PRANBIR OS(one shot):Bonfire Confession - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

28

Views

6.3k

Users

5

Likes

19

Frequent Posters

A_bibliophile thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 5 years ago
#11

Part B:BONFIRE CONFESSIONS


Ranbir walked along the pebbled path and noticed the area had only lanterns lit by fire to provide light which gave the place a very romantic feeling.

He stared at the sky, just gazing at the midnight blue canvass above stole every thought from his mind, the usual worries simply forgotten. There were heavenly stars above and a crescent moon to smile down; what else did he want.


As he approached the said area he noticed soft music playing, a gazal maybe, as he came near he saw Prachi sitting near the bonfire with cushions all around her.She looked unearthly and the smile she gave him was full of some emotion he did not want to name.There he saw a camera placed at one side, a handcam to be specific which was recording Prachi's activity.He was lost.


Prachi gestured him to sit down at the pillow near her.As soon as he did she placed her head on his shoulder.He went still thinking if he moved the dream would break.She slowly lifted her hand placed it under his chin and tilted it upwards so that they both were looking at the sky.


She said my favourite novel would say:

The starry night above was better than any software imitation. There were lighter patches, clusters of faint and bold light, the constellations altered according to the time of year. These were the same stars that greeted the ancients, the same ones that would be there in millions of years. Two lovers would become one tonight.


He stared at her in surprise ;Lovers!!.

She one by one unpinned the letters from the cushion and read them aloud:


Humse door jaoge kaise, dil se hum mein bhulaoge kaise ... hum woh khushboo hai joh saason mein bastein hai, khud ki saason ko rok paoge kaise



Aasaan hai kya aisi mohabbat karna ... jiske badle mohabbat na mile

Main kisi ki zaroorat nahi ... khwaish banna chahti hoon


Agar baazi ishq ki baazi hai toh joh chahe laga lo ... dar kaisa ... agar jeet gaye toh kya kehna ... agar haare bhi toh baazi maat nahi


Khoobsurati toh dhal jaati hai ... personality toh maut ke baad bhi zinda reh jaati hai.


Ranbir smiled this was his chikchiki the one who loved classical music and shayari's. His very own person shayara.


He read the rest of the letters which had her confession in them.She had written although i never hated or blamed my father for leaving us I always saw maa waiting for him.She is so strong but i saw her break for love.For me love became something that made you weak, made you forget logic ,there was separation in love.No one waited for you, love made you challenge everything and at last made you end up alone.I did not want to welcome love Ranbir.But you waited for me patiently.You were my friend, my critic, my teacher, my support.You showed me love was friendship and it made you strong.It gave you someone to share your thoughts with. I LOVE YOU RANBIR.

DO YOU STILL LOVE ME?


Ranbir was speechless and emotions clogged his throat.He replied Prachi: Mujhey zindagi bhar sirf aise galti karne hai jiski saza sirf tum ho.


They hugged each other.They were about to say more when the help boy arrived with Ranbir's wine and Prachi's juice.They clinked their glasses together and drank for the good of love.


They sat in an embrace drinking and recalling their happy days.Their head started to get dizzy.Prachi tried standing up, something was wrong with her juice.Her head continued to spin, caught up in the effects of the drink, she lost her balance. She tumbled onto his lap.


His body surrounded her. Her shoulder was nestled against his chest, her bottom flush on his lap. Their breaths melded. As he tilted his face down to meet her gaze, his hair flopped onto his forehead. She brushed away the black strands.


Marry me he said.Two words that were difficult to utter while being kissed.

He hadn’t known how she felt. Maybe, now that she did, she would choose him Ranbir thought.


She chose to kiss him .Her mouth moved over his as she shifted on his lap to wrap her arms around his neck. He returned the kiss every bit as fervently, trying to prove without words what he felt.He held her tight, not wanting to face the inevitability of having to let her go.


His head too started to spin.This drink was definitely not wine at all.He was so so so drunk.He started to blabber.


Prachi still seated on his lap listened to him understanding few words missing others.

Words seemed to flow from his mouth he had no control, all the process being recorded in the handycam .

He uttered all about Rhea and the BET and started begging for forgiveness. Prachi stilled she got up from his lap ,processed the information.

Her heart broke.


THUD!!

A sound resonated . She had slapped his cheek hard leaving a print.They were both crying.



Here the help boy confided in Aryan and Sahana that he had made a mistake.He had served their friends desi daroo.

They rushed to the side to find Prachi crying and saying the meanest things to Ranbir while he was begging her and saying sorry.


This had gone from best to worst.

Aryan took hold of Ranbir and Sahana took hold of Prachi.

Aryan drove them back to the Kohli and Mehra Mansion respectively. They told Abhi Pragya and Pallavi and Vikram what had happened.

Prachi and Ranbir were taken to thier respective room.



AFTER 3 DAYS


When Prachi had gathered the courage to come out of her room and not wallow in self pity.

She came to knew Ranbir had left.No one knew where maybe not no one just Vikram knew.Prachi did not care she hated him.She would always hate him.

The Mehra's and Kohli's had stopped talking to each other .They had such a violent fight that Dida's Blood Pressure had spiked, she landed in an hypertensive emergency and suffered from Brain Stroke.She was paralysed after that.The hatred and guilt became so much that the Mehra's shifted from Delhi to Mumbai to start a new life.



Maybe it was the rule of destiny that the most beautiful love stories would always remain incomplete.Maybe in another lifetime they would meet to complete this unfinished tale.



..................................End............................................



Edited by ican - 5 years ago
anandhi007 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ican


Updating the part

You'll know

Please Don't kill me but i wanted to write something different.

Like a tragedy?

A_bibliophile thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 5 years ago
#13


I guess an incomplete ending.

Nandini25 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 5 years ago
#14

Wow. Lovely prologue. Awe! Prachi is gonna propose Ranbir in prachi style. Awesome. So looking forward to it. But Ranbir is going away. Hope Prachi confesses before he does.

Nandini25 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 5 years ago
#15

Woah! Such a twist in tale. You have torn them apart completely. It was tragic and very different but I loved how you have conveyed everything so beautifully. Poor Pranbir and daadi.

Edited by Nandini25 - 5 years ago
A_bibliophile thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 5 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Nandini25

Woah! Such a twist in tale. You have torn them apart completely. It was tragic and very different but I loved how you have conveyed everything so beautifully. Poor Pranbir and daadi.



Thank you.

I feel till the proposal scene I tried doing justice to the story.

But

The tragic part I couldn't really write it that convincingly.

Did not know how to paint it really tragic.

Edited by ican - 5 years ago
Nandini25 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 5 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: ican



Thank you.

I feel till the proposal scene I tried doing justice to the story.

But

The tragic part I couldn't really write it that convincingly.

Did not know how to pain it really tragic.


No, I felt you have done justice to the tragedy also. Though it is a sad story, I loved it.

nushhkiee thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#18

SAD STORY😭

EMOTIONS WERE DESCRIBED VERY WELL...

LOVED IT😊

A_bibliophile thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 5 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

SAD STORY😭

EMOTIONS WERE DESCRIBED VERY WELL...

LOVED IT😊


Woohoo.

It seems you are on a reading spree.

Reading all the stories of the PRANBIR index??

nushhkiee thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: A_bibliophile


Woohoo.

It seems you are on a reading spree.

Reading all the stories of the PRANBIR index??

Gotta free time....

So only os..

I didn't knew there was an index too

Related Topics

Kumkum Bhagya Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

5 months ago

Jo mere dil ko dil banati hai PraNbir TS

Jo mere dil ko dil banati hai(The one that makes my heart a heart)Part 1 Since the PraNbir Purvi Khushi track remained incomplete in KKB,I am...

Expand ▼
Kumkum Bhagya Thumbnail

Posted by: BluebelPrincess

2 months ago

Am I the only one who thinks ?

Shivansh has Oedipus Complex ?

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".