totally love the job and take it very seriously. I am commited to it!

Raj: Yeah-whatever. Hey Garv, I know what Kshitij loves most about this job—there are NO GALS!!!

Kshitij: I still wonder what boss found in you too!

Raj+Garv: Kshitij!

In Harvard University:

Two gals are walking to their classes. They are Kumud and Simran.

Kumud: Simran, would you hurry up? All morning what you do is look at guys—I mean don't you want to work?

Simran: Kumud, you are the one who wants to be a lawyer, not me. You can study since you have no social life.

Kumud: Whatever!

Kumud is a decent girl. She loves to be on time.

Simran looks around and spots Kali flirting with guys.

Simran: I am soo surprised that Kal is you sister. You guys are opposites. She loves guys and you…well you don't even look at them. It is like you are allergic.

Kumud: Maybe I am—Plus me and Kali have to be total opposites since we hate each other. She doesn't even get along with mama.

Simran: How is Kkusum aunty and Abhay uncle by the way?

Kumud: Great!

Suddenly, out of nowhere, a car comes whizzing by them. It almost nearly hits Kumud.

Simran: Kumud, are you okay?

Kumud: Yes, I am.

Kumud thinks to herself—who would want to harm me?

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omg this is soo amazing 😃
u r sooooooo creative 👏
plz cont soon 😉
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OMG....Wat a amazing story and dat too veryyyyyyyyy different one....I'm really lovin it..OH PLZ CONT. SOON
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please cont soon!!!!!! i cant wait!!!
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CIA Office-

Boss(B): Good Morning Agents. Today we have a very new case. Please meet me in the board room in 5 minutes.

Garv: I wonder what the case is all about.

Raj: It better have something to do with gals. I am so bored here!

Kshitij: I really don't know what boss saw in you two??

They are joking mad at him.

Garv: You know Kshitij, I know what boss saw in YOU!

Raj: What??

Garv: Himself!!!

The three laugh. They go to the board room.

Harvard University-

Kumud: Simran, I am late just because of you.

Teacher: Students please the bell has rung, time for chit chat is over! We will be going over the safety laws today and you will be writing a bill!

Simarn: OH! NO!

Everyone turns their heads towards her.

Teacher: Excuse us Simran if you don't want to be lawyer, then this class is not for you.

Guy speaks up.

Guy: Oh! Beautiful kudi, I want you to be in this class.

Then everyone starts cheering Simran!

Teacher: Very well, write 10 pages report on the safety laws and complete your bill. Due to me by Monday! Class dismissed!

They all go out!

CIA-

In the board room-

Boss: Everyone, take a seat. We have a new case from India.

Kshitij: What is it sir?

Boss: There is a buisnaess man named Mr. Abhay Kapoor---

Raj: Abhay uncle?

Boss: You know him? Very well, anyways—he seems to have some very dangerous enemies. Enemies who will do anything to harm his family or him.

Garv: Do we have to go to India?

Boss: Would you quit interrupting? He has two daughters, who are studying in Harvard University, thy are young girls nd need protection.

Kshitij: So you want us to go there?

Boss: This is a very important case for the CIA because Abhay Kapoor is providing us with good amount of money. These two girls are Kumud and Kali Kapoor.

Raj: OKAY!

Garv: Whos will be taking the case?

Boss: I am getting to tghat. Since the girls hate police or any kind of army person, agent trying to protect them, they will not accept it. So we will have to go undercover. Mr. Oberoi, you will be protecting Ms. Kumud and Mr. Grav—Ms. Kali—you both wil go as college students---any ?s

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