Ranbir Dida TS(Two shots): Confusion Erasing Magazine [completed]

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 1:Confusion Erasing Magazine 


Part one     Page 1

Part two    Page 2



THE OFFICE

It was a bright,sunny and hopeful day.But Ranbir was miles away from the peaceful tranquility of mind.He had been having this soul splitting and mind boggling dream from quite some time, to be specific ever since he had met Prachi's mother who had suggested that a confusion erasing dream was the answer to all his tormenting emotions and questions.He remembered the dream vividly and could put that dreams into words so elaborately  that even a novelist would be reduced to shame.


His dream had the same monologue everytime.He, Rhea and Prachi would be standing in a picturesque location which included a waterfall, a serene environment with all of them wearing white. Rhea would be extending her arm towards Ranbir while Prachi would be thoughtful and would keep her hands to herself.Ranbir would be standing before them with no clue when God was going to be benevolent in this regard.


When would he be divested of the torture and when would he get the answer.Being in no mood to attend office or tend to the bussiness deals he packed up and left for home.


KOHLI MANSION

He went straight to his house and was pleasantly surprised to find that Pallavi had gone shopping with Aliya.He wasn't in his best of moods and he wasn't going to punish his family for the same.


He was sitting lost in his thought unaware of the surroundings of his room.Dida peeked in and was not at all surprised to find him lost.She had seen Ranbir go through various emotions in the last 3 months.He seemed to be thoughtful, quite, disturbed, jealous, preoccupied and even frustrated.


When she had tried asking Prachi all she had said was that her grandson was a pampered boy and a little diversion of attention had hurt him.Dida knew this wasn't the case and she was very sure that it had something to do what this present generation called confusion of the ex,the crush and the lover.


Dida thought of a plan.She would have to stage a drama but she had to help her putter.She pretender to talk on the phone near Ranbir's room.


Dida(fake call):Haiee Ramona, sach bol.Apna Dhruv nae haan kar de shaadi ko.Kaise? Woh toh har time bolta rehta tha confusion hai,yeh hai woh hai.

Kya

Sach bol.Haan haan mujhey pata hai.

Kisko nahi pata hai COSMOPOLITON magazine kae baare mai.Uske relationship advices toh mai Geeta kae sabak ki tarah logo ko sunati hoon.

Kya sachii us magazine nae saree problems solve kar de Dhruv ki.Haan haan latest edition hai mere pass mere room mai hi rakha hai.

Ranbir was listening to all of this and without wasting time he crept out of his room.


DIDA'S ROOM

He entered the room and closed the door behind quietly.He knew Dida would be busy for a good one hour or so catching up with all the latest gossip from her friend.


Dida's IPAD was lying on the sofa chair and a song was playing on it.

Ranbir sat down on the other Sofa chair, eyeing the magazine COSMOPOLITON which was kept on the small table.


The melody of the song was striking.To calm his jittering nerves he reclined on the Sofa and divulged into the melodious song.He closed his eyes and began to sing along


Tere aankho kae sahare 

Mai khwaab dekho saree

Ab lamha lamha gujre 

Tere palko kae kinare


(You can play the song TUJSE DOR JO HOTA HOON along with reading the story for a better experience)

https://youtu.be/KS-aq195ukg


After listening to the song, he had calmed down considerably and now he was ready to open the magazine and find out something atleast.


Dida has pegged the page which was the apparent love guru.He was ready to take this leap of faith and maybe just for once trust a magazine to help him with his contrasting feelings.



The article read.


10 Signs That Your Crush Is Actually your Love

It's easy to dismiss feelings for your crush, but there's signs that you're actually in love with a certain boy or girl How to tell? Read on


Ranbir had moved passed denying that he did not feel anything for Prachi, so yes he had labelled her his crush.

Who hasn't had a crush on someone at least once in their life? And anyone who has ever had a crush will know that those feelings don't always last and sometimes, it was just a simple and short-lived feeling.

Although crushes may not always last, having strong romantic feelings for someone can sometimes mean something more. In these cases, those feelings aren't simply a crush. Instead, it goes much deeper and those feelings are actually love. Aw! Not sure which you're feeling? Keep reading to see 10 signs that your crush is actually love.


I can totally related to this magazine, crushes aren't supposed to be long lasting but Prachi hasn't left my mind since 8 months now.He gulped feeling very scared now.Keep reading he reminded himself.



10You Feel Close To Them As A Friend

While romance is obviously important in a relationship but if you have a crush on someone, you obviously already know that you like them as more than just a friend.

But in order for this crush to be a long-term love, it's important to also be close to them in a friendly way. If you can only picture the two of you in romantic situations and never hanging out as friends, it might just be a crush.


Hell yes.

They had fone from being enemies, to people who had mutual respect for each other to friends.They would now talk at college, he knew what she liked, they had been together in so many problems that the compatibility had come  eventually. According to Point no 10 she is not just a crush.Opsiee

9There's No Pressure

Wanting to seem cool to your crush is totally normal! It's no big deal to want to say the right thing to your crush or look good when you think you're going to see them. There's nothing wrong with wanting to impress them but that feeling can be what sets a crush apart from real love!


He did want her to accept that he was cool and her pointing out that he wore exuberant colors and had a Ranveer singh taste in fashion with shiny coats and red shoes did sting him.Rhea had told him multiple times that he has to impress her but he hadn't worked on those lines ever.

This point left his confused.No Mark's for this point.



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To be continued 





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Posted: 4 years ago

awesome story,, loved it,,


dida is awesome, even in the show, she liked ranbir and prachi together,, her plan is great,,


waiting for next part,, hopefully ranbir realises soon that prachi is his true love not that stupid evil rhea,,

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Aman120

awesome story,, loved it,,


dida is awesome, even in the show, she liked ranbir and prachi together,, her plan is great,,


waiting for next part,, hopefully ranbir realises soon that prachi is his true love not that stupid evil rhea,,


Yes hopefully he will.

Right now he is accumulating points in favor while reading the magazine. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loveddd it!! I always wanted dida to play cupid in their love story, as she somehow could see their love even before they realised. Dida is awesome, and this is such a great spin you have created! Very creative indeed

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow. Loved it. Dida really is smart. Pointers to differentiate between love and crush is a gr8 idea. Update soon.

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Originally posted by: swetamwari

Loveddd it!! I always wanted dida to play cupid in their love story, as she somehow could see their love even before they realised. Dida is awesome, and this is such a great spin you have created! Very creative indeed



Yes Dida and more over Vikram would have made an awesome cupid.

Thank you so much.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Haha dida is so sly and smart

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Originally posted by: Nandini25

Wow. Loved it. Dida really is smart. Pointers to differentiate between love and crush is a gr8 idea. Update soon.


Thank you so much.

Wish Cvs read all the stories here on the forum  ,instead of engagement drama.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ican


Thank you so much.

Wish Cvs read all the stories here on the forum and borrowed ideas instead of the engagement drama.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: anandhi007

Haha dida is so sly and smart


Haina.

I wish in the show Dida would tease Ranbir like hell, that would be fun.


Also a TS has been written by an new author, the Ts you really wanted to read Drunk Prachi.

Do check ot out.

It goes by the name talli  prachi and bechara Ranbir


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/152973274