MayRa/ShivJen DT#61 "Sabse me juda hoke Teri ruh se jud jau main" - Page 82

Originally posted by: dewdrops.16

Ok an honest confession..I send her my writing to get her views before posting😆🤣

That's very very sweet Debi 😳 Although you didn't send your second OS, and it is fantastic.

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

I can feel ya girl..🤗

🤗

Originally posted by: tournesol

That's very very sweet Debi 😳 Although you didn't send your second OS, and it is fantastic.

Because you had disappeared into thin air🤣

Issliye khud likhe hi post karna para😆

Originally posted by: dewdrops.16

Because you had disappeared into thin air🤣

Issliye khud likhe hi post karna para😆

Mai dhulayi kar rahi thi 🤣 Asha hai chapter k baad Vikram ki bhi dhulayi ho 🤣

You write well dear, just keep belief and keep writing ❤️

Originally posted by: tournesol

@last line: Aww...😆

Waise khaa jao wali baat samasta Aryavrat, I mean, samasta gopiyon ko yaad hoga 😆

Woh toh hai😆

Originally posted by: dewdrops.16

Btw I posted🤗

Beautifully written Debu🤗

Originally posted by: tournesol

Mai dhulayi kar rahi thi 🤣 Asha hai chapter k baad Vikram ki bhi dhulayi ho 🤣

You write well dear, just keep belief and keep writing ❤️

Vikram ki dhulayi nahi huyi to mai aapki dhulayi karungi🤣🤣

Thank you🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Shruthi18

Beautifully written Debu🤗

Thank you🤗

Originally posted by: dewdrops.16

Vikram ki dhulayi nahi huyi to mai aapki dhulayi karungi🤣🤣

Thank you🤗❤️

Vikram ki dhulayi abhi nahi hogi, (MayRa meet hoga) par tum log padne k bad Vikram ki dhulayi karoge 🤣 (oops spoiler, par ye paryapt nahi hai 😆)

🤗❤️

Originally posted by: dewdrops.16

Ok an honest confession..I send her my writing to get her views before posting😆🤣

Oh accha, she is your beta reader then😆