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Originally posted by: Niyati_T

Update kab milega iska ?


I am just figuring a basic story line first ๐Ÿ˜›

I think by tomorrow I'll be able to post ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Originally posted by: MrsRishabhBajaj


I am just figuring a basic story line first ๐Ÿ˜›

I think by tomorrow I'll be able to post ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Yeipee

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Chapter 2: Haq Banta Hai

Rishabh was ready for work. He stood in the living room speaking on the phone when Sneha came running and hugged his leg and hid behind him. โ€œSneha,โ€ Prerna said looking around for her. She tried to hide better but Prerna could see her. โ€œIโ€™ll call you back in a while.โ€ He said dropping his call. Prerna walked upto them and placed her hands on her hip.

โ€œKya ho raha hai yeh?โ€ Mr. Bajaj asked holding Snehaโ€™s hand and pulling her out from behind him. Sneha giggled looking at Prerna.

โ€œSneha mumma ko pareshan kar rahi hai,โ€ Prerna complained.

โ€œAcha..โ€ Mr. Bajaj said crouching near his daughter, โ€œHaq banta hai uska,โ€ he said taking his daughterโ€™s side.

Prernaโ€™s eyes widened and jaw dropped open, โ€œMr. Bajaj!โ€ she exclaimed. Mr. Bajaj had taken last nightโ€™s teaming up conversation quite seriously, she thought.

Sneha put her arms around her dad and kissed him. โ€œAap best ho!โ€

Mr. Bajaj picked Sneha in his arms and walked towards Prerna, his lips curling into a mischievous smile.

โ€œSneha chalo naha lo, school jana hai na aapko!โ€ Prerna said.

โ€œMeri ek condition hai,โ€ Sneha said. Mr. Bajaj looked at the little girl impressed. How quickly Sneha had understood how to get her way with Prerna. Smart child, he thought. โ€œAap mere liye meri favourite breakfast banaogi.โ€

โ€œBeta, abhi time nahi hai, mumma ko bhi office jana hai. Mumma kal bana degi, promise!โ€ Prerna said. Snehaโ€™s smile faded and she looked at Mr. Bajaj hoping he would take her side and ofcourse, he did. โ€œPrerna bana do na, itne pyaar se keh rahi hai,โ€ Rishabh said.

Prerna looked at Mr. Bajaj in astonishment. Why was he taking her side? Hopeless! She thought. โ€œAcha thik hai, kya khana hai aapko?โ€

โ€œAloo ke parathe,โ€ she said with a huge smile.

Rishabh smiled. He loved Aloo ke parathe too. Because of Sneha even he would get to eat Prerna ke haath ke parathe. Prerna had never cooked for him, obviously.

Prerna agreed to make it and Sneha obediently went to take a shower.

The Sharmas had settled well in the out-house. Veena was still quite uncomfortable around Mr. Bajaj so she didnโ€™t go over very often. Mr. Bajaj and Sneha sat on the table waiting for breakfast when Kukki came out yawning. โ€œGood morning,โ€ she chirped.

โ€œGood morning!โ€ Prerna said coming out with a tray full of parathas. โ€œAao baitho, breakfast karlo!โ€ She told kukki.

โ€œItni achi khushbu kaha se aa rahi hai?โ€ She asked.

โ€œMumma ne aloo ke parathe banaye hai!โ€ Sneha said happily. Prerna was very happy to see Snehaโ€™s excitement. โ€œWow, Prerna! Yumm,โ€ Kukki said sitting down to eat.

Prerna served hot parathas to everyone. โ€œMain papa ke haath se khaungi,โ€ Sneha demanded.

Mr. Bajajโ€™s eyes widened and he gulped. He didnโ€™t have any experience feeding a child! Tanvi always fed Kukki before Prerna. Kukki sniggered exchanging looks with Prerna. Both of them had identical thoughts. Mr. Bajaj would not be able to feed a child!

โ€œMain?โ€ he said looking at Prerna for help.

โ€œHaan Mr. Bajaj, haq banta hai uskaโ€ She said smirking. She was enjoying giving it back to Rishabh. What did he think, he would team up with Sneha and annoy Prerna? She thought smugly. Mr. Bajaj narrowed his eyes at Prerna. Mujhe aapse yeh umeed nahi thi, Mrs. Bajaj. He thought.

Mr. Bajaj tried to break a piece of the paratha but it was too hot. โ€œOwโ€ he said pulling his fingers back. Kukki laughed. He gave her a glare and she shut up. He tried again to pull a piece. He succeeded. He brought the piece near Snehaโ€™s mouth. โ€œMujhe achar lagake chahiye.โ€ She said.

Prerna put some achaar on Mr. Bajajโ€™s plate. He dipped it in it and very uncomfortably fed her the piece. Sneha ate happily.

โ€œNot fair dad, mujhe toh itne pyaar se kabhi nahi khilaya,โ€ Kukki complained. Prerna nodded. โ€œHaan Mr. Bajaj, haq banta hai iska bhi!โ€ she giggled looked at Mr. Bajajโ€™s expressions.

โ€œPrerna, aapโ€”โ€ he gave in realizing he had dug the hole for himself. He took another piece of the paratha and fed Kukki. She ate happily.

โ€œAb mumma ki turn!โ€ Sneha said cheerfully.

Mr. Bajaj looked at Prerna, who looked away. He willingly took a piece of the paratha and took it near her mouth. Prerna was a little awkward. She looked up to make an excuse when she saw Mr. Bajaj was already looking at her with the piece of paratha in his hand. Before she could react Mr. Bajaj said, โ€œOh! Ek minute,โ€ he said dipping the paratha in achaar, โ€œAap achaar ke saath khaati hai,โ€ he said. Prerna looked at him wondering why he would want to feed her when he cutely said, โ€œHaq banta hai mera, Mrs. Bajaj.โ€ Prerna couldnโ€™t help but smile and open her mouth to eat the piece from his hand. Rishabh was happy that she kept his word and ate the paratha. There was something about feeding your family with your own hands, thought Rishabh, he felt good. He felt like he belonged with them, probably for the first time. Finally, there was laughter and happiness in the Bajaj dining room.

***

โ€œPata karo woh kese wapas aa gayi,โ€ Komolika hissed on the phone. โ€œUss nurse ko maine itne paise diye the phir bhi usne apna kaam nahi kiya!โ€ She spat angrily unaware that Anurag was listening to her full conversation from outside.

โ€œHaan di, main pata lagata hu abhi,โ€ Ronit said frantically. โ€œMain bas abhi officeโ€”โ€œSab kaam chod do,โ€ Komolika said in rage. โ€œMujhe koi excuses nahi chahiye. You have 4 hours.โ€ She intimated.

Anurag was left in utter confusion. He had figured out that Komolika was upto no good and that she was definitely looking into Prerna. He wondered what it could be? What does Komolika want now? He would have to be vigilant and track her whereabouts.

**

Prerna & Rishabh both went to drop Sneha to school when she insisted. Prerna hugged her daughter and said she would be there to pick her up also. Sneha cheerfully ran into school. Prerna sat in the car with creases running all over her forehead.

โ€œPrerna,โ€ Mr. Bajaj said, โ€œAap fir tension le rahi hai.โ€ He frowned.

โ€œMr. Bajaj, itne saalon baad woh mujhe mili hai, aur ab Komolika ko pata hai ki woh zinda hai, mere paas hai, agar usneโ€”โ€œAapko kya laga mujhe iss baat ka khayal nahi hai?โ€ he said as cool as a cucumber.

โ€œMatlab?โ€ she asked.

โ€œMaine already iss school ke principal ko Sneha ka special dhyan rakhne ka message pahucha diya hai and mera ek aadmi school ki gate ke bahar khada hai,โ€ he said pointing at a man standing outside. โ€œYou donโ€™t need to worry.โ€

Prerna sighed in relief. โ€˜Thankโ€”โ€ Mr. Bajaj shot her a deadly glare.

โ€œSorry sorry!โ€ she said with a small smile. She thanked the Gods that Mr. Bajaj was being so careful. She looked at his serious face as he drove. He has already started caring for Sneha so much, even though itโ€™s been just 2 days.She thought. He cares about his own people so much and yet he has been alone all these years, why? She wondered.

โ€œPrerna I hope aap prerpared ho?โ€ Mr. Bajaj asked seriously.

โ€œOfcourse Mr. Bajaj,โ€ she said pulling a file out of her purse. โ€œKal late tak maine hamare project pe kaam kiya. Aaj Ronit, Mr. CEO, mujhse milne aa raha hai.โ€ She smirked. โ€œAcha hi hua hamare liye, Nivedita se zyada aasan hoga isse haraana.โ€

โ€œGreat, main bhi aapke saath hi rahunga iss meeting mein.โ€ He mentioned.

โ€œKu? Bharosa nahi hai mujhe pe?โ€ Prerna asked. Whenever she thought about Basu Industries her blood started to boil and there was a fierce energy inside her which downright made her blunt.

โ€œAap par mujhe sabse zyada bharosa hai,โ€ he clarified, โ€œBut Ronit kuch gandi harkat na kare bas isliye. Aur wese bhi abhi main free tha toh socha aapko company de du. Only if you donโ€™t mind.โ€ He said.

Prerna nodded. โ€œOkay.โ€

She briefed Rishabh on the way to office about her proposal for converting the residential land into a commercial land. She also informed him that she had got the permission. She asked for his advice. Rishabh was proud of her. She had learnt so quick and so well.

**

โ€œGood morning Sir, Maโ€™am, Mr. Basu aapka conference room mein wait kar rahe hai,โ€ the receptionist informed. Prernaโ€™s jaw clenched. She looked at Mr. Bajaj with hatred blazing through her eyes. As they walked towards the conference room Rishabh said, โ€œPrerna, you canโ€™t win battles with anger on your mind.โ€ โ€œAnd Iโ€™m here to win the war.โ€ She said entering the room. He gave a half smile as he followed in behind her.

โ€œGood morning Mr. Basu,โ€ Prerna said putting her things on the table. Anurag nodded. โ€œMr. Basu, we meet again,โ€ Mr. Bajaj said offering his hand. Anurag shook hands with Bajaj and took his seat.

โ€œWese hum Basu Industries ke CEO ko expect kar rahe the, where is he?โ€ he asked.

โ€œWoh kisi zaruri kaam mein busy hai so Iโ€™m here on his behalf.โ€

โ€œNevermind, lets get to the point,โ€ Prerna said. Every moment she looked at Anurag her blood boiled. She wanted to see him grovel at her feet for mercy.

โ€œIโ€™m here to talk about the land you bought, I have an offer for you.โ€ He said. โ€œTumne already ek residential land kharid liya hai at more than double its value, ab since neither of us can do anything with the piece of land we have, I am willing to sell you our land at another 60 crores.โ€ Anurag said rolling his eyes. He knew Prerna would never agree to this. Ronit had made stupid plans and Komolika had passed all of them. What a fool!

โ€œAre you serious?โ€ Prerna smirked. Mr. Bajaj didnโ€™t say anything. Something was up. He had gone against Basu before, this wasnโ€™t the way he worked. He would have never given in like this. What is he playing at? Mr. Bajaj wondered.

Anurag sighed, โ€œThis is our last offer. Also, ek free ki tip deta hu. Agar tumne iss deal ke liye mana kar diya toh Basu Industries will make sure that tumhare residential land ki ek bhi flat nahi bikke. Hamara profit ho na ho, tumhara loss zarur hoga.โ€ Anurag warned. He wanted to give Prerna a warning about what Ronit had planned. This was his way of doing that. She was a smart lady, she would figure out the rest. He just wanted her to win. Although he knew Prerna didnโ€™t need help, he would still do whatever it took to make sure she knew what was cooking between the siblings.

Prernaโ€™s eyes burned with scorn. She stood up immediately. โ€œMain Prerna Bajaj hu,โ€ she said with on-point confidence. โ€œAur main kisi se nahi darti, come. What. May.โ€ she said walking out of there leaving Mr. Bajaj smitten. Wow, Mr. Bajaj thought. he had a small smile on his face. He was proud of his wife and little turned on by the way she called herself Prerna Bajaj. The pride with which she said her name made Rishabhโ€™s heart flutter.

โ€œKaha tha maine aapse Mr. Basu, yeh aapki Prerna nahi hai,โ€ Mr. Bajaj said, โ€œWese yeh deal shayad aapki Prerna bhi nahi leti. Youโ€™ve become weak.โ€ He added looking into Anuragโ€™s eyes. Something was up and he had to find out what.

โ€œBas yahi aap galat ho Mr. Bajaj,โ€ Anurag smirked, โ€œNow, Iโ€™m stronger than ever.โ€ He said. Now he could protect Prerna from Komolika. He thought.

โ€œWell then, see you soon!โ€ He smiled leaving the conference room.

**

Prerna left early to pick Sneha up from school. All her stress and tiredness vanished when she saw her little angel running to her. Prerna spent all her time with Sneha. They discussed about school and her friends. Prerna found out that Sneha loved maths and her favourite colour was red. These small things brought her closer to Sneha and she finally felt like a mother again.

It was only 7 pm when the doorbell rang. Prerna was busy reading to Sneha when there was a knock on the door. Mr. Bajaj peeped in. Prerna was surprised to see Mr. Bajaj home so early. Sneha jumped out of bed. Prerna wondered why Sneha was so drawn to Mr. Bajaj. He lifted her up and kissed her cheek. โ€œSneha, mere paas aapke liye ek surprise hai!โ€ he said.

Snehaโ€™s eyes lit up. โ€œAnder le aao sab.โ€ He said. The house help got 4-5 packets inside and kept them on the bed. โ€œMr. Bajaj, yeh sab kya hai?โ€ Prerna asked.

โ€œSneha ke liye games.โ€ He said with a smile. โ€œToh aap mere saath kheloge?โ€ she asked sweetly.

โ€œBaad mein pakka! Abhi mujhe kuch kaam se jana hai,โ€ he said getting up. Sneha didnโ€™t let go of his hands, looking glum. โ€œToh mujhe yeh games nahi chahiye.โ€ She said pushing the packed away.

Mr. Bajaj looked taken aback. He didnโ€™t understand Snehaโ€™s reaction. He looked at Prerna hoping she would intervene. Prerna realized that Mr. Bajaj would be busy and nodded at him. โ€œSneha, papa baad mein aapke saath khel lenge beta,โ€ she explained.

Tears started streaming down Snehaโ€™s cheek. Prerna couldnโ€™t understand why Sneha would cry in such a small matter. โ€œBeta, kya baat hai?โ€ she asked. โ€œAap ku ro re ho?โ€

Mr. Bajaj also sat down next to her on the bed. He had a very urgent meeting to go to, he was getting extremely late but he couldnโ€™t go if Sneha was crying. Something in him stopped him. Whether it was his love for Prerna or his affection for Sneha he didnโ€™t know. He couldnโ€™t see them sad. Prerna wiped Snehaโ€™s tears. โ€œRone ki kya baat hai isme?โ€ she asked a little harshly.

โ€œSorry mumma,โ€ she said sniffing. โ€œKoi baat nahi beta, par aapko rona ku aaya? Papa toh thodi der mein aa jayenge na..โ€ she explained. โ€œUnka kaam zaruri hai, aur mumma hai na aapke saath.โ€

โ€œMumma, mere paas masi bhi hamesha thi, par papa nahi the.โ€ Sneha said innocently. โ€œMere saare friends ke papa unke liye chocolates laate hai, unke saath khelte hai, unhe apne shoulder pe bithake zoo le jaate hai, unhe mumma ki daant se bachate hai, Naina poore din apne papa ki baate karti hai. Par mere paas toh sirf masi thi.โ€ She sniffed. โ€œMujhe bhi woh sab karna hai.โ€ She said looking down.

Prerna had tears in her eyes. She hugged Sneha tightly. Her child had stayed away from her parents for so many years without their love. She just wanted her father because she had never known the love of a father. She had never felt fatherly warmth. She looked up at Mr. Bajaj and was touched to see tears in his eyes. He was melting. He caressed Snehaโ€™s head and pulled out his phone. He dialed a number and said, โ€œAaj ke meetings postpone kardo.โ€ And without listening to the reply he cut the call. Prerna smiled. He still is the worldโ€™s best father. She thought. Her faith on Mr. Bajaj was growing stronger every day. He had changed so much from the day he had met her for the first time. That ruthless businessman had become a loving father to two beautiful daughters.

Mr. Bajaj made Sneha sit on his lap and said, โ€œMain kahi nahi jaunga.โ€ He held her little hand and said, โ€œAapke papa bhi aapko shoulders pe bithake zoo le jayenge, Aapke papa bhi aapko hamesha mumma ki daant se bachayenge,โ€ he laughed. Prerna laughed too. Sneha joined in. โ€œAur jitna ho sake utna time aapke saath spend karenge.โ€ He said.

โ€œWeโ€™re sorry beta,โ€ Prerna said, โ€œKi hum pehle aapko nahi dhund paaye.โ€

Sneha hugged both her parents with open arms and a big heart. Rishabh knew how it was growing up without a fatherโ€™s hand on his head. He didnโ€™t want Sneha to ever go through that pain. He promised himself that he would always protect his daughter. Always.

*

Precap: Mr. Bajaj sees a romantic dream. Prerna talks to Mr. Bajaj about his relation with Kukki.



I hope you enjoyed the update. Do leave behind your comments ๐Ÿ˜Ž

Regards,

Manjari


P.S. I feel like Ekta Kapoor ๐Ÿคฃ


*Edited*


I am also looking for a name for this Short story. Any suggestions? ๐Ÿ˜ณPlease do share.

Edited by MrsRishabhBajaj - 5 years ago
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My spot...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Will come with detailed comments in the morning.

Unressing...

I just loved the growing bond between Rishabh and Sneha. They are so cuteeeee...

The aloo Paratha moment is so heartwarming.

Wish we could see this in the show

Ronit and Komolika. This woman!!!

What is she upto now? Looks like she is planning to do something deadly.

Is Anurag still hopeful about Prerna? Even after the party incident?

Sneha... I feel bad for this little munchkin...๐Ÿ˜ญ poor child, she had missed her parents, specifically her Papa...๐Ÿฅบ

RB he is the best father and husband.

Waiting for the romantic dream!

Edited by MishtiNew - 5 years ago
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Firstly what should I call you ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค” because I forgot

your name ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ Sorry ๐Ÿ˜ for that โค๏ธ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ™ and

secondly Niyati I find someone like you ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ In

writing updates I mean ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

This SS is super cute and beautiful uffffffff I love it

๐Ÿ˜ป๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ hats of to u

โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ I can read it again and again

both parts without getting bored ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ

โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ป๐Ÿ˜ป๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ

I just love โค๏ธ Rishabh and Sneha bonding ufffffffff

the r so cute ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‰

๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ both are in one team wowwwwww so

cuteeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

I wish I could see this SS in KZK to but we all know

what we get yuck ๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ that old stories

and all ๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’

And about Veena uffff ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„ you old lady

๐Ÿ‘ต๐Ÿป ๐Ÿ™„ why u r showing attitude to my Bacha ha ๐Ÿคฌ

๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

And that Chomo uffffff I just want to kill him ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก


I love โค๏ธ when PreRish are teasing each other ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

I hope the come closer very soon canโ€™t wait ๐Ÿ˜Š for

their romantic moments ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

Please update next part soon ok ๐Ÿ‘


And I will write my first comment soon ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธ

๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Iโ€™m busy a bit nowadays ๐Ÿ™„

๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ I didnโ€™t even write my comment for Niyati

updates ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Only shouted at her ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿคฌ

Because I love โค๏ธ her a lot naa thatโ€™s shouting at

her ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

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#46

Awww!! This was another cute part โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Prerna making Aloo ke Parathe!! Rishabh feeding everyone with his own hands

She called herself Mrs Bajaj with pride

Rishabh was a little turned on by that โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿคฃ

Komolika and Ronit will make a plan again; hamesha ke tarah A will keep quiet ๐Ÿค”

Rishabh cancelled his work for Snehaโ€™s sake ๐Ÿ˜ญโค๏ธ

Now I am waiting for the next part. Zahir si baat hai ki Rishabh ko Sneha se itna pyaar karta dekh Kukki ko bura feel hoga, especially after he has been maintaining distance from her on purpose

But I am waiting for Rishabh ka romantic dream โ˜บ๏ธ

Thank you for continuing the story Manjari ๐Ÿค—

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#47

This was super duper cute... ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Rishabh is definitely on Sneha's team๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Rishabh feeding his lovely ladies with his own hands was super special๐Ÿ˜

This Komolika๐Ÿ˜ต They are again upto something...

Prerna was so confident as Prerna Bajaj

Sneha missed father's love and warmth for so many years. But now she has the world's Best faher๐Ÿ˜

Loved, loved , loved the update๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Interesting Precapโ˜บ๏ธ please update soon๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 5 years ago
#48

Guys! Suggestion for the title of this story, anyone?

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Posted: 5 years ago
#49

Bond of loveSigh

Good one Manjari

I just want Kukki and RB together too

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#50

Originally posted by: AryanSahil

Firstly what should I call you ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค” because I forgot

your name ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ Sorry ๐Ÿ˜ for that โค๏ธ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ™ and

secondly Niyati I find someone like you ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ In

writing updates I mean ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

This SS is super cute and beautiful uffffffff I love it

๐Ÿ˜ป๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ hats of to u

โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ I can read it again and again

both parts without getting bored ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ

โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ป๐Ÿ˜ป๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ

I just love โค๏ธ Rishabh and Sneha bonding ufffffffff

the r so cute ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‰

๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ both are in one team wowwwwww so

cuteeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

I wish I could see this SS in KZK to but we all know

what we get yuck ๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ that old stories

and all ๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’

And about Veena uffff ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„ you old lady

๐Ÿ‘ต๐Ÿป ๐Ÿ™„ why u r showing attitude to my Bacha ha ๐Ÿคฌ

๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

And that Chomo uffffff I just want to kill him ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก


I love โค๏ธ when PreRish are teasing each other ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

I hope the come closer very soon canโ€™t wait ๐Ÿ˜Š for

their romantic moments ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

Please update next part soon ok ๐Ÿ‘


And I will write my first comment soon ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธ

๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Iโ€™m busy a bit nowadays ๐Ÿ™„

๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ I didnโ€™t even write my comment for Niyati

updates ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆ๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Only shouted at her ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿคฌ

Because I love โค๏ธ her a lot naa thatโ€™s shouting at

her ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

Yes Zohal!! We have another great writer amongst us

And I know that you love me. Donโ€™t take pressure to write comments! Take care of yourself Love ๐Ÿค—

Edited by Niyati_T - 5 years ago

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